Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRARYHX6NNPSNCM60PAQ64

Run Details

Duration:
19.7s
Cost:
$0.007784

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the London streets into a slick, shimmering maze. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she sprinted, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. The suspect—some wiry kid with a hood pulled low—darted ahead, weaving between late-night stragglers and parked cars. A neon sign flickered above a side alley, casting jagged green light across the wet pavement. Quinn’s fingers twitched near her radio, but she didn’t call it in. Not yet. Not until she had answers. The kid glanced back, eyes wide under the hood. He ducked into a narrow passage between two buildings, his sneakers slapping against the wet stone. Quinn followed, her shoulder brushing the brick wall as she took the turn. The alley opened into a dead end—just a rusted fire escape and a boarded-up door. The kid was gone. She slowed, scanning the shadows. A manhole cover lay slightly askew near the back wall. The edges glistened with fresh rainwater. Quinn crouched, prying it up with a grunt. A ladder descended into darkness, the rungs slick with moisture. The air rising from below carried the scent of damp earth and something sharper—copper, maybe, or old smoke. She hesitated. The rational part of her brain screamed to wait for backup. But the other part, the one that still heard Morris’s voice in the static of her radio, knew this was the only lead she’d had in months. Her boots hit the ladder. The descent was longer than she expected. The tunnel walls pressed in close, the only light coming from the faint glow of distant bulbs strung along the ceiling. The kid’s footsteps echoed ahead, quick and uneven. Quinn moved faster, her hand resting on the grip of her sidearm. The tunnel opened into a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, by the looks of it. But the tracks weren’t empty. Stalls lined the platform, draped in deep purples and blacks, their wares glinting under flickering lanterns. A woman with silver-streaked hair haggled over a vial of swirling liquid. A man in a long coat examined a dagger that hummed when he turned it in the light. The kid was already halfway down the platform, weaving through the crowd. Quinn stepped onto the platform, her pulse hammering. The air was thick with the scent of incense and something metallic. A vendor with too many teeth grinned at her, holding up a jar of something that pulsed like a heartbeat. She ignored him, pushing forward. The kid glanced back again, then ducked behind a curtain of beads. Quinn followed, shoving through the strands. The space beyond was smaller, darker. A man with a scarred face leaned against a table covered in bones. “You’re not supposed to be here,” he said, voice low. Quinn’s fingers tightened around her radio. “Metropolitan Police. I’m pursuing a suspect.” The man’s eyes flicked to the curtain. “No police down here.” She didn’t have time for this. “Where’d he go?” The man exhaled through his nose, then jerked his chin toward a narrow passage at the back. Quinn didn’t wait for more. She moved, her boots silent on the worn stone. The passage twisted, then opened into another chamber. This one was quieter, the stalls sparse. A figure stood at the far end, talking to someone in a hooded cloak. The kid. Quinn stepped forward— A hand clamped onto her shoulder. She spun, fist raised, but the man in front of her was already stepping back, palms up. Tomás Herrera. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinted in the dim light. “Easy,” he said. “You don’t want to do this.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “I’m not here for you.” “Doesn’t matter.” His dark eyes flicked toward the figures at the end of the chamber. “You follow him any further, you won’t like what you find.” She didn’t lower her hand. “You know what’s going on here?” Tomás hesitated. “I know you’re out of your depth.” The kid and the cloaked figure were moving again, slipping through a side passage. Quinn’s radio crackled in her ear—dispatch, asking for her location. She ignored it. Tomás sighed. “You’re gonna get yourself killed.” Quinn met his gaze. “Not tonight.” She turned and ran.
total_cost0.007784

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount710
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount710
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"glinting"
5"pulse"
6"pulsed"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords701
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount637
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Quinn13
Morris1
Tube1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.48
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount701
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean23.37
std18.33
cv0.785
sampleLengths
064
119
257
321
436
540
65
748
866
912
1040
1142
1210
1312
1411
159
1631
1731
183
196
2031
219
228
2326
2411
259
2627
277
286
294
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"were moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences77
ratio0.078
matches
0"The suspect—some wiry kid with a hood pulled low—darted ahead, weaving between late-night stragglers and parked cars."
1"The alley opened into a dead end—just a rusted fire escape and a boarded-up door."
2"The air rising from below carried the scent of damp earth and something sharper—copper, maybe, or old smoke."
3"The tunnel opened into a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, by the looks of it."
4"Quinn stepped forward—"
5"Quinn’s radio crackled in her ear—dispatch, asking for her location."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount646
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.030959752321981424
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0046439628482972135
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean9.1
std5.47
cv0.601
sampleLengths
015
116
217
316
412
52
65
79
816
913
1015
114
125
1310
146
158
1610
1718
182
1911
2027
215
227
2321
248
2512
2615
275
2816
2912
3018
3112
328
3312
3420
355
3612
376
386
3913
4010
416
426
437
444
456
463
4717
485
499
43.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.24675324675324675
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences60
matches
0"He ducked into a narrow"
1"She slowed, scanning the shadows."
2"Her boots hit the ladder."
3"She ignored him, pushing forward."
4"he said, voice low"
5"She didn’t have time for"
6"She moved, her boots silent"
7"She spun, fist raised, but"
8"His dark eyes flicked toward"
9"She didn’t lower her hand."
10"She ignored it."
11"She turned and ran."
ratio0.2
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences60
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"The suspect—some wiry kid with"
3"A neon sign flickered above"
4"Quinn’s fingers twitched near her"
5"The kid glanced back, eyes"
6"He ducked into a narrow"
7"Quinn followed, her shoulder brushing"
8"The alley opened into a"
9"The kid was gone."
10"She slowed, scanning the shadows."
11"A manhole cover lay slightly"
12"The edges glistened with fresh"
13"Quinn crouched, prying it up"
14"A ladder descended into darkness,"
15"The air rising from below"
16"The rational part of her"
17"Her boots hit the ladder."
18"The descent was longer than"
19"The tunnel walls pressed in"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.3681%