Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRCKW34WPRHM32745SRSX9

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Duration:
10.5s
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$0.021305
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pelted the streets of Soho, turning the cobblestones into slick, treacherous paths. Detective Harlow Quinn's breath came in sharp bursts, her worn leather watch glinting under the streetlights as she sprinted after the suspect. The figure ahead, a shadowy blur, darted through the narrow alleys with the agility of a cat. Quinn's military precision kept her steps steady, her sharp jaw set in determination. "Stop!" Her voice cut through the night, but the suspect only quickened their pace, splashing through puddles and weaving between parked cars. Quinn's mind raced. She couldn't let this one slip away. Not after the lead she had chased for weeks. The suspect, a key player in the clique she suspected of criminal activity, had finally surfaced. She couldn't afford to lose them now. The chase led them past The Raven's Nest, its distinctive green neon sign casting an eerie glow on the wet pavement. Quinn's eyes flicked to the bar's entrance, but she didn't slow down. The suspect veered left, heading towards the old Tube station. Quinn's heart pounded in her chest as she followed, her senses on high alert. The entrance to the abandoned station loomed ahead, a dark maw in the city's underbelly. The suspect disappeared inside, and Quinn hesitated for a split second. She knew the stories about the Veil Market, the hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon. It was dangerous territory, but she had no choice. She plunged into the darkness, her footsteps echoing off the damp walls. The air grew colder, the scent of mildew and something unidentifiable filling her nostrils. She reached into her pocket, fingers brushing against the bone token she had acquired during a previous investigation. It was her ticket into the Market, but she had never intended to use it. The tunnel opened up into a vast underground space, dimly lit by flickering lanterns. Stalls lined the walls, selling everything from enchanted goods to banned alchemical substances. The hum of whispered conversations filled the air, and Quinn's eyes scanned the crowd for her quarry. There. The suspect was slipping through the throng, heading towards a stall at the far end. Quinn pushed her way through, ignoring the curious glances and muttered curses. She had to stay focused. "Tomás!" she called out, spotting a familiar figure near one of the stalls. Tomás Herrera, the former paramedic who now provided off-the-books medical care for the clique, turned at the sound of her voice. His warm brown eyes widened in surprise. "Harlow, what are you doing here?" His voice was low, urgent. "No time to explain," she replied, her gaze fixed on the suspect. "I need your help." Tomás hesitated, then nodded. "Follow me." He led her through the maze of stalls, his movements quick and sure. Quinn's heart raced as they closed in on the suspect. They reached the stall, and Tomás stepped in front of the vendor, a tall man with a scar running along his left forearm. "Where did they go?" Tomás demanded. The vendor's eyes narrowed. "What's it to you?" "Just tell me," Tomás insisted, his voice hard. The vendor glanced at Quinn, then back at Tomás. "They went through the back. But be careful, it's dangerous." Quinn didn't wait for further explanation. She pushed past the vendor and through the narrow passageway behind the stall. The walls closed in around her, the air growing colder and more oppressive. She could hear the suspect's footsteps ahead, the sound echoing off the stone. She emerged into a small chamber, the suspect cornered against the far wall. They turned to face her, their eyes wide with fear. "You're not getting away this time," Quinn said, her voice steady. The suspect's eyes darted around the room, looking for an escape. "You don't understand," they pleaded. "I'm not the enemy." Quinn's grip tightened on her weapon. "Then start talking." The suspect took a deep breath, their hands trembling. "The clique... they're not what you think. They're trying to stop something worse." Quinn's brow furrowed. "What are you talking about?" "There's a threat," the suspect continued, their voice urgent. "Something supernatural. The clique is trying to protect the city." Quinn's mind raced. Could it be true? She had always suspected the clique of criminal activity, but what if there was more to the story? Before she could ask more questions, a noise from the passageway made her turn. Tomás appeared, his expression grim. "We need to go," he said. "Now." Quinn glanced back at the suspect, then nodded. "You're coming with us." They made their way back through the Market, the suspect in tow. Quinn's mind was a whirlwind of thoughts and questions. She had to get to the bottom of this, but for now, she had to get them out of the Market safely. As they emerged into the night, the rain still falling steadily, Quinn took a deep breath. The chase was over, but the real investigation was just beginning. She had a lot of questions, and she was determined to get answers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount842
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount842
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"raced"
count3
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"maw"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count2
8
word"echoing"
count2
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"furrowed"
count1
13
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"glinting"
2"quickened"
3"raced"
4"flicked"
5"loomed"
6"maw"
7"footsteps"
8"echoing"
9"scanned"
10"familiar"
11"oppressive"
12"furrowed"
13"determined"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"eyes narrowed"
88.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences68
matches
0"t in determination"
1"d in surprise"
2"e with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords840
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount745
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn18
Raven1
Nest1
Tube1
Veil1
Market4
Tomás7
Herrera1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"Market"
globalScore0.292
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount840
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean27.1
std17.79
cv0.657
sampleLengths
065
122
242
357
454
559
644
733
841
911
1016
116
1246
136
148
158
1619
1745
1823
1911
2020
219
2222
238
2419
2525
2619
277
2812
2943
3040
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs124
matches
0"was slipping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences79
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount747
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.025435073627844713
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008032128514056224
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean10.63
std5.43
cv0.511
sampleLengths
013
122
217
313
422
53
67
79
816
97
1021
1112
1210
1314
1415
1511
1619
179
1812
1914
2018
2115
2214
2313
2417
251
2615
2712
285
2913
3021
317
3211
3312
344
354
362
3713
3810
3923
406
414
424
438
449
4510
466
4713
4813
4913
56.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3670886075949367
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her voice cut through the"
1"She couldn't let this one"
2"She couldn't afford to lose"
3"She knew the stories about"
4"It was dangerous territory, but"
5"She plunged into the darkness,"
6"She reached into her pocket,"
7"It was her ticket into"
8"She had to stay focused."
9"she called out, spotting a"
10"His warm brown eyes widened"
11"His voice was low, urgent"
12"she replied, her gaze fixed"
13"He led her through the"
14"They reached the stall, and"
15"She pushed past the vendor"
16"She could hear the suspect's"
17"She emerged into a small"
18"They turned to face her,"
19"She had always suspected the"
ratio0.359
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences64
matches
0"Rain pelted the streets of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's breath came"
2"The figure ahead, a shadowy"
3"Quinn's military precision kept her"
4"Her voice cut through the"
5"Quinn's mind raced."
6"She couldn't let this one"
7"The suspect, a key player"
8"She couldn't afford to lose"
9"The chase led them past"
10"Quinn's eyes flicked to the"
11"The suspect veered left, heading"
12"Quinn's heart pounded in her"
13"The entrance to the abandoned"
14"The suspect disappeared inside, and"
15"She knew the stories about"
16"It was dangerous territory, but"
17"She plunged into the darkness,"
18"The air grew colder, the"
19"She reached into her pocket,"
ratio0.938
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Before she could ask more"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She knew the stories about the Veil Market, the hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Tomás insisted, his voice hard"
1"Quinn said, her voice steady"
2"the suspect continued, their voice urgent"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"Tomás demanded (demand)"
2"Tomás insisted (insist)"
3"they pleaded (plead)"
4"the suspect continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.476
75.3752%