Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRC2WTEDBW9WQP910F9BEG

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.028030
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest, the familiar green neon sign casting a soft glow on her face. The bar was dimly lit, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to whisper stories of the past. She took a deep breath, the scent of aged wood and whiskey filling her nostrils, and stepped inside. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light as he polished a glass. He looked up, his hazel eyes meeting hers, and a slow smile spread across his face. "Rory," he greeted, his voice warm and gravelly. "It's been a while." "Too long, Si," she replied, her lips curving into a smile. She walked over to the bar, her boots clicking softly on the wooden floor. "How's the knee?" "Still creaky," he said with a chuckle, tapping his left leg. "But it gets me by. What brings you here tonight?" "Just needed a drink," she said, sliding onto a barstool. "And maybe some company." Silas nodded, pouring her a glass of whiskey. "On the house," he said, sliding it over to her. "You look like you could use it." "Thanks," she said, taking a sip. The liquid burned her throat, but it was a welcome sensation. She glanced around the bar, her eyes landing on a figure sitting in the corner, partially hidden in the shadows. Her heart skipped a beat. "Is that...?" she began, her voice trailing off. Silas followed her gaze and nodded. "Yeah, that's him." Aurora's grip tightened on her glass. "I didn't expect to see him here." "Neither did I," Silas admitted. "But life has a funny way of bringing people together." She took another sip of her whiskey, the warmth spreading through her chest. "I should go say hi." Silas gave her a reassuring nod. "Go on. I'll be here if you need me." Aurora stood, her legs feeling unsteady as she made her way over to the corner table. The figure looked up as she approached, and her breath caught in her throat. "Evan," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. He looked different. His once-boyish face was now lined with age and weariness, his eyes darker and more guarded. His hair, once a vibrant chestnut, was now streaked with grey. He wore a leather jacket that had seen better days, and his hands were rough and calloused. "Aurora," he replied, his voice low and gravelly. "It's been a long time." "Yeah," she said, sliding into the seat across from him. "It has." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of unspoken words hanging between them. Aurora studied his face, searching for any trace of the boy she once knew. "You look... different," she said finally. "So do you," he replied, his eyes flicking to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "But I guess we've both been through a lot." "Yeah," she said, her fingers tracing the edge of her glass. "Life has a way of doing that." He nodded, his gaze distant. "I heard you moved to London." "Yeah," she said. "Needed a fresh start." "From me?" he asked, his voice tinged with regret. "From everything," she replied, her eyes meeting his. "But yeah, you were part of it." He looked down at his hands, his fingers tracing the grain of the wooden table. "I'm sorry, Aurora. For everything." She took a deep breath, the memories of their past flooding back. The fights, the tears, the nights spent wondering if things would ever get better. "I know," she said softly. "But it's in the past now." He looked up, his eyes searching hers. "Do you ever think about what could have been?" "Sometimes," she admitted. "But I try not to dwell on it. It's not healthy." He nodded, a sad smile playing on his lips. "I guess you're right." They sat in silence again, the noise of the bar fading into the background. Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the warmth spreading through her veins. "So, what have you been up to?" she asked, trying to steer the conversation to safer ground. "Not much," he said with a shrug. "Just trying to get by. I work odd jobs here and there. Nothing exciting." "Sounds... tough," she said, her heart aching for the boy she once loved. "It is," he admitted. "But it's my life now." She nodded, her fingers tracing the edge of her glass. "I've been working at a restaurant. Part-time delivery." "Really?" he asked, a hint of surprise in his voice. "I always thought you'd end up doing something more... prestigious." She shrugged. "Life doesn't always turn out the way we expect." "No, it doesn't," he agreed, his eyes distant. "But we make do with what we have." They sat in silence again, the weight of their shared history hanging between them. Aurora glanced over at Silas, who gave her a reassuring nod. "Do you ever regret it?" Evan asked suddenly, his voice barely above a whisper. "Regret what?" she asked, her heart pounding in her chest. "Leaving," he said, his eyes meeting hers. "Leaving me." She took a deep breath, the memories of their past flooding back. The fights, the tears, the nights spent wondering if things would ever get better. "No," she said finally. "I don't regret it. It was the right thing to do." He looked down at his hands, his fingers tracing the grain of the wooden table. "I know," he said softly. "But it still hurts." "I know," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "But we can't change the past." "No, we can't," he agreed, his eyes meeting hers. "But we can try to move forward." She nodded, her fingers tracing the edge of her glass. "Yeah, we can." They sat in silence again, the noise of the bar fading into the background. Aurora took another sip of her whiskey, the warmth spreading through her veins. "Do you think we could ever be friends again?" Evan asked, his voice tentative. She looked at him, her heart aching for the boy she once loved. "I don't know," she said honestly. "But we can try." He nodded, a small smile playing on his lips. "I'd like that." "Me too," she said, her lips curving into a smile. They sat in silence again, the weight of their shared history hanging between them. Aurora glanced over at Silas, who gave her a reassuring nod. "Do you want another drink?" Evan asked, his voice breaking the silence. "Sure," she said, her smile widening. "I'd like that." He stood, his movements slow and deliberate, and made his way to the bar. Aurora watched him go, her heart heavy with the weight of unspoken regret. But as she looked around The Raven's Nest, the familiar green neon sign casting a soft glow on her face, she felt a glimmer of hope. Maybe, just maybe, they could find a way to move forward. Together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
37.84% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags37
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"Evan asked suddenly [suddenly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
4"he said softly [softly]"
5"she said honestly [honestly]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.162
effectiveRatio0.162
65.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"whisper"
count4
2
word"skipped a beat"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"silence"
count6
5
word"weight"
count4
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"tracing"
count5
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"whisper"
2"skipped a beat"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"tracing"
8"tinged"
9"pounding"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
1"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"d with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1165
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount841
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven2
Nest2
Blackwood1
Silas7
Aurora9
Evan3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.965
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"photographs that seemed to whisper stories of the past"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1165
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.42
std11.49
cv0.592
sampleLengths
062
134
212
328
421
514
625
742
88
99
1013
1115
1218
1315
1430
159
1647
1713
1812
1929
206
2126
2218
2311
247
259
2615
2720
2837
2916
3014
3113
3227
3317
3421
3513
369
3718
3820
3911
4016
4125
4214
4310
449
4541
4624
4716
4816
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences123
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount846
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.037825059101654845
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.016548463356973995
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean9.47
std4.77
cv0.504
sampleLengths
022
122
218
318
416
58
64
711
814
93
1011
1110
1210
134
148
1510
167
176
1811
1920
205
218
226
233
246
257
265
2710
2813
295
306
319
3216
3314
349
353
3616
3711
3817
398
405
4110
422
4315
4414
456
4617
479
4811
497
53.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners41
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Maybe, just maybe, they could"
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences80
matches
0"She took a deep breath,"
1"He looked up, his hazel"
2"he greeted, his voice warm"
3"she replied, her lips curving"
4"She walked over to the"
5"he said with a chuckle,"
6"she said, sliding onto a"
7"he said, sliding it over"
8"she said, taking a sip"
9"She glanced around the bar,"
10"Her heart skipped a beat."
11"she began, her voice trailing"
12"She took another sip of"
13"she said, her voice barely"
14"He looked different."
15"His once-boyish face was now"
16"His hair, once a vibrant"
17"He wore a leather jacket"
18"he replied, his voice low"
19"she said, sliding into the"
ratio0.713
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences80
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
1"The bar was dimly lit,"
2"She took a deep breath,"
3"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
4"He looked up, his hazel"
5"he greeted, his voice warm"
6"she replied, her lips curving"
7"She walked over to the"
8"he said with a chuckle,"
9"she said, sliding onto a"
10"Silas nodded, pouring her a"
11"he said, sliding it over"
12"she said, taking a sip"
13"The liquid burned her throat,"
14"She glanced around the bar,"
15"Her heart skipped a beat."
16"she began, her voice trailing"
17"Silas followed her gaze and"
18"Aurora's grip tightened on her"
19"She took another sip of"
ratio0.975
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The bar was dimly lit, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to whisper stories of the past."
1"She glanced around the bar, her eyes landing on a figure sitting in the corner, partially hidden in the shadows."
2"He wore a leather jacket that had seen better days, and his hands were rough and calloused."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags37
uselessAdditionCount18
matches
0"he greeted, his voice warm and gravelly"
1"she replied, her lips curving into a smile"
2"she began, her voice trailing off"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"he replied, his voice low and gravelly"
5"she said, her fingers tracing the edge of her glass"
6"she replied, her eyes meeting his"
7"she asked, trying to steer the conversation to safer ground"
8"she said, her heart aching for the boy she once loved"
9"he asked, a hint of surprise in his voice"
10"he agreed, his eyes distant"
11"Evan asked suddenly, his voice barely above a whisper"
12"she asked, her heart pounding in her chest"
13"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
14"Evan asked, his voice tentative"
15"she said, her lips curving into a smile"
16"Evan asked, his voice breaking the silence"
17"she said, her smile widening"
82.43% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags35
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Silas admitted (admit)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
4"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.473
leniency0.946
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.135
73.6612%