| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "resolved" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "flickered" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood went cold" | | 1 | "clenched fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 159 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 162 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 1357 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "slip" | | 1 | "Not what? Not armed? Not dangerous?" | | 2 | "Shivered" | | 3 | "Don’t acknowledge it. Don’t let it know you’ve heard." | | 4 | "Click-click-click-click." | | 5 | "herding" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1310 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | November | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 44.74% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "purples that seemed to swallow light, fluorescent oranges that hurt to look at directly" | | 1 | "seemed weak swallowed by the grove’s ambient glow" | | 2 | "It was as if her body existed in a different temperature than the space around it" | | 3 | "as though recoiling from a touch" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1357 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 26.61 | | std | 21.84 | | cv | 0.821 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 94 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 60 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 96.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "being tapped" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 47.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "wasn’t chasing" | | 2 | "was *herding" | | 3 | "was funnelling" | | 4 | "was burning" |
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| 1.76% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 162 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "Flowers Rory couldn't name bloomed in impossible colours—deep purples that seemed to swallow light, fluorescent oranges that hurt to look at directly." | | 1 | "Not true silence—there were sounds." | | 2 | "Instead, a new sound emerged—a low, rhythmic clicking, like two stones being tapped together." | | 3 | "One pattern resolved into a shape she recognized—a crescent moon, identical to the scar on her left wrist." | | 4 | "Not towards the way she came—the stones had shifted, the path between them now closed, the trees grown together into an impenetrable wall." | | 5 | "The dragging sound was its feet—root-like appendages that scraped the earth as it moved." | | 6 | "It wore modern clothing—ripped jeans, a faded band t-shirt." | | 7 | "Its arm—a branch-like limb ending in sharp, splintered points—reached for her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 261 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.034482758620689655 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0038314176245210726 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 162 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 162 | | mean | 8.38 | | std | 6.08 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 44.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.3271604938271605 | | totalSentences | 162 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 70.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a new sound emerged—a" | | 1 | "So close she could almost" | | 2 | "Just like hers." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 89.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Their branches twisted upward into" | | 1 | "They carpeted the ground in" | | 2 | "She’d come for answers." | | 3 | "She’d left her flat above" | | 4 | "It wasn't fear, not yet." | | 5 | "It was the feeling of" | | 6 | "It was the audio equivalent" | | 7 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 8 | "She’d entered the park at" | | 9 | "It felt longer." | | 10 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 11 | "She took a step towards" | | 12 | "It came from behind the" | | 13 | "She trailed off" | | 14 | "She edged closer to the" | | 15 | "It was coming from everywhere" | | 16 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 17 | "It was as if her" | | 18 | "She looked down." | | 19 | "She hadn’t moved." |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 94.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 103 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant hummed against her" | | 1 | "The next, the smell changed." | | 2 | "The transition wasn't a step," | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed in" | | 4 | "Their branches twisted upward into" | | 5 | "Flowers Rory couldn't name bloomed" | | 6 | "They carpeted the ground in" | | 7 | "She’d come for answers." | | 8 | "The pendant had led her" | | 9 | "Something she hadn't done since" | | 10 | "She’d left her flat above" | | 11 | "It wasn't fear, not yet." | | 12 | "It was the feeling of" | | 13 | "The silence was the first" | | 14 | "A faint rustling in the" | | 15 | "It was the audio equivalent" | | 16 | "She pulled out her phone." | | 17 | "The screen’s light seemed weak," | | 18 | "The time read 11:47 PM." | | 19 | "She’d entered the park at" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 35.46% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the centre" |
| | ratio | 0.007 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Flowers Rory couldn't name bloomed in impossible colours—deep purples that seemed to swallow light, fluorescent oranges that hurt to look at directly." | | 1 | "A perfect circle of bare, dark earth had appeared around her, the flowers retreating, curling inward as if burned." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |