Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRDBVYAJCW7V07N6CT9W53

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9.5s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the pavement to slick black glass beneath Quinn’s boots. She kept her pace steady, the heel of her shoe clicking against the wet asphalt like a metronome counting down to something inevitable. The suspect—some low-level dealer, probably—had cut through the alley behind the pub, his hood pulled tight against the downpour. Quinn didn’t bother with a hood. She didn’t need one. The rain washed away the scent of her cologne, the faint metallic tang of her gun, but it couldn’t erase the trail of his panic. She turned the corner just as he vanished into the dim glow of a neon sign—green, jagged letters spelling out *Raven’s Nest*. The bar’s entrance yawned open, steam curling from the cracks in the door like a breath of something warm and dangerous. Inside, the air smelled of stale beer and something older, something that clung to the back of her throat like smoke. The suspect didn’t hesitate. He pushed through the door and was swallowed by the shadows. Quinn followed, her gloved fingers brushing the doorframe as she stepped inside. The bar was a relic, its wood paneling warped with age, the tables scarred from decades of elbows and spilled drinks. A few patrons lingered near the back, their faces half-lit by the flickering neon. None of them looked up. They knew the rules here. The suspect, however, didn’t. He froze mid-step, his shoulders hunched like he expected a bullet to punch through his chest at any moment. Quinn didn’t give him time to think. She stepped forward, her boots thudding against the floor. "You’re coming with me," she said, her voice cutting through the hum of the bar like a blade. The suspect’s head snapped up, his eyes wide with something between fear and recognition. "Detective," he breathed, his voice raw. "I didn’t—" "Shut up." She didn’t wait for an explanation. She didn’t need one. The way he’d bolted, the way he’d chosen this place—it all pointed to one thing. He was deeper in than he let on. And that meant she was too. The patrons at the tables didn’t move. They didn’t breathe. They just watched, their expressions unreadable. Quinn kept her eyes on the suspect, but her peripheral vision picked up the way the shadows seemed to shift, just slightly, as if something was watching from the edges of her vision. The suspect tried to bolt again, but Quinn was faster. She grabbed his arm, her fingers digging into the fabric of his jacket. He yelped, but the sound was lost in the rain and the thud of her heart in her chest. "You’re not getting out of this," she said, her voice low, dangerous. "Not here. Not now." The suspect’s eyes darted to the back of the bar, where a door stood slightly ajar. Quinn followed his gaze. The wood was dark, the hinges rusted. It looked like any other back room. But the way the suspect’s body tensed told her it wasn’t. "Let’s go," she said, her grip tightening. She didn’t know what was back there. She didn’t care. She just knew she wasn’t leaving until she had answers. The suspect didn’t resist as she dragged him toward the door. His breath came in short, sharp gasps, his fingers clawing at her arm. "You don’t know what you’re walking into," he whispered, his voice trembling. Quinn didn’t slow down. "I know exactly what I’m walking into," she said. "And it’s you." The door creaked open, revealing a narrow hallway. The air inside was cooler, thicker, like the breath of something that had been held too long. The walls were lined with bookshelves, their spines worn and brittle. The suspect hesitated, his eyes darting to the left, where a single book seemed to shift slightly, as if it had been moved. Quinn didn’t miss it. She stepped forward, her hand resting on her gun. "Move." The suspect didn’t argue. He followed, his boots scuffing against the floor. The hallway twisted, the bookshelves pressing in closer on either side. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her ears, the sound of her own breath filling the silence between them. Then, without warning, the bookshelf on the left shifted inward. A hidden door swung open, revealing a staircase descending into darkness. The suspect froze, his eyes wide. "You can’t go down there," he said, his voice barely a whisper. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She stepped forward, her hand reaching for the railing. The wood was cold beneath her fingers, the metal of the railing slick with moisture. "I can and I will," she said, her voice steady, unyielding. The suspect’s eyes flicked to her watch, the leather strap worn thin from years of use. "You don’t know what you’re doing," he said, his voice filled with a desperation that grated against her nerves. Quinn didn’t look back. She descended the stairs, one step at a time, her boots echoing in the darkness. The air grew colder, thicker, until it felt like she was breathing in the very essence of the night. The suspect followed, his footsteps heavy behind her. Then, the stairs ended. She stepped into a room, the light flickering to life above her head. The walls were lined with stalls, each one filled with goods that shouldn’t exist. Bottles of liquid that shimmered like liquid silver. Skulls that glowed faintly in the dark. Books bound in leather that looked old enough to remember the first men who walked the earth. The suspect stopped behind her, his breath coming in short, sharp gasps. "You’re in the Veil Market," he said, his voice filled with a mix of awe and terror. Quinn didn’t turn around. She kept her eyes on the stalls, her fingers tightening around the grip of her gun. "I know," she said, her voice low, dangerous. "And I’m not leaving until I have what I came for." The suspect didn’t answer. He didn’t have to. The way he stood there, the way his body trembled, told her everything she needed to know. She was in too deep now. There was no turning back. A figure emerged from the shadows, his face obscured by the flickering light. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice smooth, dangerous. "I was wondering when you’d show up." Quinn didn’t flinch. She kept her eyes on him, her fingers tightening around her gun. "I’m here for answers," she said, her voice steady, unyielding. "And I’m not leaving without them."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"whisper"
4"flicked"
5"echoing"
6"footsteps"
7"shimmered"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
82.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1077
ratio0.002
matches
0"Raven’s Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount985
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn14
persons
0"Quinn"
places(empty)
globalScore0.789
windowScore1
44.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something between fear and recognition"
1"looked like any other back room"
2"felt like she was breathing in the very"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1077
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
89.57% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean43.08
std19.97
cv0.464
sampleLengths
093
179
280
348
48
541
649
758
845
927
1036
1116
1259
1314
1440
1539
1638
1735
1846
1963
2029
2139
2236
2328
2431
83.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences95
matches
0"was swallowed"
1"was lost"
2"been held"
3"were lined"
4"been moved"
5"were lined"
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was watching"
1"wasn’t leaving"
2"was breathing"
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences102
ratio0.029
matches
0"The suspect—some low-level dealer, probably—had cut through the alley behind the pub, his hood pulled tight against the downpour."
1"She turned the corner just as he vanished into the dim glow of a neon sign—green, jagged letters spelling out *Raven’s Nest*."
2"The way he’d bolted, the way he’d chosen this place—it all pointed to one thing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount992
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.025201612903225805
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006048387096774193
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean10.56
std6.11
cv0.578
sampleLengths
016
123
219
36
44
525
622
721
821
94
1011
1112
1221
1314
145
155
164
1719
187
199
2018
2114
226
232
248
254
2615
278
286
297
303
316
3233
3310
3413
3519
3612
374
3816
394
407
417
4211
437
447
453
4610
4711
4813
4912
43.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.23529411764705882
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners24
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Then, without warning, the bookshelf"
1"Then, the stairs ended."
ratio0.021
49.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences94
matches
0"She kept her pace steady,"
1"She didn’t need one."
2"She turned the corner just"
3"He pushed through the door"
4"They knew the rules here."
5"He froze mid-step, his shoulders"
6"She stepped forward, her boots"
7"she said, her voice cutting"
8"he breathed, his voice raw"
9"She didn’t wait for an"
10"She didn’t need one."
11"He was deeper in than"
12"They didn’t breathe."
13"They just watched, their expressions"
14"She grabbed his arm, her"
15"He yelped, but the sound"
16"she said, her voice low,"
17"It looked like any other"
18"she said, her grip tightening"
19"She didn’t know what was"
ratio0.426
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences94
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"She kept her pace steady,"
2"The suspect—some low-level dealer, probably—had"
3"Quinn didn’t bother with a"
4"She didn’t need one."
5"The rain washed away the"
6"She turned the corner just"
7"The bar’s entrance yawned open,"
8"The suspect didn’t hesitate."
9"He pushed through the door"
10"Quinn followed, her gloved fingers"
11"The bar was a relic,"
12"None of them looked up."
13"They knew the rules here."
14"The suspect, however, didn’t."
15"He froze mid-step, his shoulders"
16"Quinn didn’t give him time"
17"She stepped forward, her boots"
18"she said, her voice cutting"
19"The suspect’s head snapped up,"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She kept her pace steady, the heel of her shoe clicking against the wet asphalt like a metronome counting down to something inevitable."
1"Inside, the air smelled of stale beer and something older, something that clung to the back of her throat like smoke."
2"Quinn kept her eyes on the suspect, but her peripheral vision picked up the way the shadows seemed to shift, just slightly, as if something was watching from th…"
3"The air inside was cooler, thicker, like the breath of something that had been held too long."
4"The suspect hesitated, his eyes darting to the left, where a single book seemed to shift slightly, as if it had been moved."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"he breathed, his voice raw"
1"she said, her voice low, dangerous"
2"she said, her grip tightening"
3"he whispered, his voice trembling"
4"he said, his voice barely a whisper"
5"she said, her voice steady, unyielding"
6"she said, her voice low, dangerous"
7"he said, his voice smooth, dangerous"
8"she said, her voice steady, unyielding"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.619
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
75.3726%