Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBESVTABWW1JGQRFK4F2R

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Duration:
15.1s
Cost:
$0.000791
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Fantasy genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered with a strange, humming vibrancy as they stepped through the ancient oak standing stones. Aurora’s foot hit the uneven ground first, her senses prickling with a mixture of curiosity and unease. The sunlight outside blurred and elongated through the shimmering distortion of the Veil, warping the world beyond with flickering hues of gold and violet. The moment her boots touched the mossy earth, a silence fell, thick and profound, broken only by the faint, whispering echo of shifting shadows. Nyx lingered at her side, their faintly glowing violet eyes flickering as they surveyed the twilight landscape stretching before them. The silhouette of their humanoid form rippled, shadow and substance flickering like a candle’s flame caught in a draft. They spoke softly, voice barely more than a breath, “A step beyond the Veil, and everything’s... different.” Their whisper seemed to slide into the stillness, an echo of their ancient, bound existence. Aurora squinted, clutching the Heartstone Pendant that pulsed faintly against her chest, its crimson glow flickering in sync with her heartbeat. She slid her Fae-Forged Blade from its holster, the moonsilver catching a flicker of unfamiliar light and casting tremulous silvery glints on the mossy ground. “Yeah,” she muttered, voice tinged with awe and cautious suspicion. “This isn’t like any place I’ve been before. It’s... alive, somehow. Not just with magical energy, but with a kind of whispering hunger. Do you feel that?” Nyx inclined their shadowy head, their whisper-voice coalescing like soft wind. “Old power here. Not like Hel or Fae, not entirely. Something... ancient. dormant, maybe. Waiting.” Shadows fluttered around her feet, seeming to ripple like liquid ink as they moved forward carefully, eyes never leaving the twisting, iridescent landscape. The ground beneath their feet was uneven, slick with a dark, glistening substance that shone faintly like oil but pulsed with life. The moss was thicker, woven with luminescent fungi that cast a gentle, bluish glow, illuminating strange plantlife that twisted in shapes unfamiliar and unsettling. Broad, leafless trees reached skyward, their bark shimmering with a silvery patina, branches entwined like reaching claws. The roots writhed just beneath the surface, and when Aurora squatted to inspect, she felt a faint, prickling sensation crawling up her arm—almost like the forest was alive with awareness. “Look at that,” she said, voice hushed. “That isn’t any flora on Earth.” She pointed to a twisting vine, its thick tendrils shimmering with opalescent hues, crawling over a cluster of angular stones that seemed to pulse with a faint beeping light—like a heartbeat from some distant, buried machine. Nyx hovered closer, their shadow form elongating as they drifted downward. “Not organic. No. These... structures, they’re part of this place. The whole landscape’s a living relic. Maybe an archive, or a prison for something even older.” They moved deeper, following a path that carved through the terrain like a scar, the distant hum growing louder, more insistent. The landscape morphed as they advanced: strange crystalline formations jutted from the ground like jagged teeth, refracting the eldritch glow into prisms of screaming colour. Every step brought a new noise—subtle, unearthly melodies echoing in the air, overlapping layers of whispers that flickered just beyond comprehension. Aurora’s brow furrowed as she touched the nearest crystalline formation, her fingers tingling with unnerving warmth. “These structures are *alive*,” she murmured, eyes flickering with a mixture of awe and suspicion. “Not just crystals but sentient, maybe. Spreading or perhaps waiting for something to happen.” Her voice wavered slightly, despite her usual cool-handed composure. Nyx’s form flickered, shadowy tendrils wrapping around a fractured piece of the crystal, probing it. “Magic of ancient origin,” they whispered. “Much older than the Veil. We’re crossing into something bigger than us—something that predates even Hel.” Suddenly, the air vibrated with a faint, melodic hum—initially distant and soft, now sharpening into a chorus. It felt like the place was breathing, exhaling in slow, ragged pulses. Aurora clutched the crimson Heartstone tighter, as though anchoring herself to its pulse. The pendant’s glow intensified briefly before flickering back. “Can you hear that?” she asked sharply. Nyx nodded. “A chorus of echoes and longing. Something awakened. Or awakening. It’s calling.” A ripple of unease stretched through her stomach. This was no ordinary exploration. The landscape’s alien beauty was a seductive lie, hinting at hundreds of thousands of years of secrets buried beneath the surface—and perhaps, something more sinister. They paused at a pocket of quiet, where a shallow pool shimmered like liquid mirror. Aurora knelt, peering into its depths. The reflected image distorted as if reality itself was melting away, rippling like a disturbed pond. She leaned closer, eyes flickering with suspicion. What she saw—the flickering shadows afar, the flickering light beneath the surface—felt like memories or visions bleeding into her consciousness. Nyx’s shadow flicked, and in the reflective pool, she saw glimpses of something vast and unnameable, coiled beneath layers of shimmering water. Teeth or metallic shards or perhaps tendrils of pure darkness curling into the sky. The images flickered and vanished as she blinked, the mirror’s surface suddenly opaque. “Our trespassers are awake,” Nyx whispered, voice trembling like a breeze across dry leaves. “And the place is waking up with them.” Aurora pushed back from the pool, heart pounding faster. “Then we best figure out what’s on the other side of this—because I don’t want to be around when it *wakes* properly.” The landscape responded with a low, rumbling growl—soft at first, like distant thunder building in the lungs of the sorcerous earth. Branches jolted, leaves ruffled with a sudden gust of wind that felt like the breath of an ancient beast awakening from a centuries-long slumber. The frequency of the whispers increased, overlapping into a discordant chorus that spun through the air like a spell about to be cast. Nyx’s form shimmered, shadows coiling tighter around their form. “We’re not just explorers anymore. We’ve set something loose—something dangerous. Whatever this place is, it’s pulling us deeper into its heart.” Aurora rose, eyes scanning every flicker and shimmer, her hand instinctively brushing the Fae blade’s silver curves. She knew things were about to turn dangerous, faster than they could prepare for. The landscape twisted anew, the ground trembling with a deep, resonant hum. And then, from the murk and shimmer, a pair of luminous eyes blinked into existence—bright violet orbs that glowed within the shadows, gazing directly at them. A silence fell, heavy and oppressive, broken slowly by a voice that sounded like wind through cracked stone. “You should not have come.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"They spoke softly [softly]"
1"Shadows fluttered around [around]"
2"Her voice wavered slightly [slightly]"
3"she asked sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
68.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"sharply"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"shimmered"
count3
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"profound"
count1
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"fluttered"
count1
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"crystalline"
count2
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count3
14
word"furrowed"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"wavered"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
18
word"crystal"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
20
word"echoes"
count1
21
word"stomach"
count1
22
word"sinister"
count1
23
word"depths"
count1
24
word"flicked"
count1
25
word"pounding"
count1
26
word"scanning"
count1
27
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"silence"
2"profound"
3"echo"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"flicker"
7"tinged"
8"fluttered"
9"glistening"
10"pulse"
11"crystalline"
12"echoing"
13"flickered"
14"furrowed"
15"warmth"
16"wavered"
17"fractured"
18"crystal"
19"vibrated"
20"echoes"
21"stomach"
22"sinister"
23"depths"
24"flicked"
25"pounding"
26"scanning"
27"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
94.70% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences55
matches
0"d with awe"
1"A ripple of unease"
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1087
ratio0.002
matches
0"alive"
1"wakes"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount887
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx8
Aurora8
Suddenly1
Fae2
persons
0"Veil"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"stones that seemed to pulse with a faint beeping light—like a heartbeat from some distant, buried machine"
1"felt like the place was breathing, exha"
2"as though anchoring herself to its pulse"
3"felt like memories or visions bleeding"
4"felt like the breath of an ancient beas"
5"sounded like wind through cracked stone"
16.01% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.84
wordCount1087
matches
0"Not just with magical energy, but with a kind of whispering hunger"
1"Not just crystals but sentient, maybe"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
97.18% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean47.26
std23.16
cv0.49
sampleLengths
082
171
283
349
493
549
637
767
854
937
1050
117
1214
1338
1464
1549
1622
1731
1868
1930
2043
2144
225
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences63
ratio0.127
matches
0"The roots writhed just beneath the surface, and when Aurora squatted to inspect, she felt a faint, prickling sensation crawling up her arm—almost like the forest was alive with awareness."
