| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 63.34% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 682 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 682 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "amidst" | | 8 | "otherworldly" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "gleaming" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "tracing" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "footsteps" | | 18 | "scanning" | | 19 | "sentinel" | | 20 | "wavered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 30 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 30 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 677 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 592 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Veil | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Realms | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Earth" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.824 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "vibration that seemed to attune itself to her very heartbeat" | | 1 | "impressions that seemed to fill with a soft, emerald green glow" | | 2 | "It was as if the very world was watching them, waiting to see if they would take the next step, into the heart of the unknown" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 677 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 39.82 | | std | 17.53 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 31 |
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| 70.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | | 0 | "was filtered" | | 1 | "was said" | | 2 | "been drawn" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 597 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.02847571189279732 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018425460636515914 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 35 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 35 | | mean | 19.34 | | std | 8.66 | | cv | 0.447 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 31 |
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| 61.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.37142857142857144 | | totalSentences | 35 | | uniqueOpeners | 13 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 1 | "She felt it, a vibration" | | 2 | "She felt the pulse of" | | 3 | "she whispered, her voice threaded" | | 4 | "She had always been drawn" | | 5 | "It was as if the" | | 6 | "she asked, her hand on" | | 7 | "they whispered, their voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | | 0 | "The air clung to Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde's words still lingered in" | | 2 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 3 | "Rory's gaze roved over the" | | 4 | "A faint hum, almost imperceptible," | | 5 | "She felt it, a vibration" | | 6 | "The three of them, including" | | 7 | "Rory's fingers instinctively sought out" | | 8 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender" | | 9 | "Rory's boots sank into the" | | 10 | "She felt the pulse of" | | 11 | "Nyx said, their voice a" | | 12 | "Rory's hand instinctively rose to" | | 13 | "A portal, hidden from mortal" | | 14 | "Rory asked, her voice barely" | | 15 | "The Half-Fae seer's gaze drifted" | | 16 | "she whispered, her voice threaded" | | 17 | "Rory's grip on the Fae" | | 18 | "The Veil, that metaphysical barrier" | | 19 | "She had always been drawn" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 30 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, Nyx drifted" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's gaze roved over the clearing, drinking in the wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their colors vibrant and yet, oddly muted, as if the light itself was …" | | 1 | "She felt it, a vibration that seemed to attune itself to her very heartbeat." | | 2 | "The three of them, including Isolde, who glided across the clearing with an ethereal grace, her silver hair rippling behind her like a river of moonlight, forme…" | | 3 | "Rory's boots sank into the soft earth, leaving faint impressions that seemed to fill with a soft, emerald green glow." | | 4 | "A portal, hidden from mortal eyes, seemed to be drawing her closer, its power calling to her like a siren's song." | | 5 | "The silence that followed was oppressive, punctuated only by the soft hum of the land and the quiet crunch of their footsteps on the strange, glowing earth." | | 6 | "It was as if the very world was watching them, waiting to see if they would take the next step, into the heart of the unknown." | | 7 | "Rory's head snapped toward the shade, her eyes scanning the surroundings, but she saw nothing, only the endless, rolling hills of wildflowers, and the ancient, …" | | 8 | "As one, the three of them turned toward the unknown, their footsteps slowing, as if hesitant to take the next step, into the heart of the threshold, and whateve…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice a mere zephyr on the wind" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with an inner light" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their voice a mere whisper," | | 3 | "Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |