Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBN30XRBM3XHW00PTEPXD

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.040165
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter felt the world tilt as the London mist peeled away and she stepped into something older than memory. Moonlight fractured through oak limbs, casting filigreed shadows on the forest floor. She lifted a hand to her throat, curled fingers around the Heartstone pendant. Deep crimson warmth pulsed beneath her palm. Nyx hovered at the edge of a ring of standing stones, their outline flickering between solid form and drifting smoke. Violet eyes shone from a face carved of shadow. They offered a crooked smile. “Through here.” Rory followed. Each footfall stirred petals from a carpet of wildflowers that hummed like distant song. Tiny rivulets of silver water wound around gnarled roots, gleaming underfoot. A smell of honeyed dust hung in the air. She threaded through the stones. Moss-wrapped trunks leaned inward as though whispering secrets. Time bent. A birdcall bowed in the distance, returned warped and slow. Leaves drifted upward, then fell again like slow rain. Rory’s scar throbbed on her left wrist. She flexed, and the crescent brand’s chill receded. She slipped the Fae-Forged Blade free. Moonsilver gleamed as she flexed her fingers along its edge. Ice crept beneath her skin. Vines arched overhead, weaving into a living tunnel. Bark rippled under her palm, curls folding into silvery script. She crouched to read a rune, but the lines dissolved like mist under her gaze. Heart pounding, she straightened. “They don’t want us here.” Nyx’s form shivered. “We’ll need to earn our passage.” At the tunnel’s end, ironwood doors awaited. Faces of slumbering Fae carved into panels, eyes sealed in eternal rest. Rory pressed her shoulder against the wood. The Heartstone trembled. Doors parted inward without sound. Beyond lay darkness. She stepped inside first. Nyx drifted beside her. The doors sealed behind them, leaving no seam. Rory held the blade out. Light fractured across a vaulted dome studded with starclusters. No firm ceiling—just an endless sky. Stars flickered in patterns that teased comprehension and vanished before she could trace them. Beneath, a mosaic floor sprawled, blue and gold tiles weaving a vast tree. Roots curled toward walls, branches blossomed into faces frozen mid-joy or mid-scream. Suddenly a single tile slid under Nyx’s toe. They blinked, then reached down. Their fingers passed through solid stone, grazing air. A note rang out—high, crystalline—then multiplied into a chorus of whispers. Rory felt the weight of uncounted voices pressing at her skull. She slammed a fist against her temple and blinked. Faces in the mosaic shifted. A banquet unfurled: loaves rose, wine pooled in goblets, meats glistened under torchlight. Then rot claimed the feast, morsels curled into dust. The scene reversed, morphed, replayed without end. She lunged forward and scored a line through the tiles with the dagger. Light flared. The banquet froze in petrified ruin. A silver worm slithered from cracked bread and vanished beneath the wall. Rory stumbled back, blade held ready. “This place plays memory like a wound.” Nyx knelt, shadow pooling at their feet. They traced a rune in the wall. Carvings flared with living color—emerald bleeding into violet, then black. Small blooms unfurled along the vine-carving, petals dissolving into motes of light that drifted upward. Rory watched every swirl of magic, her heartbeat matching the pendant’s pulse. Warmth and dread tangled in her chest. “We move on?” Nyx rose. “The heart lies above.” They found a stair carved from bone-white stone. Mist curled between steps. Rory tested the first tread. The rosewood of her blade met polished stone without yield. They climbed. Each step echoed in soft thunder. Vines pressed close, brushing arms with leaves that tasted of rain. At the summit, a doorway of bleached bone loomed, edged with silver runes. Through the arch, starlight slanted down onto a solitary pedestal. On it, a glass rose. A single drop of molten silver perched at its center. The petals glowed faintly, as though breathing. Rory exhaled. She let the blade slide back into its sheath, then knelt. She picked up the rose. Glass bit into her palm; a bead of blood welled where a thorn lifted. Light arced from the silver drop and traced up her arm to her shoulder. She gasped, clutching her chest. Nyx sprang forward, half-solid, face unreadable. They pressed a hand to the runes on the doorframe. The sigils flickered out. “Isolde’s gate,” they whispered. “Open it without harm.” From the dark tangle of vines behind them, Isolde Varga emerged. Silver hair flowed like liquid moonlight. Pale lavender eyes studied them without blink. She stepped into the beam. No footprints formed. “You have awakened the heart,” she said, voice rippling like wind through reeds. “When the rose bleeds no more, the boundary will yield.” Rory turned the blossom in her palm. No fresh blood surfaced. The petals glowed brighter. She swallowed. “Then the path stands ready.” Isolde inclined her head. A leaf drifted through her hair and vanished. “Step through with purpose. Time bends to no one here.” Beyond, the bone door quivered, then swung inward with a sigh of shifting stone. Rory rose, folding the rose into a cloth at her belt. She drew the dagger again and pressed her hand to the frame. The runes smoldered, then faded to dust. A current of cold air spilled through the arch. Rory’s boots hovered over a floor that pulsed like living skin. The air tasted of metal and starlight. She glimpsed shapes shifting beyond: pillars of mist, fading constellations, a horizon that dragged itself backward. Nyx drifted to her side. Their shadow pooled, then climbed the walls in spidery fingers. “Beyond lies the Boundary,” they said. “The space between worlds.” Rory swallowed. Her voice caught in her throat. She flexed her fist around the pendant. “I’m ready.” Isolde watched, silent, silver hair cascading, limbs unmoving as stone. Then she receded into darkness, melting into the vines without a sound. Rory planted her boots on the threshold. Heart racing, she took a step forward. The mist swallowed her foot. Light flickered across her face. She raised the blade. The world held its breath. Silence stretched. Then a faint hum rose from beneath the floor, a vibration she felt in her bones. She drew her next breath and stepped farther into the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1048
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Rosewood"
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1048
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"fractured"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"footfall"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count3
10
word"mosaic"
count2
11
word"crystalline"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"traced"
count2
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"loomed"
count1
17
word"solitary"
count1
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"quivered"
count1
20
word"cascading"
count1
21
word"racing"
count1
22
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"footfall"
4"gleaming"
5"throbbed"
6"chill"
7"pounding"
8"trembled"
9"flickered"
10"mosaic"
11"crystalline"
12"weight"
13"traced"
14"pulse"
15"echoed"
16"loomed"
17"solitary"
18"unreadable"
19"quivered"
20"cascading"
21"racing"
22"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1038
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount965
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
London1
Heartstone2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae2
Nyx8
Isolde3
Varga1
Rory14
Light4
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Blade"
3"Fae"
4"Nyx"
5"Isolde"
6"Varga"
7"Rory"
8"Light"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.833
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though whispering secrets"
1"as though breathing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1038
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
80.65% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean34.6
std14.96
cv0.432
sampleLengths
052
136
249
357
442
59
637
750
846
965
1046
1139
1222
136
1446
1545
1651
1728
1832
1923
2022
2122
2244
2343
2425
2517
2622
2733
2818
2911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
57.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences134
ratio0.03
matches
0"No firm ceiling—just an endless sky."
1"A note rang out—high, crystalline—then multiplied into a chorus of whispers."
2"Carvings flared with living color—emerald bleeding into violet, then black."
3"Glass bit into her palm; a bead of blood welled where a thorn lifted."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount975
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.029743589743589743
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0020512820512820513
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean7.75
std3.89
cv0.503
sampleLengths
020
112
213
37
420
59
65
72
82
914
1011
119
125
138
142
1510
169
177
188
196
2010
215
228
2310
2415
254
265
273
286
297
3012
317
323
335
343
354
364
378
385
399
406
4114
4213
4312
448
455
468
4711
4811
499
63.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3880597014925373
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences111
matches
0"Light fractured across a vaulted"
1"Suddenly a single tile slid"
2"Then rot claimed the feast,"
3"Then she receded into darkness,"
4"Then a faint hum rose"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences111
matches
0"She lifted a hand to"
1"They offered a crooked smile."
2"She threaded through the stones."
3"She flexed, and the crescent"
4"She slipped the Fae-Forged Blade"
5"She crouched to read a"
6"She stepped inside first."
7"They blinked, then reached down."
8"Their fingers passed through solid"
9"She slammed a fist against"
10"She lunged forward and scored"
11"They traced a rune in"
12"They found a stair carved"
13"She let the blade slide"
14"She picked up the rose."
15"She gasped, clutching her chest."
16"They pressed a hand to"
17"She stepped into the beam."
18"she said, voice rippling like"
19"She drew the dagger again"
ratio0.234
63.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences111
matches
0"Aurora Carter felt the world"
1"Moonlight fractured through oak limbs,"
2"She lifted a hand to"
3"Nyx hovered at the edge"
4"Violet eyes shone from a"
5"They offered a crooked smile."
6"Each footfall stirred petals from"
7"A smell of honeyed dust"
8"She threaded through the stones."
9"A birdcall bowed in the"
10"Leaves drifted upward, then fell"
11"Rory’s scar throbbed on her"
12"She flexed, and the crescent"
13"She slipped the Fae-Forged Blade"
14"Moonsilver gleamed as she flexed"
15"Ice crept beneath her skin."
16"Vines arched overhead, weaving into"
17"Bark rippled under her palm,"
18"She crouched to read a"
19"Heart pounding, she straightened."
ratio0.793
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Nyx hovered at the edge of a ring of standing stones, their outline flickering between solid form and drifting smoke."
1"Small blooms unfurled along the vine-carving, petals dissolving into motes of light that drifted upward."
2"Vines pressed close, brushing arms with leaves that tasted of rain."
3"She glimpsed shapes shifting beyond: pillars of mist, fading constellations, a horizon that dragged itself backward."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice rippling like wind through reeds"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.133
82.1629%