| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1220 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1220 | | totalAiIsms | 38 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "fleeting" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "almost alive" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "amiss" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "fluttered" | | 14 | "anticipation" | | 15 | "sentinel" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "whisper" | | 18 | "silk" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "familiar" | | 21 | "sinister" | | 22 | "grave" | | 23 | "stomach" | | 24 | "churn" | | 25 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 95.14% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a faint sound—a whisper, distant but growing louder—like the rustle of a silk dress, or the delicate scrape of claws across stone." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1192 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 1181 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.17 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Crimson | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "Crimson" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though holding its breath" | | 1 | "felt like a secret grave, sealed with w" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.839 | | wordCount | 1192 | | matches | | 0 | "not with intent, but with a hypnotic, unnatural grace, bending" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.11% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 47.68 | | std | 17.68 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 58 | | 24 | 31 |
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| 75.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "been smothered" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "was supposed" | | 4 | "been lost" | | 5 | "was layered" | | 6 | "was unhinged" |
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| 34.16% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was being" | | 3 | "was prickling" | | 4 | "was learning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.253 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove was supposed to be a secret, a quiet sanctuary hidden between Richmond Park and some forgotten corner of the earth, but tonight, it felt wrong—almost alive with something unseen." | | 1 | "Somewhere, distant—far beyond the borders of her sight—the faint crunch of twigs registered, as if something heavy was walking just out of reach, silent and deliberate." | | 2 | "That’s what made this trip so odd—she’d checked, double-checked." | | 3 | "A faint shimmer flickered at the edge of her eye—a distortion, like heat rising off asphalt in the middle of summer." | | 4 | "Nothing at first appeared amiss—just the quiet, eerie serenity of the grove." | | 5 | "But then, a sudden movement out of the corner of her eye—a flicker—something darting behind a twisted, moss-covered stone." | | 6 | "The stones radiated silence—an oppressive calm that pressed in on her, weighing down her chest." | | 7 | "Then, a faint sound—a whisper, distant but growing louder—like the rustle of a silk dress, or the delicate scrape of claws across stone." | | 8 | "It was impossible here—no animals came this far, not this late." | | 9 | "The wind picked up again—no, not wind." | | 10 | "A sudden flicker of movement, just a flicker—a ripple—across her peripheral vision." | | 11 | "Her eyes lingered on the spot—the place where the flicker had appeared—and her gut twisted." | | 12 | "A small ripple broke the ground—moonlight bouncing off a surface." | | 13 | "A colder gust seeped in, carrying a faint scent of moss, decay, and something metallic—distant and unsettling." | | 14 | "A whisper again, more distinct this time—a voice faint, like a breath or a sigh—murmuring untraceable words that made her stomach churn." | | 15 | "The pendant’s faint glow flared with a sudden surge—an accident, or a warning?" | | 16 | "She didn’t want to look—the sensation was prickling her skin, as if unseen eyes had sunk into her flesh." | | 17 | "Only that oppressive silence, thick and suffocating, punctuated by the distant, irregular crack of the standing stones—an echo that seemed out of place, like a loud whisper in a world gone quiet." | | 18 | "In the faint glow of the pendant, she realised with icy clarity that she wasn’t alone—something else was here, watching, waiting." | | 19 | "The woods seemed to breathe with a sick, slow rhythm—her own heartbeat, pounding louder now, merging with the whispering pull of unseen forces." | | 20 | "If she stayed, she would drown; if she ran, she might never escape." |
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| 81.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1209 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "twisted, moss-covered stone." |
| | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.05459057071960298 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016542597187758478 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 14.36 | | std | 6.74 | | cv | 0.47 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 51.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.37349397590361444 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere, distant—far beyond the borders" | | 1 | "Then, a faint sound—a whisper," | | 2 | "Too close now." | | 3 | "Then, the hum crescendoed, suddenly" | | 4 | "Only that oppressive silence, thick" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She tugged her coat tighter" | | 1 | "Her footsteps crunched softly on" | | 2 | "She cast a quick glance" | | 3 | "She moved further into the" | | 4 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 5 | "Her pulse fluttered, uncertain whether" | | 6 | "She took a tentative step" | | 7 | "It was impossible here—no animals" | | 8 | "Her eyes darted between the" | | 9 | "It dripped into her ears" | | 10 | "She forced herself to stand" | | 11 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 12 | "she whispered, voice hoarse and" | | 13 | "Her eyes lingered on the" | | 14 | "Her skin prickled as she" | | 15 | "Her breath hitched." | | 16 | "It did not sound human," | | 17 | "It was layered, shadowed, like" | | 18 | "She clenched her fists, feeling" | | 19 | "She didn’t want to look—the" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 72.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The metallic click of the" | | 1 | "Rory hesitated for a fleeting" | | 2 | "The Fae Grove was supposed" | | 3 | "She tugged her coat tighter" | | 4 | "The pulse of warmth she'd" | | 5 | "The pendant hung there, silent" | | 6 | "The wind barely whispered, yet" | | 7 | "Trees creaked softly, their shadows" | | 8 | "Her footsteps crunched softly on" | | 9 | "She cast a quick glance" | | 10 | "That’s what made this trip" | | 11 | "A prickling at her neck," | | 12 | "A faint shimmer flickered at" | | 13 | "The grove was alive with" | | 14 | "She moved further into the" | | 15 | "Wildflowers, resilient enough to bloom" | | 16 | "Nothing at first appeared amiss—just" | | 17 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 18 | "Her pulse fluttered, uncertain whether" | | 19 | "She took a tentative step" |
| | ratio | 0.775 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Whether it was beast, spirit," | | 1 | "If she stayed, she would" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The metallic click of the gate shutting behind her echoed unnervingly in the silence, as if the sound had been smothered, then suddenly released." | | 1 | "Rory hesitated for a fleeting moment, gaze flicking across the shadows cast by the moonlight, which pooled irregularly beneath the thick trees surrounding the c…" | | 2 | "Somewhere, distant—far beyond the borders of her sight—the faint crunch of twigs registered, as if something heavy was walking just out of reach, silent and del…" | | 3 | "She took a tentative step closer to the standing stones that marked the boundary, the ancient oak standing sentinel like an altar to something older than memory…" | | 4 | "A whisper again, more distinct this time—a voice faint, like a breath or a sigh—murmuring untraceable words that made her stomach churn." | | 5 | "She clenched her fists, feeling the rough scar on her wrist, grounding herself." | | 6 | "She didn’t want to look—the sensation was prickling her skin, as if unseen eyes had sunk into her flesh." | | 7 | "The hum turned frantic, almost a growl, shifting into a rhythm that resembled a heartbeat." | | 8 | "Only that oppressive silence, thick and suffocating, punctuated by the distant, irregular crack of the standing stones—an echo that seemed out of place, like a …" | | 9 | "The shapes moved, not with intent, but with a hypnotic, unnatural grace, bending and folding as if liquid." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |