Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRBZA45ATBGT6CKYMFR0WE

Run Details

Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.001979
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed faintly above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest, casting an eerie glow on the damp pavement. Rory pushed her bike into the shadows of the alley beside the bar, the wheels clicking softly as she leaned it against the brick wall. Her jacket clung to her shoulders, damp from the drizzle that had followed her all the way from Golden Empress. She shook her hair out, the black strands sticking to her face, and stepped inside. The warmth of the bar hit her like a blanket, the low hum of conversation wrapping around her. The familiar scent of whiskey and sawdust filled her lungs. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with the kind of precision that spoke of years of practice. His hazel eyes flicked up as she entered, and he gave her a nod, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the light. “Evening, Rory,” he said, his voice gravelly but warm. “Evening, Si.” She slid onto a stool, fingers tapping lightly on the wooden counter. “Long day?” “Same as any other.” He set the glass down and reached for a bottle of her usual. “You look like you could use this.” She smirked, accepting the glass with a nod. “Perceptive as ever.” The bar was quieter than usual for a Saturday night. A couple occupied a corner booth, their heads bent close together in conversation. A man in a worn leather jacket nursed a pint at the far end of the bar. Rory sipped her drink, the burn of the whiskey grounding her. Her gaze drifted to the bookshelf that concealed the hidden room, her thoughts momentarily wandering to the last time she’d been back there. The door creaked open behind her, letting in a gust of cool air. Rory didn’t turn, too absorbed in the warmth of her drink and the low murmur of the bar. But then a voice cut through the noise, sharp and unexpected. “Rory Carter.” She froze, the glass halfway to her lips. The voice was familiar, yet altered, like a song played on a slightly out-of-tune piano. She turned slowly, her bright blue eyes narrowing as they landed on the figure in the doorway. Evan. He stood there, taller than she remembered, his lean frame draped in a tailored coat that screamed money. His dark hair was slicked back, the faintest hint of silver at his temples. But it was his eyes that caught her—cold, calculating, and utterly foreign. “Evan,” she said, her voice steady despite the churn in her stomach. She set the glass down, her fingers curling around the edge of the bar. He stepped closer, his polished shoes clicking against the wooden floor. “It’s been a while.” “Five years.” She tilted her head, studying him. “You’ve changed.” “So have you.” His gaze flicked over her, lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist before meeting her eyes again. “Still delivering takeaway?” “Still sniffing your own farts?” she shot back, raising an eyebrow. He chuckled, but it lacked warmth. “Still quick with the comebacks, I see.” Silas cleared his throat, drawing their attention. He leaned against the bar, his hazel eyes sharp. “Everything alright, Rory?” She nodded, her lips curving into a faint smile. “Just catching up with an old friend.” Silas didn’t look convinced, but he stepped back, giving them space. Evan slid onto the stool beside her, signaling for a drink. The bartender hesitated, glancing at Rory, but she nodded almost imperceptibly. “Whiskey,” Evan said. “Neat.” Silas poured the drink, set it down with a clink, and retreated to the other end of the bar. Evan swirled the amber liquid in his glass, his gaze distant. “I didn’t expect to find you here.” “Life’s full of surprises,” she replied, her tone light but edged with something sharper. “You’re a long way from Cardiff.” “Business brought me to London.” He took a sip, his lips pressing into a thin line. “And you?” “Living the dream.” She raised her glass in a mock toast. “One delivery at a time.” He smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “You always did have a knack for downplaying your achievements.” “And you always had a knack for overestimating them.” She leaned back, her arms crossed. “What’s the angle, Evan? You didn’t just stumble in here by accident.” He hesitated, his fingers tightening around the glass. “I heard you were in London. Thought I’d look you up.” “Bullshit.” Her voice was soft, but the word cut through the air like a blade. “You don’t do anything without a reason.” He set the glass down, his expression hardening. “Fine. I wanted to see you. To see if…” “If what?” She leaned forward, her eyes narrowing. “If I still carry the bruises? If I’ve forgiven you? If I’ve moved on?” His jaw tightened, a muscle twitching in his cheek. “I didn’t come here to fight.” “Then why did you come?” Her voice was low, but there was no mistaking the anger simmering beneath the surface. “To apologize? Too late for that. To explain? Nothing you say will change what you did.” He exhaled sharply, running a hand through his hair. “I needed closure.” “Closure?” She laughed, the sound bitter. “You don’t get closure, Evan. You don’t get to waltz back into my life and expect me to give you absolution.” He stared at her, his eyes dark and unreadable. “I’ve changed, Rory.” “Have you?” She tilted her head, her gaze piercing. “Because from where I’m sitting, you’re still the same selfish bastard who broke everything he touched.” He flinched, his hands knotting together on the bar. “I’m trying to make amends.” “Amends?” She shook her head, her lips curling into a humorless smile. “You can’t make amends for what you did. You can’t undo the damage.” “Then what do you want from me?” His voice cracked, raw and desperate. “I’ve spent years trying to forget you, but I can’t. I can’t stop thinking about what I lost.” “What you lost?” Her voice rose, drawing a few glances from the other patrons. “You didn’t lose anything, Evan. You threw it away. You threw *me* away.” He reached for her hand, but she jerked back, her eyes blazing. “Don’t.” “Rory, please.” His voice was barely above a whisper. “I’m sorry.” She stared at him, her chest rising and falling with each breath. “Sorry doesn’t fix broken