Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRD96KBSDMFSJH9AJBK2BH

Run Details

Duration:
14.1s
Cost:
$0.001830
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crunch of gravel beneath her boots echoed unnaturally loud in the stillness of the Fae Grove. Rory pulled her jacket tighter against the chill as she made her way down the winding path, the ancient standing stones at the edge of the clearing looming before her. She wasn't sure what had compelled her to return to this place, but a restless feeling had drawn her back, tugging at the edges of her consciousness ever since she'd last set foot in the sacred grove. Even now, the fine hairs on the back of her neck prickled with a vague sense of unease. As she neared the standing stones, a faint rustling in the underbrush beside the path made her pause, head cocking to one side. Straining her ears, Rory could hear nothing more, but the uneasy feeling only intensified. She pressed on, the Heartstone pendant at her throat pulsing with a dull warmth. The clearing was bathed in an eerie silvery light, the wildflowers that dotted the ground glowing faintly in the darkness. Rory's gaze was drawn irresistibly to the center, where a large, weathered oak stood, its branches twisting up toward the cloudless night sky. And there, beneath the ancient tree, was a figure. Rory's breath caught in her throat. She couldn't make out the details from this distance, but the sight of another person in this lonely, isolated place sent a shiver down her spine. Steeling her nerves, she approached cautiously, one hand slipping into the pocket of her jacket to grip the small Swiss army knife hidden there. As she drew closer, the figure resolved into the form of a woman, her back to Rory. She was kneeling in the grass, seemingly oblivious to Rory's presence. The Heartstone pendant pulsed with more urgency, its warmth intensifying against Rory's skin. "Hello?" Rory called out, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the stillness. The woman started, whirling around to face her. Rory's heart leapt into her throat at the sight of the woman's face — sunken, pale, with eyes that seemed to bore into her very soul. She opened her mouth, but no words came out, only a hollow, keening wail that made Rory's skin crawl. Rory stumbled back a step, fumbling for the knife in her pocket. The woman rose, moving with unnatural grace, and Rory caught a glimpse of what looked like tattered, decaying rags hanging from her frame. As the woman took a step forward, Rory caught a whiff of something foul, like rotting leaves and damp earth. Heartbeat pounding in her ears, Rory turned and ran, her boots pounding against the soft ground as she fled back down the path. But the woman — or whatever it was — was fast, unnaturally so, and Rory could hear the thud of feet behind her, gaining with every step. A branch snagged at her jacket, and Rory cried out as she stumbled, crashing to the ground. The knife clattered from her hand as she threw her arms up to shield her face, bracing for the impact of the woman's attack. But it never came. Cautiously, Rory lowered her arms, peering around warily. The path was empty, save for the rustling of the trees in the night breeze. Rory's heart was pounding in her chest as she pushed herself up, every nerve on high alert. She scanned the shadows, searching for any sign of the woman, but there was nothing. Shaking, Rory retrieved the knife and continued down the path, quickening her pace. She didn't stop until she reached the edge of the grove, the ancient standing stones looming before her. Pausing to catch her breath, she looked back, half-expecting to see the woman emerge from the darkness. But the grove was still, the only sound the faint hum of insects. Rory shuddered, turning her back on the clearing and hurrying toward the safety of the city. It wasn't until she was back in her flat, door locked securely behind her, that the adrenaline finally began to wear off. She sank down onto the couch, hands trembling as she pressed the Heartstone pendant, still warm, against her chest. What was that thing? And why had it been here, in the Fae Grove? Rory's mind raced, trying to make sense of what she had seen. The woman's face, sunken and decayed, had been unlike anything she had ever seen before. And the way she had moved, with such unnatural speed and grace — it was as if she wasn't quite...human. Rory shuddered, hugging herself tightly. She couldn't shake the feeling that she had been in the presence of something truly dark and malevolent. And the Heartstone's reaction... Frowning, Rory rose from the couch and crossed to the window, peering out into the night. The Grove was hidden from view, but she couldn't shake the uneasy feeling that something was watching her, even now. With a sigh, she turned away, heading for the kitchen. She needed tea — strong and hot — to settle her nerves. As she waited for the kettle to boil, Rory couldn't help but wonder what other horrors might be lurking in the shadows of the Fae Grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
64.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount857
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"warily"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"very"
2"warily"
3"tightly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount857
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"looming"
count2
3
word"sense of"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"resolved"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count3
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chill"
2"looming"
3"sense of"
4"warmth"
5"down her spine"
6"resolved"
7"pulsed"
8"pounding"
9"scanned"
10"raced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but wonder"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords862
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount861
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Grove4
Rory24
Heartstone4
Swiss1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.106
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"in the grass, seemingly oblivious to Rory's"
1"eyes that seemed to bore into her very soul"
2"looked like tattered, decaying rags hangi"
3"it was as if she wasn't quite...human"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount862
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"was that thing"
54.12% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean43.1
std14.63
cv0.339
sampleLengths
047
155
251
352
456
541
612
753
855
950
1041
114
1255
1348
1429
1541
1661
1727
1836
1948
78.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences52
matches
0"was bathed"
1"was drawn"
2"was — was"
3"was hidden"
60.14% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was kneeling"
1"was pounding"
2"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences52
ratio0.077
matches
0"Rory's heart leapt into her throat at the sight of the woman's face — sunken, pale, with eyes that seemed to bore into her very soul."
1"But the woman — or whatever it was — was fast, unnaturally so, and Rory could hear the thud of feet behind her, gaining with every step."
2"And the way she had moved, with such unnatural speed and grace — it was as if she wasn't quite...human."
3"She needed tea — strong and hot — to settle her nerves."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount856
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.037383177570093455
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01985981308411215
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean16.58
std6.97
cv0.421
sampleLengths
017
130
237
318
423
514
614
720
823
99
106
1126
1224
1317
1411
1513
1612
178
1826
1919
2012
2123
2220
2323
2427
2517
2624
274
288
2915
3017
3115
3213
3318
3417
3513
3616
3722
3819
394
4010
4112
4215
4320
445
4518
464
4716
4820
4910
60.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.36538461538461536
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners19
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Cautiously, Rory lowered her arms,"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences52
matches
0"She wasn't sure what had"
1"She pressed on, the Heartstone"
2"She couldn't make out the"
3"She was kneeling in the"
4"She opened her mouth, but"
5"She scanned the shadows, searching"
6"She didn't stop until she"
7"It wasn't until she was"
8"She sank down onto the"
9"She couldn't shake the feeling"
10"She needed tea — strong"
ratio0.212
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences52
matches
0"The crunch of gravel beneath"
1"Rory pulled her jacket tighter"
2"She wasn't sure what had"
3"She pressed on, the Heartstone"
4"The clearing was bathed in"
5"Rory's gaze was drawn irresistibly"
6"Rory's breath caught in her"
7"She couldn't make out the"
8"She was kneeling in the"
9"The Heartstone pendant pulsed with"
10"Rory called out, her voice"
11"The woman started, whirling around"
12"Rory's heart leapt into her"
13"She opened her mouth, but"
14"Rory stumbled back a step,"
15"The woman rose, moving with"
16"Heartbeat pounding in her ears,"
17"A branch snagged at her"
18"The knife clattered from her"
19"The path was empty, save"
ratio0.615
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Even now, the fine hairs"
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She opened her mouth, but no words came out, only a hollow, keening wail that made Rory's skin crawl."
1"Heartbeat pounding in her ears, Rory turned and ran, her boots pounding against the soft ground as she fled back down the path."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory called out, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the stillness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
71.3302%