Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRB3T0PZHQYRHSQSQZDJ6F

Run Details

Duration:
16.3s
Cost:
$0.039890
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"Rory?" A voice, familiar yet different, cut through the steady hum of conversations filling The Raven's Nest. Aurora Carter looked up from her drink, her sharp blue eyes narrowing as they landed on a figure she hadn't seen in years. Silas, behind the bar, caught her eye. Subtly, he nodded, indicating he'd watch over her. Always the spymaster, even when retired. "Evan?" Her voice betrayed more confusion than recognition. Time plays cruel tricks, blurring even the sharpest of memories. Standing there, detached from her past but still tethered, was Evan. Gone was the clean-cut charm that had once captivated her. In its place, a rough beard shadowed his jaw, his eyes darker with shadows of sleepless nights and unspoken secrets. "Yes, it's me," he said, sliding into the bar stool beside her without asking for permission. The audacity was still there, at least. "So, what brings you to Soho?" Rory asked, her voice cool, heart pounding. Evan leaned back, his gaze sweeping the bar as if searching for hidden ghosts. "Needed a drink. Didn't expect to bump into you." "Likewise," she said, unable to suppress the edge in her tone. Too many memories bubbling up, memories she'd buried beneath layers of new identities and fresh scars. He motioned to Silas for a drink. "I'll have whatever she's having." Silas obliged, sliding a whiskey neat across the counter. "On the house," Silas said, his voice neutral yet revealing his protective stance. Evan raised an eyebrow. "Generous. Who's the bloke?" "My landlord," Rory replied, avoiding the complexity of their actual relationship. Evan studied her, the silence between them thickening. "You still look good, Rory." "It's Aurora now," she corrected. "Rory’s a lifetime ago." A smirk. "Aurora, then. How’s life treating you?" "Complicated," she said, taking a slow sip of her drink. "Yourself?" "Surviving," he replied. The smirk faded. "Had to reinvent myself after you left." Rory felt a pang of guilt, quickly masked by the old anger. "You remember why I left, don't you?" Evan's eyes darkened further. He glanced down at the counter. "I remember enough." "Guess some things never change," Rory said, more to herself than to him. Evan clenched his jaw. "Look, I didn't come here to dredge up the past." "Too late," Rory shot back. Silence again, this time accompanied by a heavy air of unresolved tension. She decided to break it. "Why are you really here?" "I was in the neighbourhood. Heard about this place from a friend," he answered, but his eyes said something different. Something she wasn’t ready to decipher. "Well," she said, trying to keep her tone neutral, "it's a small world." Evan took a sip of his whiskey, his gaze holding hers. "Are you happy, Rory? I mean, Aurora?" The question caught her off guard. She glanced at Silas, who was discreetly polishing glasses but clearly eavesdropping. "Happy’s a tricky thing, Evan." "Always is," he said, nodding. "I'm trying, you know. To be better." Rory didn’t know if she believed him. "Trying’s a start," she admitted begrudgingly. They sat in silence for a while, the bar around them a bustling background. Out of habit, Rory began to map the exits, her old instincts kicking in. Evan noticed. "Still running?" he asked softly. She looked back at him. "Not as much. Trying to stand my ground these days." "It's a good look on you," he said, his voice tinged with something almost like regret. Rory gave a small, bitter smile. "Yeah, well. People change." Evan glanced down at the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, memories flickering in his eyes. "Some marks never fully fade." She flinched, the scar a reminder of a time she'd tried to forget. "We all have our scars," she said, her voice firmer. "It's how we live with them that counts." A tense moment passed before Evan sighed, deeply, like a man carrying too many burdens. "You think we could ever... I don't know, move past what happened?" Rory stared at him, searching his eyes for sincerity. "Maybe. But it’ll take more than words over a drink." "I get that," Evan said, nodding. "But at least... at least we’re talking." "Surprisingly civil for us," Rory agreed. "Maybe there's hope for second chances after all." Evan’s smile was more genuine this time, though lined with the years they’d spent apart. "That’s something, isn’t it?" "Yeah," she said softly. "It is." Silas tapped a knuckle on the bar, drawing their attention. "Closing up soon. Just a heads up." Evan took the hint, but hesitated. "Can I call you? Maybe we can finish this conversation sometime." Rory considered it, weighing old fears against new hopes. "Alright. But no promises." "No promises," Evan echoed. He scribbled his number on a napkin, sliding it to her before standing. "Take care, Aurora." "You too, Evan," she said, pocketing the napkin. As Evan exited The Raven's Nest, Silas moved closer, his protective gaze scrutinising her expression. "You alright?" he asked quietly. Rory exhaled, the weight of the encounter settling on her. "I think so. It’s... complicated." Silas nodded sagely, his hazel eyes softening. "Complications often come with second chances." "Yes, they do," she agreed, lifting her glass. As she took another sip, she felt a small spark of something she hadn't in a long while: hope. And just maybe, that was enough for now. But life, as always, had its own plans. The night wasn't over yet. Rory knew that much for certain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.65% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she admitted begrudgingly [begrudgingly]"
1"he asked softly [softly]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
3"he asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.456
leniency0.912
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.14
77.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount908
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount908
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"charm"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"pang"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"charm"
2"unspoken"
3"pounding"
4"eyebrow"
5"silence"
6"pang"
7"tension"
8"tinged"
9"reminder"
10"echoed"
11"weight"
12"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched his jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"a pang of guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords906
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.52% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount633
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.37
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora1
Carter1
Time1
Evan15
Silas8
Silence1
Rory13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Aurora"
2"Carter"
3"Time"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Rory"
places
0"Silence"
globalScore0.315
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if searching for hidden ghosts"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount906
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"knew that much"
87.01% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean17.76
std8.07
cv0.455
sampleLengths
017
144
218
341
423
513
623
727
812
922
108
1111
1213
139
148
1511
1613
1719
1813
1913
2014
2127
2226
2313
2418
2523
2612
2713
2830
295
3015
3116
3210
3320
3431
3527
3619
3713
3814
3919
406
4117
4217
4313
4420
458
4620
4715
4813
4927
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences107
ratio0
matches(empty)
96.42% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount635
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.04409448818897638
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.015748031496062992
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean8.47
std4.42
cv0.522
sampleLengths
017
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27
38
46
58
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711
810
920
1016
117
1213
1314
149
1511
1616
177
185
199
2013
214
224
2311
248
255
265
274
282
296
3010
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323
333
347
3512
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393
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4210
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486
4913
88.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5327102803738317
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"Subtly, he nodded, indicating he'd"
1"Always the spymaster, even when"
2"Too many memories bubbling up,"
ratio0.043
88.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her voice betrayed more confusion"
1"he said, sliding into the"
2"she said, unable to suppress"
3"He motioned to Silas for"
4"she said, taking a slow"
5"He glanced down at the"
6"She decided to break it."
7"he answered, but his eyes"
8"she said, trying to keep"
9"She glanced at Silas, who"
10"he said, nodding"
11"she admitted begrudgingly"
12"They sat in silence for"
13"he asked softly"
14"She looked back at him."
15"he said, his voice tinged"
16"She flinched, the scar a"
17"she said, her voice firmer"
18"she said softly"
19"He scribbled his number on"
ratio0.329
52.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences70
matches
0"A voice, familiar yet different,"
1"Aurora Carter looked up from"
2"Silas, behind the bar, caught"
3"Her voice betrayed more confusion"
4"he said, sliding into the"
5"The audacity was still there,"
6"Rory asked, her voice cool,"
7"Evan leaned back, his gaze"
8"she said, unable to suppress"
9"He motioned to Silas for"
10"Silas obliged, sliding a whiskey"
11"Silas said, his voice neutral"
12"Evan raised an eyebrow."
13"Rory replied, avoiding the complexity"
14"Evan studied her, the silence"
15"she said, taking a slow"
16"The smirk faded."
17"Rory felt a pang of"
18"Evan's eyes darkened further."
19"He glanced down at the"
ratio0.814
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Gone was the clean-cut charm that had once captivated her."
1"Evan leaned back, his gaze sweeping the bar as if searching for hidden ghosts."
2"She glanced at Silas, who was discreetly polishing glasses but clearly eavesdropping."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice cool, heart pounding"
1"she said, unable to suppress the edge in her tone"
2"Silas said, his voice neutral yet revealing his protective stance"
3"Rory said, more to herself than to him"
4"he answered, but his eyes said something different"
5"she said, trying to keep her tone neutral,"
6"she said, her voice firmer"
79.82% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"she admitted begrudgingly (admit)"
2"Rory agreed (agree)"
3"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.772
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.14
80.8486%