Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBKRA1Q528Y2NZ9BK90Y8

Run Details

Duration:
3m 18s
Cost:
$0.001756
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The black wrought-iron fence surrounding Richmond Park was cold under Rory's gloved fingers. She’d parked her delivery scooter by the main gate hours ago, when dusk was still clinging to the sky. Now, true night held the world in a thick, starless silence. Her breath plumed white in the beam of her torch. The Heartstone pendant, tucked beneath her layers, was a persistent warmth against her sternum—not the comforting kind, but a low, rhythmic pulse, like a slow heartbeat that wasn't her own. She’d come because of the note. Slipped between the pages of a takeout menu, the handwriting spidery and unfamiliar: *The Grove remembers. Midnight. The third stone from the western path.* No signature, but the pendant had throbbed the moment she’d unfolded the paper. A summons, or a trap. After weeks of chasing echoes of Hel portals and half-glimpsed figures in the London fog, ignoring it wasn’t an option. The western footpath was a tunnel of deeper black between skeletal trees. Her trainers crunched on frozen gravel, the sound absurdly loud. The torch beam sliced through the dark, catching the frosted webs of spiders, the startled gleam of a fox’s eyes before it vanished. Normal night things. But the silence here was wrong. No rustle of mice in the undergrowth, no distant hum of the city. Just a vast, listening quiet. She found the standing stones. Three ancient oaks, their trunks twisted into unnatural, spiral forms, forming a rough triangle in a small clearing. The third stone, the one closest to a thicket of holly, was the largest. Its bark looked slick in the torchlight, not like wood, but like dark, petrified flesh. The air was several degrees colder here. Her breath didn’t mist; it seemed to be swallowed by the dark. Rory switched off the torch. The dark rushed in, absolute. She waited for her eyes to adjust. Slowly, the clearing resolved into shades of grey. The stones stood like sentinels. The wildflowers Isolde had tended—fae-touched blooms that defied season—were just darker smudges against the frosted grass. She leaned against the cold trunk of the third oak, the Heartstone’s pulse synchronizing with a low, sub-audible thrum she could feel in her teeth. A twig snapped to her left. She froze, heart hammering against her ribs. Not an animal. The sound was too deliberate, too close. She held her breath, straining her ears. Nothing. Just that immense, watchful silence. Then, a soft, wet *shhhlick* sound, like something dragging through damp leaves. It came from her right this time, from the direction of the holly thicket. Rory turned her head slowly. The thicket was a wall of shadow. Nothing moved. *You’re being watched.* The thought didn’t feel like her own. It landed in her mind, cold and certain. She pushed off from the tree, taking a careful step backward toward the path. The gravel under her foot didn’t crunch. She looked down. A patch of moss, vivid green despite the frost, had spread over the path where she’d just been standing. It hadn’t been there a moment ago. Another *shhhlick*, closer. From the thicket again. She caught a movement at the very edge of her vision—a sinuous shift in the darkness, like a coil of rope unspooling. When she looked directly, there was only the holly. The air grew colder still. The warmth of the pendant intensified, becoming almost uncomfortably hot. Its faint inner glow, usually invisible, now cast a tiny crimson penumbra on the front of her jacket. A warning light. A whisper brushed against her ear, no more substantial than a cobweb. It wasn’t a voice, not exactly. It was the memory of a voice, the echo of a sigh, carrying a single word she felt more than heard: *Stay.* Rory’s mouth went dry. “Who’s there?” Her own voice sounded thin and reedy, swallowed by the grove. No answer. But something *stirred* in the clearing. Not a thing she could see, but a pressure, a presence that displaced the air. The wildflowers around the base of the stones began to wilt. Not a slow drooping, but a rapid, violent withering. Petles turned black and crumbled to dust in the space of a heartbeat. The frosted grass yellowed and died in a spreading circle, radiating out from the stones towards her. The wrongness was a physical weight now, pressing on her chest. The rational part of her mind screamed to run, but her feet felt rooted, sunk into the suddenly soft earth. She looked down. The moss was spreading, creeping over the toes of her trainers, velvety and cold. It pulsed faintly, in time with the pendant. From the holly thicket came a new sound. A low, guttural rasp, like stone grinding against stone. It was followed by a series of clicks, methodical, probing. *Click-click-click.