Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBN0RXPK45ZNXX823JDP2

Run Details

Duration:
31.6s
Cost:
$0.000955

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in the cramped kitchen of Eva's flat, the scent of curry wafting through the open window. She stirred a pot of lentils, her mind drifting to the stack of books piled high on the table. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged lazily on the windowsill, soaking up the afternoon sun. A sudden knock shattered the quiet. She wiped her hands on a dish towel, glancing at the door. “Who the hell?” she muttered, her brow furrowing. Another knock, more insistent this time. She hesitated, her heart racing. The last person she expected to see was Lucien Moreau. They hadn’t parted on good terms, and the memory of their last encounter stung like a fresh wound. “Rory, open up!” His voice, smooth and commanding, cut through her thoughts. She froze, the spoon clattering against the pot. “Rory!” With a deep breath, she crossed the small living room, her pulse quickening. She reached for the deadbolt, her fingers trembling. The door swung open, revealing Lucien, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit. His platinum blond hair gleamed under the dim light, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers. “Lucien,” she breathed, the name tasting foreign on her tongue. “May I come in?” He leaned against the doorframe, his cane resting beside him, an ivory handle glinting in the light. She hesitated, memories flooding back—his laughter, their late-night conversations, the way he made her feel alive. But the hurt lingered, a bitter reminder of their last argument. “Why are you here?” “Can’t a friend drop by?” He raised an eyebrow, a hint of mischief dancing in his eyes. “Friend?” The word felt heavy, laden with unspoken history. “Please.” He gestured with a flick of his wrist, his voice softening. “I need to talk.” Against her better judgment, she stepped aside, allowing him entry. The flat felt smaller with him inside, the air thick with tension. He surveyed the clutter, his gaze lingering on the books and scrolls scattered across every surface. “Still buried in research, I see.” “Some things never change.” She crossed her arms, trying to maintain her composure. He turned, his expression shifting to something more serious. “I wouldn’t have come if it wasn’t important.” “Then what is it?” Lucien took a step closer, his presence overwhelming. “I need your help.” “Help?” She scoffed, the word bitter on her tongue. “You didn’t seem to need my help before.” “Things have changed.” “Right.” She rolled her eyes, the memories of their last fight surfacing. “You’ve always been good at that—changing the narrative.” “Rory, please.” His voice dropped, sincerity threading through his words. “I wouldn’t ask if it wasn’t urgent.” She studied him, searching for any sign of the man she once knew. The sharp lines of his face, the way his eyes flickered with emotion—it all felt familiar yet distant. “What’s going on?” He hesitated, glancing at the floor before meeting her gaze again. “There’s a situation in the supernatural underworld. I need someone I can trust.” “Trust?” The word hung between them, heavy with implications. “You lost that when you walked away.” “I know.” He ran a hand through his slicked-back hair, frustration evident in his posture. “But I’m asking for a second chance. Just this once.” “Why should I?” “Because I wouldn’t be here if I didn’t think you could help.” She felt the weight of his words, the sincerity behind them. “What do you need?” He stepped back, creating space, as if he understood the tension that crackled between them. “There’s a demon in London, one that’s been causing chaos. I need someone to gather information, someone who knows the streets.” “And you think I’m that person?” “You’re the best.” The compliment caught her off guard. She opened her mouth to protest but found no words. “Rory, I know we have history. I know I hurt you.” His voice softened, the edges of his confidence fraying. “But I wouldn’t come to you if I had other options.” She studied him, the way his eyes searched hers, pleading for understanding. “Why now?” “Because I can’t do this alone.” The silence stretched, thick with unspoken words. She glanced at Ptolemy, who had jumped down and now rubbed against her leg, sensing the tension. “Fine,” she finally said, her voice steady. “I’ll help. But this doesn’t mean we’re okay.” “Understood.” He nodded, relief washing over his features. “Let’s get to work then.” As she moved to gather her notes, Lucien stepped closer, his presence a constant reminder of their past. “Rory,” he said, his tone serious. “I know I messed up. I never wanted to hurt you.” She paused, the weight of his words settling in. “You did, Lucien. You walked away when I needed you.” “I thought it was for the best.” “Your best, not mine.” He opened his mouth, then closed it, frustration flickering across his face. “Let’s focus on the task at hand,” she suggested, trying to steer the conversation away from the past. “Right.” He straightened, his demeanor shifting back to business. “We need to find out who this demon is working with. I have a few contacts, but I need your insight.” “Okay.” She grabbed a notebook, flipping through the pages filled with her research. “What do you know so far?” “Not much. Just rumors.” “Rumors can be useful.” “True.” He leaned against the table, his cane resting beside him. “I’ll share what I have, and we can build from there.” As they delved into the details, the air between them shifted, the tension morphing into something more collaborative. But beneath the surface, the unspoken words lingered, waiting for the right moment to resurface.
total_cost0.0009552

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.036
94.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount947
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount947
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"furrowing"
count1
2
word"racing"
count1
3
word"encounter"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count2
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count3
10
word"tension"
count4
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"delved"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"furrowing"
2"racing"
3"encounter"
4"pulse"
5"glinting"
6"reminder"
7"eyebrow"
8"dancing"
9"unspoken"
10"tension"
11"flickered"
12"familiar"
13"weight"
14"silence"
15"delved"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count2
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords940
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions8
wordCount638
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Ptolemy2
Lucien4
Moreau1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount940
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean15.41
std10.2
cv0.662
sampleLengths
051
118
28
339
412
58
61
721
831
910
1021
1127
124
1317
149
1516
1610
1728
186
1913
2017
214
2212
2317
243
2520
2617
2731
283
2924
3016
3125
323
3312
3415
3536
366
373
3816
3931
4012
412
426
4324
4415
458
465
4718
4817
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences92
ratio0.033
matches
0"His platinum blond hair gleamed under the dim light, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers."
1"She hesitated, memories flooding back—his laughter, their late-night conversations, the way he made her feel alive."
2"The sharp lines of his face, the way his eyes flickered with emotion—it all felt familiar yet distant."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount644
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.024844720496894408
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004658385093167702
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean10.22
std4.93
cv0.482
sampleLengths
018
119
214
36
412
58
66
75
810
918
1012
118
121
1313
148
1513
1618
1710
1821
1916
2011
214
2217
239
2412
254
2610
2712
2816
296
3013
319
328
334
348
354
369
378
383
3912
408
4110
427
4313
4418
453
4611
4713
489
497
76.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.45652173913043476
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences57
matches
0"She stirred a pot of"
1"She wiped her hands on"
2"she muttered, her brow furrowing"
3"She hesitated, her heart racing."
4"They hadn’t parted on good"
5"His voice, smooth and commanding,"
6"She froze, the spoon clattering"
7"She reached for the deadbolt,"
8"His platinum blond hair gleamed"
9"she breathed, the name tasting"
10"He leaned against the doorframe,"
11"She hesitated, memories flooding back—his"
12"He raised an eyebrow, a"
13"He gestured with a flick"
14"He surveyed the clutter, his"
15"She crossed her arms, trying"
16"He turned, his expression shifting"
17"She scoffed, the word bitter"
18"She rolled her eyes, the"
19"His voice dropped, sincerity threading"
ratio0.667
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences57
matches
0"Aurora stood in the cramped"
1"She stirred a pot of"
2"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged"
3"A sudden knock shattered the"
4"She wiped her hands on"
5"she muttered, her brow furrowing"
6"Another knock, more insistent this"
7"She hesitated, her heart racing."
8"The last person she expected"
9"They hadn’t parted on good"
10"His voice, smooth and commanding,"
11"She froze, the spoon clattering"
12"She reached for the deadbolt,"
13"The door swung open, revealing"
14"His platinum blond hair gleamed"
15"she breathed, the name tasting"
16"He leaned against the doorframe,"
17"She hesitated, memories flooding back—his"
18"He raised an eyebrow, a"
19"The word felt heavy, laden"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"she muttered, her brow furrowing"
1"she breathed, the name tasting foreign on her tongue"
2"He raised, a hint of mischief dancing in his eyes"
3"He gestured, his voice softening"
4"She crossed, trying to maintain her composure"
5"She rolled, the memories of their last fight surfacing"
6"His voice dropped, sincerity threading through his words"
7"His voice softened, the edges of his confidence fraying"
8"she finally said, her voice steady"
9"he said, his tone serious"
10"she suggested, trying to steer the conversation away from the past"
11"He straightened, his demeanor shifting back to business"
12"He leaned, his cane resting beside him"
96.43% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.179
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.107
76.5408%