| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsms | 43 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "spectral" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "beacon" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "desire" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "sentinels" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "profound" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "resolve" | | 17 | "tracing" | | 18 | "delved" | | 19 | "gloom" | | 20 | "pounding" | | 21 | "treacherous" | | 22 | "foreboding" | | 23 | "maw" | | 24 | "echoes" | | 25 | "echoed" | | 26 | "sinister" | | 27 | "dances" | | 28 | "throbbed" | | 29 | "unravel" | | 30 | "steeled" | | 31 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1067 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Ahead | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Silence" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a vaulted ceiling above her h" | | 1 | "as if challenging her to acknowledge its presence" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.903 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | | 0 | "not just to see, but to hear, to sense anything beyond her pounding pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.91% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 36.9 | | std | 16.37 | | cv | 0.444 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.164 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant—a gift from a mysterious benefactor—had started pulsing again, a muted rhythm she'd gradually come to recognize as a beacon rather than a mere trinket." | | 1 | "She glanced to the side, but there was nothing—only shadows that seemed to swell and recede with every languid heart pulse." | | 2 | "Then, a noise—the crunch of foliage underfoot not her own." | | 3 | "The noise remained; insidious, persistent, trailing her pause as if challenging her to acknowledge its presence." | | 4 | "For several stretched moments, the air remained queasy with the absence of recognizable sound, save her footfalls—a metronome pacing the throbbing pendant." | | 5 | "And then again—movement." | | 6 | "Rory's breath caught; pupils wide, they delved into the impenetrable gloom." | | 7 | "Then—murmurations carried by the spectral zephyr eddied round her, recognizable yet unfamiliar." | | 8 | "The grove responded; a breeze snapped to life, slicing through the meadow like a spoken incantation, stirring the heavy air to tremble under its whispered weight." | | 9 | "It was then the wind shifted, bringing with it a scent foreign yet painful in its familiarity—Evan's cologne, an aromatic betrayal borne by the breeze." | | 10 | "Mystery lingered thick—impossible to ignore but with renewed purpose, she pushed past the manifold manifestations." | | 11 | "Her near-panic faded with each step toward the standing stones, resilient determination igniting with the pulse of the Heartstone Pendant—a stubborn beacon amid the Grove's mischievous illusions." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 203 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.03940886699507389 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019704433497536946 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 92.25% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 15.16 | | std | 5.77 | | cv | 0.381 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 83.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5068493150684932 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 93.90% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a noise—the crunch of" | | 1 | "Then—murmurations carried by the spectral" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 96.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come alone to" | | 1 | "she whispered, more to hear" | | 2 | "Their surfaces twisted like gnarled" | | 3 | "She exhaled, staving off the" | | 4 | "She glanced to the side," | | 5 | "Her soles pressed on soft," | | 6 | "It thickened with a silence" | | 7 | "She squinted through the dimness" | | 8 | "She stopped, every muscle taut," | | 9 | "she murmured into the expectant" | | 10 | "She chose the left path," | | 11 | "She waited, willing herself not" | | 12 | "She thrust herself into its" | | 13 | "She turned, rounding on the" | | 14 | "Her voice echoed, a lone" | | 15 | "It throbbed a steadfast rhythm," | | 16 | "She took a resolute step" | | 17 | "It was then the wind" | | 18 | "she seethed between gasps, staring" | | 19 | "She knew now, reason and" |
| | ratio | 0.31 | |
| 93.80% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The silvery moonlight slipped through" | | 1 | "Wildflowers, aglow in shades that" | | 2 | "Rory tightened her grip around" | | 3 | "She had come alone to" | | 4 | "The pendant—a gift from a" | | 5 | "Reassurance in crimson and silver" | | 6 | "she whispered, more to hear" | | 7 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 8 | "Their surfaces twisted like gnarled" | | 9 | "A gust of wind, unexpected" | | 10 | "Rory paused, her breath clouding" | | 11 | "The rustling leaves whispered secrets" | | 12 | "She exhaled, staving off the" | | 13 | "Shadows shifted at the edge" | | 14 | "She glanced to the side," | | 15 | "Her soles pressed on soft," | | 16 | "It thickened with a silence" | | 17 | "She squinted through the dimness" | | 18 | "Rory's heart performed an unsteady" | | 19 | "She stopped, every muscle taut," |
| | ratio | 0.732 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "To her hyper-attuned senses, they" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Reassurance in crimson and silver swung lightly around her throat, but tonight, the pulse felt different, frenetic, as if in warning." | | 1 | "The noise remained; insidious, persistent, trailing her pause as if challenging her to acknowledge its presence." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, but her whisper carried no conviction" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |