Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRB060YES1BVWZ14K4YF2W

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Duration:
32.0s
Cost:
$0.006227
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter's boots scrunched on the gravel path as she pushed through the ancient oak standing stones, entering the whispering shadows of the Fae Grove. The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant, her constant companion since its mysterious arrival, glinted faintly in the diminishing light, drawing her gaze. A soft pulse, almost imperceptible, hinted at the pendant's warmth, a comforting presence in this isolating dusk. As she stepped deeper into the grove, the sounds of Richmond Park outside receded, replaced by an unsettling stillness. Wildflowers, usually a vibrant tapestry of colors, now swayed in the fading light like sentinels guarding secrets. Rory had chosen this moment, when day bled into night, for a reason: the veil between worlds was at its thinnest. She hoped to catch a glimpse, a whisper, anything that might explain the pendant and its mysterious origin, Dymas. Her eyes adjusted slowly to the dim light, picking out details. The trees seemed to loom, their branches etched against the twilight sky like skeletal fingers. Every step felt deliberate, as if she was being herded toward some unseen fate. The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and blooming flowers, a contrast that made her skin prickle. Aurora stopped near the center, where a solitary oak, larger than the others, stood guard. The silence was oppressive, making the soft whisper of leaves under her feet sound like a shout. She closed her eyes, focusing on the warmth of the Heartstone, a gentle hum that seemed to synchronize with her heartbeat. "I'm here," she whispered, the sound swallowed by the grove, leaving no echo. "I want to understand." The response was silence, and then, subtly, the atmosphere shifted. It was as if the grove was waking, the trees leaning in, intrigued. Rory's eyes snapped open, her gaze darting from shadow to shadow. Nothing moved, yet the feeling of being watched intensified. A faint rustle, like silk against leaves, came from her right. Rory turned, her hand instinctively reaching for the pendant, as if it might offer protection. A wildflower, its petals an unearthly glow in the dark, swayed in an invisible breeze. The rustling grew louder, taking on a rhythmic quality, like slow, deliberate footsteps, circling her. "Who's there?" Her voice was steady, a deliberate challenge to the encroaching fear. The rustling ceased. The wildflower's glow dimmed, plunging the area into an even deeper darkness. The silence that followed was palpable, a physical presence that pressed against Rory's skin. Suddenly, a twig snapped behind her. Rory spun around, her heart racing. The sound seemed to hang in the air, a challenge. Slowly, she took a step forward, her eyes scanning the darkness. "A game, then?" she whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of her heart. The response was immediate. Leaves crunched, footsteps light and quick, moving just out of sight. The game had begun, and Rory was the pawn. She turned, trying to keep the sound in her sights, but it danced around her, always just at the edge of perception. Each step she took was met with a countermove, the unseen presence mirroring her actions. The grove, once a place of mysteries waiting to be unraveled, had transformed into a chessboard, with Rory as the unwilling queen. "Aurora Carter," a voice whispered, the sound weaving through the trees, sourceless. "Why do you seek what you cannot handle?" Rory spun, trying to pinpoint the speaker, but the voice seemed to emanate from all directions. "I'm seeking answers. About the Heartstone, about Dymas—" "Answers come with a price," the voice interrupted, the tone like a sigh on the wind. "Are you prepared to pay it?" The question hung in the air, heavy with foreboding. Rory's grip on the pendant tightened, its warmth a beacon of courage. "I'm willing to listen." The grove responded with silence, a pause so profound it seemed the night itself was holding its breath. Then, in the blink of an eye, the world around Rory dissolved into chaos. Leaves exploded into the air, swirling around her in a maddening vortex. The sound, like a thousand whispers, built to a deafening crescendo. And then, everything stopped. Rory stood, alone in the sudden silence, the wildflowers glowing softly around her once more. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed warmly against her chest. It was as if the grove had decided to wait, to observe her next move. The question still lingered, unspoken but palpable: "Are you prepared to pay it?" Aurora Carter, her heart still racing, her senses on high alert, whispered the only response that seemed appropriate: "I'm still listening." The night, in turn, seemed to lean in, eager for her next step, ready to unleash its secrets, or its horrors, upon her.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:50:09.483Z" 2/19/2026, 10:50:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount788
