Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRCCZFH4W8AK17Z9NWWW75

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.017974
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above The Raven’s Nest door croaked its usual complaint as Aurora Carter stepped inside, a gust of Soho night air tumbling in behind her. She rolled her shoulders beneath her battered green jacket, pulse ticking with the traces of a late delivery run. Sweat prickled along her collar, citrus and pepper from the takeaway bags clinging to her skin. Music stuttered over ancient speakers. Maps wrinkled along the walls, their borders yellowed, pinpricks marking forgotten cities. The bar huddled in shadows, the crowd thin—most gone home, the diehards drawn to their glasses and the low hum of Silas’s laughter. Aurora eased past the pool table’s battered edge, glanced at the cracked face of the grandfather clock above the bar, and slid onto a stool close to the end, where the light from the green neon sign only just reached. Silas Blackwood shifted behind the counter, polishing a glass in slow circles. The silver signet ring flashed on his right hand, a steady, unspoken fixture. His once-rich auburn hair took on the dull embers of age, grey streaks joining the years etched around his hazel eyes. Silas leaned his good leg against the beer fridge, nodding at Aurora. “Cutting it close, Carter.” “Bike chain snapped.” Aurora flexed her fingers, left wrist catching the lamplight, crescent scar pale as milk. She let her hair fall forward, black curtain shielding her gaze. “Yu-Fei sent you the extra dumplings.” He set the glass down, slid over the Tupperware box, and smirked. “You keep feeding me, I’ll have to expand the bar.” Someone scraped a chair behind her. Aurora braced, tension curling. The Nest drew odd souls; she’d learned not to look over her shoulder when laughter stabbed or when the jukebox stammered to silence. Still, the voice landed against her spine, familiar and unwelcome as a childhood bruise. “Rory?” She gripped the bar’s edge. Silence caught in her throat. Only two people called her that anymore, and Eva never sounded unsure. “Aurora Carter,” the same voice, steadier, rolling her full name around like hard candy. Aurora released a slow breath, turned her stool, and time folded oddly in the musty glow. There stood Samir Habib. Sam. His shoulders jutted sharper now beneath a worn blazer. Facial hair dotted his chin, badly carved, and his eyes—soft brown, once filled with comic mischief—had taken on something older, wary. A threadbare scarf wound high around his neck, as if he’d forgotten how to uncoil. “Well. I’ll be damned,” she managed, the phrase clumsy in her mouth. Sam looked her over, blinking as if she might disappear if he closed his eyes too long. “Thought you vanished off the map.” Silas wiped a ring of condensation from the counter, moving with the steady presence of a lighthouse keeper. “You two want a table or are you planning to reminisce right on my bar?” Sam smiled at Silas, surprise flickering. “Still can’t shake the old spy manners, eh, Mr Blackwood?” “Have a seat.” Silas slid two whiskeys toward them, no ice. Rory scooped up her glass, knuckles whitening. “Come on, then. Table in the back.” Sam followed, trailing the scent of damp tweed and distant cologne. They found a sticky table beneath a photograph of some wartime pilots—no one Rory recognised, but it looked like a blackout in their faces. Sam fiddled with his glass. “Didn’t mean to—startle you. Just… it really is you. Last time—” He broke off, mouth working. “Six years?” Aurora shrugged, folding her coat over her knees. “More like seven.” Sam traced the rim of his glass, pulling at his cuticles. “Your hair got longer.” “I cut it last spring. Easier to deal with.” She sipped, swallowing the burn. “You still in Cardiff?” He flinched, eyebrows winging up. “No. Moved to Brixton two years ago. Couldn’t keep playing house back home after… well, you know.” The jukebox coughed, spat a snatch of Ella Fitzgerald. Two tourists quibbled over darts at the other end of the room. Aurora dug her thumb into the scar on her wrist, let silence unpack itself. Sam looked around, curiosity still peeking out. “You work here?” She laughed, dry. “Delivery for the Golden Empress. Flat upstairs. Helping Silas keep his books straight, when he’ll let me.” He rolled his jaw as if