Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBGSWEAHEAYA1QZEE903X

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Duration:
15.9s
Cost:
$0.031895
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn’s feet pounded against the slick pavement, her breath coming in sharp bursts as the rain hammered down on the dimly lit streets of Camden. The flashing tail lights of cars streaked through the downpour, creating a cacophony of reflections on the wet surfaces. Her quarry, a dark figure in a hooded jacket, darted ahead through the maze of narrow alleys and side streets, glancing back only to quicken his pace upon seeing her relentless pursuit. “Stop!” she bellowed, her voice barely cutting through the roar of the storm. The figure didn't falter, leading her deeper into the labyrinth of the city. Harlow's closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair stuck to her forehead, the cold rain trickling down her neck. She clenched her jaw, her focus narrowed on the figure before her, remembering the face she had seen at the crime scene. The underbelly of Camden hid many secrets, and she suspected this night's chase would unveil yet another layer of darkness. The figure, quick and agile, nimbly vaulted over a low wall, landing in a puddle with a splash. Harlow followed suit with a grunt, her worn leather watch catching a flash of neon green light. They emerged onto a street where a distinctive sign glowed above the entrance of a bar—The Raven's Nest. For a heartbeat, Harlow considered seeking refuge within, but the glimpse of the suspect disappearing into an old, seemingly abandoned building propelled her forward. With a determined stride, she pushed through the heavy wooden door, its hinges creaking in protest. Inside, the air was musty and cold, the odor of damp stone mingling with the faint scent of something indefinable, perhaps alchemy. The walls glistened with moisture, illuminated by the flicker of sporadic overhead lights. The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead, descending into what appeared to be an ancient Tube station long forgotten by the city's surface hustle. Harlow quickened her pace, every muscle in her body protesting the chase. Her heart pounded in her ears, a rhythm synchronizing with the thud of her boots on each step as they spiraled downwards. As she reached the bottom, a heavy wooden door stood ominously ajar. The glow of dim light filtered through, and from within, the murmurs of voices and the clinking of exchange filtered into the cold darkness where she stood. She pressed herself against the wall just outside the door, peering through the shadowed crack. Inside was The Veil Market, with its serpentine aisles lined with stalls and hidden alcoves. Beneath the dim, almost eerie illumination of the market, vendors hawked their forbidden goods—enchanted trinkets, potions in glass vials, and arcane scrolls whose texts seemed to shimmer and move. Here the mundane world ended and the extraordinary began. This place wasn’t for the likes of Detective Quinn, yet she couldn’t turn back. Not when she was so close. Her quarry had stopped at a small stall, exchanging hurried words with a cloaked vendor. Eyes sharp, Harlow scanned the market, noting exits, shifty figures, and anything that looked like it would hide a dark threat. Her hand hovered near her sidearm, a comforting weight. The suspect secured a small object from the vendor and moved deeper into the market. Harlow slipped in behind, trying to blend in though her heart thudded louder than the chatter around her. She passed tables laden with glittering jewels, grimoires bound in human skin, and potion bottles glowing softly. With measured steps, she navigated her way through the assembled crowd, her eyes never leaving the suspect's back. Stalls gave way to a more clandestine area of the market, where the items sold were whispered about rather than loudly proclaimed. Harlow’s quarry moved swiftly, but she was quicker, determined. The market’s vibe shifted from chaotic to sinister as the pair made their way to a subterranean level. The watery sound of the Thames overhead made the setting even more otherworldly. Gargoyle-like sculptures adorned many stalls, their blank stone eyes following Harlow as she passed. One particularly grim merchant spat out blackened teeth as he laughed, offering vials of shimmering liquid. The suspect rounded a corner, arriving at a heavily guarded room. Two large individuals, either supernatural in strength or appearance, stood sentinel. Harlow slowed, assessing her options. The guard’s eyes narrowed as the suspect approached, but he showed a bone token; the guard stepped aside. Harlow cursed under her breath. She had no token, no entrance pass, and certainly no cover story that would work in this hellscape of shadows and secrets. The suspect slipped inside, leaving her with a decision she didn’t have the luxury to deliberate over. A grumble of amusement caught her ear, along with a familiar accent. “Lost your way, detective?” Tomás Herrera, with his dark curls damp and stringy, leaned casually against a stone pillar, his olive skin glistening with rain. The scar on his left forearm was a pale streak against the darker flesh. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck gleamed faintly as he shifted. “Herrera, this is not your night to be a hero,” Harlow muttered. “Could say the same for you,” Tomás replied, straightening with a sigh. “You don’t look prepared for what’s in there.” “I’ve followed a suspect down here,” she confessed, her voice tinged with frustration. “And now I’m stuck.” “Bone token required.” Tomás grinned wryly, pulling a small bone trinket from his jacket pocket. “As always, unprepared but determined.” “The less you speak, the faster we get in,” she snapped, tension clear. “Sometimes, it’s good to have allies,” Tomás murmured, pushing away from the pillar. “Follow my lead.” With deliberate confidence, he approached the guards, Harlow staying close behind. He flashed his token, and without a word, the guards moved aside. Harlow felt the weight of their scrutiny as she passed, but the reassurance of Tomás’ presence provided minimal comfort. Inside, a dimly lit chamber buzzed with hushed activity. Enchanted artifacts floated at the whim of vendors, and the shadows moved as if alive. The suspect was ahead, making a transaction with a figure in a hooded cloak. Harlow’s instincts screamed danger, but training had taught her that some risks were worth taking. “There’s no turning back now,” Tomás murmured. “I never intended to.” Harlow’s voice was steely. Together, they moved closer, the veil between hunter and hunted thinning in the subterranean gloom. The eerie, muted pulse of the market seemed to echo the rhythm of her own heartbeat. The air buzzed with hidden energy, a cocktail of magic, desperation, and secrets. As they drew near, the suspect glanced back, eyes widening in recognition and fear. “Detective,” they hissed with a snarl. Unleashing swift movements, they snatched a vial from the cloaked figure and dashed into a shadowy alcove. “Split up,” Harlow commanded, urgency pushing her forward. Tomás nodded and peeled off to flank the other side, eyes narrowing with calculated focus. The pursuit twisted through narrow passageways, shelves of arcane items flashing by in blurs. The suspect weaved, clutching the precious vial, desperation streaking their movements. Harlow pushed her frame, military precision bringing her closer with every step. Damp air and latent magic sparked tension in every breath she drew. The suspect skidded to a halt near a dead-end, facing a wall lined with forged runes. Turning with feral eyes, they realized they were cornered. “End of the line,” Harlow’s cold voice sliced through the air. The suspect growled, raising the vial. “Stay back! You don’t know what you’re dealing with, Quinn.” “I know enough. You’re coming with me.” “Not today.” The suspect threw the vial, smashing it against the ground. Smoke billowed, filling the tunnel. Visibility dropped to zero, a veil of acrid haze forming between hunter and hunted. Harlow cursed as the suspect disappeared in a swirl of shadows. Tomás appeared by her side, frowning through the smoke. “Lost?” “Momentarily,” she replied, frustration evident. “Shall we find them?” Harlow met his gaze. “We shall.” The trail of the suspect had not gone cold, merely delayed their pursuit. The market’s heartbeat continued around them, and the thrill of the hunt sharpened their senses. Together, they would plunge deeper into the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás grinned wryly [wryly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
96.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1358
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"cacophony"
count1
1
word"determined"
count3
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"navigated"
count1
11
word"clandestine"
count1
12
word"chaotic"
count1
13
word"sinister"
count1
14
word"otherworldly"
count1
15
word"sentinel"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"glistening"
count1
18
word"tinged"
count1
19
word"tension"
count2
20
word"gloom"
count1
21
word"pulse"
count1
22
word"echo"
count1
23
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"cacophony"
1"determined"
2"flicker"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"quickened"
6"scanned"
7"comforting"
8"weight"
9"measured"
10"navigated"
11"clandestine"
12"chaotic"
13"sinister"
14"otherworldly"
15"sentinel"
16"familiar"
17"glistening"
18"tinged"
19"tension"
20"gloom"
21"pulse"
22"echo"
23"calculated"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences91
matches
0"d with frustration"
80.06% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1353
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1240
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow21
Quinn2
Camden2
Raven1
Nest1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Detective2
Thames1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás7
Together2
Unleashing1
Smoke1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Raven"
4"Market"
5"Detective"
6"Herrera"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
9"Tomás"
places
0"Thames"
globalScore0.653
windowScore0.833
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"g into an old, seemingly abandoned building"
1"looked like it would hide a dark threat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1353
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean32.21
std21.42
cv0.665
sampleLengths
078
126
258
377
451
556
639
759
874
950
1049
1161
1245
1344
1416
1547
1612
1720
1817
1920
2013
2116
2242
2353
247
258
2644
2720
2825
2915
3049
3125
3211
3316
347
3531
3611
3710
385
394
406
4136
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"were whispered"
1"were cornered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs218
matches(empty)
57.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences101
ratio0.03
matches
0"They emerged onto a street where a distinctive sign glowed above the entrance of a bar—The Raven's Nest."
1"Beneath the dim, almost eerie illumination of the market, vendors hawked their forbidden goods—enchanted trinkets, potions in glass vials, and arcane scrolls whose texts seemed to shimmer and move."
2"The guard’s eyes narrowed as the suspect approached, but he showed a bone token; the guard stepped aside."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount926
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.0367170626349892
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.019438444924406047
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean13.4
std5.99
cv0.447
sampleLengths
027
119
232
313
413
516
622
720
818
917
1018
1124
1216
1322
1413
1522
1612
1722
1812
1927
2015
2115
2229
239
2414
256
2615
2721
289
2915
3018
3117
3218
3322
349
3518
3613
3714
3816
3911
4011
415
4218
435
4422
4517
4612
474
4821
4914
68.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.45544554455445546
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her quarry, a dark figure"
1"she bellowed, her voice barely"
2"She clenched her jaw, her"
3"They emerged onto a street"
4"Her heart pounded in her"
5"She pressed herself against the"
6"Her quarry had stopped at"
7"Her hand hovered near her"
8"She passed tables laden with"
9"She had no token, no"
10"she confessed, her voice tinged"
11"she snapped, tension clear"
12"He flashed his token, and"
13"they hissed with a snarl"
14"she replied, frustration evident"
ratio0.169
66.74% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences89
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s feet pounded"
1"The flashing tail lights of"
2"Her quarry, a dark figure"
3"she bellowed, her voice barely"
4"The figure didn't falter, leading"
5"Harlow's closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
6"She clenched her jaw, her"
7"The underbelly of Camden hid"
8"The figure, quick and agile,"
9"Harlow followed suit with a"
10"They emerged onto a street"
11"The walls glistened with moisture,"
12"The suspect's footsteps echoed ahead,"
13"Harlow quickened her pace, every"
14"Her heart pounded in her"
15"The glow of dim light"
16"She pressed herself against the"
17"Here the mundane world ended"
18"This place wasn’t for the"
19"Her quarry had stopped at"
ratio0.787
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Enchanted artifacts floated at the whim of vendors, and the shadows moved as if alive."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she bellowed, her voice barely cutting through the roar of the storm"
1"Harlow commanded, urgency pushing her forward"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she bellowed (bellow)"
1"Harlow muttered (mutter)"
2"she confessed (confess)"
3"she snapped (snap)"
4"Tomás murmured (murmur)"
5"Tomás murmured (murmur)"
6"they hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.778
effectiveRatio0.583
78.0492%