Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRB984BJJNB1B8G36AJ3DN

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Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.012354

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and rust. Harlow Quinn stepped over the police tape, her boots scuffing against the cracked tile. The beam of her torch carved through the gloom, illuminating the graffiti-scarred walls of what had once been Camden Town station. Now, it was just another forgotten pocket of London—except for the body. "Quinn, over here." Detective Sergeant Cole waved her toward the platform’s edge. His tie was loose, sleeves rolled up to his elbows like he’d been at it for hours. She adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, the second hand ticking too loud in the silence. The victim lay sprawled across the tracks, limbs twisted at angles that made her stomach clench. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a rumpled suit that had seen better days. No obvious wounds. No blood. Just... stillness. Cole crouched beside the body, snapping a pair of latex gloves into place. "No signs of struggle. No defensive wounds. Looks like he just... dropped." Quinn’s torch flickered over the victim’s face. His eyes were open, glassy, fixed on the ceiling. She knelt, brushing her fingers against his wrist. Cold. Rigor had already set in. "Time of death?" "ME’s on her way, but I’d say six, seven hours ago. Found him at oh-four-hundred when the night shift came through to clear the homeless." She stood, sweeping the beam across the platform. The usual detritus of an abandoned station littered the ground—discarded takeout containers, a broken umbrella, a single scuffed loafer. Nothing out of place. Nothing that screamed *murder*. "Any ID?" Cole held up a wallet. "Daniel Reeves. Thirty-four. Worked at a law firm in the City. No priors, no red flags." Quinn exhaled through her nose. "Then why’s he dead in a Tube station that hasn’t seen a train in twenty years?" Cole shrugged. "Maybe he was meeting someone. Maybe he had a heart attack. Maybe he was high." "High on what? There’s no track marks, no pills in his pockets." She stepped closer to the body, her torchlight catching something on the ground near his outstretched hand. A small, circular object, half-buried in the grime. She crouched again, nudging it with the tip of her pen. A compass. Brass, tarnished with age, its needle spinning lazily before settling on a direction that made no sense—pointing straight at the wall. Cole leaned in. "What’s that?" "Dunno." She slipped it into an evidence bag. The metal was warm, almost humming against her palm. She shook off the sensation. "Bag it. We’ll have it checked." Cole frowned. "You think it’s relevant?" She didn’t answer. Instead, she turned her attention to the wall the compass had pointed at. It was just concrete, cracked and peeling, covered in layers of spray paint. But as she ran her fingers along the surface, she felt it—a seam. A hairline fracture, barely visible, running from the floor to the ceiling. "Cole," she said slowly. "You see this?" He stepped forward, squinting. "See what?" She pressed her palm against the wall. The concrete gave way, just a fraction, like a door shifting in its frame. A draft whispered through the gap, carrying the scent of something old. Something *wrong*. Cole’s radio crackled. "DS Cole, you copy? ME’s here." He hesitated, then keyed the mic. "Copy that. We’re on the east platform." Quinn didn’t take her eyes off the wall. "Tell her to hold." "Quinn, what the hell are you—" She shoved harder. The wall groaned, then swung inward, revealing a narrow passage lit by flickering gas lamps. The air inside was thick, heavy with the scent of burning herbs and something metallic. Cole swore under his breath. "What *is* this?" Quinn stepped forward, her torch cutting through the dim light. The passage opened into a cavernous space, lined with stalls draped in velvet and silk. Strange symbols were painted on the walls, glowing faintly in the torchlight. At the far end, a figure stood behind a counter, polishing a glass vial with a cloth. A market. And it shouldn’t have been there. Cole grabbed her arm. "Quinn, we need to call this in." She shook him off. "Call what in? A hallucination?" The figure behind the counter looked up, their face obscured by a hood. They set the vial down and stepped forward, hands raised. "Detective. We’ve been expecting you." Quinn’s pulse jumped. "Who the hell are you?" The figure lowered their hood, revealing a woman with sharp green eyes and a smattering of freckles across her nose. She adjusted her round glasses, tucking a strand of curly red hair behind her ear. "Eva Kowalski. Occult researcher. And you’re standing in the Veil Market." Cole let out a sharp laugh. "The *what* market?" Eva ignored him, her gaze fixed on Quinn. "You found the compass. That’s how you got in." Quinn’s fingers tightened around the evidence bag. "What is this place?" "A black market," Eva said. "For things that don’t officially exist." Cole scoffed. "You’re telling me this is some kind of... supernatural flea market?" Eva’s lips twitched. "More or less." Quinn’s torch flickered over the stalls. One sold jars of glowing liquid. Another displayed what looked like human teeth on a velvet cushion. A third had a sign that read *Information—Price Negotiable*. She turned back to Eva. "And Daniel Reeves? Was he a customer?" Eva’s expression darkened. "He was a regular. Bought a lot of things he shouldn’t have." Cole crossed his arms. "Like what?" Eva hesitated. "Like a bone token. It’s how you get in here. But it’s not just a key—it’s a tether. If you use it too much, it... burns you out." Quinn’s stomach twisted. "Burns you out how?" Eva’s gaze flicked to the body on the tracks. "Like that." Cole threw his hands up. "This is insane. Quinn, we’re calling this in. Now." Quinn didn’t move. Her mind raced, piecing together the fragments. The lack of wounds. The compass. The hidden market. The way the body had looked—like something had *sucked* the life out of him. She turned to Eva. "You said you were expecting me." Eva nodded. "Three years ago, your partner—DS Morris—he came here too. He was asking questions. About a case." Quinn’s breath caught. Morris. The case that had gone cold. The one that had left her with more questions than answers. Cole grabbed her shoulder. "Quinn, enough. We’re leaving." She shrugged him off, her voice low. "What happened to Morris?" Eva’s fingers twisted together. "He found out too much. Just like Reeves." Quinn’s torch beam wavered. She thought of Morris’s last words to her, the way he’d looked over his shoulder like he was being followed. The way he’d vanished without a trace. She turned to Cole. "We’re not calling this in." His face darkened. "The hell we’re not." She held up the evidence bag, the compass inside glinting in the torchlight. "Because if we do, they’ll bury it. Just like they buried Morris." Cole’s jaw tightened. "You’re talking about a conspiracy." Quinn’s gaze locked onto Eva. "No. I’m talking about the truth." Eva met her eyes, unflinching. "Then you’re going to need more than a compass to find it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.098
leniency0.196
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.039
91.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"velvet"
count2
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"silence"
2"stomach"
3"flickered"
4"velvet"
5"silk"
6"pulse"
7"flicked"
8"raced"
9"wavered"
10"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences108
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords7
totalWords1190
ratio0.006
matches
0"murder"
1"wrong"
2"is"
3"what"
4"Information—Price Negotiable"
5"sucked"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount823
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Cole"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn14
Camden1
Town1
London1
Sergeant1
Cole16
Price1
Eva12
Morris2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Sergeant"
2"Cole"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"London"
globalScore0.528
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like human teeth on a velvet cushi"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1190
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean19.19
std13.96
cv0.727
sampleLengths
057
129
253
325
433
525
635
72
821
921
1017
1137
1234
135
1428
156
1654
177
186
1935
209
2113
2212
236
2433
258
2654
272
286
2911
309
3128
328
3346
349
3517
3611
3711
3813
396
4032
4112
4215
436
4430
457
4611
4714
4833
4910
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"were painted"
1"being followed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences154
ratio0.039
matches
0"Now, it was just another forgotten pocket of London—except for the body."
1"The usual detritus of an abandoned station littered the ground—discarded takeout containers, a broken umbrella, a single scuffed loafer."
2"Brass, tarnished with age, its needle spinning lazily before settling on a direction that made no sense—pointing straight at the wall."
3"But as she ran her fingers along the surface, she felt it—a seam."
4"A third had a sign that read *Information—Price Negotiable*."
5"The way the body had looked—like something had *sucked* the life out of him."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount830
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02289156626506024
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006024096385542169
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean7.73
std5.6
cv0.725
sampleLengths
010
114
221
312
412
517
618
716
812
93
102
111
121
1313
1412
157
169
178
181
195
203
2125
228
2319
244
254
262
275
2816
295
3016
312
3215
3329
348
3511
362
3721
383
392
408
419
425
436
442
454
463
4713
4813
4913
56.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners56
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, she turned her attention"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences93
matches
0"His tie was loose, sleeves"
1"She adjusted the worn leather"
2"His eyes were open, glassy,"
3"She knelt, brushing her fingers"
4"She stood, sweeping the beam"
5"She stepped closer to the"
6"She crouched again, nudging it"
7"She slipped it into an"
8"She shook off the sensation."
9"She didn’t answer."
10"It was just concrete, cracked"
11"she said slowly"
12"He stepped forward, squinting."
13"She pressed her palm against"
14"He hesitated, then keyed the"
15"She shoved harder."
16"She shook him off."
17"They set the vial down"
18"She adjusted her round glasses,"
19"She turned back to Eva."
ratio0.29
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences93
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped over the"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"Detective Sergeant Cole waved her"
4"His tie was loose, sleeves"
5"She adjusted the worn leather"
6"The victim lay sprawled across"
7"Cole crouched beside the body,"
8"Quinn’s torch flickered over the"
9"His eyes were open, glassy,"
10"She knelt, brushing her fingers"
11"Rigor had already set in."
12"She stood, sweeping the beam"
13"The usual detritus of an"
14"Nothing out of place."
15"Nothing that screamed *murder*."
16"Cole held up a wallet."
17"Quinn exhaled through her nose."
18"She stepped closer to the"
19"A small, circular object, half-buried"
ratio0.903
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Now, it was just another"
ratio0.011
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The victim lay sprawled across the tracks, limbs twisted at angles that made her stomach clench."
1"Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a rumpled suit that had seen better days."
2"Brass, tarnished with age, its needle spinning lazily before settling on a direction that made no sense—pointing straight at the wall."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.039
leniency0.078
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.1927%