| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 828 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 828 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "solace" | | 1 | "sanctuary" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "newfound" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "palpable" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "quickened" | | 14 | "sentinels" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "racing" | | 17 | "chill" | | 18 | "beacon" | | 19 | "scanning" | | 20 | "familiar" | | 21 | "resolve" | | 22 | "eyebrow" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 21.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 827 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 765 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 7 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Rory | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Richmond" | | 5 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like the distant whisper of leaves" | | 1 | "It was as if the grove itself was awakening, its gaze upon her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 827 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.22% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 51.69 | | std | 21.18 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 88 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 20 |
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| 90.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "was bound" | | 1 | "being compartmentalized" |
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| 80.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "was starting" | | 1 | "was awakening" |
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| 28.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 50 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's quick mind began to rationalize the feeling – the time distortion, perhaps, or merely the remoteness of the grove." | | 1 | "The world beyond seemed to rush back into focus – the distant hum of cars, the hooting of owls in the nearby woods, the soft rustle of leaves in the Richmond Park bushes." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 649 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange, tempo-warped sanctuary" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.030816640986132512 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01386748844375963 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 50 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 50 | | mean | 16.54 | | std | 7.88 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 69.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.44 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Light, cautious, but unmistakable." | | 1 | "Only when she was safely" | | 2 | "Then, with a quiet resolve," |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here seeking" | | 1 | "She wasn't one for mysticism," | | 2 | "she muttered to herself, using" | | 3 | "She preferred Rory, the name" | | 4 | "Her eyes scanned the clearing," | | 5 | "It was just her imagination" | | 6 | "She wandered deeper into the" | | 7 | "Her heart quickened, the pulse" | | 8 | "She spun around, eyes straining" | | 9 | "Her laughter sounded forced, even" | | 10 | "It was as if the" | | 11 | "She burst through the boundary," | | 12 | "Her breath came in ragged" |
| | ratio | 0.283 | |
| 57.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The darkness swallowed Aurora whole," | | 1 | "The moon, a silver sliver" | | 2 | "She had come here seeking" | | 3 | "Aurora's hand instinctively rose to" | | 4 | "The unknown benefactor who had" | | 5 | "She wasn't one for mysticism," | | 6 | "The trees, usually a soothing" | | 7 | "The stillness was oppressive, weighing" | | 8 | "Rory's quick mind began to" | | 9 | "she muttered to herself, using" | | 10 | "The nickname felt hollow, a" | | 11 | "She preferred Rory, the name" | | 12 | "Her eyes scanned the clearing," | | 13 | "Wildflowers swayed gently in the" | | 14 | "Aurora took a deep breath," | | 15 | "It was just her imagination" | | 16 | "The isolation, combined with the" | | 17 | "She wandered deeper into the" | | 18 | "The silence was almost palpable," | | 19 | "Every so often, she'd catch" |
| | ratio | 0.804 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the skin on the" | | 1 | "Yet, with each step back" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here seeking solace, hoping the grove's strange, tempo-warped sanctuary would provide a brief respite from the turmoil that had been brewing in her…" | | 1 | "Aurora's hand instinctively rose to the Heartstone Pendant, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth against her skin, a gentle hum that had become…" | | 2 | "She preferred Rory, the name that had become synonymous with her newfound independence." | | 3 | "The silence was almost palpable, a living, breathing entity that surrounded her." | | 4 | "It was as if the grove itself was awakening, its gaze upon her." | | 5 | "Aurora hastened her pace, the pulse of the pendant now a frantic rhythm that mirrored her own racing heart." | | 6 | "For a moment, she just leaned against the door, her bright blue eyes scanning the familiar surroundings as if to reassure herself that this, at least, was real." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora didn't, a warm beacon calling her back to reality" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |