Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBKYX0YXQAVZKXZBWXJBT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 32s
Cost:
$0.001796
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park after midnight held a wet, clinging chill that seeped through Aurora’s denim jacket. She stood at the edge of the woods, the city’s orange glow smeared across the horizon behind her. In her hand, the Heartstone pendant was a cold, inert weight against her palm. She’d felt the first pull hours ago, a faint, magnetic itch in her chest that had sharpened into a persistent tug as she rode her bike through the sleeping suburbs. The pendant had warmed, just once, a quick pulse like a dying heartbeat, when she’d passed the park’s main gates. Now it was silent again. She’d come because of the note. Slid under her door this morning, written on thick, cream-colored paper in an elegant, spidery script she didn’t recognize: *The grove remembers. The stones will guide you when the moon is highest.* No signature. Eva had told her to bin it, Silas had grumbled about foolishness, but the pull in her chest had agreed with the paper. Something was here. Something about her parents, about her name, about the dreams of shifting shadows and a woman’s voice singing in a language that made her teeth ache. She pushed into the tree line. The darkness under the canopy was absolute, swallowing the distant streetlights. Fallen leaves muffled her steps. She didn’t use a torch; the faint, silvery light of a gibbous moon filtering through bare branches was enough. The pull returned, a soft internal nudge, directing her away from the path. She followed. The woods thickened. Brambles snagged her jeans. An owl called, the sound too close, too sharp. Then another, from a different direction, an exact mirror of the first. Aurora stopped, listening. Only the wind in the highest branches, a dry, whispery sound. She walked on. The standing stones appeared so suddenly she almost walked into the first one. It was an ancient oak, not stone, but massive and blackened, carved with spirals and looping patterns that seemed to shift in the dappled moonlight. It stood sentinel at the edge of a clearing. Others, six in total, formed a rough circle around a space of unnaturally lush grass. Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in the dead of night—sapphire-blue petals, ivory bells, blood-red poppies. Their scent was overwhelming, cloyingly sweet, like overripe fruit and honey. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s place. Eva had mentioned it once, in hushed tones over a pint. *A between-place,* she’d called it. *Time gets funny there.* Aurora stepped between two of the oak sentinels. The air changed. The wind died. The distant city sounds vanished, replaced by a profound, ringing silence. It was warmer here, a damp, spring-like warmth that felt wrong against her November skin. The moonlight in the clearing was brighter, clearer, casting sharp black shadows from the stones. She moved to the center, her boots silent on the velvety grass. The tug in her chest settled, a quiet hum of rightness. She lifted the pendant, letting it dangle from its silver chain. It remained dark. “Okay,” she whispered. Her voice was small, swallowed by the clearing. “I’m here.” Nothing answered. She turned a slow circle. The flowers nodded in a breeze she couldn’t feel. The carved patterns on the nearest oak seemed deeper, the spirals like tunnels leading into infinite darkness. She took a step toward it. A twig snapped behind her. She froze, heart a sudden jackhammer against her ribs. She didn’t turn. She listened. No breath, no rustle of clothing. Just the heavy silence. Then, a soft, wet sound. A *shlup*, like a foot pulling free of deep mud. It came from her left, near the tree line outside the stone circle. She turned her head, slow. The shadows between the normal trees of the park were impenetrable. Nothing moved. Another sound. From her right this time. A dry scrape, stone on stone. There were no stones over there, just grass and flowers. Her breath plumed in the warm air, which was impossible. She looked down. Her exhale was a faint white mist. The temperature was plummeting, the damp warmth leaching away second by second, replaced by a bone-deep cold that started from the ground and climbed her legs. The flowers around her feet wilted, petals blackening and curling inward as if burned by frost. The pendant moved. It wasn’t a pulse. It was a twist, a jerk on the chain as if an invisible finger had flicked it. The crimson gemstone flashed, a single spark of deep red light. Aurora clutched it, the metal now searing cold against her skin. Her eyes scanned the circle of stones. The shadows they cast were wrong. They didn’t stretch away from the moon. They pooled around their bases, thick and tar-like, and they were *moving*. Swirling with a slow, viscous intent. One of the shadows detached from the base of the farthest oak. It wasn’t a trick of the light. It was a shape, man-height but infinitely thin, a two-dimensional cutout of darkness. It had no face, no features, just a humanoid outline that absorbed the moonlight. It took a silent step onto the grass. The frost followed it, a spreading rim of white across the green. Aurora backed up, her heel sinking into soft earth. The cold was in her chest now, making it hard to breathe. A rustle to her left. She whipped her head around. Another shadow-figure peeled from the base of another stone. This one seemed denser, with spindly, elongated arms that trailed down to its knees. They weren’t approaching. They were just… standing. Watching. *The grove remembers.* A high, keening sound pierced the silence, so shrill it felt like a needle in her ears. It came from above. She looked up. The moon was gone. The sky was a flat, featureless black dome. No stars, no clouds, just void. The keening resolved into a voice. It was singing, wordless and agonized, the same melody from her dreams. It came from everywhere and nowhere, from the black sky and the cold ground and the spaces between the stones. The shadow with the long arms moved. It didn’t walk. It slid, its feet not touching the ground, gliding toward her soundlessly. Aurora stumbled back, turning to run for the gap between the stones she’d entered through. The gap was gone. Where an opening had been, a seventh oak now stood, identical to the others, its carved spirals fresh and deep. The circle was complete. She was trapped. The singing rose in volume, a discordant choir of pain. It wasn’t one voice anymore, but dozens, layered over each other, some weeping, some whispering in that guttural, aching language. The sound vibrated in her teeth, in the hollows of her sinuses. The long-armed shadow was ten feet away. It raised one spindly limb, a blade of solid night, pointing at her chest. The Heartstone ignited. A fierce, crimson light burst from the gem, not a glow but a beacon, painting the clearing in bloody hues. The light didn’t push the shadows back; it etched them in sharp relief, making them appear more real, more solid. She saw now that they weren’t empty. Within their darkness swirled faint, contorted faces, mouths open in silent screams. The shadow flinched. It didn’t retreat, but it stopped its advance. The pendant was burning hot against her sternum, the chain branding her neck. The light pulsed in time with her frantic heartbeat. A new sound cut through the spectral choir—a low, rhythmic thumping. A drumbeat. It came from outside the circle, from the real woods beyond the stones. Steady, insistent, *alive*. The shadows shuddered. Their forms wavered, like smoke in a draft. The drumbeat grew louder, closer. It was accompanied by footsteps, real, heavy footsteps crunching through leaves and twigs. One of the shadows turned its blank head toward the sound. It dissolved, pouring back into the tar-pool at the base of its stone. The other, the one with the long arms, lingered for a moment longer, its pointed limb still aimed at Aurora. Then it, too, bled away into the darkness, leaving only the freezing air and the wilting flowers as evidence. The singing cut off, replaced by an echoing silence that felt louder than the noise. The drumbeat stopped. A figure appeared at the edge of the clearing, outside the circle of stones. Tall, broad-shouldered, holding a small hand-drum. Moonlight returned, falling on his familiar, scowling face. Silas. He didn’t enter the circle. He stood between two oaks, his eyes scanning the frost-bitten clearing, the blackened flowers, finally landing on Aurora. He didn’t look scared. He looked furious. “What,” he growled, his voice rough in the quiet, “the ever-loving hell are you doing in here?”
created_at"2026-02-19T10:50:29.73Z" 2/19/2026, 10:50:29 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"magnetic"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"sentinels"
count1
6
word"profound"
count1
7
word"silence"
count4
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"resolved"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"beacon"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count1
17
word"spectral"
count1
18
word"rhythmic"
count1
19
word"wavered"
count1
20
word"footsteps"
count2
21
word"echoing"
count1
22
word"familiar"
count1
23
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"magnetic"
3"pulse"
4"sentinel"
5"sentinels"
6"profound"
7"silence"
8"warmth"
9"flicked"
10"searing"
11"scanned"
12"resolved"
13"vibrated"
14"beacon"
15"etched"
16"pulsed"
17"spectral"
18"rhythmic"
19"wavered"
20"footsteps"
21"echoing"
22"familiar"
23"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences155
matches
0"looked furious"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences155
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords25
totalWords1451
ratio0.017
matches
0"The grove remembers. The stones will guide you when the moon is highest."
1"A between-place,"
2"Time gets funny there."
3"shlup"
4"moving"
5"The grove remembers."
6"alive"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1439
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora8
Heartstone2
Silas2
Fae1
Grove1
November1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift in the dappled moonlight"
1"seemed deeper the spirals like tunnels leading into infinite darkness"
2"seemed denser with spindly, elongated arms that trailed down to its knees"
3"felt like a needle in her ears"
62.16% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.378
wordCount1451
matches
0"not stone, but massive"
1"not a glow but a beacon, painting the clearing in bloody hues"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean28.45
std23.8
cv0.836
sampleLengths
0105
192
256
345
488
525
655
737
813
92
1037
115
1224
1315
1413
1518
1623
1762
183
1932
2049
2112
2254
2321
2433
258
263
2724
2818
2938
3022
3115
324
3324
343
3542
3621
373
3859
3911
4022
4129
4211
4318
4463
4515
463
4728
481
4930
98.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences155
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"was accompanied"
85.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was plummeting"
1"weren’t approaching"
2"was singing"
3"was burning"
69.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences156
ratio0.026
matches
0"She didn’t use a torch; the faint, silvery light of a gibbous moon filtering through bare branches was enough."
1"Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in the dead of night—sapphire-blue petals, ivory bells, blood-red poppies."
2"The light didn’t push the shadows back; it etched them in sharp relief, making them appear more real, more solid."
3"A new sound cut through the spectral choir—a low, rhythmic thumping."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1455
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, cream-colored paper"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03230240549828179
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006872852233676976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.3
std6.11
cv0.657
sampleLengths
018
118
214
330
420
55
66
722
812
923
103
1126
126
1311
145
1519
1613
172
183
194
209
2112
223
2311
243
2513
2625
279
2815
2915
3011
313
322
3311
345
354
368
373
383
3911
4015
4115
4212
4311
4411
453
463
478
482
492
33.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.27564102564102566
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences144
matches
0"Then another, from a different"
1"Only the wind in the"
2"Just the heavy silence."
3"Then, a soft, wet sound."
4"Then it, too, bled away"
ratio0.035
67.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences144
matches
0"She stood at the edge"
1"She’d felt the first pull"
2"She’d come because of the"
3"She pushed into the tree"
4"She didn’t use a torch;"
5"She walked on."
6"It was an ancient oak,"
7"It stood sentinel at the"
8"Their scent was overwhelming, cloyingly"
9"It was warmer here, a"
10"She moved to the center,"
11"She lifted the pendant, letting"
12"It remained dark."
13"Her voice was small, swallowed"
14"She turned a slow circle."
15"She took a step toward"
16"She froze, heart a sudden"
17"She didn’t turn."
18"It came from her left,"
19"She turned her head, slow."
ratio0.382
29.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences144
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She stood at the edge"
2"She’d felt the first pull"
3"The pendant had warmed, just"
4"She’d come because of the"
5"The stones will guide you"
6"Eva had told her to"
7"Something was here."
8"Something about her parents, about"
9"She pushed into the tree"
10"The darkness under the canopy"
11"She didn’t use a torch;"
12"The pull returned, a soft"
13"The woods thickened."
14"Brambles snagged her jeans."
15"An owl called, the sound"
16"Aurora stopped, listening."
17"She walked on."
18"The standing stones appeared so"
19"It was an ancient oak,"
ratio0.861
34.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"Now it was silent again."
ratio0.007
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She’d felt the first pull hours ago, a faint, magnetic itch in her chest that had sharpened into a persistent tug as she rode her bike through the sleeping subu…"
1"Something about her parents, about her name, about the dreams of shifting shadows and a woman’s voice singing in a language that made her teeth ache."
2"It was an ancient oak, not stone, but massive and blackened, carved with spirals and looping patterns that seemed to shift in the dappled moonlight."
3"It was warmer here, a damp, spring-like warmth that felt wrong against her November skin."
4"It had no face, no features, just a humanoid outline that absorbed the moonlight."
5"He stood between two oaks, his eyes scanning the frost-bitten clearing, the blackened flowers, finally landing on Aurora."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he growled, his voice rough in the quiet,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
76.7495%