Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRDDGY7CPPN6BQNP5PF0SH

Run Details

Duration:
3m 54s
Cost:
$0.001888
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back with a metallic scrape that sounded unnaturally loud in the stillness of the hallway. Rory stood on the threshold of Eva’s chaotic flat, her backpack slumped at her feet. Moonlight slanted through the small window at the end of the corridor, silvering the linoleum. The curry-scented warmth from downstairs was a familiar blanket, but tonight it felt suffocating. She nudged the door closed with her hip, her mind replaying the argument with her father for the hundredth time. That’s when she saw him. Leaning against the doorframe of the living room, silhouetted by the soft glow of Eva’s antique desk lamp. The platinum hair was unmistakable, slicked back as if he’d just stepped out of the rain. He wore a charcoal suit, perfectly tailored, his hands resting on the ivory head of his cane. Rory froze. Her breath caught somewhere between her lungs and her throat. “*Bonsoir*, Aurora,” Lucien said. His voice was a low, familiar rasp. It hadn’t changed. Her heart slammed against her ribs. She hadn’t seen him in over a year. Not since the night everything fell apart. Not since she’d told him to stay away from her. A hundred different emotions surged—anger, a sharp prick of betrayal, and beneath it all, a treacherous, unwelcome warmth. “How did you get in here?” Her words came out tight, controlled. She didn’t move from the mat. “Eva loaned me her key. For emergencies.” He pushed off the doorframe and took a step forward, the tip of his cane whispering against the rug. The light caught the heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless black. “This qualifies.” She forced a brittle laugh. “Is that so? And who defines these emergencies? You?” “You’ve been followed for three days.” He said it casually, as if commenting on the weather. “The same man. He circles this block each night you work late. Tonight, he waited outside the Golden Empress for forty-seven minutes after your last delivery. He’s watching your flat, too.” A cold knot tightened in her stomach. She’d felt eyes on her. Had dismissed it as paranoia leftover from her life before London. “Why would anyone follow me?” Lucien’s gaze held hers. “Because of me.” Silence pooled between them, thick and heavy. Ptolemy the tabby wound between her ankles, purring, oblivious. She finally stepped inside, dropping her backpack by the door. She needed space from his proximity. The flat was its usual mess—scrolls unfurled on the coffee table, stacks of leather-bound books teetering on the armchair. She moved past him into the living room, her shoulder brushing his sleeve. The contact was electric, a jolt of memory she’d tried to bury. “You shouldn’t be here,” she said, not looking at him. She began gathering Eva’s scattered papers, stacking them with more force than necessary. “You told me that once before. I didn’t listen then either.” She turned on him. “This isn’t a joke, Lucien. You left. You walked out that door and I didn’t hear from you for a year. Not a call. Not a text. Nothing.” The hurt spilled out, raw edged. He didn’t flinch. “You asked me to go.” “I asked you to stay!” The words tore from her. She hadn’t meant to shout. She pressed a hand to her temple. “I asked you to stay, and you chose your father’s world over mine.” His knuckles whitened on the cane. “It was never a choice, Aurora. It was a necessity. My presence in your life was a target on your back. It still is.” “So you ghosted me. To protect me.” Her voice dripped with sarcasm. “Yes.” She stared at him. The cool-headed logic she prided herself on had deserted her. All that remained was the memory of his mouth on hers, his hands in her hair, the whispered promises in French she’d almost believed. Followed by the empty flat, the unanswered messages, the hollow ache of abandonment. “You could have explained.” “Would you have accepted it?” He took another step closer. The air between them crackled. “Would you have let me walk away if I’d told you the truth? That my father’s enemies consider you a vulnerability? That every moment I spent with you was a risk to your life?” She looked away, her gaze falling on the crescent scar on her wrist. “You don’t get to make those decisions for me.” “Someone has to. You’re too reckless with your own safety.” He said it softly, almost affectionately. “You have no right.” “I have every right.” The intensity in his voice made her look up. His amber eye seemed to glow in the lamplight. “You are still… important to me. That has not changed.” Her throat tightened. She wanted to hate him. It would be easier. “Who is following me?” she asked, pivoting back to practicalities. It was safer ground. “A mercenary. Not particularly skilled, but persistent. Employed by a minor warlord named Varos who has a grudge against my family. He thinks you might be leverage.” “And you’re here to what? Protect me?” “To offer you a choice.” Lucien reached into his breast pocket and withdrew a small, sealed envelope. He held it out. “A ticket to Paris. Under a new name. A flat in the Marais, paid for a year in advance. A clean break.” She stared at the envelope as if it were a viper. “You want me to run.” “I want you safe.” “And if I don’t take it?” His jaw tightened. “Then I stay. I neutralize the threat. And I remain in your life whether you wish it or not. Because the alternative is you ending up in a ditch with your throat cut.” The bluntness of the statement hit her like a slap. She saw the truth of it in his face. The lines of strain around his eyes she hadn’t noticed before. The slight pallor beneath his tan. He hadn’t been sleeping either. “You look like hell,” she murmured. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “You always did have a charming way with words.” She didn’t take the envelope. Instead, she walked to the window overlooking Brick Lane. The street was quiet, slick with rain. A single figure huddled in a doorway across the street, collar turned up. Watching. “Three days,” she said. “Yes.” “And you waited until now.” “I was hoping he was simply incompetent and would lose interest. He did not.” She turned back to face him. He stood in the center of Eva’s chaotic living room, an island of elegant stillness amidst the storm of paper and books. Her heart ached with a terrible, familiar longing. “You lied to me,” she said. “By omission.” “It’s the same thing.” He inclined his head. “Then I am guilty.” “Why now, Lucien? Really? After all this time.” He was silent for a long moment. “Because I could not stay away any longer,” he said finally, his voice low. “Because I saw him watching you tonight and I realized I would burn down every realm between here and Avaros before I let anything happen to you. Even if you hate me for it.” The admission hung in the air, stripping away the pretense, the practicalities. The raw truth of it was terrifying. She crossed the room until she stood directly before him. Close enough to smell the faint scent of his cologne—sandalwood and ozone. Close enough to see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. Her hand came up, almost of its own volition, and her fingers brushed the back of his where they gripped the cane. His skin was cool. His breath hitched. “I don’t hate you,” she whispered. “I tried. It didn’t take.” His free hand lifted, hesitated, then cupped her cheek. His thumb stroked the line of her cheekbone. “Aurora.” “Don’t send me away.” “It’s the safest—” “I don’t care.” She leaned into his touch, her eyes closing for a second. “I spent a year caring about safety. Living small. Looking over my shoulder. It didn’t work. He found me anyway.” She opened her eyes, meeting his mismatched gaze. “So maybe safety isn’t the point. Maybe I’d rather face the devil I know.” “I am not a good man, *ma belle*.” “Don’t care.” He exhaled, a soft, defeated sound. His forehead came to rest against hers. She could feel the tension coiled in his body, the war within him. Duty against desire. Protection against passion. “I will not survive losing you twice,” he murmured against her skin. “Then don’t leave.” His mouth found hers. It was not a gentle kiss. It was a claiming, a confluence of a year’s worth of pent-up longing and frustration and regret. His cane clattered to the floor as his arms came around her, pulling her tight against him. Her hands fisted in the lapels of his suit, crumpling pristine fabric. The taste of him—dark coffee and something faintly metallic, demonic—was achingly familiar. When they broke apart, both were breathing hard. His eyes were dark, pupils blown wide. Across the street, the watcher shifted in his doorway. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the window and back to her. “He’s still there.” “Let him watch,” Rory said, her voice unsteady. “Let him see that I’m not alone.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.032
90.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1548
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"softly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1548
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"chaotic"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count4
3
word"treacherous"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"amidst"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"desire"
count1
12
word"pristine"
count1
13
word"blown wide"
count1
14
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"treacherous"
4"stomach"
5"silence"
6"electric"
7"intensity"
8"amidst"
9"could feel"
10"tension"
11"desire"
12"pristine"
13"blown wide"
14"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1537
ratio0.002
matches
0"Bonsoir"
1"ma belle"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount989
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
London1
French1
Brick1
Lane1
Rory3
Lucien4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"French"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if commenting on the weather"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.651
wordCount1537
matches
0"Not particularly skilled, but persistent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean21.35
std18.93
cv0.887
sampleLengths
083
15
251
312
414
549
618
739
814
947
1028
117
1216
1360
1423
1511
1638
178
1835
1930
2012
211
2251
234
2449
2522
2616
274
2832
2912
3014
3127
327
3343
3416
354
366
3736
3841
396
4017
4135
424
431
445
4514
4636
476
482
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"were breathing"
51.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences156
ratio0.032
matches
0"A hundred different emotions surged—anger, a sharp prick of betrayal, and beneath it all, a treacherous, unwelcome warmth."
1"The light caught the heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one a bottomless black."
2"The flat was its usual mess—scrolls unfurled on the coffee table, stacks of leather-bound books teetering on the armchair."
3"Close enough to smell the faint scent of his cologne—sandalwood and ozone."
4"The taste of him—dark coffee and something faintly metallic, demonic—was achingly familiar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount999
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03003003003003003
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01001001001001001
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean9.85
std7.04
cv0.714
sampleLengths
019
115
215
314
420
55
618
716
817
92
1010
114
127
133
146
158
167
1710
1818
1912
206
2126
2211
232
245
259
2616
2731
287
295
3011
315
324
333
347
359
3610
376
3819
3913
4012
4110
4213
4311
444
4534
463
475
4810
495
41.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.30128205128205127
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners47
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences108
matches
0"All that remained was the"
1"Instead, she walked to the"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences108
matches
0"She nudged the door closed"
1"He wore a charcoal suit,"
2"Her breath caught somewhere between"
3"His voice was a low,"
4"It hadn’t changed."
5"Her heart slammed against her"
6"She hadn’t seen him in"
7"Her words came out tight,"
8"She didn’t move from the"
9"He pushed off the doorframe"
10"She forced a brittle laugh."
11"He said it casually, as"
12"She’d felt eyes on her."
13"She finally stepped inside, dropping"
14"She needed space from his"
15"She moved past him into"
16"she said, not looking at"
17"She began gathering Eva’s scattered"
18"She turned on him."
19"He didn’t flinch."
ratio0.593
10.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences108
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back"
1"Rory stood on the threshold"
2"Moonlight slanted through the small"
3"The curry-scented warmth from downstairs"
4"She nudged the door closed"
5"That’s when she saw him."
6"The platinum hair was unmistakable,"
7"He wore a charcoal suit,"
8"Her breath caught somewhere between"
9"His voice was a low,"
10"It hadn’t changed."
11"Her heart slammed against her"
12"She hadn’t seen him in"
13"A hundred different emotions surged—anger,"
14"Her words came out tight,"
15"She didn’t move from the"
16"He pushed off the doorframe"
17"The light caught the heterochromatic"
18"She forced a brittle laugh."
19"He said it casually, as"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back with a metallic scrape that sounded unnaturally loud in the stillness of the hallway."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Her words came out, controlled"
1"He pushed, the tip of his cane whispering against the rug"
2"He said, as if commenting on the weather"
3"she said, not looking at him"
4"he said finally, his voice low"
5"She leaned, her eyes closing for a second"
6"Rory said, her voice unsteady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.095
79.7176%