Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRCH25MVRAC0ZQ0J4ANXPW

Run Details

Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.008380

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Lucien could knock a second time. Rory stood there, a dish towel slung over one shoulder, her black hair damp at the temples like she’d been scrubbing something. The scent of ginger and garlic clung to her, sharp enough to cut through the stale Brick Lane air. "You’ve got to be fucking kidding me." Lucien adjusted his grip on the cane. "Good evening to you too, *chérie*." Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between Rory’s ankles, tail flicking. She didn’t look down. Her bright blue eyes stayed locked on Lucien, unblinking. The crescent scar on her wrist stood out pale against her skin where her sleeve had ridden up. "You can’t just—" She stopped, jaw tightening. "How did you even find this place?" "Eva gave me the address." He tilted his head. "After I asked nicely." Rory’s fingers whitened around the doorframe. "She wouldn’t." "She did." Lucien stepped forward, close enough that she had to tilt her chin up to keep eye contact. "May I come in? Or would you prefer we discuss this in the hallway?" A muscle twitched in her cheek. She stepped back, the door swinging wider. "Five minutes. Then you’re gone." The flat was exactly as he remembered—cluttered, lived-in, every surface buried under books and scrolls and half-empty mugs of tea. Lucien ran a finger along the spine of a leather-bound tome on the coffee table. The title was in Welsh. He didn’t speak Welsh. Rory tossed the dish towel onto the kitchen counter. "Talk. Then leave." Lucien turned, leaning against the back of the sofa. "I need your help." She laughed, sharp and humorless. "Of course you do." "It’s about the Avaros contract." Her expression shuttered. "I don’t work with demons anymore." "Not even half-demons?" "Not even you." Lucien exhaled through his nose. "This isn’t about me. It’s about the girl—Lydia Voss. She’s sixteen. Her father signed her over to a collector in the Seventh Circle." Rory crossed her arms. "And?" "And she’s human. Completely. No demon blood, no magic, no nothing. Just a kid who got tangled up in the wrong deal." He tapped his cane against the floor. "Her father’s already dead. The collector’s coming for her in three days." Rory’s gaze flicked to the window, where the neon glow of Brick Lane pulsed against the glass. "What do you want me to do about it?" "Get her out. Before the collector arrives." She turned back to him, eyes narrowed. "Why me?" "Because you’re the only one who’s ever slipped past a Seventh Circle lock without setting off the wards." Lucien pushed off the sofa, closing the distance between them. "And because you owe me." Rory’s breath hitched. "I don’t owe you shit." "You walked away from the last job. Left me holding the bag with the client." His voice dropped. "I had to pay out of pocket to keep them from coming after *you*." Her fingers curled into fists. "That wasn’t my problem." "No?" Lucien reached out, brushing his thumb over the scar on her wrist. She flinched but didn’t pull away. "Then whose was it?" Rory jerked her arm back. "Don’t touch me." Lucien let his hand fall. "You want to pretend you don’t care? Fine. But that girl doesn’t have anyone else." Rory turned away, gripping the edge of the counter. "Eva’s not going to like this." "Eva doesn’t have to know." She shot him a look over her shoulder. "You really think I’d lie to her?" "I think you’d do whatever it takes to keep someone from getting hurt." Lucien stepped closer, close enough to see the pulse jumping in her throat. "Just like you did for me. Back in Cardiff." Rory’s shoulders tensed. "That was different." "Was it?" He reached past her, plucking a pen from the counter. "You risked your neck to get me out of that warehouse. Now I’m asking you to do the same for someone else." She snatched the pen from his fingers. "I’m not the same person I was then." "No?" Lucien caught her wrist, turning it so the scar faced up. "Then why does this still hurt when I touch it?" Rory yanked her arm free. "Get out." Lucien didn’t move. "You’re going to help me." "I said *get out*." He held her gaze, unflinching. "You’ll regret it if you don’t." Rory’s breath came fast, her chest rising and falling. For a second, Lucien thought she might hit him. Then her shoulders slumped, just a fraction. "Fine." Her voice was rough. "But I’m not doing it for you." Lucien smiled, slow and knowing. "I never thought you were."
total_cost0.00838

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount775
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount775
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords769
ratio0.005
matches
0"chérie"
1"you"
2"get out"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount410
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.66
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien15
Brick2
Lane2
Eva1
Rory12
Welsh2
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Welsh"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount769
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean17.09
std12.42
cv0.727
sampleLengths
052
17
213
340
414
513
68
733
818
944
1012
1113
129
135
149
153
163
1728
185
1941
2026
217
229
2333
248
2532
269
2723
288
2920
3015
315
3215
3335
346
3534
3615
3722
387
398
404
4111
4225
4312
4410
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs78
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences91
ratio0.011
matches
0"The flat was exactly as he remembered—cluttered, lived-in, every surface buried under books and scrolls and half-empty mugs of tea."
99.07% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount414
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.04106280193236715
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0024154589371980675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean8.45
std6.13
cv0.725
sampleLengths
011
122
219
37
47
56
69
74
89
918
107
117
129
134
146
152
1619
1714
186
197
205
2120
2215
235
244
259
263
279
284
295
304
315
323
336
343
353
365
3723
384
391
4029
4112
4217
439
447
457
462
4728
485
493
59.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners35
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Then her shoulders slumped, just"
ratio0.02
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences50
matches
0"She didn’t look down."
1"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
2"She stopped, jaw tightening"
3"He tilted his head"
4"She stepped back, the door"
5"He didn’t speak Welsh."
6"She laughed, sharp and humorless."
7"Her expression shuttered."
8"He tapped his cane against"
9"She turned back to him,"
10"His voice dropped"
11"Her fingers curled into fists."
12"She flinched but didn’t pull"
13"She shot him a look"
14"He reached past her, plucking"
15"She snatched the pen from"
16"He held her gaze, unflinching."
17"Her voice was rough"
ratio0.36
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences50
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Rory stood there, a dish"
2"The scent of ginger and"
3"Lucien adjusted his grip on"
4"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound between"
5"She didn’t look down."
6"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
7"The crescent scar on her"
8"She stopped, jaw tightening"
9"He tilted his head"
10"Rory’s fingers whitened around the"
11"Lucien stepped forward, close enough"
12"A muscle twitched in her"
13"She stepped back, the door"
14"The flat was exactly as"
15"Lucien ran a finger along"
16"The title was in Welsh."
17"He didn’t speak Welsh."
18"Rory tossed the dish towel"
19"Lucien turned, leaning against the"
ratio0.96
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences7
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stopped, jaw tightening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.8062%