1"“That isn’t any flora on Earth.” She pointed to a twisting vine, its thick tendrils shimmering with opalescent hues, crawling over a cluster of angular stones that seemed to pulse with a faint beeping light—like a heartbeat from some distant, buried machine."
2"Every step brought a new noise—subtle, unearthly melodies echoing in the air, overlapping layers of whispers that flickered just beyond comprehension."
3"Suddenly, the air vibrated with a faint, melodic hum—initially distant and soft, now sharpening into a chorus."
4"The landscape’s alien beauty was a seductive lie, hinting at hundreds of thousands of years of secrets buried beneath the surface—and perhaps, something more sinister."
5"What she saw—the flickering shadows afar, the flickering light beneath the surface—felt like memories or visions bleeding into her consciousness."
6"The landscape responded with a low, rumbling growl—soft at first, like distant thunder building in the lungs of the sorcerous earth."
7"And then, from the murk and shimmer, a pair of luminous eyes blinked into existence—bright violet orbs that glowed within the shadows, gazing directly at them."
91.04% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount899
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"usual cool-handed composure."
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.04338153503893215
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.018909899888765295
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean17.25
std8.02
cv0.465
sampleLengths
017
117
224
324
420
519
632
721
825
910
1027
1111
1238
1322
1424
1517
1630
177
1842
1911
2026
2121
2225
2321
2416
2515
2623
2715
286
2916
3017
3112
3213
338
347
352
3612
378
385
3925
4015
416
4216
437
4420
4522
4614
4713
4814
498
69.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners28
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Suddenly, the air vibrated with"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences53
matches
0"They spoke softly, voice barely"
1"She slid her Fae-Forged Blade"
2"she muttered, voice tinged with"
3"she said, voice hushed"
4"She pointed to a twisting"
5"They moved deeper, following a"
6"she murmured, eyes flickering with"
7"Her voice wavered slightly, despite"
8"It felt like the place"
9"she asked sharply"
10"They paused at a pocket"
11"She leaned closer, eyes flickering"
12"She knew things were about"
ratio0.245
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences53
matches
0"The air shimmered with a"
1"Aurora’s foot hit the uneven"
2"The sunlight outside blurred and"
3"The moment her boots touched"
4"Nyx lingered at her side,"
5"The silhouette of their humanoid"
6"They spoke softly, voice barely"
7"Aurora squinted, clutching the Heartstone"
8"She slid her Fae-Forged Blade"
9"she muttered, voice tinged with"
10"Nyx inclined their shadowy head,"
11"Shadows fluttered around her feet,"
12"The ground beneath their feet"
13"The moss was thicker, woven"
14"The roots writhed just beneath"
15"she said, voice hushed"
16"She pointed to a twisting"
17"Nyx hovered closer, their shadow"
18"They moved deeper, following a"
19"The landscape morphed as they"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The ground beneath their feet was uneven, slick with a dark, glistening substance that shone faintly like oil but pulsed with life."
1"The moss was thicker, woven with luminescent fungi that cast a gentle, bluish glow, illuminating strange plantlife that twisted in shapes unfamiliar and unsettl…"
2"They moved deeper, following a path that carved through the terrain like a scar, the distant hum growing louder, more insistent."
3"Every step brought a new noise—subtle, unearthly melodies echoing in the air, overlapping layers of whispers that flickered just beyond comprehension."
4"Aurora clutched the crimson Heartstone tighter, as though anchoring herself to its pulse."
5"The reflected image distorted as if reality itself was melting away, rippling like a disturbed pond."
6"Branches jolted, leaves ruffled with a sudden gust of wind that felt like the breath of an ancient beast awakening from a centuries-long slumber."
7"The frequency of the whispers increased, overlapping into a discordant chorus that spun through the air like a spell about to be cast."
8"And then, from the murk and shimmer, a pair of luminous eyes blinked into existence—bright violet orbs that glowed within the shadows, gazing directly at them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"They spoke softly, voice barely more than a breath,"
1"she muttered, voice tinged with awe and cautious suspicion"
2"she said, voice hushed"
3"she murmured, eyes flickering with a mixture of awe and suspicion"
4"Nyx whispered, voice trembling like a breeze across dry leaves"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"They spoke softly (speak)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.556
63.0092%