| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1608 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "warmly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1608 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "sanctuary" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "amidst" | | 15 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 208 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 208 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 30 | | totalWords | 1603 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "Our grove. Midnight. Bring the stone." | | 1 | "Our grove." | | 2 | "You see the box, Rory, and then you think right out of it." | | 3 | "idea" | | 4 | "in" | | 5 | "Bring the stone." | | 6 | "here" | | 7 | "tock" | | 8 | "cleansed" | | 9 | "here" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1600 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.44 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | October | 1 | | Richmond | 4 | | Park | 4 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Right | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Empress" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.23% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.248 | | wordCount | 1603 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the air, but from the dying patch itself" | | 1 | "not at the eyes, but at the large standing stone to her left" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 76 | | mean | 21.09 | | std | 15.28 | | cv | 0.724 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 93.45% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "been scrawled" | | 1 | "being broken" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "were edged" | | 4 | "was puckered" | | 5 | "was trapped" | | 6 | "was gone" |
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| 6.76% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 8 | | totalVerbs | 276 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was stacking" | | 2 | "was, standing" | | 3 | "was circling" | | 4 | "was spreading" | | 5 | "was sowing" | | 6 | "was rejecting" | | 7 | "was passing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 208 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit her—sweet and foul, like rotting fruit and wet soil." |
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| 78.84% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1605 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "white, star-shaped bloom" | | 2 | "deep, true red light" |
| | adverbCount | 70 | | adverbRatio | 0.04361370716510903 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01059190031152648 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 208 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 208 | | mean | 7.71 | | std | 5.6 | | cv | 0.727 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 33.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 34 | | diversityRatio | 0.27403846153846156 | | totalSentences | 208 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a whisper." | | 1 | "Then she saw the eyes." | | 2 | "Dark, wet patches seeped to" | | 3 | "Then the sickly green eyes" | | 4 | "Just flowers, stones, and starlight." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 66.49% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d slipped through a gap" | | 1 | "She had to come." | | 2 | "It could have been a" | | 3 | "It had done the same" | | 4 | "She took a breath and" | | 5 | "It grew thicker, warmer, carrying" | | 6 | "She waited, her breath the" | | 7 | "It always warmed near a" | | 8 | "She reached under her collar," | | 9 | "She froze, head turning slowly." | | 10 | "She saw nothing." | | 11 | "Her brain registered it a" | | 12 | "She had assumed meant her" | | 13 | "It came from her right" | | 14 | "She took a careful step" | | 15 | "She was cool-headed, practical." | | 16 | "*You see the box, Rory," | | 17 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 18 | "She stared hard at the" | | 19 | "Her eyes strained." |
| | ratio | 0.384 | |
| 76.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 142 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones were colder" | | 1 | "Rory traced her fingers over" | | 2 | "A small crescent-shaped scar on" | | 3 | "She’d slipped through a gap" | | 4 | "She had to come." | | 5 | "The message in her locker" | | 6 | "It could have been a" | | 7 | "It had done the same" | | 8 | "She took a breath and" | | 9 | "The air changed." | | 10 | "It grew thicker, warmer, carrying" | | 11 | "Richmond Park’s chill autumn vanished." | | 12 | "Here, wildflowers she couldn’t name" | | 13 | "The standing stones formed a" | | 14 | "She waited, her breath the" | | 15 | "The Heartstone cooled against her" | | 16 | "That was wrong." | | 17 | "It always warmed near a" | | 18 | "She reached under her collar," | | 19 | "The deep crimson gem was" |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the word felt possessive." | | 1 | "Just as the tension threatened" | | 2 | "Now its petals were edged" | | 3 | "To this corrupted version of" | | 4 | "Now they knew she would." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "So here she was, standing between two mossy oak monoliths that marked the boundary of The Fae Grove." | | 1 | "This time it formed a word, but one that made no sense, a collection of guttural, sighing syllables that slipped into her ear and coiled cold in her stomach." | | 2 | "The whispering rose to a murmur, a droning chant that vibrated in her teeth." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |