Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBM72MMM0KZS0PG28QYJM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.002618
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door clicked shut behind him, and Rory froze. The air thickened with the scent of his cologne—bergamot and something dark, smoky. Familiar. Too familiar. “You could’ve called,” she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. Lucien leaned against the wall, his heterochromatic eyes catching the dim light of the hallway. One amber, one black. Always unsettling. “Phones can be traced,” he said, his French accent curling around the words. “And we both know I prefer... direct communication.” Her flat felt smaller with him in it. The chaos of books and scrolls seemed to press in closer, the tabby cat, Ptolemy, eyeing him warily from atop a precarious stack of papers. Rory crossed her arms, her crescent-shaped scar on full display. A childhood accident, she’d told him once. A lie, but he’d never called her on it. “Direct communication,” she repeated, her tone dry. “Is that what you call showing up unannounced?” A ghost of a smile played on his lips. “Call it personal branding.” He stepped further into the room, his cane tapping lightly against the floorboards. The ivory handle gleamed, hiding the blade inside. Always armed. Always prepared. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, cutting to the chase. No small talk. No pleasantries. Not with him. He paused, his gaze sweeping over her flat—the mismatched furniture, the overflowing shelves, the faint scent of curry wafting up from the restaurant below. “Charming,” he murmured. “Very you.” She didn’t rise to the bait. “Answer the question.” His eyes snapped back to hers, sharp and calculating. “I need your help.” The words hung between them, heavy with unspoken history. She laughed—a short, bitter sound. “You’ve got to be kidding me.” “I don’t joke, Rory. You know that.” “No, you just manipulate,” she shot back. “Which is worse.” He tilted his head, considering her. “Manipulation implies deceit. I’m being perfectly transparent.” “Transparent?” She stepped closer, her chest brushing against his tailored charcoal suit. “You broke into my flat.” “Your door was unlocked,” he corrected, his voice low. “Careless. Especially for someone with your... particular set of skills.” She bristled but didn’t back down. “Go find someone else to play your games, Lucien. I’m done.” “Done?” He raised an eyebrow. “Is that why you’ve been digging into my affairs? Because you’re *done*?” Her breath hitched. So he knew. Of course he did. “You’re a hard man to ignore,” she admitted, her tone defiant. “Flattering.” His cane tapped the floor again—a slow, deliberate rhythm. “But unnecessary. If you wanted information, you could’ve asked.” “Would you have told me the truth?” “Would you have believed me?” The silence stretched, thick and charged. Ptolemy hissed from his perch, sensing the tension. “What do you want?” she asked again, her voice softer this time. Resigned. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a photograph, handing it to her without a word. She took it, her fingers brushing against his. The contact sent a jolt through her, and she quickly pulled away. The photo showed a man—mid-thirties, dark-haired, and bleeding from a gash above his left eye. “Who is he?” she asked, her focus sharpening despite herself. “A problem,” Lucien replied. “And potentially a solution.” “Cryptic as always.” She studied the photo closer. “What’s he got to do with me?” “Nothing,” Lucien said. “Yet.” She looked up, meeting his gaze. “You’re not going to give me a straight answer, are you?” “Would it change your mind if I did?” She sighed, rubbing her temples. “Why me?” “Because you’re good,” he said simply. “The best I’ve seen. And because...” He hesitated, a rare crack in his polished facade. “Because I trust you.” The words landed like a punch to the gut. Trust. A word they’d never used before. “Bullshit,” she said, but there was no conviction behind it. He stepped closer, his presence overwhelming. “You know it’s true.” She shook her head, backing away. “You don’t trust anyone.” “Never said I did,” he replied smoothly. “Until now.” Her mind raced, torn between curiosity and self-preservation. “What’s in it for me?” He smiled—a slow, dangerous curve of his lips. “Answers. And a chance to settle our unfinished business.” Her heart skipped a beat. “You think I want that?” “I think you’ve been waiting for it,” he said, his voice low. “Just as I have.” The air between them crackled, charged with years of unresolved tension. She turned away, pacing the room to distract herself from the pull of him. “This is a bad idea,” she muttered. “Probably,” he agreed. “But since when has that stopped you?” She stopped in her tracks, glaring at him. “You’re insufferable.” “So I’ve been told.” He leaned on his cane, watching her with that infuriating calm. “Do we have a deal?” She hesitated, weighing the risks. Answers. Trust. Closure. All the things she’d been chasing since the last time they’d crossed paths. “Fine,” she said finally. “But if you double-cross me—” “You’ll make me regret it,” he interrupted, his tone amused. “I wouldn’t expect anything less.” The tension between them shifted, crackling with anticipation. Ptolemy let out a low growl from his corner, sensing the change in the air. “Where do we start?” she asked, folding her arms. Lucien straightened, his expression turning serious. “First, we need to visit someone. Someone who’s been asking about you.” Her stomach dropped. “Who?” His lips curved into a faint smile. “Someone you’re not going to like.” Before she could respond, he turned and opened the door, gesturing for her to follow. This was a bad idea. She knew it. And yet, as she grabbed her coat and stepped out into the night, she couldn’t bring herself to care. Some risks were worth taking. Lucien’s hand brushed against hers as they walked, fleeting but purposeful. She didn’t pull away. For better or worse, she was back in the game.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.79% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she asked again [again]"
1"he said simply [simply]"
2"he replied smoothly [smoothly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.148
effectiveRatio0.121
74.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount986
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"warily"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"warily"
1"lightly"
2"very"
3"perfectly"
4"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount986
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"charged"
count2
7
word"tension"
count3
8
word"facade"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"skipped a beat"
count1
11
word"anticipation"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"traced"
2"calculating"
3"unspoken"
4"eyebrow"
5"silence"
6"charged"
7"tension"
8"facade"
9"raced"
10"skipped a beat"
11"anticipation"
12"stomach"
13"fleeting"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences95
matches
0"g with anticipation"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords975
ratio0.001
matches
0"done"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount665
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory2
Lucien5
French1
Ptolemy3
Resigned1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount975
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean15.98
std9.42
cv0.589
sampleLengths
025
114
242
359
415
513
625
719
829
99
1013
1120
127
1310
1413
1517
1619
1717
1817
1910
2011
2119
227
235
2414
2513
2637
2725
288
2915
304
3117
328
337
3425
3516
3610
3710
3810
399
4013
4117
4210
4316
4425
457
4610
4710
4820
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
14.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences134
ratio0.045
matches
0"The air thickened with the scent of his cologne—bergamot and something dark, smoky."
1"He paused, his gaze sweeping over her flat—the mismatched furniture, the overflowing shelves, the faint scent of curry wafting up from the restaurant below."
2"She laughed—a short, bitter sound."
3"“Flattering.” His cane tapped the floor again—a slow, deliberate rhythm."
4"The photo showed a man—mid-thirties, dark-haired, and bleeding from a gash above his left eye."
5"He smiled—a slow, dangerous curve of his lips."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount675
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03259259259259259
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008888888888888889
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean7.28
std4.49
cv0.617
sampleLengths
09
113
21
32
414
515
64
72
813
98
108
1125
1210
137
149
157
168
179
184
1913
208
212
222
2311
243
252
263
2724
283
292
306
313
329
334
349
355
366
377
387
393
406
417
4212
435
449
4510
466
4711
485
4912
73.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4701492537313433
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners63
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Of course he did."
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences79
matches
0"she said, her voice steady"
1"he said, his French accent"
2"Her flat felt smaller with"
3"she repeated, her tone dry"
4"He stepped further into the"
5"she asked, cutting to the"
6"He paused, his gaze sweeping"
7"She didn’t rise to the"
8"His eyes snapped back to"
9"She laughed—a short, bitter sound."
10"she shot back"
11"He tilted his head, considering"
12"She stepped closer, her chest"
13"he corrected, his voice low"
14"She bristled but didn’t back"
15"He raised an eyebrow"
16"Her breath hitched."
17"she admitted, her tone defiant"
18"His cane tapped the floor"
19"she asked again, her voice"
ratio0.595
10.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences79
matches
0"The door clicked shut behind"
1"The air thickened with the"
2"she said, her voice steady"
3"Lucien leaned against the wall,"
4"he said, his French accent"
5"Her flat felt smaller with"
6"The chaos of books and"
7"Rory crossed her arms, her"
8"A childhood accident, she’d told"
9"A lie, but he’d never"
10"she repeated, her tone dry"
11"A ghost of a smile"
12"He stepped further into the"
13"The ivory handle gleamed, hiding"
14"she asked, cutting to the"
15"He paused, his gaze sweeping"
16"She didn’t rise to the"
17"His eyes snapped back to"
18"The words hung between them,"
19"She laughed—a short, bitter sound."
ratio0.899
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Before she could respond, he"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
1"she repeated, her tone dry"
2"She stepped, her chest brushing against his tailored charcoal suit"
3"he corrected, his voice low"
4"she admitted, her tone defiant"
5"she asked again, her voice softer this time"
6"she asked, her focus sharpening despite herself"
7"he said, his voice low"
8"he interrupted, his tone amused"
43.94% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"she muttered (mutter)"
5"he agreed (agree)"
6"he interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.606
rawRatio0.35
effectiveRatio0.212
75.9228%