tasting news he couldn’t argue with. “So you really did it. Left everything.” “Wasn’t much to keep.” She leaned back. “You look—different.” He squirmed. “Job at the council. All-day meetings. Mum calls it soul corrosion, Dad says it’s a pension. Michelle left last winter.” His mouth twitched. “Didn’t see that in the five-year plan.” Aurora rested her forearms atop the Formica. “Did you ever?” He didn’t answer, just scanned her face, searching for the echo of the girl who used to vault garden fences and steal apples from Mrs. Hughes’ tree at midnight. “I kept thinking—” Sam’s voice scraped, softer now. “After A-levels, we’d all end up in London, raise hell, you know? You, me, Eva, maybe Marcus. Instead got this.” He gestured, uncertain, at his own chest. “I owe you an apology.” Aurora hunched, words slipping out faster than she wanted. “Should’ve called. You came to the hospital and I never wrote—I didn’t know what to say.” “No one ever does,” Sam replied, voice roughened at the edge. “I heard about Evan from Eva. Didn’t know how bad… until it all blew up. I tried to find you.” She pressed her glass to her lips, breathing whisky fumes. “I didn’t want to be found.” Sam’s shoulders dipped, the old ease between them brittle, worn smooth by years apart. “I figured that out. Eventually.” He fingered his scarf, knotting and unknotting it. “I let things fall apart with us. Sorry.” Aurora shook her head. “Nothing you could’ve done.” Her nails dug tiny half-moons into her palm. “I made a mess. Still sweeping up.” He nudged the edge of his glass, eyes darting to her wrist. “You got out, though. That’s something.” “Depends who you ask.” Aurora forced a smirk, gaze on a photograph behind him, two men shaking hands in shadow. “I’m stuck on the service stairs of my own story half the time. Maybe that’s the trick: just keep moving.” Sam looked away, blinking hard. “I lost touch with everyone after Mum got sick. When she died, Cardiff felt empty. Too many things unsaid. Too much ordinary. I kept thinking someone would come along, knock me loose. Didn’t happen.” They sat. Words rustled between them, heavy with the ballast of unfinished business, of things left unsaid for longer than they dared measure. He tried following a tear in the table, voice turning uncertain. “Sometimes I think we grew up wrong.” Aurora snorted, folding her arms over her chest. “Is there a right way?” The pause stretched, soft and worn. Then Sam straightened, a nervous laugh escaping. “You remember that summer by the seaside? Eva dared you to swim out to the rocks. You nearly drowned—Dad had to haul you out by your ankles.” “Still grateful Mrs. Davies never found out—she’d have barred us from the pier for life.” His mouth curled into a real smile, light glancing over his teeth, brief and shy. “You were always braver than me.” “Bravery, stupidity—thin line.” Aurora set her glass aside, spine stiff with old pain. “People mistake running for courage.” He leaned in. “What would you call it, then—what you did?” She traced the condensation pooling beneath her glass, voice set low. “Survival.” The word hung, final, but not cruel. Just fact. Sam toyed with the rim of his drink, smile fading. “You ever think about going back—home, I mean?” Aurora stared at the wall, mind sifting through memories thick as bramble. “No home left to go back to.” He swallowed, tongue darting against cracked lips. “Sorry. Stupid question.” “Not stupid.” Aurora caught his gaze, searching for the old Sam, the one who snuck her chocolate on bad days, who trusted her with the secret places under the city bridge. “You changed, Sam.” “So did you.” Neither flinched. The words clung between them, settling in the strange cold clash of past and present. Somewhere, laughter brightened. Glasses clinked. Silas drifted by, catching her eye, silent reassurance in the nod of his chin. Aurora fished her hair behind one ear, catching the small pulse fluttering at her throat. “Maybe we didn’t grow apart so much as grew sideways.” Sam smiled, fragile and fierce at once. “Next round’s on me, then. For old times’ sake?” She pressed her hand over his on the table, tight grip for just a moment, anchoring them both. “For old times.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.633
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.033
93.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"traced"
count2
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"unspoken"
2"etched"
3"tension"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
6"traced"
7"scanned"
8"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1435
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount960
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Aurora17
Carter1
Soho1
Silas7
Blackwood1
Tupperware1
Eva1
Samir1
Habib1
Sam15
Rory2
Ella1
Fitzgerald1
Formica1
Mrs1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Eva"
7"Samir"
8"Habib"
9"Sam"
10"Rory"
11"Ella"
12"Fitzgerald"
13"Mrs"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.615
windowScore0.667
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a blackout in their faces"
1"as if tasting news he couldn’t argue with"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1435
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean24.32
std15.62
cv0.642
sampleLengths
061
180
246
316
434
522
647
71
822
914
1066
1112
1223
1333
1416
1511
1614
1735
1821
1910
2018
2118
2222
2335
2410
2520
2619
279
2832
2910
3064
3130
3231
3316
3435
3523
3618
3740
3839
3923
4018
4113
4240
4315
4421
4518
4611
4721
4818
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
54.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences130
ratio0.031
matches
0"The bar huddled in shadows, the crowd thin—most gone home, the diehards drawn to their glasses and the low hum of Silas’s laughter."
1"The Nest drew odd souls; she’d learned not to look over her shoulder when laughter stabbed or when the jukebox stammered to silence."
2"Facial hair dotted his chin, badly carved, and his eyes—soft brown, once filled with comic mischief—had taken on something older, wary."
3"They found a sticky table beneath a photograph of some wartime pilots—no one Rory recognised, but it looked like a blackout in their faces."
99.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04041570438799076
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005773672055427252
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean11.04
std7.24
cv0.656
sampleLengths
026
119
216
35
412
523
640
712
813
921
1012
114
1217
1311
146
1512
1610
176
184
1923
2014
211
225
235
2412
2514
2616
274
281
299
3021
3115
3212
3317
346
3518
3615
376
3810
3911
407
417
4211
4324
445
4516
4610
4714
484
4914
76.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.46923076923076923
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Only two people called her"
1"Then Sam straightened, a nervous"
2"Somewhere, laughter brightened."
ratio0.036
89.88% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences83
matches
0"She rolled her shoulders beneath"
1"His once-rich auburn hair took"
2"She let her hair fall"
3"He set the glass down,"
4"She gripped the bar’s edge."
5"His shoulders jutted sharper now"
6"she managed, the phrase clumsy"
7"They found a sticky table"
8"He broke off, mouth working"
9"She sipped, swallowing the burn"
10"He flinched, eyebrows winging up."
11"She laughed, dry."
12"He rolled his jaw as"
13"She leaned back"
14"His mouth twitched"
15"He didn’t answer, just scanned"
16"He gestured, uncertain, at his"
17"She pressed her glass to"
18"He fingered his scarf, knotting"
19"Her nails dug tiny half-moons"
ratio0.325
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences83
matches
0"The bell above The Raven’s"
1"She rolled her shoulders beneath"
2"Sweat prickled along her collar,"
3"Music stuttered over ancient speakers."
4"Maps wrinkled along the walls,"
5"The bar huddled in shadows,"
6"Aurora eased past the pool"
7"Silas Blackwood shifted behind the"
8"The silver signet ring flashed"
9"His once-rich auburn hair took"
10"Silas leaned his good leg"
11"Aurora flexed her fingers, left"
12"She let her hair fall"
13"He set the glass down,"
14"Someone scraped a chair behind"
15"Aurora braced, tension curling."
16"The Nest drew odd souls;"
17"She gripped the bar’s edge."
18"Silence caught in her throat."
19"the same voice, steadier, rolling"
ratio0.928
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A threadbare scarf wound high around his neck, as if he’d forgotten how to uncoil."
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora hunched, words slipping out faster than she wanted"
1"Sam replied, voice roughened at the edge"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.033
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.2491%