bones. Sorry doesn’t heal scars.” She held up her wrist, the crescent-shaped mark stark against her skin. “Sorry doesn’t erase the past.” He looked away, his face pale. “I was wrong. I know that now.” “Good for you.” She slid off the stool, her movements sharp and deliberate. “But it doesn’t change anything. You don’t get to rewrite the story, Evan. Not with me.” He stood, his hands clenched at his sides. “Rory—” “Don’t.” She held up a hand, her voice cold. “You don’t get to say my name like you own it. You don’t get to pretend you care. You had your chance, and you blew it.” He stared at her, his expression crumbling. “I’ll leave. If that’s what you want.” “It’s not about what I want.” Her voice softened, but it carried a finality that left no room for argument. “It’s about what I deserve.” He nodded slowly, his shoulders slumping. Without another word, he turned and walked out of the bar, the door swinging shut behind him. Rory stood there for a moment, her chest tight, before sinking back onto the stool. Silas appeared at her side, refilling her glass without a word. She exhaled shakily, running a hand through her hair. “Thanks, Si.” “You alright?” he asked, his voice low. She nodded, lifting the glass to her lips. “Yeah. Just… old ghosts.” He gave her a sympathetic look but said nothing. The bar settled back into its rhythm, the hum of conversation filling the silence. Rory stared at the door, her drink forgotten in her hand. Five years had passed, but some wounds never healed. Some scars never faded. And some people never changed, no matter how much you wished they would.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:50:41.353Z" 2/19/2026, 10:50:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.735
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.029
70.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1356
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
5
adverb"sharply"
count1
6
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"lightly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"utterly"
5"sharply"
6"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1356
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"calculating"
count1
4
word"churn"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"simmering"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"familiar"
2"flicked"
3"calculating"
4"churn"
5"stomach"
6"eyebrow"
7"simmering"
8"unreadable"
9"whisper"
10"stark"
11"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1353
ratio0.001
matches
0"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount953
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Saturday1
Rory6
Silas5
Evan4
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
places
0"Raven"
1"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1353
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean22.93
std15.63
cv0.682
sampleLengths
081
172
29
316
424
511
674
742
82
940
101
1144
1226
1315
1410
1524
1611
1713
1819
1916
2033
214
2219
2318
2420
2518
2616
2718
2827
2919
3022
3117
3222
3315
3436
3512
3627
3712
3825
3914
4025
4131
4227
4313
4411
4538
4613
4729
489
4935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences127
ratio0.008
matches
0"But it was his eyes that caught her—cold, calculating, and utterly foreign."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount956
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.029288702928870293
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013598326359832637
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.65
std5.71
cv0.536
sampleLengths
021
125
220
315
418
510
619
725
89
914
102
1117
127
138
143
1510
1613
1717
1811
1923
2013
2118
2211
232
248
2515
2617
271
2818
2914
3012
3112
3214
3311
344
358
362
3721
383
3911
406
417
427
439
443
459
467
4711
4811
4911
54.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36220472440944884
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her jacket clung to her"
1"She shook her hair out,"
2"His hazel eyes flicked up"
3"he said, his voice gravelly"
4"She slid onto a stool,"
5"He set the glass down"
6"She smirked, accepting the glass"
7"Her gaze drifted to the"
8"She froze, the glass halfway"
9"She turned slowly, her bright"
10"He stood there, taller than"
11"His dark hair was slicked"
12"she said, her voice steady"
13"She set the glass down,"
14"He stepped closer, his polished"
15"She tilted her head, studying"
16"His gaze flicked over her,"
17"she shot back, raising an"
18"He chuckled, but it lacked"
19"He leaned against the bar,"
ratio0.663
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences83
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory pushed her bike into"
2"Her jacket clung to her"
3"She shook her hair out,"
4"The warmth of the bar"
5"The familiar scent of whiskey"
6"Silas stood behind the bar,"
7"His hazel eyes flicked up"
8"he said, his voice gravelly"
9"She slid onto a stool,"
10"He set the glass down"
11"She smirked, accepting the glass"
12"The bar was quieter than"
13"A couple occupied a corner"
14"A man in a worn"
15"Rory sipped her drink, the"
16"Her gaze drifted to the"
17"The door creaked open behind"
18"Rory didn’t turn, too absorbed"
19"She froze, the glass halfway"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her jacket clung to her shoulders, damp from the drizzle that had followed her all the way from Golden Empress."
1"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with the kind of precision that spoke of years of practice."
2"Her gaze drifted to the bookshelf that concealed the hidden room, her thoughts momentarily wandering to the last time she’d been back there."
3"She stared at him, her chest rising and falling with each breath."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he said, his voice gravelly but warm"
1"She slid, fingers tapping lightly on the wooden counter"
2"she said, her voice steady despite the churn in her stomach"
3"He took, his lips pressing into a thin line"
4"She leaned back, her arms crossed"
5"She leaned, her eyes narrowing"
6"She tilted, her gaze piercing"
7"She slid, her movements sharp and deliberate"
8"She held up, her voice cold"
9"he asked, his voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.176
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.029
77.6617%