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"warmly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"softly"
3"warmly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount788
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"tapestry"
count1
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"solitary"
count1
8
word"silence"
count5
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count2
14
word"palpable"
count2
15
word"racing"
count2
16
word"scanning"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"pawn"
count1
19
word"foreboding"
count1
20
word"beacon"
count1
21
word"profound"
count1
22
word"pulsed"
count1
23
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"comforting"
3"tapestry"
4"sentinels"
5"whisper"
6"etched"
7"solitary"
8"silence"
9"oppressive"
10"echo"
11"silk"
12"rhythmic"
13"footsteps"
14"palpable"
15"racing"
16"scanning"
17"pounding"
18"pawn"
19"foreboding"
20"beacon"
21"profound"
22"pulsed"
23"unspoken"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"blink of an eye"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"The air was heavy with"
1"in the blink of an eye"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences54
matches
0"y with foreboding"
10.58% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords788
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount735
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone3
Pendant2
Richmond1
Park1
Dymas1
Rory11
Aurora3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.752
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"hum that seemed to synchronize with her heartbeat"
1"It was as if the grove was waking, the trees leaning in, intrigued"
2"It was as if the grove had decided to wait, to observe her next move"
3"seemed appropriate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount788
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean35.82
std19.03
cv0.531
sampleLengths
065
176
260
353
417
543
656
713
829
933
1015
1146
1237
1320
1424
1522
1625
1755
184
1951
2021
2123
92.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"being herded"
1"was met"
85.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs116
matches
0"was waking"
1"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences59
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.29% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount735
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.04081632653061224
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.0163265306122449
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
99.89% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean13.36
std5.34
cv0.4
sampleLengths
025
123
217
319
417
521
619
711
815
914
1020
1115
1217
1321
1413
154
1610
1713
1811
199
2011
2115
2215
2315
2413
253
2612
2714
286
296
3010
3111
3215
334
3411
359
3622
3715
3822
3912
408
4116
428
4316
446
459
4612
474
4818
4914
57.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3728813559322034
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"Suddenly, a twig snapped behind"
1"Slowly, she took a step"
2"Then, in the blink of"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences54
matches
0"She hoped to catch a"
1"Her eyes adjusted slowly to"
2"She closed her eyes, focusing"
3"she whispered, the sound swallowed"
4"It was as if the"
5"Her voice was steady, a"
6"she whispered, her voice barely"
7"She turned, trying to keep"
8"It was as if the"
ratio0.167
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences54
matches
0"Aurora Carter's boots scrunched on"
1"The silver chain of the"
2"A soft pulse, almost imperceptible,"
3"Wildflowers, usually a vibrant tapestry"
4"Rory had chosen this moment,"
5"She hoped to catch a"
6"Her eyes adjusted slowly to"
7"The trees seemed to loom,"
8"Every step felt deliberate, as"
9"The air was heavy with"
10"Aurora stopped near the center,"
11"The silence was oppressive, making"
12"She closed her eyes, focusing"
13"she whispered, the sound swallowed"
14"The response was silence, and"
15"It was as if the"
16"Rory's eyes snapped open, her"
17"Nothing moved, yet the feeling"
18"A faint rustle, like silk"
19"Rory turned, her hand instinctively"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She hoped to catch a glimpse, a whisper, anything that might explain the pendant and its mysterious origin, Dymas."
1"She closed her eyes, focusing on the warmth of the Heartstone, a gentle hum that seemed to synchronize with her heartbeat."
2"The silence that followed was palpable, a physical presence that pressed against Rory's skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she whispered, her voice barely audible over the pounding of her heart"
1"a voice whispered, the sound weaving through the trees, sourceless"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"a voice whispered (whisper)"
3"the voice interrupted (interrupt)"
4"high alert whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.833
70.1726%