Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRCBAKY4XT033TNF1J109E

Run Details

Duration:
10.1s
Cost:
$0.021215
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood in the narrow hallway of Eva's flat, her hand hovering over the third deadbolt. She hesitated, her breath catching in her throat. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, weaved between her legs, purring softly. She glanced down at the cat, then back at the door. She hadn't expected this visit, hadn't prepared for it. But there he was, standing on the other side, waiting. She turned the final deadbolt and pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood there, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers. He looked the same, yet different. The tailored charcoal suit clung to his frame, the ivory-handled cane in his hand a stark contrast to the dark fabric. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, as always, but there was a tension in his posture, a tightness around his mouth. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth, yet carrying an edge of something unspoken. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steady, though her heart pounded in her chest. "What are you doing here?" He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped space. "I need your help." She closed the door behind him, the click of the lock echoing in the small flat. "You always need something, don't you?" He turned to face her, his eyes searching hers. "This is different." She crossed her arms over her chest, leaning against the door. "Different how?" He took a step closer, the scent of his cologne — something dark and spicy — filling her senses. "It's about Avaros." Her breath hitched. "Avaros? What does that have to do with me?" "Everything," he said, his voice low. "And nothing. But I can't do this alone." She looked away, her eyes landing on the cluttered table covered in books and scrolls. "You left, Lucien. You walked away." "I had no choice," he said, his voice softening. "You know that." She turned back to him, her eyes flashing. "You always have a choice." He reached out, his hand brushing against her arm. "Rory, please." She pulled away, the touch sending a jolt through her. "Don't." He dropped his hand, his eyes darkening. "I didn't come here to dredge up the past." "Then why are you here?" she demanded, her voice rising. "Why now?" "Because I need you," he said, his voice breaking. "Because you're the only one who can help me." She stared at him, her mind racing. The memories of their time together — the laughter, the arguments, the nights spent talking until dawn — flooded her. She had loved him once, with a fierceness that had scared her. And he had left, without a word, without an explanation. "Why should I help you?" she asked, her voice trembling. "Because you still care," he said, his eyes boring into hers. "Because you know I wouldn't be here if it wasn't important." She looked away, her eyes landing on Ptolemy, who had settled on the armchair, watching them with curious eyes. "This isn't fair, Lucien." "I know," he said, his voice soft. "But life isn't fair." She sighed, running a hand through her hair. "What do you need?" He took a step closer, his eyes never leaving hers. "I need you to come with me. To Avaros." Her eyes widened. "Avaros? Are you insane?" "Probably," he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "But I can't do this without you." She shook her head, her mind reeling. "I can't just drop everything and go to another realm." "You can," he said, his voice firm. "And you will." She stared at him, her heart pounding. "Why me?" "Because you're the only one I trust," he said, his voice raw. "Because you're the only one who can help me." She looked away, her mind racing. She had built a life here, a fragile semblance of normalcy. But the pull of the unknown, the lure of adventure, was strong. And despite everything, despite the hurt and the anger, she still cared for him. "Fine," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I'll help you." He let out a breath, relief washing over his face. "Thank you." "But this doesn't mean I've forgiven you," she added, her voice hardening. "I know," he said, his eyes softening. "But it's a start." She nodded, her mind made up. "When do we leave?" "Tonight," he said, his voice firm. "We don't have much time." She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what lay ahead. "Alright. Let's do this." He reached out, his hand brushing against hers. "Together." She looked up at him, her eyes meeting his. "Together." For a moment, they stood there, the weight of their past hanging between them. Then, with a nod, she turned and began to gather her things, the decision made. They would face whatever lay ahead, together.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.627
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount803
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount803
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"racing"
count2
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"normalcy"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"tension"
2"unspoken"
3"echoing"
4"racing"
5"pounding"
6"normalcy"
7"whisper"
8"weight"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"let out a breath"
count1
2
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"let out a breath"
2"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords808
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount592
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva1
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount808
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean18.79
std14.15
cv0.753
sampleLengths
065
175
213
318
418
522
612
713
822
912
1014
1121
1212
1313
1411
1511
1616
1712
1818
1949
2010
2122
2223
2311
2412
2519
267
2719
2817
2910
309
3121
3243
3312
3412
3512
3611
3710
3811
3915
409
4110
4236
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs113
matches
0"was, standing"
52.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences95
ratio0.032
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood there, his heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers."
1"He took a step closer, the scent of his cologne — something dark and spicy — filling her senses."
2"The memories of their time together — the laughter, the arguments, the nights spent talking until dawn — flooded her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount587
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.022146507666098807
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0034071550255536627
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean8.51
std4.67
cv0.549
sampleLengths
017
18
210
311
49
510
610
716
86
921
1022
1113
1213
135
1414
154
1616
176
189
193
2011
212
2219
233
243
259
266
278
2815
296
309
313
328
335
349
352
3610
371
387
399
4010
412
429
439
447
4520
4612
4710
4810
4911
50.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3368421052631579
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners32
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then, with a nod, she"
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences60
matches
0"She hesitated, her breath catching"
1"She glanced down at the"
2"She hadn't expected this visit,"
3"She turned the final deadbolt"
4"He looked the same, yet"
5"His platinum blond hair was"
6"he said, his voice smooth,"
7"she replied, her voice steady,"
8"He stepped inside without waiting"
9"She closed the door behind"
10"He turned to face her,"
11"She crossed her arms over"
12"He took a step closer,"
13"Her breath hitched."
14"he said, his voice low"
15"She looked away, her eyes"
16"he said, his voice softening"
17"She turned back to him,"
18"He reached out, his hand"
19"She pulled away, the touch"
ratio0.817
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences60
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood in the"
1"She hesitated, her breath catching"
2"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, weaved"
3"She glanced down at the"
4"She hadn't expected this visit,"
5"She turned the final deadbolt"
6"Lucien Moreau stood there, his"
7"He looked the same, yet"
8"The tailored charcoal suit clung"
9"His platinum blond hair was"
10"he said, his voice smooth,"
11"she replied, her voice steady,"
12"He stepped inside without waiting"
13"She closed the door behind"
14"He turned to face her,"
15"She crossed her arms over"
16"He took a step closer,"
17"Her breath hitched."
18"he said, his voice low"
19"She looked away, her eyes"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped space."
1"She looked away, her eyes landing on Ptolemy, who had settled on the armchair, watching them with curious eyes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"she replied, her voice steady, though her heart pounded in her chest"
1"he said, his voice low"
2"he said, his voice softening"
3"she demanded, her voice rising"
4"he said, his voice breaking"
5"she asked, her voice trembling"
6"he said, his eyes boring into hers"
7"he said, his voice soft"
8"he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips"
9"he said, his voice firm"
10"he said, his voice raw"
11"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
12"she added, her voice hardening"
13"he said, his eyes softening"
14"he said, his voice firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.627
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.078
77.1668%