| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The voice came again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 87.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsms | 49 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "foreboding" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "profound" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "flicker" | | 19 | "pounding" | | 20 | "fleeting" | | 21 | "reverberated" | | 22 | "scanned" | | 23 | "pulse" | | 24 | "gloom" | | 25 | "raced" | | 26 | "echo" | | 27 | "chilling" | | 28 | "cacophony" | | 29 | "echoing" | | 30 | "searing" | | 31 | "could feel" | | 32 | "amidst" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sent a shiver down" | | 1 | "a glimmer of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 90.59% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1163 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1109 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 7 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 10 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like this before" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to stretch and twist, mocking her solitude" | | 2 | "appeared wilted their colours muted as if drained of life" | | 3 | "rhythm that seemed to sync with her heartbeat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 28.37 | | std | 16.11 | | cv | 0.568 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | | 0 | "was fleeting" | | 1 | "were watching" |
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| 80.06% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "But now, it felt different—tainted." | | 1 | "A sudden movement caught her eye—a flicker of white darting between the trees." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1112 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "growing hot against her" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03327338129496403 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008093525179856115 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 12.78 | | std | 6.23 | | cv | 0.487 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 49.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.31868131868131866 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 41.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees, their gnarled" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 66.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, the air thick" | | 1 | "She had come here for" | | 2 | "she muttered, forcing herself to" | | 3 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 4 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 5 | "It felt alive, thrumming with" | | 6 | "She glanced around, half-expecting to" | | 7 | "She turned, squinting into the" | | 8 | "she called, her voice trembling" | | 9 | "She took a step back," | | 10 | "She reached out to touch" | | 11 | "She turned sharply, heart pounding," | | 12 | "she hissed, anger flaring in" | | 13 | "She clutched it tighter, the" | | 14 | "She was not alone." | | 15 | "she demanded, voice steadier than" | | 16 | "It was tall, impossibly thin," | | 17 | "she breathed, stepping forward, but" | | 18 | "she shouted, panic surging" | | 19 | "She stumbled back, the Heartstone" |
| | ratio | 0.383 | |
| 27.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The rustle of leaves whispered" | | 1 | "She paused, the air thick" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against" | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "The Grove had been a" | | 5 | "Shadows flickered at the corners" | | 6 | "A twig snapped behind her," | | 7 | "she muttered, forcing herself to" | | 8 | "The silence was too profound," | | 9 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 10 | "The faint glow of the" | | 11 | "she whispered, her voice barely" | | 12 | "A low hum vibrated through" | | 13 | "It felt alive, thrumming with" | | 14 | "She glanced around, half-expecting to" | | 15 | "A rustling sound echoed from" | | 16 | "She turned, squinting into the" | | 17 | "she called, her voice trembling" | | 18 | "Silence answered her, thick and" | | 19 | "She took a step back," |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, the air thick with an unsettling stillness, a stark contrast to the vibrant wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the moonlight." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against her chest, pulsed with a warmth that felt both inviting and foreboding." | | 2 | "The faint glow of the Heartstone intensified, casting a crimson hue that danced across the stones, illuminating the intricate carvings etched into their surface…" | | 3 | "It felt alive, thrumming with energy that sent a shiver down her spine." | | 4 | "She glanced around, half-expecting to see Eva’s familiar face, but the Grove was empty, save for the shadows that seemed to stretch and twist, mocking her solit…" | | 5 | "A rustling sound echoed from the thicket to her left, a soft, almost melodic whisper that sent a chill racing through her veins." | | 6 | "The wildflowers, once vibrant, now appeared wilted, their colours muted as if drained of life." | | 7 | "She turned sharply, heart pounding, but found only the shadows, shifting and swirling as if alive." | | 8 | "The pendant pulsed again, a steady rhythm that seemed to sync with her heartbeat." | | 9 | "She clutched it tighter, the warmth seeping into her skin, grounding her." | | 10 | "But the sensation was fleeting, replaced by an icy grip of fear as the rustling returned, louder this time, accompanied by a low, guttural growl that reverberat…" | | 11 | "The shadows seemed to pulse, shifting in a way that felt almost sentient, as if they were watching her, waiting." | | 12 | "Aurora’s heart raced as she clutched the pendant, the warmth flooding her veins, filling her with a fierce determination." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice barely a murmur" | | 1 | "she called, her voice trembling slightly" | | 2 | "she demanded, voice steadier than she felt" | | 3 | "she cried, desperation clawing at her throat" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she hissed (hiss)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 6 | "she cried (cry)" | | 7 | "The voice urged (urge)" | | 8 | "she screamed (scream)" | | 9 | "she gasped (gasp)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.909 | | effectiveRatio | 0.833 | |