| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "They spoke softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Shadows fluttered around [around]" | | 2 | "Her voice wavered slightly [slightly]" | | 3 | "she asked sharply [sharply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |
| 68.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1102 | | totalAiIsms | 39 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "profound" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "fluttered" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "furrowed" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "wavered" | | 17 | "fractured" | | 18 | "crystal" | | 19 | "vibrated" | | 20 | "echoes" | | 21 | "stomach" | | 22 | "sinister" | | 23 | "depths" | | 24 | "flicked" | | 25 | "pounding" | | 26 | "scanning" | | 27 | "oppressive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 94.70% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "d with awe" | | 1 | "A ripple of unease" |
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| 90.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1087 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 887 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Aurora | 8 | | Suddenly | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "stones that seemed to pulse with a faint beeping light—like a heartbeat from some distant, buried machine" | | 1 | "felt like the place was breathing, exha" | | 2 | "as though anchoring herself to its pulse" | | 3 | "felt like memories or visions bleeding" | | 4 | "felt like the breath of an ancient beas" | | 5 | "sounded like wind through cracked stone" |
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| 16.01% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.84 | | wordCount | 1087 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just with magical energy, but with a kind of whispering hunger" | | 1 | "Not just crystals but sentient, maybe" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.18% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 47.26 | | std | 23.16 | | cv | 0.49 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 93 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 43 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "The roots writhed just beneath the surface, and when Aurora squatted to inspect, she felt a faint, prickling sensation crawling up her arm—almost like the forest was alive with awareness." | | 1 | "“That isn’t any flora on Earth.” She pointed to a twisting vine, its thick tendrils shimmering with opalescent hues, crawling over a cluster of angular stones that seemed to pulse with a faint beeping light—like a heartbeat from some distant, buried machine." | | 2 | "Every step brought a new noise—subtle, unearthly melodies echoing in the air, overlapping layers of whispers that flickered just beyond comprehension." | | 3 | "Suddenly, the air vibrated with a faint, melodic hum—initially distant and soft, now sharpening into a chorus." | | 4 | "The landscape’s alien beauty was a seductive lie, hinting at hundreds of thousands of years of secrets buried beneath the surface—and perhaps, something more sinister." | | 5 | "What she saw—the flickering shadows afar, the flickering light beneath the surface—felt like memories or visions bleeding into her consciousness." | | 6 | "The landscape responded with a low, rumbling growl—soft at first, like distant thunder building in the lungs of the sorcerous earth." | | 7 | "And then, from the murk and shimmer, a pair of luminous eyes blinked into existence—bright violet orbs that glowed within the shadows, gazing directly at them." |
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| 91.04% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 899 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "usual cool-handed composure." |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.04338153503893215 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018909899888765295 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 17.25 | | std | 8.02 | | cv | 0.465 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 69.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the air vibrated with" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "They spoke softly, voice barely" | | 1 | "She slid her Fae-Forged Blade" | | 2 | "she muttered, voice tinged with" | | 3 | "she said, voice hushed" | | 4 | "She pointed to a twisting" | | 5 | "They moved deeper, following a" | | 6 | "she murmured, eyes flickering with" | | 7 | "Her voice wavered slightly, despite" | | 8 | "It felt like the place" | | 9 | "she asked sharply" | | 10 | "They paused at a pocket" | | 11 | "She leaned closer, eyes flickering" | | 12 | "She knew things were about" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 1 | "Aurora’s foot hit the uneven" | | 2 | "The sunlight outside blurred and" | | 3 | "The moment her boots touched" | | 4 | "Nyx lingered at her side," | | 5 | "The silhouette of their humanoid" | | 6 | "They spoke softly, voice barely" | | 7 | "Aurora squinted, clutching the Heartstone" | | 8 | "She slid her Fae-Forged Blade" | | 9 | "she muttered, voice tinged with" | | 10 | "Nyx inclined their shadowy head," | | 11 | "Shadows fluttered around her feet," | | 12 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 13 | "The moss was thicker, woven" | | 14 | "The roots writhed just beneath" | | 15 | "she said, voice hushed" | | 16 | "She pointed to a twisting" | | 17 | "Nyx hovered closer, their shadow" | | 18 | "They moved deeper, following a" | | 19 | "The landscape morphed as they" |
| | ratio | 0.925 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath their feet was uneven, slick with a dark, glistening substance that shone faintly like oil but pulsed with life." | | 1 | "The moss was thicker, woven with luminescent fungi that cast a gentle, bluish glow, illuminating strange plantlife that twisted in shapes unfamiliar and unsettl…" | | 2 | "They moved deeper, following a path that carved through the terrain like a scar, the distant hum growing louder, more insistent." | | 3 | "Every step brought a new noise—subtle, unearthly melodies echoing in the air, overlapping layers of whispers that flickered just beyond comprehension." | | 4 | "Aurora clutched the crimson Heartstone tighter, as though anchoring herself to its pulse." | | 5 | "The reflected image distorted as if reality itself was melting away, rippling like a disturbed pond." | | 6 | "Branches jolted, leaves ruffled with a sudden gust of wind that felt like the breath of an ancient beast awakening from a centuries-long slumber." | | 7 | "The frequency of the whispers increased, overlapping into a discordant chorus that spun through the air like a spell about to be cast." | | 8 | "And then, from the murk and shimmer, a pair of luminous eyes blinked into existence—bright violet orbs that glowed within the shadows, gazing directly at them." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "They spoke softly, voice barely more than a breath," | | 1 | "she muttered, voice tinged with awe and cautious suspicion" | | 2 | "she said, voice hushed" | | 3 | "she murmured, eyes flickering with a mixture of awe and suspicion" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, voice trembling like a breeze across dry leaves" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "They spoke softly (speak)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.556 | |