Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRCHGYDVGBHG0CNE5XFDNE

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Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.022883
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter moved swiftly through the tangled undergrowth, branches snatching at her clothes like grasping fingers. Breath came in steady rhythm, matching her quick strides as she navigated the dense thicket skirting Richmond Park. This path, neither marked nor meant for visitors, led her to the hidden boundary of The Fae Grove—a place where reality blurred at its edges. There was a time when she might have hesitated at such mystery, but those days were long behind her. A shiver of anticipation wound through her, along with a tendril of unease that she couldn’t fully shake off. The Fae Grove was not her destination. Not technically. The Heartstone Pendant nestled close at her chest grew warmer with each step, a subtle but persistent throb against her skin. Its glow, though faint, guided her, tugging her deeper into the unfamiliar. Aurora slipped past the ancient oak standing stones demarcating the grove's boundary. Their gnarled forms cast black shadows under a canopy of leaves, whispering secrets only they could hear. Here, time danced on an uncertain thread, bending to its own whims. She dared not think how long she’d linger or what might await outside when she returned. Such thoughts bore no fruit. The grove wrapped around her like a velvet cocoon, flower blooms vivid even under the dim light. Nature hummed, a living presence that brushed against her senses, alien yet familiar. It was quiet—too quiet. The normal susurrus of nightlife, the crickets and rustle of small creatures, remained absent, as if waiting for something expected but uninviting. In its place, the silence pressed down on her ears, a tangible weight she shook off with a roll of her shoulders. Aurora pressed on. Each step felt metered, slower than the last. The Heartstone pulsed insistently; she hoped its fire did not singe. Her purpose for being here, a nagging itch at the back of her mind, refused to come forward. She settled for focusing on present dangers instead. A sound drifted in—rustling, irrationally loud in the absence of all else. Aurora’s head snapped to the side. Her breath snagged. There, at the verge of vision—movement. A mere trick or shadow play? She squinted through the semi-darkness, her eyes dancing over unmoving branches, yet nothing transpired anew. Just the long stretch of trunks, silently observing. She forced herself to continue, each step she took elicitating a crunch. Her heartbeat matched the cadence. Paused for a moment, she strained her ears. Not a whisper, not a creak. The night stretched taut in anticipation, holding its breath. Then, faintly, something broke the silence. Laughter. Childlike, it tumbled through the still trees, ethereal and wrong within the solitude of the grove. Rory froze, the grip on her control mortared by a wave of unease. It crouched low, nursing a crawl up her spine. She'd heard such tales of laughter in desolate places. Another shiver sealed the moment, reverberating under her skin. She brushed it away, along with the childish fears that threatened to breach her calm. The sound faded, replaced by the echo of her own exhale. Aurora moved on, but wariness now sharpened her every perception. She could ill afford distractions, and this anomaly… it felt like a warning. The path wound tighter, enclosing her within the grove's embrace. That same sense, the creeping out-of-place feeling, persisted, needle-pricking her awareness. She chose to ignore it. "Focus, Rory," she murmured under her breath, the quiet of her own voice a relief against the overwhelming quiet. Her mind darted back to Cardiff, to the safety of Yu-Fei’s restaurant or the warmth of Silas’ bar. But here she stood alone, in a place where reality tugged and stretched. The air thickened, yet it held a metallic tang not unlike blood. Her nostrils flared and the urge to gag tickled her throat. Low to the ground… it smelled recent. Her instincts fired alarm bells nearly loud enough to drown out all thought. She faltered, heartbeat thrumming a frenetic tattoo. Logic dictated retreat, but the pendant’s lure burned fiercer still. Something moved again. Closer. She whirled just in time to catch a flicker dart across her peripheral. Her heart tapped against her ribs, her eyes narrowing in pursuit of clarity. Mist, rising in twisting snares from the earth, blurred the edges of trees and distorted her senses. "Alright still yourself," she whispered, though whether to her mind or her surroundings, she could not tell. Her voice, a small thing amidst consumed silence, shivered outward like ripples on water. And the presence returned. It slipped along her awareness, ghostlight in the corner of her eye, blinking just out of full sight. Rhythmical, purposeful... coming from within the grove itself. Now, the conclusion felt inescapable: she was not alone. “Come out and say hi then.” Her voice cracked on the words, but her spine locked straight as she forced them out. The darkness responded not with words, but with a breeze that carried whispered fragments sounding of malevolent mirth. Children’s voices filled the air, dancing just out of comprehension. Mocking nightmares. Rory held her ground, an insurgent defiance in her every nerve. “Or maybe you’re afraid.” Smoke for fire, she sought to uncover this hidden thing. The light within her pendant flared and dimmed like a distant heartbeat. Blood pumped uneasily as she resumed walking, each pace weighed with caution. There were secrets in this place, unkind ones sewing themselves into the very air. The pressure built, compounded by unseen eyes boring into her back. Her senses screamed yet nothing discernible replied. The Fae Grove bestowed neither reason nor sympathy. "Almost there," she muttered, lying through an open palm. The brief flicker of courage dwindled. Panic unsheathed the edge of her wits but Aurora held it at bay a breath longer. Fog pressed tighter, coiling ghostly tendrils that wove dreams and dementia alike. In this land of twilight rules, she barely twined reality from nonsense. Somewhere—close—Rory grasped signs of something familiar. A slip of light, fracturing the eternal dusk. Her goal, perhaps... the thing she could not name. She clenched her fists, driving fingernails into her palms. The haze peaked yet slithered over her path as darkly persuasive whispers followed. Sense of direction dwindled, sight and sound unraveling. She quickened her step; onwards until