Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRC9P50NAGMYPQWMRKW900

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Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.025765
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped into the Grove, her breath catching as she crossed the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones. Wildflowers brushed against her legs, their petals almost unnaturally vibrant in the moonlight. She paused, adjusting the strap of her messenger bag and taking a moment to listen. The night was eerily still, save for the occasional rustle of leaves. Her footsteps barely crunched on the dried leaves as she moved deeper into the Grove. She absentmindedly touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she had never quite shed. The Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsed with a faint warmth, but tonight, its glow seemed almost reluctant, like a heartbeat fluttering too weakly. "Eva, you better be right about this," Rory muttered to herself, pushing a branch out of her way. Her friend had insisted that answers lay here, in this otherworldly pocket in Richmond Park. She’d never mentioned how unsettling the place would feel. As Rory ventured further, the sounds began. A faint whisper, too soft to discern words, floated on the wind. She spun around, but there was only darkness and the moon playing tricks with the shadows. She swallowed, her mouth suddenly dry. "Just the wind," she told herself, but the reassurance felt hollow. An owl hooted nearby, and she jumped, nearly stumbling over a protruding root. For a moment, she considered turning back. The rumor of the Grove's time-altering properties had her wary. An hour here could be an eternity, or mere seconds—there was no way to know until it was too late. Determined, she pressed on. The air grew cooler, tinged with a strange, metallic scent. Her breath fogged in front of her, though it was a mild night. She tightened her grip on the strap of her bag and quickened her pace. The whispers grew louder, more insistent. Rory's pulse pounded in her ears, matching the rhythm of the Heartstone Pendant. She felt eyes on her, unseen but undeniably there. Her bright blue eyes darted around, catching glimpses of movement in her peripheral vision—shadows that dissolved when she turned her head. A shape materialized ahead, half-hidden in the dense foliage. Something large and dark, with eyes that seemed to glow faintly. Rory stopped dead, barely daring to breathe. The shape didn't move, but she couldn't shake the feeling it was watching her, assessing her. Gathering her courage, Rory took a step forward. The creature vanished, dissolving into the night like smoke. She exhaled sharply, feeling a mix of relief and rising dread. Her pace increased, a nagging fear pushing her onward. Whatever was here, it didn’t want her to find what she sought. A clearing opened before her, bathed in a silvery glow. An ancient stone altar stood at its center, covered in moss and lichen. Rory felt an inexplicable pull towards it, as if it held the answers she needed. But the whispers grew louder, almost deafening now. Distorted voices echoed around her, overlapping until she couldn’t make out their words but felt their urgency. "Show yourself," she called out, her voice trembling despite her attempt at defiance. Her own words sounded hollow and small in the vast space of the Grove. Only the whispers answered, fluctuating between soft hisses and urgent demands. The Heartstone Pendant burned against her chest, its glow becoming a steady light. Rory’s fingers closed around it, seeking comfort from the familiar warmth. She felt a presence behind her, cold breath on her neck. She spun around, eyes wide with fear. A figure stood there, tall and cloaked in shadows. Its features were obscured, but its eyes burned with a malevolent fire. Rory stumbled back, her heartbeat like a drum in her chest. "Why are you here?" the figure's voice was a harsh rasp, echoing with otherworldly authority. "I...I’m seeking answers," Rory stuttered, her courage wavering as the presence loomed closer. The air around her grew colder, her breath visible in the chilling night. "Answers have a price," the figure intoned. "Are you willing to pay?" Rory hesitated, the weight of the moment pressing down on her. She thought of Eva, of the desperate need to understand the world she found herself entwined with. Finally, she nodded. "I am," she whispered, the words barely escaping her lips. The figure's eyes flashed, and suddenly, Rory felt a pull, as if her very essence was being drawn towards the altar. She resisted, but the force was too strong. She stumbled forward, her feet dragging across the ground. When she reached the altar, the whispers became a cacophony. She could feel the presence of countless eyes watching, waiting. The Heartstone Pendant blazed hot, almost burning her fingers. She held it up, hoping it would act as some form of protection. The figure approached, its form shifting and swirling like mist. Shadows seemed to reach out from it, grasping at the edges of her consciousness. Rory's vision blurred, and she felt herself falling, her body sinking into a cold, dark void. Darkness enveloped her, suffocating and absolute. She could feel the cold hands of the otherworldly figure closing around her, pulling her deeper into the abyss. Struggling to breathe, she reached out for the pendant, its warmth her only anchor. A voice, clear and resonant, cut through the darkness. "Aurora Carter, stand firm." Rory's eyes snapped open, and the shadows receded, driven back by a blinding light emanating from the Heartstone Pendant. She found herself back in the clearing, the figure nowhere to be seen. Silence reigned, the whispers silenced as if they had never existed. Chest heaving, Rory stumbled away from the altar, the pendant's glow fading back to its faint, steady pulse. She glanced around, still sensing the remnants of the dark presence. "Answers have a price," she muttered, echoing the figure's words, her voice steadier now, resolved. She turned, making her way back towards the oak standing stones. The wrongness lingered, but she felt a strange clarity. The Grove had revealed part of its mystery, but its full enigma remained, waiting for another night, another seeker. Emerging from the Grove's boundaries, Rory paused, looking back at the timeless clearing. She knew she would return, drawn by the need to uncover the full truth. But for now, the night had ended, and she had to regroup, to find Eva and share what she'd discovered. With one last lingering glance, she stepped out of the Fae Grove, the whispers fading behind her as the all-too-real world of Richmond Park greeted her once more.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"sharply"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1092
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"otherworldly"
count3
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"determined"
count1
6
word"tinged"
count1
7
word"quickened"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count2
12
word"wavering"
count1
13
word"loomed"
count1
14
word"chilling"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"cacophony"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count2
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"resolved"
count1
20
word"enigma"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"otherworldly"
4"whisper"
5"determined"
6"tinged"
7"quickened"
8"pulse"
9"echoed"
10"familiar"
11"echoing"
12"wavering"
13"loomed"
14"chilling"
15"weight"
16"cacophony"
17"could feel"
18"silence"
19"resolved"
20"enigma"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the moment"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"e with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1085
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1047
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Grove7
Heartstone5
Pendant5
Richmond2
Park2
Rory16
Eva2
Fae1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places
0"Grove"
1"Heartstone"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Fae"
globalScore0.736
windowScore0.833
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed almost reluctant like a heartbeat fluttering too weakly"
1"eyes that seemed to glow faintly"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1085
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"insisted that answers"
66.83% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean37.41
std14.36
cv0.384
sampleLengths
059
158
242
341
461
541
649
743
849
963
1038
1142
1232
1315
1426
1512
1631
1710
1838
1942
2040
2139
2213
2343
2429
2515
2639
2747
2828
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"were obscured"
1"being drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was watching"
77.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences88
ratio0.023
matches
0"An hour here could be an eternity, or mere seconds—there was no way to know until it was too late."
1"Her bright blue eyes darted around, catching glimpses of movement in her peripheral vision—shadows that dissolved when she turned her head."
86.66% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1054
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.04838709677419355
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.018975332068311195
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
88.73% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean12.33
std4.58
cv0.372
sampleLengths
019
113
215
312
415
519
624
718
815
99
107
1112
1216
136
1411
1513
167
1710
1820
194
2010
2113
2214
236
2413
259
2621
279
2811
297
3016
318
329
3311
349
3512
3610
3713
3815
398
4017
4113
4214
4311
4413
4511
4611
477
489
4912
59.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.38636363636363635
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners34
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Only the whispers answered, fluctuating"
1"Finally, she nodded."
ratio0.023
75.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences86
matches
0"She paused, adjusting the strap"
1"Her footsteps barely crunched on"
2"She absentmindedly touched the small"
3"Her friend had insisted that"
4"She’d never mentioned how unsettling"
5"She spun around, but there"
6"She swallowed, her mouth suddenly"
7"she told herself, but the"
8"Her breath fogged in front"
9"She tightened her grip on"
10"She felt eyes on her,"
11"Her bright blue eyes darted"
12"She exhaled sharply, feeling a"
13"Her pace increased, a nagging"
14"she called out, her voice"
15"Her own words sounded hollow"
16"She felt a presence behind"
17"She spun around, eyes wide"
18"Its features were obscured, but"
19"She thought of Eva, of"
ratio0.36
35.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences86
matches
0"Rory stepped into the Grove,"
1"Wildflowers brushed against her legs,"
2"She paused, adjusting the strap"
3"The night was eerily still,"
4"Her footsteps barely crunched on"
5"She absentmindedly touched the small"
6"The Heartstone Pendant around her"
7"Rory muttered to herself, pushing"
8"Her friend had insisted that"
9"She’d never mentioned how unsettling"
10"A faint whisper, too soft"
11"She spun around, but there"
12"She swallowed, her mouth suddenly"
13"she told herself, but the"
14"An owl hooted nearby, and"
15"The rumor of the Grove's"
16"An hour here could be"
17"The air grew cooler, tinged"
18"Her breath fogged in front"
19"She tightened her grip on"
ratio0.849
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory stepped into the Grove, her breath catching as she crossed the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones."
1"Her bright blue eyes darted around, catching glimpses of movement in her peripheral vision—shadows that dissolved when she turned her head."
2"The figure approached, its form shifting and swirling like mist."
3"Rory's vision blurred, and she felt herself falling, her body sinking into a cold, dark void."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she told, but the reassurance felt hollow"
1"she called out, her voice trembling despite her attempt at defiance"
2"Rory stuttered, her courage wavering as the presence loomed closer"
3"she whispered, the words barely escaping her lips"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"Rory stuttered (stutter)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.833
76.7925%