| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 685 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 685 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 45 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.47% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 42 | | totalWords | 680 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "“You step into the light, and the dark follows.”" | | 1 | "door" | | 2 | "“A door that doesn’t stay open long.”" | | 3 | "“It’s not a creature. It’s a warning.”" | | 4 | "“You carry the hunger. The hunger for more.”" | | 5 | "power" | | 6 | "“We should go.”" | | 7 | "“The hunger doesn’t stop with you.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.57% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 614 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Aurora | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Isolde | 4 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.686 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 85.90% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 52.94% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.471 | | wordCount | 680 | | matches | | 0 | "not in her perception, but in the way the light shifted around her" |
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| 45.45% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "seen that warning" | | 1 | "felt that hunger" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 37.78 | | std | 21.39 | | cv | 0.566 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 17 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment her bare feet touched the ground, the world tilted—not in her perception, but in the way the light shifted around her." | | 1 | "She had seen that warning before—written in the margins of a book, half-erased in a café napkin." | | 2 | "The sensation was like touching a living thing—warm, alive, but not quite alive." | | 3 | "For a moment, Aurora saw it—the Veil, the barrier between worlds, thin as a spider’s thread." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 619 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03231017770597738 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011308562197092083 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 12.36 | | std | 6.41 | | cv | 0.519 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 40.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.2909090909090909 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the first" | | 1 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 2 | "She exhaled, her breath fogging" | | 3 | "She didn’t move, didn’t speak," | | 4 | "She had seen that warning" | | 5 | "She stood abruptly, her breath" | | 6 | "It tilted its head, studying" | | 7 | "She turned back to Isolde," | | 8 | "She had felt that hunger" | | 9 | "She turned and stepped toward" |
| | ratio | 0.222 | |
| 26.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "She stepped over the first" | | 2 | "The moment her bare feet" | | 3 | "The sky above was a" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured, their breath curling" | | 5 | "The shadow form shifted slightly," | | 6 | "Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 7 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 8 | "She exhaled, her breath fogging" | | 9 | "Isolde stood at the edge" | | 10 | "She didn’t move, didn’t speak," | | 11 | "The seer’s voice carried on" | | 12 | "Aurora’s pulse quickened." | | 13 | "She had seen that warning" | | 14 | "The trees leaned in, their" | | 15 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 16 | "Nyx’s form rippled, their silhouette" | | 17 | "The ground beneath them was" | | 18 | "Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers" | | 19 | "The sensation was like touching" |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, a low, resonant pulse that vibrated through Aurora’s bones." | | 1 | "The trees leaned in, their branches twisting like skeletal fingers, their leaves shimmering with an unnatural sheen." | | 2 | "The ground beneath them was uneven, the soil rich and dark, as if the earth itself had been shaped by unseen hands." | | 3 | "In the distance, a fire flickered between the trees, casting long, dancing shadows that moved independently of the flames." | | 4 | "Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers over a patch of moss that glowed faintly under her palm." | | 5 | "The kind of power that made her fingers ache with the need to reach for the Fae blade at her belt, to feel its cold, sharp edge against her palm." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |