| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 970 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 970 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "glistening" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "sentinels" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "lurch" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.21% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 25 | | markdownWords | 52 | | totalWords | 956 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Footsteps." | | 1 | "bushes" | | 2 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 3 | "unfolded" | | 4 | "do" | | 5 | "wrongness" | | 6 | "breathing" | | 7 | "think" | | 8 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 9 | "normal" | | 10 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 11 | "run" | | 12 | "person" | | 13 | "\"Eva?\"" | | 14 | "\"The stones—they’re not just stones. They’re" | | 15 | "*watching" | | 16 | ".\"" | | 17 | "\"It’s not just the Fae. It’s" | | 18 | "*something else" | | 19 | ".\"" | | 20 | "breathe" | | 21 | "\"We have to tell someone. We have to" | | 22 | "*stop" | | 23 | "it.\"" | | 24 | "moving" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 913 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 17 | | Grove | 7 | | Eva | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.569 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a threshold before" | | 1 | "quite notice humans" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 956 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 16.48 | | std | 17.62 | | cv | 1.069 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 79.52% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "was following" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d passed the standing stones without hesitation—ancient oaks carved with spirals she didn’t recognise, their bark blackened as if scorched by something older than fire." | | 1 | "The pendant’s warmth intensified, and for a second, she swore she heard a whisper—just the brush of breath against her ear—before the sound dissolved into the hum of the wind." | | 2 | "The wildflowers—always blooming here—were too bright, their petals glistening with something that wasn’t dew." | | 3 | "The sound came from the right—where the path forked." | | 4 | "Then—a rustle." | | 5 | "She’d seen enough horror films to know what came next—the slow, deliberate movement of something unseen." | | 6 | "Then—a sound." | | 7 | "She could hear it now—the *breathing*." | | 8 | "Then—a voice, this time clearer." | | 9 | "She turned—" | | 10 | "—and collided with something solid." | | 11 | "But the trees—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 885 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.0327683615819209 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004519774011299435 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 7.83 | | std | 5.72 | | cv | 0.731 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 36.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.2459016393442623 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the weight of it," | | 1 | "Just the Grove." | | 2 | "Just the *wrongness* of it." | | 3 | "Then—a voice, this time clearer." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 1 | "She’d passed the standing stones" | | 2 | "She’d been here once before," | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "It had been a gift," | | 5 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 6 | "She froze, every muscle coiling." | | 7 | "She knew that sound." | | 8 | "She turned slowly, her fingers" | | 9 | "She’d seen enough horror films" | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "They *unfolded* in her mind," | | 12 | "She had to move." | | 13 | "She turned and ran." | | 14 | "She skidded to a halt," | | 15 | "She didn’t look back." | | 16 | "She could hear it now—the" | | 17 | "Her lungs screamed for air." | | 18 | "Her feet pounded against the" | | 19 | "She didn’t dare look over" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 65.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory’s" | | 1 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 2 | "The Grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 3 | "She’d passed the standing stones" | | 4 | "The boundary between worlds had" | | 5 | "The pendant’s warmth intensified, and" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled sharply, forcing her" | | 7 | "She’d been here once before," | | 8 | "The wildflowers—always blooming here—were too" | | 9 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 10 | "It had been a gift," | | 11 | "Yu-Fei had called it a" | | 12 | "Rory’s pulse hammered in her" | | 13 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 14 | "A twig snapped." | | 15 | "She froze, every muscle coiling." | | 16 | "The sound came from the" | | 17 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, casting" | | 18 | "Rory’s breath hitched." | | 19 | "She knew that sound." |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it pressed against her" | | 1 | "—and collided with something solid." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d passed the standing stones without hesitation—ancient oaks carved with spirals she didn’t recognise, their bark blackened as if scorched by something olde…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers—always blooming here—were too bright, their petals glistening with something that wasn’t dew." | | 2 | "She was breathing fast, her eyes wide with the same terror that clawed at Rory’s chest." | | 3 | "The pendant burned against Rory’s skin, its glow casting eerie shadows that stretched unnaturally long." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.125 | | leniency | 0.25 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |