| 59.65% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she admitted begrudgingly [begrudgingly]" | | 1 | "he asked softly [softly]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 3 | "he asked quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.456 | | leniency | 0.912 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |
| 77.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 908 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 908 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "charm" | | 2 | "unspoken" | | 3 | "pounding" | | 4 | "eyebrow" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "pang" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "tinged" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "encounter" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 906 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.52% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 633 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.37 | | worstName | "Evan" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Time | 1 | | Evan | 15 | | Silas | 8 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Time" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.315 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if searching for hidden ghosts" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 906 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 87.01% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 17.76 | | std | 8.07 | | cv | 0.455 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.42% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 635 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.04409448818897638 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015748031496062992 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 8.47 | | std | 4.42 | | cv | 0.522 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 88.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5327102803738317 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Subtly, he nodded, indicating he'd" | | 1 | "Always the spymaster, even when" | | 2 | "Too many memories bubbling up," |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 88.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice betrayed more confusion" | | 1 | "he said, sliding into the" | | 2 | "she said, unable to suppress" | | 3 | "He motioned to Silas for" | | 4 | "she said, taking a slow" | | 5 | "He glanced down at the" | | 6 | "She decided to break it." | | 7 | "he answered, but his eyes" | | 8 | "she said, trying to keep" | | 9 | "She glanced at Silas, who" | | 10 | "he said, nodding" | | 11 | "she admitted begrudgingly" | | 12 | "They sat in silence for" | | 13 | "he asked softly" | | 14 | "She looked back at him." | | 15 | "he said, his voice tinged" | | 16 | "She flinched, the scar a" | | 17 | "she said, her voice firmer" | | 18 | "she said softly" | | 19 | "He scribbled his number on" |
| | ratio | 0.329 | |
| 52.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "A voice, familiar yet different," | | 1 | "Aurora Carter looked up from" | | 2 | "Silas, behind the bar, caught" | | 3 | "Her voice betrayed more confusion" | | 4 | "he said, sliding into the" | | 5 | "The audacity was still there," | | 6 | "Rory asked, her voice cool," | | 7 | "Evan leaned back, his gaze" | | 8 | "she said, unable to suppress" | | 9 | "He motioned to Silas for" | | 10 | "Silas obliged, sliding a whiskey" | | 11 | "Silas said, his voice neutral" | | 12 | "Evan raised an eyebrow." | | 13 | "Rory replied, avoiding the complexity" | | 14 | "Evan studied her, the silence" | | 15 | "she said, taking a slow" | | 16 | "The smirk faded." | | 17 | "Rory felt a pang of" | | 18 | "Evan's eyes darkened further." | | 19 | "He glanced down at the" |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Gone was the clean-cut charm that had once captivated her." | | 1 | "Evan leaned back, his gaze sweeping the bar as if searching for hidden ghosts." | | 2 | "She glanced at Silas, who was discreetly polishing glasses but clearly eavesdropping." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice cool, heart pounding" | | 1 | "she said, unable to suppress the edge in her tone" | | 2 | "Silas said, his voice neutral yet revealing his protective stance" | | 3 | "Rory said, more to herself than to him" | | 4 | "he answered, but his eyes said something different" | | 5 | "she said, trying to keep her tone neutral," | | 6 | "she said, her voice firmer" |
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| 79.82% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 22 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "she admitted begrudgingly (admit)" | | 2 | "Rory agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "she agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.386 | | leniency | 0.772 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |