Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRD5EQNJ8YJ89N6VVFDTA2

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.017053
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora eased the door open. Lamplight spilled into the narrow hallway. She froze. Lucien waited on the threshold. His tailored charcoal suit cut a sharp silhouette against the glow. The ivory handle of his cane caught the light, its blade hidden but hinted at in that still, knowing posture. She took a breath. Her wrist brushed the crescent scar, a pulse skipping down her forearm. The door swung wider. He stepped in. Rory’s cheeks tightened. She crossed her arms, scuffing her sneaker against the rug. Ptolemy, the tabby from next door, slipped past Lucien’s cane and curled at Aurora’s feet. No greeting. No “I’m sorry” ready on his lips. He just looked at her—one amber eye soft, the other black as midnight. “I didn’t expect—” She cut off. Words packed too tight, rattling in her throat. Rain tapped the window behind him. The city murmured beyond the thin walls. His shoulders stiffened. “I know.” He set the cane by the doorframe. Hands folded. She stepped back, offering him a view of the cramped living room. Every shelf strained under books, each surface stashed with notebooks and scraps of arcane symbols. Aurora’s world. Her refuge after Evan. He glanced around, lips smoothing into a practised curve. “Still diving into demonology?” He tilted his head toward a stack of yellowed scrolls. Her pulse quickened. “Research never sleeps.” He inhaled, a tidy breath that barely stirred his hair. “I came for help.” The words landed like stones. She glanced at the scar, guilt flaring. They both remembered the last time he’d asked for her help—only to vanish days later, leaving her with questions she’d spent sleepless nights trying to answer. She turned away. The glow from the bar sign downstairs painted her back orange. “You left.” His jaw clenched. He refused to wince. “I had to.” “Had to.” The echo tasted bitter. She clenched a notebook in her hand. Pages threatened to tear. Ptolemy mewed, arching into Aurora’s calf. She knelt, wrapping an arm around the cat’s smooth fur. He stared at Lucien as if judging the intruder. Lucien squared his shoulders. “I never stopped—” “You never started.” She rose, shifting her weight. She kept her voice even, but it cut through the hush. “You came for help. You dragged me into your world. Then you walked away.” Light from the street glinted off the cane’s ivory handle. He closed his eyes. A breath. “I couldn’t tell you.” Her spine curved. “That’s your answer? A half-truth?” She stalked past a teetering stack of books. Her hand brushed a tome on infernal pacts. He followed her path. “I had to protect you.” She snorted. “Protection from what? Your secrets? Your lies?” He slowed, swallowing the sting. “From Margrave Viaire.” She halted, heart pounding. His cane tapped the floor once. Then again. “Viaire’s hunting me,” he said. “Now he’s hunting you.” She stared at him. A tremor shook her jaw. “Why?” He glanced at the door. The corridor lay dark. No footsteps. No sign of watchers. Then back at her. “Because I left a trail.” She stepped closer, jolted. His scent—smoke and mint—sent a spark through her chest. “You think I’d ask if this weren’t serious?” His amber eye glinted. “He found my ledger. Names of every soul I’ve helped. Yours on the top.” She pressed a hand to her chest. “You’re a demon. You broker deals. People die.” He looked away. “I save more than I break. I came because you’re the only one who can find the counter-ritual.” Her breath caught. The ancient rite she’d studied for months, hidden in Eva’s library of scrolls. He knew she’d uncovered it. “You read my notes.” His gaze iced. “Your words. Your scars. I recognized the ritual when I saw the symbol by your window.” She closed her eyes, anger mixing with adrenaline. “You watched me. Stalked me.” He stepped forward until the fronts of their bodies almost touched. “I watched because I was afraid for you.” Her nails dug into the notebook. Pages crumpled. “Afraid for me or afraid for yourself?” He hesitated. Everything in his posture shifted. “Both.” Silence settled. The rain hammered harder, thunder rattling the glass. Ptolemy hissed at the cane, yanking Aurora’s sleeve. Her shoulders slumped. She gathered the cat against her chest. “So you show up here. Expect I’ll drop everything.” He raised a hand. “I’m not asking forgiveness. Not yet.” He swallowed. “I need you.” She closed her eyes, forcing her pulse to slow. His plea echoed across the cramped space. She sensed the gravity, the stakes that stretched beyond her door. Soft light pooled in the room. She let the notebook fall. Pages fanned on the floor. Walking to her desk, she dug between scrolls and laid a worn parchment on the wood. Circles and sigils spun across its surface, ink faded but legible. He crouched beside her. Their knees brushed. Heat blossomed where skin met fabric. “Counter-ritual to sever a demon’s trail,” she whispered. “You cautioned me it could erase every memory of this realm. I didn’t believe it.” He traced a symbol with a finger, lifting her gaze to his eyes. “It’s real.” She pressed her lips together. The ache between them twisted. “Why trust me now?” He stood, tension coiling his spine. “Because you trusted me before.” She jerked. Her heart tripped. “I trusted you once.” He closed the distance until their breaths tangled. “I’ll rebuild your trust. Piece by piece.” Her mind shot back to dimly lit nights, to his lips brushing hers, to the soft promises that shattered when he vanished in Marseille. She remembered the ache. Lightning flashed. For a heartbeat, his black eye gleamed like obsidian. Then shadow claimed it. She reached out. Fingers trembled as they hovered above his suit lapel. He didn’t flinch. “Help me finish this,” she said. “Or stay gone.” He angled his chin. “I’m not leaving.” Her jaw tightened. She grabbed the quill. Ink splattered as she rewrote lines, bones of the ritual shifting beneath her touch. He knelt beside the desk, depositing the cane against the leg. One amber eye studied her concentration. His presence wrapped around her shoulders, silent support. She paused, dipped quill in the ink well, then straightened. “You’ll chant the invocation. I’ll handle the binding.” He brushed a loose strand of hair behind her ear. Ink stained his finger. She froze. His finger lingered against her skin, warmth spreading. The world tightened to the tip of her quill and the warmth on her cheek. “Look at me,” he whispered. Voice low enough to scrape along her nerves. Her eyes flickered up. He swallowed, then slid a thumb across her cheek. Ink smudged the ridge of her scar. A tremor ran through her. She jerked her hand back, then caught his wrist before he could pull away. His skin was cool beneath hers. “I want you,” he breathed. “In every ritual. Every secret.” She swallowed. This time she let the words slip free. “Then prove it.” He inclined his head. “I will.” Rain rattled the windows. Ptolemy twined between their legs. The room held its breath. She dipped the quill again. Beneath her fingers, the parchment glowed faintly. The ritual took shape. Lines burned with promise and danger. His voice rose beside her as he read the invocation. Flat, powerful tones that vibrated in her chest. Her heart pounded in reply. Together they wove words older than London. When the last syllable faded, the parchment pulsed once, then stilled. A tremor shook the desk, cups rattled, and Ptolemy arched his back, fur bristling. Aurora looked up. Lucien’s amber eye shone with triumph—and something softer, something she hadn’t expected. He reached for her hand. Ink smeared between their fingers. She exhaled. “Now,” he said. “We finish the binding.” She nodded. Chest tight with adrenaline and something else—something like hope. She folded the parchment. He slid his cane aside. Together they moved toward the center of the room. Books and scrolls scattered like witnesses. She swallowed, lifted her voice. He matched her pitch. Their words joined, forging a circle of light that spiraled around them. The air heated. Shadows danced on the walls. Her hand brushed his wrist. He let her guide him. Their eyes locked. Every unspoken word pulsed between them. Every hurt, every longing. The ritual hummed in their throats. Step by step they wove the bond that would keep Viaire at bay. The final word fell from their lips. The circle flared, then vanished, leaving the room still but for their ragged breathing. Lucien’s palm pressed the small parchment to his chest. His eyes met hers. She looked away first. Breath rattled. Her heart pounded so loud she could almost hear it. He stepped closer, closing the gap. His voice softened. “Thank you.” She lifted her chin. “Don’t thank me yet.” He brushed ink from her cheek with the pad of his thumb. She shivered. “I won’t leave,” he said. Her breath caught. The scar on her wrist stung where his thumb had touched. Heat flared across her cheeks. She looked into both his eyes—amber and black—and found the answer she hadn’t known she was seeking. He leaned in. The question hung between them. She met him halfway. Their lips brushed. Fear and relief tangled in that single moment. She wrapped her arms around his neck, fingers tangling in his hair. He pressed her closer, the promise of his embrace warm in the sudden hush. Outside, the rain slowed to a whisper. Inside, they stood in the aftermath of magic and confession. Two souls bound by ritual, and something deeper still.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.255
leniency0.509
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1610
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1610
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count2
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count2
17
word"unspoken"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"aftermath"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"quickened"
2"jaw clenched"
3"echo"
4"weight"
5"pounding"
6"footsteps"
7"silence"
8"echoed"
9"traced"
10"tension"
11"shattered"
12"trembled"
13"warmth"
14"flickered"
15"vibrated"
16"pulsed"
17"unspoken"
18"whisper"
19"aftermath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences206
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences246
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1600
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1320
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.45
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien6
Aurora6
Words1
Evan1
Eva1
Marseille1
Voice1
London1
Ptolemy5
Viaire1
Pages3
Ink4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
2"Words"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
5"Voice"
6"Ptolemy"
7"Pages"
8"Ink"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if judging the intruder"
1"something like hope"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1600
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences246
matches(empty)
93.73% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs102
mean15.69
std7.5
cv0.478
sampleLengths
013
136
216
37
428
522
614
713
85
99
1033
119
1214
136
1414
1538
1616
1710
1817
1925
207
2133
2220
2324
249
259
268
2712
289
2910
3024
3113
3226
3315
3421
3525
3619
3713
3819
3915
408
4110
428
4319
4415
4527
4616
4727
4813
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs278
matches
0"was seeking"
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences246
ratio0.024
matches
0"He just looked at her—one amber eye soft, the other black as midnight."
1"They both remembered the last time he’d asked for her help—only to vanish days later, leaving her with questions she’d spent sleepless nights trying to answer."
2"His scent—smoke and mint—sent a spark through her chest."
3"Lucien’s amber eye shone with triumph—and something softer, something she hadn’t expected."
4"Chest tight with adrenaline and something else—something like hope."
5"She looked into both his eyes—amber and black—and found the answer she hadn’t known she was seeking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1328
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.02786144578313253
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0037650602409638554
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences246
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences246
mean6.5
std4.1
cv0.631
sampleLengths
05
16
22
35
411
520
64
712
84
93
103
1110
1215
132
147
1513
166
178
186
197
203
212
227
232
2412
2515
262
274
289
2914
303
313
3210
334
345
357
3626
373
3811
392
403
414
423
436
447
454
466
4710
489
494
47.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2967479674796748
totalSentences246
uniqueOpeners73
55.87% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences179
matches
0"Then back at her."
1"Then shadow claimed it."
2"Flat, powerful tones that vibrated"
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount103
totalSentences179
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit cut"
1"She took a breath."
2"Her wrist brushed the crescent"
3"He stepped in."
4"She crossed her arms, scuffing"
5"He just looked at her—one"
6"She cut off"
7"His shoulders stiffened."
8"He set the cane by"
9"She stepped back, offering him"
10"Her refuge after Evan."
11"He glanced around, lips smoothing"
12"He tilted his head toward"
13"Her pulse quickened."
14"He inhaled, a tidy breath"
15"She glanced at the scar,"
16"They both remembered the last"
17"She turned away."
18"His jaw clenched."
19"He refused to wince."
ratio0.575
18.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences179
matches
0"Aurora eased the door open."
1"Lamplight spilled into the narrow"
2"Lucien waited on the threshold."
3"His tailored charcoal suit cut"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"She took a breath."
6"Her wrist brushed the crescent"
7"The door swung wider."
8"He stepped in."
9"Rory’s cheeks tightened."
10"She crossed her arms, scuffing"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby from next"
12"He just looked at her—one"
13"She cut off"
14"Words packed too tight, rattling"
15"Rain tapped the window behind"
16"The city murmured beyond the"
17"His shoulders stiffened."
18"He set the cane by"
19"She stepped back, offering him"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences179
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She sensed the gravity, the stakes that stretched beyond her door."
1"Her mind shot back to dimly lit nights, to his lips brushing hers, to the soft promises that shattered when he vanished in Marseille."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
95.45% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.127
leniency0.255
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.109
83.5517%