Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRD79AE8FKD116T96PWKXR

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Duration:
3.5s
Cost:
$0.000108

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, a low, resonant pulse that vibrated through Aurora’s bones. She stepped over the first of the standing stones, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The moment her bare feet touched the ground, the world tilted—not in her perception, but in the way the light shifted around her. The sky above was a deeper blue than she’d ever seen, streaked with veins of silver that pulsed like blood in a wound. “It’s… real,” Nyx murmured, their breath curling in the cold air. The shadow form shifted slightly, their form flickering between solid and translucent as they moved. “Like the world doesn’t care we’re here.” Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It pulsed faintly, warm against her skin, though the air outside was icy. She exhaled, her breath fogging the air around her. “It’s not just a park.” Isolde stood at the edge of the clearing, her silver hair catching the light like scattered stars. She didn’t move, didn’t speak, but the way her pale lavender eyes lingered on them made the hairs on Aurora’s neck stand up. The seer’s voice carried on the wind, a whisper that wasn’t quite sound. *“You step into the light, and the dark follows.”* Aurora’s pulse quickened. She had seen that warning before—written in the margins of a book, half-erased in a café napkin. But here, in the Grove, the words were real. The trees leaned in, their branches twisting like skeletal fingers, their leaves shimmering with an unnatural sheen. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter, like honey and old magic. Nyx’s form rippled, their silhouette stretching as they moved toward the center of the clearing. The ground beneath them was uneven, the soil rich and dark, as if the earth itself had been shaped by unseen hands. In the distance, a fire flickered between the trees, casting long, dancing shadows that moved independently of the flames. Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers over a patch of moss that glowed faintly under her palm. The sensation was like touching a living thing—warm, alive, but not quite alive. She stood abruptly, her breath coming faster. “This isn’t just a place. It’s a… *door*.” Isolde’s voice was a sigh. *“A door that doesn’t stay open long.”* A rustle in the undergrowth made Aurora’s head snap toward the sound. A small, furred creature with golden eyes emerged, its fur shimmering like polished bronze. It tilted its head, studying them with curiosity, then darted back into the trees. Nyx’s voice was a whisper in her ear. *“It’s not a creature. It’s a warning.”* Aurora’s grip tightened on the pendant. The warmth inside it intensified, like a heartbeat beneath her skin. She turned back to Isolde, her voice steady despite the unease creeping up her spine. “What do you see?” The seer’s fingers traced the edge of a standing stone, and the air around them shimmered. For a moment, Aurora saw it—the Veil, the barrier between worlds, thin as a spider’s thread. But then it dissolved, leaving only the Grove, and the seer’s voice, sharp and clear. *“You carry the hunger. The hunger for more.”* Aurora’s stomach twisted. She had felt that hunger before, in the moments before the abuser’s hands had found her, in the way her body craved something she couldn’t name. But this was different. This was *power*. The kind of power that made her fingers ache with the need to reach for the Fae blade at her belt, to feel its cold, sharp edge against her palm. Nyx’s form flickered again, their voice a whisper on the wind. *“We should go.”* Aurora didn’t hesitate. She turned and stepped toward the fire, her boots crunching over fallen leaves. The moment she crossed the threshold, the Grove seemed to hold its breath. The trees parted, the fire dimmed, and the world outside the Grove faded into the amber glow of Dymas. Behind her, Isolde’s voice echoed in her mind, sharp and final. *“The hunger doesn’t stop with you.”*
total_cost0.00010844

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount685
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount685
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"vibrated"
2"pulsed"
3"whisper"
4"quickened"
5"flickered"
6"dancing"
7"warmth"
8"traced"
9"shimmered"
10"stomach"
11"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
76.47% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords42
totalWords680
ratio0.062
matches
0"“You step into the light, and the dark follows.”"
1"door"
2"“A door that doesn’t stay open long.”"
3"“It’s not a creature. It’s a warning.”"
4"“You carry the hunger. The hunger for more.”"
5"power"
6"“We should go.”"
7"“The hunger doesn’t stop with you.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
68.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount614
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove5
Aurora10
Heartstone1
Isolde4
Veil1
Dymas1
Nyx4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.686
windowScore0.833
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite sound"
52.94% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.471
wordCount680
matches
0"not in her perception, but in the way the light shifted around her"
45.45% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"seen that warning"
1"felt that hunger"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean37.78
std21.39
cv0.566
sampleLengths
085
133
237
353
49
560
656
744
812
940
1015
1136
1247
138
1466
1514
1648
1717
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"been shaped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs93
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences55
ratio0.073
matches
0"The moment her bare feet touched the ground, the world tilted—not in her perception, but in the way the light shifted around her."
1"She had seen that warning before—written in the margins of a book, half-erased in a café napkin."
2"The sensation was like touching a living thing—warm, alive, but not quite alive."
3"For a moment, Aurora saw it—the Veil, the barrier between worlds, thin as a spider’s thread."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount619
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03231017770597738
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011308562197092083
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean12.36
std6.41
cv0.519
sampleLengths
022
117
223
323
411
515
67
710
813
99
105
1117
1223
1313
149
153
1617
179
1817
1914
2015
2122
2219
2316
2413
257
268
275
287
2912
3014
3114
328
337
346
3511
3615
374
3816
3916
4015
418
423
4326
444
453
4630
4711
483
493
40.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2909090909090909
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences45
matches
0"She stepped over the first"
1"It pulsed faintly, warm against"
2"She exhaled, her breath fogging"
3"She didn’t move, didn’t speak,"
4"She had seen that warning"
5"She stood abruptly, her breath"
6"It tilted its head, studying"
7"She turned back to Isolde,"
8"She had felt that hunger"
9"She turned and stepped toward"
ratio0.222
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences45
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"She stepped over the first"
2"The moment her bare feet"
3"The sky above was a"
4"Nyx murmured, their breath curling"
5"The shadow form shifted slightly,"
6"Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the"
7"It pulsed faintly, warm against"
8"She exhaled, her breath fogging"
9"Isolde stood at the edge"
10"She didn’t move, didn’t speak,"
11"The seer’s voice carried on"
12"Aurora’s pulse quickened."
13"She had seen that warning"
14"The trees leaned in, their"
15"The air smelled of damp"
16"Nyx’s form rippled, their silhouette"
17"The ground beneath them was"
18"Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers"
19"The sensation was like touching"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air in the Fae Grove hummed with something older than the trees, a low, resonant pulse that vibrated through Aurora’s bones."
1"The trees leaned in, their branches twisting like skeletal fingers, their leaves shimmering with an unnatural sheen."
2"The ground beneath them was uneven, the soil rich and dark, as if the earth itself had been shaped by unseen hands."
3"In the distance, a fire flickered between the trees, casting long, dancing shadows that moved independently of the flames."
4"Aurora crouched, brushing her fingers over a patch of moss that glowed faintly under her palm."
5"The kind of power that made her fingers ache with the need to reach for the Fae blade at her belt, to feel its cold, sharp edge against her palm."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.182
71.7284%