* Pause. *Click-click.* It was learning the shape of the silence. Her paralysis broke. She wrenched her foot free of the moss with a sickening slurp and stumbled back onto the gravel path. She fumbled for the torch, her fingers numb. The beam flared to life, a blinding sword cutting through the dark. She swept it across the clearing, across the thicket. For a fraction of a second, the light caught something. It wasn’t an animal. It wasn’t anything with a name. It was a tangle of shadows and angles that hurt to look at, slumped against the base of a holly bush. A long, limb-like appendature, slick and black, was retracting into the deeper darkness. Where the light touched it, the thing seemed to *smoke*, and a hiss, full of malice and pain, sliced through the air. The rasping, grinding sound escalated into a shriek of pure rage. Rory didn’t wait. She ran. Gravel skidded under her feet. The torch beam bounced wildly, turning the path into a strobe-light nightmare of fleeing tree trunks. She didn’t look back. The thing behind her didn’t make the sound of pursuit. There were no footfalls. Instead, the very environment turned against her. Branches, bare and bony, lashed down at her face from trees she’d already passed. Roots erupted from the frozen earth to snag her ankles. The path itself seemed to lengthen, the distant glow of the park gate receding further with every pounding step. The pendant was a brand against her skin, its glow now a steady, angry red leaking through her clothing. The heat was a guide. She realised with a jolt of cold terror that it wasn’t pulling her toward safety. It was pulling her *deeper*, off the path, to the left, into the densest part of the woods. She skidded to a halt, chest heaving. The gate was a faint promise of light far behind. Ahead, the woods were a solid wall of black. To her left, where the pendant tugged, a narrow deer trail wound into the undergrowth. From that direction, she heard it. Not the rasp or the clicks. Music. Faint, discordant, and achingly sad. A single, out-of-tune violin, playing a melody that made her think of forgotten graves and empty houses. It was a lure. She knew it. A beautiful, terrible lure. A cold, damp touch brushed the back of her neck. She whirled, torch raised. Nothing. Just the empty, malevolent dark of the path behind her. But on the ground, illuminated in the circle of her light, was a single, perfect wildflower. A midnight-blue bloom she’d last seen in Isolde’s grove, unharmed, blossoming from a crack in the frozen earth. It hadn’t been there a second ago. As she watched, a drop of something dark and viscous rolled off one petal and soaked into the ground. The music from the deer trail swelled, wrapping around her, muffling the pounding of her heart. It promised answers. It promised an end to the running. The pendant’s heat was an insistent, painful pressure. From the direction of the clearing, far behind her now, came the wet, dragging *shhhlick* sound again. Closer than it had any right to be. Rory looked at the flower. She looked at the impossible, receding gate. She looked down the dark throat of the deer trail, where the sad music played. She took a shaky breath, her exhale trembling in the cold air. Her fingers closed around the Heartstone pendant through her jacket, its pulse now a frantic drumbeat against her palm. She turned her back on the gate and its false promise of the world she knew.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"echoes"
count1
7
word"resolved"
count1
8
word"sentinels"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"methodical"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count2
16
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"warmth"
2"comforting"
3"rhythmic"
4"pulse"
5"throbbed"
6"echoes"
7"resolved"
8"sentinels"
9"could feel"
10"whisper"
11"echo"
12"weight"
13"pulsed"
14"methodical"
15"pounding"
16"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
92.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences141
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords23
totalWords1401
ratio0.016
matches
0"The Grove remembers. Midnight. The third stone from the western path."
1"shhhlick"
2"You’re being watched."
3"shhhlick"
4"Stay."
5"stirred"
6"Click-click-click."
7"Click-click."
