| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her mind darted back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 95.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1241 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1241 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "anticipation" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "tangible" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "amidst" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "unraveling" | | 17 | "quickened" | | 18 | "echoes" | | 19 | "tinged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "t in anticipation" | | 1 | "a wave of unease" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1227 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1208 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 4 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if waiting for something expected but uninviting" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.26 | | wordCount | 1227 | | matches | | 0 | "neither marked nor" | | 1 | "not with words, but with a breeze" | | 2 | "neither reason nor" | | 3 | "neither murmured nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 40.9 | | std | 15.54 | | cv | 0.38 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "This path, neither marked nor meant for visitors, led her to the hidden boundary of The Fae Grove—a place where reality blurred at its edges." | | 1 | "It was quiet—too quiet." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulsed insistently; she hoped its fire did not singe." | | 3 | "A sound drifted in—rustling, irrationally loud in the absence of all else." | | 4 | "There, at the verge of vision—movement." | | 5 | "Somewhere—close—Rory grasped signs of something familiar." | | 6 | "She quickened her step; onwards until the grove itself quaked in quiet stirrings." | | 7 | "Time-change and un-time—an hour here, mere moments there—bending and re-bending." | | 8 | "Breathing deep, the night air filled her lungs—earthly, no longer tinged crimson—and the feral thrumming of the pendant eased." | | 9 | "But the pendant at her breast warmed once more, its task unfinished—and Rory knew this lay only at the beginning." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 608 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03125 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014802631578947368 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 11.05 | | std | 5.51 | | cv | 0.498 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 82.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4954954954954955 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Such thoughts bore no fruit." | | 1 | "Just the long stretch of" | | 2 | "Then, faintly, something broke the" | | 3 | "Somewhere—close—Rory grasped signs of something" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 87.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Its glow, though faint, guided" | | 1 | "Their gnarled forms cast black" | | 2 | "She dared not think how" | | 3 | "It was quiet—too quiet." | | 4 | "Her purpose for being here," | | 5 | "She settled for focusing on" | | 6 | "Her breath snagged." | | 7 | "She squinted through the semi-darkness," | | 8 | "She forced herself to continue," | | 9 | "Her heartbeat matched the cadence." | | 10 | "It crouched low, nursing a" | | 11 | "She'd heard such tales of" | | 12 | "She brushed it away, along" | | 13 | "She could ill afford distractions," | | 14 | "it felt like a warning." | | 15 | "She chose to ignore it." | | 16 | "she murmured under her breath," | | 17 | "Her mind darted back to" | | 18 | "Her nostrils flared and the" | | 19 | "it smelled recent." |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 68.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter moved swiftly through" | | 1 | "Breath came in steady rhythm," | | 2 | "This path, neither marked nor" | | 3 | "A shiver of anticipation wound" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove was not" | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant nestled close" | | 6 | "Its glow, though faint, guided" | | 7 | "Aurora slipped past the ancient" | | 8 | "Their gnarled forms cast black" | | 9 | "Here, time danced on an" | | 10 | "She dared not think how" | | 11 | "The grove wrapped around her" | | 12 | "Nature hummed, a living presence" | | 13 | "It was quiet—too quiet." | | 14 | "The normal susurrus of nightlife," | | 15 | "Aurora pressed on." | | 16 | "Each step felt metered, slower" | | 17 | "The Heartstone pulsed insistently; she" | | 18 | "Her purpose for being here," | | 19 | "She settled for focusing on" |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 47.17% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the conclusion felt inescapable:" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The normal susurrus of nightlife, the crickets and rustle of small creatures, remained absent, as if waiting for something expected but uninviting." | | 1 | "The darkness responded not with words, but with a breeze that carried whispered fragments sounding of malevolent mirth." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice cracked on, but her spine locked straight as she forced them out" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |