Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRAZT4D1V3TE09484STZ4J

Run Details

Duration:
25.7s
Cost:
$0.013588
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped into Silas' bar, grateful for the familiar gloom after the chaos of Soho's Friday night revelry. The music pulsed outside, a foreign rhythm to the hushed sanctuary within. The cloying, sweet fragrance of coconut and lime hung in the air, a heady contrast to the musty smell of old tomes and faded photographs that were the bar's hallmarks. She moved deeper into the room, her eyes adjusting to the subtle lighting, already accustomed to the hush of this quiet corner of the city. "Laila!" The voice, gravelly and warm with age, captured her attention. Aurora stilled, staring at the unfamiliar face, her mind searching for a name to pair with the broad smile. She hadn't expected this face to greet her, this man with the grey-streaked auburn hair and the worn, leather-like appearance of one who had spent a life out in the sun. "Silas?" she asked, her voice a whisper as she recognised the owner of the bar she now stood in. "Oh my God, is that you? I mean, you're... you're looking..." "Older," he finished for her, his smile turning a hint wistful. His once keen hazel eyes held a warmth that hadn't diminished but now also carried the weight of many tales untold. "Age has a way of creeping up on us when we least expect it." Aurora nodded, feeling a sense of melancholy settle over her. The memory of her past friendship with this man pressed on her, a vivid reminder of her youth. "You saw me coming and hid behind the bar, didn't you?" "A man must have his secrets, girl." His laugh, rich and deep, was unchanged. She noted the slight strain in his voice, a telltale sign of his years. "And you're still as sharp as I remember. But of course, you were always too clever for your own good." She chuckled, the sound taking her back to the countless times they had shared drinks in various bars across the city. Silas had been her father's friend and, by extension, a mentor to her. His keen mind, his endless fascinating tales, and his quiet authority over any room he entered had captivated her. Time had tempered his disposition, but the essence of the man, his nature, was unchanged. "How've you been, kid?" He poured two whiskies, the amber liquid glinting under the soft lights, and slid one across the mahogany bar to her. "I've not seen you around here for too long. Thought you'd found another nest to call home." She shrugged, lifting the glass to savour the familiar scent. "I've been around. You know how it is, life gets in the way. And this place hasn't changed. Still my go-to for escape when the city's madness becomes too much." "One doesn't need to change perfection, they say." His tone was as dry as the exquisite whisky he'd served. Silas leaned on the bar, observing her through the flickering candlelight, a look of silent judgement on his face. Aurora held his gaze, remembering her old self. Free-spirited and impetuous, she had challenged every authority figure that had crossed her path, from teachers to corrupt politicians, never once backing down. That person had faded with each passing year, but Silas seemed to see right through the illusion of maturity she had so carefully constructed. "You always were too good at seeing through my act," she admitted, her tone light but her expression earnest. "Some things never change, I guess." Silas smiled, his eyes softening. "I see a young woman who's seen things she shouldn't have, who's learned some hard lessons, but who's come out the other side stronger." He tilted his head, studying her with an intensity that made her shift under his gaze. "I see a woman who's found her place and is making damn sure she stays there." Her throat tightened at his words, an unfamiliar mix of comfort and unease stirring within her. "I guess that's one way of putting it." She glanced away, focusing on the half-empty glass in her hand. "Life's gotten complicated, Silas. The city—the world, even—isn't the same as it was when we'd meet up for drinks and plot revolutions." "The world never stops turning, girl," he said gently. "But the revolutions you spoke of, the changes you wanted to see... they don't all end in glory. Sometimes they simmer under the surface, slow and sure. Like the finest whisky, aging over time until it's just right." Aurora smiled at the analogy, a private joke between them from years past. It held a new resonance now, a comforting reminder of the unshakeable bond they shared despite their long absence from each other's lives. "True, Silas, so true." She sipped her whisky. Silas inclined his head towards the hidden room at the back, the room that had served as a centre of clandestine meetings and countless conspiracies over the years. "Then come. Let's catch up properly. After all, we've got many years of drinks to make up for."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She glanced away [away]"
1"he said gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
88.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount838
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount838
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"carried the weight"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count2
9
word"fascinating"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"comforting"
count1
15
word"clandestine"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"gloom"
2"pulsed"
3"sanctuary"
4"whisper"
5"warmth"
6"carried the weight"
7"sense of"
8"reminder"
9"fascinating"
10"glinting"
11"constructed"
12"intensity"
13"resonance"
14"comforting"
15"clandestine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences35
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences35
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences46
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords832
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount540
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Aurora5
Silas5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount832
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
39.47% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean48.94
std14.1
cv0.288
sampleLengths
085
161
230
346
439
548
668
742
840
938
1055
1125
1261
1357
1447
1544
1646
85.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences35
matches
0"was unchanged"
1"was unchanged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs77
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences46
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount242
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.05371900826446281
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.004132231404958678
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences46
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences46
mean18.09
std7.72
cv0.427
sampleLengths
018
112
230
325
411
519
631
719
811
911
1021
1114
1210
1318
1411
1514
1614
1720
1821
1913
2019
2115
2225
2317
2410
2530
2619
2719
288
2923
3024
3119
326
335
3440
3516
3616
3719
3822
399
4038
4113
4223
438
4428
4518
86.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5434782608695652
totalSentences46
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
2.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences35
matches
0"She moved deeper into the"
1"She hadn't expected this face"
2"she asked, her voice a"
3"he finished for her, his"
4"His once keen hazel eyes"
5"His laugh, rich and deep,"
6"She noted the slight strain"
7"She chuckled, the sound taking"
8"His keen mind, his endless"
9"He poured two whiskies, the"
10"She shrugged, lifting the glass"
11"His tone was as dry"
12"she admitted, her tone light"
13"He tilted his head, studying"
14"Her throat tightened at his"
15"She glanced away, focusing on"
16"he said gently"
17"It held a new resonance"
18"She sipped her whisky"
ratio0.543
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences35
matches
0"Aurora slipped into"
1"The music pulsed outside, a"
2"The cloying, sweet fragrance of"
3"She moved deeper into the"
4"The voice, gravelly and warm"
5"Aurora stilled, staring at the"
6"She hadn't expected this face"
7"she asked, her voice a"
8"he finished for her, his"
9"His once keen hazel eyes"
10"Aurora nodded, feeling a sense"
11"The memory of her past"
12"His laugh, rich and deep,"
13"She noted the slight strain"
14"She chuckled, the sound taking"
15"Silas had been her father's"
16"His keen mind, his endless"
17"Time had tempered his disposition,"
18"He poured two whiskies, the"
19"She shrugged, lifting the glass"
ratio0.971
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The cloying, sweet fragrance of coconut and lime hung in the air, a heady contrast to the musty smell of old tomes and faded photographs that were the bar's hal…"
1"Aurora stilled, staring at the unfamiliar face, her mind searching for a name to pair with the broad smile."
2"His once keen hazel eyes held a warmth that hadn't diminished but now also carried the weight of many tales untold."
3"Free-spirited and impetuous, she had challenged every authority figure that had crossed her path, from teachers to corrupt politicians, never once backing down."
4"Silas inclined his head towards the hidden room at the back, the room that had served as a centre of clandestine meetings and countless conspiracies over the ye…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he finished, his smile turning a hint wistful"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.091
72.9188%