| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 84.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 941 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 941 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tension" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "unravel" | | 5 | "resolve" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "tinged" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "treacherous" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "sense of" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "anticipation" | | 19 | "pounding" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" | | 1 | "a spark of anger" | | 2 | "A flicker of hope" |
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| 71.81% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "a spark of anger" | | 1 | "A flicker of hope" | | 2 | "g with anticipation" |
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| 21.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 945 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 823 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.832 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed chiselled from the shadows themselves" | | 1 | "urgency that seemed to unravel her resolve thread by thread" | | 2 | "spark that seemed to leap from her skin to his, igniting a fire that had never truly gone out" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 945 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 96.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 36.35 | | std | 17.67 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 55 | | 25 | 56 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "was racing" | | 1 | "was taking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's fingers froze on the spine of the book she'd been about to shelve, her eyes fixed on the peephole of Eva's front door as the knock came again – louder, this time, and more insistent." | | 1 | "She knew she shouldn't let him in – knew it with every fibre of her being." | | 2 | "Rory's skin prickled with awareness, every cell remembering the way he used to make her feel – like the only person in the world who mattered." | | 3 | "\"You've been busy,\" he observed, his voice tinged with a mixture of amusement and something deeper – something almost like longing." | | 4 | "She knew she shouldn't – knew that accepting anything from Lucien would be a betrayal of herself, of her own strength and resilience." | | 5 | "But as she met his gaze, she saw something there that gave her the courage to take the leap – a glimmer of a chance, perhaps, or a promise of redemption." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 820 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "wry, self-deprecating smile" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.02804878048780488 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007317073170731708 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 16.29 | | std | 7.27 | | cv | 0.446 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 62.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.39655172413793105 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been expecting a delivery" | | 1 | "She checked the peephole again," | | 2 | "Her stomach executed a perfect" | | 3 | "he said, low and smooth" | | 4 | "She opened the door a" | | 5 | "His eyes crinkled at the" | | 6 | "She knew she shouldn't let" | | 7 | "she said finally, stepping back" | | 8 | "His gaze lingered on the" | | 9 | "he observed, his voice tinged" | | 10 | "She laughed, a sound that" | | 11 | "His eyes flashed, a spark" | | 12 | "he said, his voice low," | | 13 | "She knew she shouldn't –" | | 14 | "she said, the words barely" | | 15 | "She knew that she was" |
| | ratio | 0.34 | |
| 45.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's fingers froze on the" | | 1 | "She'd been expecting a delivery" | | 2 | "Ptolemy, sensing her tension, rubbed" | | 3 | "Rory's mind skipped over the" | | 4 | "She checked the peephole again," | | 5 | "The figure on the other" | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau's eyes gleamed like" | | 7 | "Her stomach executed a perfect" | | 8 | "Rory's fingers hesitated on the" | | 9 | "he said, low and smooth" | | 10 | "She opened the door a" | | 11 | "His eyes crinkled at the" | | 12 | "Rory's grip on the door" | | 13 | "She knew she shouldn't let" | | 14 | "she said finally, stepping back" | | 15 | "Rory's skin prickled with awareness," | | 16 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 17 | "Lucien's eyes scanned the room," | | 18 | "His gaze lingered on the" | | 19 | "he observed, his voice tinged" |
| | ratio | 0.83 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the man standing on" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure on the other side was a study in contrasts: platinum-blond hair slicked back to reveal a face that seemed chiselled from the shadows themselves." | | 1 | "His eyes crinkled at the corners as he smiled, a wry, self-deprecating smile that hinted at the thousand unresolved issues between them." | | 2 | "Yet, the man standing on her threshold exuded a quiet, desperate urgency that seemed to unravel her resolve thread by thread." | | 3 | "Lucien's eyes scanned the room, taking in the scattered papers and books that had become her life since she'd fled Cardiff." | | 4 | "Ptolemy, sensing the tension, wove between Rory's legs, his tail twitching like a metronome." | | 5 | "Rory's heart was racing now, her palms itching to reach out, to take the package and unwrap it, to uncover the secrets hidden within." | | 6 | "But as she looked into his eyes, she saw something there, something that gave her pause." | | 7 | "But as she met his gaze, she saw something there that gave her the courage to take the leap – a glimmer of a chance, perhaps, or a promise of redemption." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice low, his eyes never leaving hers" | | 1 | "she said, the words barely above a whisper" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |