Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRD1JMHG4QQVZSPWA13W1H

Run Details

Duration:
1m 48s
Cost:
$0.000473
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The full moon hung low over Richmond Park, casting eerie shadows across the gnarled oak trees. Aurora shivered and pulled her jacket tighter, the crisp autumn air raising goosebumps on her arms. She glanced at her watch - 2:17 AM. Damn, she was cutting it close. If she didn't find the standing stones and make it back to the flat before sunrise, Silas would have her hide. She quickened her pace along the trail, boots crunching on fallen leaves. The park was silent except for the distant hoot of an owl. Rory scanned the tree line, searching for the ancient stone circle that marked the entrance to the Fae Grove. According to the old maps she'd pored over, it should be right around this bend... There. Eight towering oak trunks, their bark etched with runes older than England itself. Rory approached the stones on trembling legs. Eighth-century druids believed this gateway linked Earth to the realm of the Fae. Local folklore whispered of mortals who ventured inside, never to return. But she had no choice. The homeless man's final words echoed in her mind: "Seek the Heartstone in the Fae Grove, girl. It's your birthright." He'd tossed her the crimson pendant before collapsing into a fit of coughing. Rory took a deep breath and stepped between the rune-carved oaks. Instantly, the air shimmered and popped. Her ears rang. When her vision cleared, the forest looked...different. Overripe. Bulbous flowers and twisted vines choked every surface, glowing an uncanny shade of green. The scent of rotting honey suffocated her. "Shit," Rory breathed, stepping deeper into the clearing. "What have I gotten myself into?" A twig snapped behind her. She whirled around, heart pounding. "H-hello?" Only the whisper of leaves replied. She was alone. Wasn't she? Rory squared her shoulders and ventured further into the grove's heart, the Heartstone pendant clutched in her fist. Another crunch of leaves. She stopped, listening hard. There it was again, off to her left. Footsteps, slowly circling her position. Fear710928副本1.png13年5月26日 She backed up until her spine hit rough bark, dizzy with vertigo. That was no forest sound. It had a predatory quality, deliberate. "W-who's there?" Her voice shook. More silence. Then, a hushed rustling. Rory's eyes widened in horror as she registered the source - figures emerging from the woods. Tall. Gaunt. Grey skinned. Eleven in total, surrounding her, trapping her against the tree. "Oh God," Rory whimpered, cowering. "P-please..." The circle closed in. One extended a thin hand, its long nail black with grime. Rory shrieked and scrambled away, but strong fingers closed around her neck, lifting her by the throat. "Found you," it rasped, fetid breath hot on her face. Those eyes, white as milk, narrowed. "Ours now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount456
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount456
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"quickened"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"uncanny"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"quickened"
1"scanned"
2"etched"
3"echoed"
4"shimmered"
5"uncanny"
6"pounding"
7"whisper"
8"footsteps"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences51
matches
0"d in horror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"watch "
hedgeMatches(empty)
90.68% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0.019
matches
0"Fear710928副本1.png13年5月26日 She backed up until her spine hit rough bark, dizzy with vertigo."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords453
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount425
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Silas1
Fae2
Grove1
England1
Earth1
Heartstone1
Rory8
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"England"
globalScore0.559
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount453
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean32.36
std18.38
cv0.568
sampleLengths
067
158
245
338
449
514
622
739
81
928
1036
116
1232
1318
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs88
matches
0"was cutting"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences54
ratio0.037
matches
0"She glanced at her watch - 2:17 AM."
1"Rory's eyes widened in horror as she registered the source - figures emerging from the woods."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount425
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.021176470588235293
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.007058823529411765
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean8.39
std6.23
cv0.743
sampleLengths
016
116
28
36
421
512
612
719
815
91
1013
117
1213
1311
145
1533
1611
176
183
197
201
2114
227
238
246
255
265
277
283
292
3018
314
324
338
345
3513
365
376
385
392
404
4116
421
431
442
4510
465
471
484
4911
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.7407407407407407
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences44
matches
0"Instantly, the air shimmered and"
1"Only the whisper of leaves"
2"Then, a hushed rustling."
ratio0.068
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences44
matches
0"She glanced at her watch"
1"She quickened her pace along"
2"Her ears rang."
3"She whirled around, heart pounding."
4"She was alone."
5"She stopped, listening hard."
6"It had a predatory quality,"
7"Her voice shook"
8"it rasped, fetid breath hot"
ratio0.205
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences44
matches
0"The full moon hung low"
1"Aurora shivered and pulled her"
2"She glanced at her watch"
3"She quickened her pace along"
4"The park was silent except"
5"Rory scanned the tree line,"
6"Rory approached the stones on"
7"The homeless man's final words"
8"Rory took a deep breath"
9"Her ears rang."
10"The scent of rotting honey"
11"Rory breathed, stepping deeper into"
12"A twig snapped behind her."
13"She whirled around, heart pounding."
14"She was alone."
15"Rory squared her shoulders and"
16"Another crunch of leaves."
17"She stopped, listening hard."
18"Footsteps, slowly circling her position."
19"Fear710928副本1.png13年5月26日 She backed up until"
ratio0.659
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences44
matches
0"If she didn't find the"
ratio0.023
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory scanned the tree line, searching for the ancient stone circle that marked the entrance to the Fae Grove."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"Rory whimpered (whimper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.444
89.0877%