8"smoke"
9"deeper"
10"shhhlick"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1399
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory6
Heartstone3
Grove1
Hel1
London1
Isolde2
Pause1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.855
wordCount1401
matches
0"not the comforting kind, but a low, rhythmic pulse, like a slow heartbeat"
1"not like wood, but like dark, petrified flesh"
2"Not a thing she could see, but a pressure, a presence"
3"Not a slow drooping, but a rapid, violent withering"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean40.03
std26.63
cv0.665
sampleLengths
083
168
272
371
471
56
630
740
83
965
1038
1136
1240
1317
1473
1556
1630
178
1851
1910
2077
215
2289
2357
2476
2511
2610
274
2811
2960
3034
3125
3227
3331
3416
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"was followed"
38.19% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was spreading"
1"was learning"
2"was retracting"
3"wasn’t pulling"
4"was pulling"
61.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences141
ratio0.028
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant, tucked beneath her layers, was a persistent warmth against her sternum—not the comforting kind, but a low, rhythmic pulse, like a slow heartbeat that wasn't her own."
1"Her breath didn’t mist; it seemed to be swallowed by the dark."
2"The wildflowers Isolde had tended—fae-touched blooms that defied season—were just darker smudges against the frosted grass."
3"She caught a movement at the very edge of her vision—a sinuous shift in the darkness, like a coil of rope unspooling."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1408
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"environment turned against her."
1"steady, angry red leaking"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.027698863636363636
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.012073863636363636
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean9.94
std6.08
cv0.612
sampleLengths
013
119
211
310
430
56
616
71
820
95
1020
1112
1210
1323
143
156
1613
175
185
1918
2014
2115
227
2312
245
255
267
278
285
2916
3025
316
327
333
347
357
361
375
3812
3914
405
417
422
433
447
458
4614
477
483
4919
38.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.28368794326241137
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences132
matches
0"Just a vast, listening quiet."
1"Slowly, the clearing resolved into"
2"Just that immense, watchful silence."
3"Then, a soft, wet *shhhlick*"
4"Instead, the very environment turned"
5"Just the empty, malevolent dark"
ratio0.045
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences132
matches
0"She’d parked her delivery scooter"
1"Her breath plumed white in"
2"She’d come because of the"
3"Her trainers crunched on frozen"
4"She found the standing stones."
5"Its bark looked slick in"
6"Her breath didn’t mist; it"
7"She waited for her eyes"
8"She leaned against the cold"
9"She froze, heart hammering against"
10"She held her breath, straining"
11"It came from her right"
12"*You’re being watched.*"
13"It landed in her mind,"
14"She pushed off from the"
15"She looked down."
16"It hadn’t been there a"
17"She caught a movement at"
18"Its faint inner glow, usually"
19"It wasn’t a voice, not"
ratio0.364
81.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences132
matches
0"The black wrought-iron fence surrounding"
1"She’d parked her delivery scooter"
2"Her breath plumed white in"
3"The Heartstone pendant, tucked beneath"
4"She’d come because of the"
5"The third stone from the"
6"A summons, or a trap."
7"The western footpath was a"
8"Her trainers crunched on frozen"
9"The torch beam sliced through"
10"She found the standing stones."
11"The third stone, the one"
12"Its bark looked slick in"
13"The air was several degrees"
14"Her breath didn’t mist; it"
15"Rory switched off the torch."
16"The dark rushed in, absolute."
17"She waited for her eyes"
18"The stones stood like sentinels."
19"The wildflowers Isolde had tended—fae—touched"
ratio0.758
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences132
matches
0"Now, true night held the"
1"To her left, where the"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant, tucked beneath her layers, was a persistent warmth against her sternum—not the comforting kind, but a low, rhythmic pulse, like a slow h…"
1"The wildflowers Isolde had tended—fae-touched blooms that defied season—were just darker smudges against the frosted grass."
2"A single, out-of-tune violin, playing a melody that made her think of forgotten graves and empty houses."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9173%