Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRAN8KRMQ5B82CCFEDCQ8E

Run Details

Duration:
3.8s
Cost:
$0.000082

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the damp London night, casting jagged shadows across the bar’s worn wood. Aurora Carter wiped her hands on her apron, the golden embroidery of the Golden Empress still clinging to her fingers despite the clatter of dishes. The delivery van had just pulled away, leaving her with a quiet ache in her chest—not from exhaustion, but from the way the air felt thicker here, heavier than usual. She hadn’t come for the usual crowd. The Nest wasn’t her usual haunt, not anymore. But the sign had been lit when she passed, the green glow stubborn against the rain-slicked pavement. She’d seen Silas’s name on the menu once, years ago, when she’d been younger and lighter. Now, the thought of him made her stomach twist. The door creaked open. Aurora didn’t look up. She knew the moment he stepped inside by the way the air shifted, the way the flickering lights seemed to dim just a fraction. Silas Blackwood moved through the bar like a man who hadn’t aged at all—tall, limping slightly, his auburn hair streaked with silver catching the light like polished bronze. He wore a dark coat, the kind that swallowed the years, and his hands were steady on the bar stool she’d saved for him. “You’re late,” he said, voice low, almost a growl. “The usual place was empty.” Aurora finally turned, her bright blue eyes sharp with something that wasn’t quite anger. “I don’t come here anymore.” Silas didn’t answer right away. He just watched her, the way he used to when they were younger, when they were still the kind of friends who could sit for hours without saying much. The scar on her wrist—small, crescent-shaped—pulsed faintly under her skin. She didn’t reach for it. “You look different,” Silas said finally, his voice rough. “Like you’ve been carrying something.” Aurora exhaled through her nose, the sound sharp. “I’ve been everywhere.” Silas leaned back, his signet ring catching the light as he tapped it against the bar. “You still work at the restaurant?” “Part-time. It’s not the same.” “It’s a job.” “It’s what’s left.” A beat of silence. The kind that hung between them like a question no one dared voice. Silas reached into his coat and pulled out a bottle of whiskey. He poured two fingers in a glass, then slid it toward her. “Drink.” Aurora didn’t move. “You shouldn’t have.” “You’re not the one who’s been drinking.” She took a breath, the whiskey burning on her tongue before she even knew it was there. “I’m not the same person who used to come here.” Silas didn’t flinch. “No. You’re not.” The bar’s patrons—blurred figures in the dim light—stirred around them. A couple laughing, a group debating something no one else could hear. The weight of the past pressed down, thick and suffocating. Aurora set the glass down. “Why are you here?” Silas’s gaze flicked to the back room, where the hidden door was always just out of sight. “I needed to see you.” She should’ve walked away. Should’ve left him standing there, the way he’d always left her before—unfinished, unfinished. But the bar felt too small, the world too loud. She sat. “You’re not the same person who left Cardiff,” Silas said softly. “You’re not the same person who came back.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the glass. “I’m not.” Silas didn’t press. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. The kind of watchfulness that had always made her uneasy, the kind that made her wonder what he was thinking, what he’d seen in her that she couldn’t see in herself. The door creaked again. A woman in a leather jacket stepped inside, her dark eyes sharp. “Silas?” He turned. “Eva. What are you doing here?” Eva didn’t smile. “I saw your sign. Thought I’d check in.” Silas nodded to Aurora. “Eva, this is Rory.” Aurora stood abruptly. “I don’t know why you’re here.” Eva’s expression didn’t change. “Because you’re Rory. And because you’re not what you used to be.” Silas’s voice was quiet. “She’s not what she was.” Aurora’s jaw clenched. “I don’t owe you anything.” Eva’s gaze flicked between them, sharp as a blade. “You owe yourself.” The bar felt too small. The air too thick. And for the first time in years, Aurora Carter felt the weight of everything she’d left behind pressing down on her, heavy and inescapable.
total_cost0.00008180000000000001

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Silas said finally [finally]"
1"Silas said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.138
86.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"stomach"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"flicked"
5"unreadable"
6"jaw clenched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"wonder"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords740
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount599
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
London1
Carter2
Golden1
Empress1
Silas12
Blackwood1
Aurora11
Eva3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Aurora"
6"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.498
windowScore0.5
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite anger"
64.86% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.351
wordCount740
matches
0"not from exhaustion, but from the way the air felt thicker here, heavier than usual"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean20.56
std19.15
cv0.932
sampleLengths
080
157
24
380
414
519
649
714
811
922
105
113
123
1317
1425
156
167
1727
186
1932
209
2122
2229
2319
248
2541
2617
278
2811
298
309
3116
329
338
3412
3533
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"been lit"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs101
matches
0"was thinking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences82
ratio0.061
matches
0"The delivery van had just pulled away, leaving her with a quiet ache in her chest—not from exhaustion, but from the way the air felt thicker here, heavier than usual."
1"Silas Blackwood moved through the bar like a man who hadn’t aged at all—tall, limping slightly, his auburn hair streaked with silver catching the light like polished bronze."
2"The scar on her wrist—small, crescent-shaped—pulsed faintly under her skin."
3"The bar’s patrons—blurred figures in the dim light—stirred around them."
4"Should’ve left him standing there, the way he’d always left her before—unfinished, unfinished."
80.07% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount608
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped-pulsed"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.05592105263157895
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009868421052631578
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean9.02
std7.39
cv0.819
sampleLengths
025
125
230
37
48
517
616
79
84
94
1024
1128
1224
139
145
1514
165
175
1829
1910
205
219
225
238
243
2516
266
275
283
293
304
3113
3212
3312
341
353
363
377
3817
3910
403
413
4210
4312
4410
455
464
4717
485
494
42.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.24390243902439024
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences54
matches
0"She hadn’t come for the"
1"She’d seen Silas’s name on"
2"She knew the moment he"
3"He wore a dark coat,"
4"he said, voice low, almost"
5"He just watched her, the"
6"She didn’t reach for it."
7"He poured two fingers in"
8"She took a breath, the"
9"She should’ve walked away."
10"He just watched her, his"
ratio0.204
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences54
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter wiped her hands"
2"The delivery van had just"
3"She hadn’t come for the"
4"The Nest wasn’t her usual"
5"She’d seen Silas’s name on"
6"The door creaked open."
7"Aurora didn’t look up."
8"She knew the moment he"
9"Silas Blackwood moved through the"
10"He wore a dark coat,"
11"he said, voice low, almost"
12"Aurora finally turned, her bright"
13"Silas didn’t answer right away."
14"He just watched her, the"
15"The scar on her wrist—small,"
16"She didn’t reach for it."
17"Silas said finally, his voice"
18"Aurora exhaled through her nose,"
19"Silas leaned back, his signet"
ratio0.907
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Now, the thought of him"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas Blackwood moved through the bar like a man who hadn’t aged at all—tall, limping slightly, his auburn hair streaked with silver catching the light like pol…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice low, almost a growl"
1"Silas said finally, his voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.1869%