| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1392 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1392 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "fractured" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "quivered" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "charged" | | 14 | "fluttered" | | 15 | "wavered" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "shattered" | | 19 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 197 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 19 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1379 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1348 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Aurora | 15 | | Moonlight | 3 | | Silver | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Moonlight" | | 5 | "Silver" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.944 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a trap" | | 1 | "as though listening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1379 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.46% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 33.63 | | std | 14.05 | | cv | 0.418 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 197 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "No breeze stirred, but the air felt dense—like damp velvet pressed to her skin." | | 1 | "Her breath came in shallow bursts; the ordinary thrum of cicadas had vanished." | | 2 | "She had come for this—this place where Earth met Fae, where a Hel portal might bleed through." | | 3 | "Not in her head—it bubbled from the grove itself." | | 4 | "The world twisted; the standing stones rippled." | | 5 | "Something shifted at the edge of her vision—a dark shape pooling behind a pillar." | | 6 | "The hum returned—a single sustained note." | | 7 | "A tall figure stepped from behind the nearest oak—thin as a sapling, limbs elongated." | | 8 | "Auditory illusion or real impact—Aurora stumbled back, heart in her throat." | | 9 | "The pendant pulsed again—urgent." | | 10 | "Then another shape emerged between two stones—a second creature, shorter, hunched." | | 11 | "Aurora squeezed her eyes shut and counted—one heartbeat, two, three." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1361 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.02645113886847906 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002204261572373255 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 197 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 197 | | mean | 7 | | std | 3.88 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 41.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.26903553299492383 | | totalSentences | 197 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it bolted forward, skimming" | | 1 | "Then everything snapped back." | | 2 | "Only shadows pooling in the" | | 3 | "Somewhere outside the boundary, minutes" | | 4 | "Then it lunged." | | 5 | "Then another shape emerged between" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 76.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "She fingered the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "She pressed forward, blades of" | | 2 | "Her breath came in shallow" | | 3 | "Her voice cracked" | | 4 | "It echoed between standing stones" | | 5 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 6 | "She held the pendant higher," | | 7 | "She bent and brushed damp" | | 8 | "She had come for this—this" | | 9 | "She pivoted, chest tight." | | 10 | "She drew a slow breath." | | 11 | "Her words died" | | 12 | "She half-expected roots to snake" | | 13 | "They did not." | | 14 | "She knelt beside a stone." | | 15 | "She pressed her hand to" | | 16 | "Her own alias." | | 17 | "She leapt back, yanking the" | | 18 | "Its glow flared, driving the" | | 19 | "It came from every direction." |
| | ratio | 0.358 | |
| 23.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 151 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter slipped beneath the" | | 1 | "Moonlight fractured through wildflower petals" | | 2 | "The ancient stones stood in" | | 3 | "She fingered the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "The crimson gem pulsed against" | | 5 | "She pressed forward, blades of" | | 6 | "Her breath came in shallow" | | 7 | "Her voice cracked" | | 8 | "It echoed between standing stones" | | 9 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 10 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 11 | "Shadow pooled between the oaks." | | 12 | "She held the pendant higher," | | 13 | "She bent and brushed damp" | | 14 | "The pendant throbbed in time" | | 15 | "She had come for this—this" | | 16 | "Eva had warned her: don’t" | | 17 | "Carter had shrugged it off." | | 18 | "A soft rustle to her" | | 19 | "She pivoted, chest tight." |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 28.90% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the Grove looked like" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight fractured through wildflower petals that bloomed pale silver in the clearing." | | 1 | "The wildflowers at the circle’s edge quivered, petals tilting as though listening." | | 2 | "The air in the clearing grew taut, as if the grove held its breath." | | 3 | "It cocked its head the other way, lips curling into a smile that drew too-wide across its face." | | 4 | "The Fae Grove shifted, as though stirred by something vast waking beneath the standing stones." | | 5 | "Fog rolled into the grove, curling around her ankles, pushing her toward the center." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |