Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRD231CY6FZ9AY59504RXJ

Run Details

Duration:
10.0s
Cost:
$0.000282

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered weakly against the rain-slicked pavement, its glow bleeding into the puddles like spilled ink. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, secrets, the faint metallic tang of a hundred unwashed glasses. Rory paused on the threshold, her breath fogging the cold air just for a second before she pushed the door open. The bar was quieter than she remembered. No laughter, no clinking glasses, just the low hum of a jukebox playing some forgotten jazz standard. She scanned the faces—most were strangers, but then again, she’d been gone long enough that even the regulars might not recognise her. The back corner was empty, the usual cluster of old men hunched over pints gone. The only occupied stool faced the bar, and the man sitting there turned his head slowly, as if he’d been waiting for someone. He was older. His hair had thinned, streaked with silver now, and his jaw was lined with years she hadn’t seen. But his eyes—those hazel eyes—were the same. Sharp. Calculating. The same way they’d always been. Rory hesitated. She could walk past. She could pretend she hadn’t noticed. But the way he looked at her, like he’d been holding his breath for years, made her chest tighten. She slid onto the stool beside him. Silence stretched between them, thick as the smoke curling from the bar’s ancient ashtray. The man exhaled first, slow and measured. “Took you long enough.” Rory’s fingers twitched around the edge of the stool. “Should’ve known you’d be here.” “Where else would I be?” She laughed, but it came out sharp. “Not in Cardiff. Not in some quiet bar in Soho.” His lips quirked, just for a second. “You always were good at pointing out the obvious.” She should’ve left it there. Should’ve let the past stay buried. But the words spilled out before she could stop them. “You look like hell.” The barman—some young kid with a nametag that read *JASON*—glanced over, then busied himself polishing a glass. Silas didn’t flinch. “And you look like you’ve been running from something.” Rory’s pulse jumped. She grabbed her water bottle from her bag, unscrewed the cap with more force than necessary. “I’m not running.” “No?” His voice was low, amused. “Then why the hell are you in London?” “Work.” “Delivering takeout?” She shot him a look. “I’m not *that* desperate.” “No?” He took a slow sip of his whiskey, watching her over the rim. “Then what are you doing here, Rory?” The name felt like a punch to the gut. She hadn’t let anyone call her that in years. Not since she’d left. Not since she’d burned the bridge behind her. “Same as always,” she said, voice steady. “Surviving.” He studied her for a long moment. Then, quietly: “You look tired.” She exhaled through her nose, a sound that wasn’t quite a laugh. “I’m fine.” “Liar.” The word hung between them, heavy as the silence. Rory’s fingers tightened around the bottle. She should’ve walked away then. Should’ve told him she didn’t have time for this, for the ghosts, for the way his gaze still held the same heat it always had. But she didn’t. “You always were good at reading people,” she said instead. His smile was faint, almost sad. “And you were always too stubborn to listen.” The barman cleared his throat, interrupting the moment. “Can I get you two anything?” Rory shook her head. “No, thanks.” Silas turned to the kid. “Another whiskey. Neat.” Jason nodded, already reaching for the bottle. Rory watched the way Silas’s hand rested on the bar, the silver ring on his right ring finger catching the dim light. She hadn’t seen it in years. Hadn’t known he’d ever wear it again. “You still running that network of yours?” she asked, voice flat. He didn’t look up from his glass. “What network?” “Don’t play coy with me, Silas.” His gaze finally lifted, sharp as ever. “You really want to go down that road?” She met his eyes. “I want to know if you’re still the same man who used to tell me everything would work out.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. “And did it?” She swallowed. “Not yet.” The word hung between them, raw and unguarded. Silas exhaled, slow and deliberate, like he was choosing his next words carefully. “You always did have a way with words.” She barked out a laugh, bitter and dry. “Spare me the compliments.” “No compliments.” His voice dropped, rougher now. “Just the truth. You look like you’re one bad decision away from breaking.” Rory’s breath hitched. She hadn’t let anyone see her like this in years. Not since— She cut it off. “I’m not.” “No?” He leaned forward just slightly, the movement subtle but deliberate. “Then why do you keep looking over your shoulder?” The question was a blade. She flinched. “Because some people don’t change,” she said, voice tight. “And some debts don’t get paid.” Silas’s expression darkened. “You’re talking about Evan.” She didn’t deny it. “You should’ve told me.” She laughed again, but this time it was hollow. “You were gone. You left.” “And you left *me*.” The words struck like a punch. Rory’s fingers dug into the edge of the stool. “I had to.” “Because of him?” She didn’t answer. Silas’s gaze darkened. “You think I don’t know what he did to you?” “I don’t know what you know,” she said, voice low. “Enough.” His voice was a razor’s edge. “You think I didn’t see the way he looked at you? The way he *touched* you.” Rory’s skin prickled. She hadn’t thought about that night in years. Hadn’t let herself. “It was a long time ago,” she said, but her voice wavered. “And you think I forgot?” She looked away, at the flickering neon sign outside, at the rain streaking down the window. “I didn’t come here to relive the past.” “Then why are you here?” She met his eyes again. “Because I needed to see you.” Silas studied her, his gaze searching. Then, quietly: “You always did have a way with words.” She shot him a glare. “Don’t.” “No flattery.” He took another sip of his whiskey. “Just the truth. You look like you’re holding your breath.” She exhaled sharply. “I’m fine.” “No,” he said, voice firm. “You’re not.” The barman returned with Silas’s drink, setting it down with a soft *clink*. Rory watched the condensation form on the glass, the way the light caught the amber liquid inside. “You always were good at reading people,” she said, voice flat. Silas’s lips twitched. “And you were always too stubborn to listen.” She looked away, at the empty bottles lined up on the shelf behind the bar. At the old photographs pinned to the wall—faces she didn’t recognise, people who weren’t here anymore. “What happened to you?” she asked, voice barely above a whisper. Silas’s expression darkened. “What do you mean?” “You’re not the same man I remember.” He studied her for a long moment. Then, quietly: “I got older.” “No.” She shook her head. “You got harder.” Silas’s gaze didn’t waver. “Some things can’t be undone.” Rory’s breath caught. She hadn’t realised until that moment how much she’d been holding onto the past. How much she’d been waiting for him to say something—anything—that would make it all go away. But it wouldn’t. She stood abruptly, her stool scraping against the floor. “I should go.” Silas didn’t stop her. Didn’t try to talk her into staying. She walked out into the rain, the cold air hitting her like a slap. She didn’t look back.
total_cost0.00028170000000000007

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.384
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.027
76.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
4"sharply"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"calculating"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"standard"
2"scanned"
3"calculating"
4"silence"
5"measured"
6"pulse"
7"wavered"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords8
totalWords1271
ratio0.006
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"JASON"
2"that"
3"me"
4"touched"
5"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount908
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Silas12
Rory12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.839
windowScore0.667
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a punch to the gut"
1"quite a laugh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1271
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean14.95
std13.03
cv0.872
sampleLengths
064
184
236
331
47
521
64
714
85
917
1016
1125
1229
1322
1414
151
162
179
1821
1930
208
2112
2214
231
2448
2510
2614
2714
286
298
307
3135
3211
339
346
3515
3623
379
384
3921
408
4112
4220
4315
446
4520
467
4715
487
494
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"been gone"
1"was lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was choosing"
25.21% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences170
ratio0.041
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, secrets, the faint metallic tang of a hundred unwashed glasses."
1"She scanned the faces—most were strangers, but then again, she’d been gone long enough that even the regulars might not recognise her."
2"But his eyes—those hazel eyes—were the same."
3"The barman—some young kid with a nametag that read *JASON*—glanced over, then busied himself polishing a glass."
4"Not since—"
5"At the old photographs pinned to the wall—faces she didn’t recognise, people who weren’t here anymore."
6"How much she’d been waiting for him to say something—anything—that would make it all go away."
91.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount917
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.05016357688113413
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.013086150490730643
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean7.48
std5.15
cv0.689
sampleLengths
023
120
221
37
417
522
615
723
83
918
107
111
121
136
142
154
166
1719
187
1914
207
214
229
235
245
257
2610
277
289
295
306
3110
324
3317
343
359
363
3716
383
396
408
411
422
435
444
4514
467
479
489
494
47.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2411764705882353
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
21.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences107
matches
0"She scanned the faces—most were"
1"He was older."
2"His hair had thinned, streaked"
3"She could walk past."
4"She could pretend she hadn’t"
5"She slid onto the stool"
6"She laughed, but it came"
7"His lips quirked, just for"
8"She should’ve left it there."
9"She grabbed her water bottle"
10"His voice was low, amused"
11"She shot him a look."
12"He took a slow sip"
13"She hadn’t let anyone call"
14"she said, voice steady"
15"He studied her for a"
16"She exhaled through her nose,"
17"She should’ve walked away then."
18"she said instead"
19"His smile was faint, almost"
ratio0.495
34.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences107
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory paused on the threshold,"
2"The bar was quieter than"
3"She scanned the faces—most were"
4"The back corner was empty,"
5"The only occupied stool faced"
6"He was older."
7"His hair had thinned, streaked"
8"The same way they’d always"
9"She could walk past."
10"She could pretend she hadn’t"
11"She slid onto the stool"
12"Silence stretched between them, thick"
13"The man exhaled first, slow"
14"Rory’s fingers twitched around the"
15"She laughed, but it came"
16"His lips quirked, just for"
17"She should’ve left it there."
18"The barman—some young kid with"
19"Silas didn’t flinch."
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The barman—some young kid with a nametag that read *JASON*—glanced over, then busied himself polishing a glass."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she said, voice steady"
1"she asked, voice flat"
2"she said, voice tight"
3"she said, voice low"
4"she said, but her voice wavered"
5"he said, voice firm"
6"she said, voice flat"
7"she asked, voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.123
leniency0.247
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.6074%