| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1466 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1466 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "glinting" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "flicked" | | 11 | "wavered" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "grave" | | 15 | "quivered" | | 16 | "lurched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 233 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 233 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 241 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1458 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1420 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Mist | 2 | | Voice | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Moonlight | 3 | | Roots | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Mist" | | 3 | "Voice" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Moonlight" | | 6 | "Roots" |
| | places | | 0 | "Hel" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1458 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 241 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 28.04 | | std | 23.03 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 87 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 233 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 296 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.72% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 241 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "A slender shape slipped among trunks—too upright to be a deer." | | 1 | "She stared at the leaf—too dark, too glossy." | | 2 | "It raised an arm—she glimpsed fingers too long for human hands." | | 3 | "A breeze stirred—carried a scent of rotten fruit and cold metal." | | 4 | "It looked human now—torn edges where linen should hide flesh." | | 5 | "A silhouette stepped from the darkness—a second figure, smaller, maybe a child, but tall enough to pass as adult." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 42 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.023809523809523808 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 241 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 241 | | mean | 6.05 | | std | 3.45 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 43.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.23651452282157676 | | totalSentences | 241 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the soft thud of" | | 1 | "Only the hush of sap" | | 2 | "Just a seamless surface." | | 3 | "Only a distant memory of" | | 4 | "Just a blur where features" | | 5 | "Then the figure smiled." | | 6 | "Only the taste of fear" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 36.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "She slid one hand beneath" | | 1 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 2 | "She shook her head." | | 3 | "She tugged at the pendant." | | 4 | "It plunged into heat." | | 5 | "She raised her free hand" | | 6 | "Her words swallowed up by" | | 7 | "She stepped beyond the oak," | | 8 | "She bent to brush one" | | 9 | "Its edges curled too sharply," | | 10 | "She flinched and straightened, heartbeat" | | 11 | "Her eyes darted." | | 12 | "She held her breath." | | 13 | "Her voice landed flat." | | 14 | "She swallowed, fought the urge" | | 15 | "She came here on purpose." | | 16 | "She raised the pendant." | | 17 | "Its glow faded." | | 18 | "She lowered it and turned" | | 19 | "She walked carefully among them," |
| | ratio | 0.458 | |
| 17.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 178 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "The night air felt too" | | 2 | "Something had drawn her here," | | 3 | "She slid one hand beneath" | | 4 | "The silver chain cut cool" | | 5 | "The deep crimson gem held" | | 6 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 7 | "The pulse had meant she" | | 8 | "That night, she’d chosen this" | | 9 | "She shook her head." | | 10 | "Trees did that with the" | | 11 | "She tugged at the pendant." | | 12 | "It plunged into heat." | | 13 | "She raised her free hand" | | 14 | "Her words swallowed up by" | | 15 | "She stepped beyond the oak," | | 16 | "She bent to brush one" | | 17 | "Its edges curled too sharply," | | 18 | "She flinched and straightened, heartbeat" | | 19 | "Footfalls shifted behind her." |
| | ratio | 0.886 | |
| 24.88% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the Grove felt wrong." |
| | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |