Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRCTPF0GA7YHH3E4SCVFTK

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.000871
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's fingers froze on the spine of the book she'd been about to shelve, her eyes fixed on the peephole of Eva's front door as the knock came again – louder, this time, and more insistent. She'd been expecting a delivery of texts from the university library, but the knock didn't sound like the usual courier. Ptolemy, sensing her tension, rubbed against her leg with a soothing purr. Rory's mind skipped over the possibilities as she made her way to the door. She checked the peephole again, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itching as she did. The figure on the other side was a study in contrasts: platinum-blond hair slicked back to reveal a face that seemed chiselled from the shadows themselves. Lucien Moreau's eyes gleamed like lanterns in the dark, his gaze steady as he met hers. Her stomach executed a perfect dive, all memories of the past flooding back in an unwelcome rush. Rory's fingers hesitated on the latch, the security deadbolts seeming woefully inadequate against the storm brewing behind Lucien's gaze. "Rory," he said, low and smooth as silk, his voice weaving a spell she'd thought she'd long broken free of. "We need to talk." She opened the door a crack, wary, her hand on the frame a deliberate barrier. "What do you want, Lucien?" His eyes crinkled at the corners as he smiled, a wry, self-deprecating smile that hinted at the thousand unresolved issues between them. "Can I come in? Please?" Rory's grip on the door tightened, her mind a battleground of conflicting desires. She knew she shouldn't let him in – knew it with every fibre of her being. Yet, the man standing on her threshold exuded a quiet, desperate urgency that seemed to unravel her resolve thread by thread. "Fine," she said finally, stepping back to allow him entry. As Lucien passed her, the air was filled with the scent of expensive cologne and the soft rustle of his charcoal suit. Rory's skin prickled with awareness, every cell remembering the way he used to make her feel – like the only person in the world who mattered. The door clicked shut behind him, the sound echoing through the flat like a portent. Lucien's eyes scanned the room, taking in the scattered papers and books that had become her life since she'd fled Cardiff. His gaze lingered on the research notes covering every available surface, a flicker of curiosity dancing across his features. "You've been busy," he observed, his voice tinged with a mixture of amusement and something deeper – something almost like longing. Rory shrugged, trying to appear nonchalant despite the turmoil brewing inside. "I've had a lot to catch up on." The air was heavy with unspoken words, the silence between them thick and treacherous. Ptolemy, sensing the tension, wove between Rory's legs, his tail twitching like a metronome. Lucien took a step closer, his movements fluid, economical. "I know I shouldn't have come here, Rory. But I had to see you. To explain." Rory's heart stuttered, her palms growing slick with sweat. "Explain what?" A tiny muscle in his jaw twitched, a betrayal of the emotion he kept tightly leashed. "What happened between us. Why I left." She laughed, a sound that came out sharp and brittle. "Oh, I think I have a pretty good idea. You got what you wanted, and then you left. That's what you do, Lucien – you use people, and then you discard them." His eyes flashed, a spark of anger igniting in their depths. For a moment, Rory thought he might lash out, his mask of calm slipping to reveal the inferno beneath. But then, with a quiet, deliberate movement, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, slim package wrapped in brown paper. "I brought this for you," he said, his voice low, his eyes never leaving hers. "I know it won't make up for what I did, but I want you to have it." Rory's heart was racing now, her palms itching to reach out, to take the package and unwrap it, to uncover the secrets hidden within. She knew she shouldn't – knew that accepting anything from Lucien would be a betrayal of herself, of her own strength and resilience. But as she looked into his eyes, she saw something there, something that gave her pause. A flicker of hope, perhaps, or a glimmer of redemption. Whatever it was, it reached deep into her chest, grasping for the heart she'd thought she'd long protected. With a sense of inevitability, Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against Lucien's as she took the package. The touch sent a jolt of electricity through her, a spark that seemed to leap from her skin to his, igniting a fire that had never truly gone out. "I'll listen," she said, the words barely above a whisper. "But that's all I'm promising." Lucien's face twisted into a wry, sad smile. "I wouldn't expect anything more, Rory. Not from you." As he spoke, the shadows in the room seemed to deepen, the air thickening with anticipation. Rory's fingers wrapped around the package, her heart pounding in her chest like a drum. She knew that she was taking a risk, that opening herself up to Lucien again might be the most foolish thing she'd ever done. But as she met his gaze, she saw something there that gave her the courage to take the leap – a glimmer of a chance, perhaps, or a promise of redemption. Whatever it was, it was enough to make her take the first step into the unknown, to see where this treacherous, twisted path might lead.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:51:09.395Z" 2/19/2026, 10:51:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
84.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"truly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"tension"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"unravel"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"dancing"
count1
10
word"tinged"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"treacherous"
count2
14
word"depths"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
19
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"stomach"
2"perfect"
3"silk"
4"unravel"
5"resolve"
6"echoing"
7"scanned"
8"flicker"
9"dancing"
10"tinged"
11"unspoken"
12"silence"
13"treacherous"
14"depths"
15"racing"
16"sense of"
17"whisper"
18"anticipation"
19"pounding"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count2
highlights
0"The air was heavy with"
1"a spark of anger"
2"A flicker of hope"
71.81% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences47
matches
0"a spark of anger"
1"A flicker of hope"
2"g with anticipation"
21.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences47
filterMatches
0"feel –"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords945
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount823
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.34
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Moreau1
Lucien9
Cardiff1
Rory11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.832
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed chiselled from the shadows themselves"
1"urgency that seemed to unravel her resolve thread by thread"
2"spark that seemed to leap from her skin to his, igniting a fire that had never truly gone out"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount945
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"knew that she"
96.04% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean36.35
std17.67
cv0.486
sampleLengths
068
172
236
324
420
527
650
710
863
940
1021
1119
1228
1325
1411
1523
1642
1753
1832
1947
2044
2147
2215
2317
2455
2556
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"was filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was racing"
1"was taking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences58
ratio0.103
matches
0"Aurora's fingers froze on the spine of the book she'd been about to shelve, her eyes fixed on the peephole of Eva's front door as the knock came again – louder, this time, and more insistent."
1"She knew she shouldn't let him in – knew it with every fibre of her being."
2"Rory's skin prickled with awareness, every cell remembering the way he used to make her feel – like the only person in the world who mattered."
3"\"You've been busy,\" he observed, his voice tinged with a mixture of amusement and something deeper – something almost like longing."
4"She knew she shouldn't – knew that accepting anything from Lucien would be a betrayal of herself, of her own strength and resilience."
5"But as she met his gaze, she saw something there that gave her the courage to take the leap – a glimmer of a chance, perhaps, or a promise of redemption."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount820
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"wry, self-deprecating smile"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02804878048780488
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007317073170731708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean16.29
std7.27
cv0.446
sampleLengths
036
120
212
314
416
526
616
717
819
920
104
1115
125
1322
145
1513
1616
1721
1810
1922
2026
2115
2221
2319
2421
2511
268
2714
2814
299
3016
319
322
3316
347
3510
3632
3711
3819
3923
4015
4117
4224
4323
4416
4510
4618
4718
4829
4910
62.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.39655172413793105
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences47
matches
0"She'd been expecting a delivery"
1"She checked the peephole again,"
2"Her stomach executed a perfect"
3"he said, low and smooth"
4"She opened the door a"
5"His eyes crinkled at the"
6"She knew she shouldn't let"
7"she said finally, stepping back"
8"His gaze lingered on the"
9"he observed, his voice tinged"
10"She laughed, a sound that"
11"His eyes flashed, a spark"
12"he said, his voice low,"
13"She knew she shouldn't –"
14"she said, the words barely"
15"She knew that she was"
ratio0.34
45.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences47
matches
0"Aurora's fingers froze on the"
1"She'd been expecting a delivery"
2"Ptolemy, sensing her tension, rubbed"
3"Rory's mind skipped over the"
4"She checked the peephole again,"
5"The figure on the other"
6"Lucien Moreau's eyes gleamed like"
7"Her stomach executed a perfect"
8"Rory's fingers hesitated on the"
9"he said, low and smooth"
10"She opened the door a"
11"His eyes crinkled at the"
12"Rory's grip on the door"
13"She knew she shouldn't let"
14"she said finally, stepping back"
15"Rory's skin prickled with awareness,"
16"The door clicked shut behind"
17"Lucien's eyes scanned the room,"
18"His gaze lingered on the"
19"he observed, his voice tinged"
ratio0.83
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Yet, the man standing on"
ratio0.021
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The figure on the other side was a study in contrasts: platinum-blond hair slicked back to reveal a face that seemed chiselled from the shadows themselves."
1"His eyes crinkled at the corners as he smiled, a wry, self-deprecating smile that hinted at the thousand unresolved issues between them."
2"Yet, the man standing on her threshold exuded a quiet, desperate urgency that seemed to unravel her resolve thread by thread."
3"Lucien's eyes scanned the room, taking in the scattered papers and books that had become her life since she'd fled Cardiff."
4"Ptolemy, sensing the tension, wove between Rory's legs, his tail twitching like a metronome."
5"Rory's heart was racing now, her palms itching to reach out, to take the package and unwrap it, to uncover the secrets hidden within."
6"But as she looked into his eyes, she saw something there, something that gave her pause."
7"But as she met his gaze, she saw something there that gave her the courage to take the leap – a glimmer of a chance, perhaps, or a promise of redemption."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice low, his eyes never leaving hers"
1"she said, the words barely above a whisper"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
67.8524%