the grove itself quaked in quiet stirrings. Twists of fate and fate untwisted. Time-change and un-time—an hour here, mere moments there—bending and re-bending. At last the trees parted, the grove fallen away like a storm receding. Beyond its boundary, the night returned, alive with familiar city echoes. Her foot struck tarmac, the pavement stability welcome beneath her sneakers. Breathing deep, the night air filled her lungs—earthly, no longer tinged crimson—and the feral thrumming of the pendant eased. She glanced back, daring reflection when seconds ago she’d feared the action. Bare space filled with shadows now spilt out among trees. Nothing moved, not even a whisper. Home’s call was louder than the myriad remaining questions scratched into the silence. Aurora Carter, Rory to her friends, retraced her steps through Richmond Park, grounded by streetlight and shadows that neither murmured nor laughed but breathed. The Fae Grove withdrew behind her, its mysteries left amidst the ancient oak stones, bound by time and untouchable by mortal longing. But the pendant at her breast warmed once more, its task unfinished—and Rory knew this lay only at the beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her mind darted back [back]"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
95.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"anticipation"
count2
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"silence"
count4
6
word"tangible"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count2
14
word"amidst"
count2
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"unraveling"
count1
17
word"quickened"
count1
18
word"echoes"
count1
19
word"tinged"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"anticipation"
2"throb"
3"velvet"
4"familiar"
5"silence"
6"tangible"
7"weight"
8"pulsed"
9"dancing"
10"whisper"
11"echo"
12"warmth"
13"flicker"
14"amidst"
15"sense of"
16"unraveling"
17"quickened"
18"echoes"
19"tinged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences111
matches
0"t in anticipation"
1"a wave of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1208
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Richmond2
Park2
Fae4
Grove4
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Cardiff1
Yu-Fei1
Aurora7
Rory5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if waiting for something expected but uninviting"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.26
wordCount1227
matches
0"neither marked nor"
1"not with words, but with a breeze"
2"neither reason nor"
3"neither murmured nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
65.67% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean40.9
std15.54
cv0.38
sampleLengths
078
161
262
378
448
556
640
754
835
923
1026
1150
1260
1347
1431
1539
1622
1730
1837
1926
2026
2131
2224
2332
2421
2529
2635
2747
2837
2942
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences111
ratio0.09
matches
0"This path, neither marked nor meant for visitors, led her to the hidden boundary of The Fae Grove—a place where reality blurred at its edges."
1"It was quiet—too quiet."
2"The Heartstone pulsed insistently; she hoped its fire did not singe."
3"A sound drifted in—rustling, irrationally loud in the absence of all else."
4"There, at the verge of vision—movement."
5"Somewhere—close—Rory grasped signs of something familiar."
6"She quickened her step; onwards until the grove itself quaked in quiet stirrings."
7"Time-change and un-time—an hour here, mere moments there—bending and re-bending."
8"Breathing deep, the night air filled her lungs—earthly, no longer tinged crimson—and the feral thrumming of the pendant eased."
9"But the pendant at her breast warmed once more, its task unfinished—and Rory knew this lay only at the beginning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount608
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03125
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.014802631578947368
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean11.05
std5.51
cv0.498
sampleLengths
016
118
225
319
419
57
62
721
812
912
1017
1112
1216
135
1417
1513
164
1722
1822
193
208
2111
2218
238
2412
256
263
276
286
2915
308
3112
325
338
346
359
366
371
3816
3913
409
419
429
4315
4411
4510
468
475
4810
4911
82.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4954954954954955
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences106
matches
0"Such thoughts bore no fruit."
1"Just the long stretch of"
2"Then, faintly, something broke the"
3"Somewhere—close—Rory grasped signs of something"
ratio0.038
87.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences106
matches
0"Its glow, though faint, guided"
1"Their gnarled forms cast black"
2"She dared not think how"
3"It was quiet—too quiet."
4"Her purpose for being here,"
5"She settled for focusing on"
6"Her breath snagged."
7"She squinted through the semi-darkness,"
8"She forced herself to continue,"
9"Her heartbeat matched the cadence."
10"It crouched low, nursing a"
11"She'd heard such tales of"
12"She brushed it away, along"
13"She could ill afford distractions,"
14"it felt like a warning."
15"She chose to ignore it."
16"she murmured under her breath,"
17"Her mind darted back to"
18"Her nostrils flared and the"
19"it smelled recent."
ratio0.33
68.49% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences106
matches
0"Aurora Carter moved swiftly through"
1"Breath came in steady rhythm,"
2"This path, neither marked nor"
3"A shiver of anticipation wound"
4"The Fae Grove was not"
5"The Heartstone Pendant nestled close"
6"Its glow, though faint, guided"
7"Aurora slipped past the ancient"
8"Their gnarled forms cast black"
9"Here, time danced on an"
10"She dared not think how"
11"The grove wrapped around her"
12"Nature hummed, a living presence"
13"It was quiet—too quiet."
14"The normal susurrus of nightlife,"
15"Aurora pressed on."
16"Each step felt metered, slower"
17"The Heartstone pulsed insistently; she"
18"Her purpose for being here,"
19"She settled for focusing on"
ratio0.783
47.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Now, the conclusion felt inescapable:"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The normal susurrus of nightlife, the crickets and rustle of small creatures, remained absent, as if waiting for something expected but uninviting."
1"The darkness responded not with words, but with a breeze that carried whispered fragments sounding of malevolent mirth."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Her voice cracked on, but her spine locked straight as she forced them out"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
77.4269%