Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRDPV2CJ6Q1N72X7AW834T

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Duration:
28.8s
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$0.001312

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rustle of leaves whispered secrets as Aurora Carter stepped into the Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming like sentinels around her. She paused, the air thick with an unsettling stillness, a stark contrast to the vibrant wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the moonlight. The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against her chest, pulsed with a warmth that felt both comforting and ominous. She had come here for answers, a desperate search for clarity after the chaos of her life in London. The Grove had been a childhood refuge, a place where she and Eva had spun tales of magic and adventure. But now, as she stood alone, the familiar comfort twisted into something foreign, something sinister. A snap of a twig echoed in the silence, sharp and jarring. Aurora's heart raced. She turned, scanning the shadows that danced just beyond the reach of the moonlight. Nothing. Just the trees, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. “Get a grip, Rory,” she muttered to herself, forcing her feet to move deeper into the Grove. The path wound like a serpent, overgrown and tangled, leading her further from the world she knew. She had to find the source of the disturbance, the reason she felt so unwelcome in a place that once felt like home. The air thickened, a palpable weight pressing against her chest. She could hear it now—a low hum, a vibration that resonated deep within her bones. It was a sound that shouldn’t exist, a melody woven from the fabric of the night. Aurora shivered, the hairs on the back of her neck standing on end. “Hello?” Her voice trembled, swallowed by the darkness. The only response was the rustling of leaves, a mocking echo of her own uncertainty. She pressed on, the pendant’s warmth intensifying, guiding her like a beacon. The Grove felt alive, but not in the way she remembered. Shadows flitted at the edges of her vision, darting just out of sight. She quickened her pace, her breath coming in shallow gasps. A flash of movement caught her eye—a figure, pale and ethereal, slipping between the trees. Aurora’s heart thundered in her chest. “Who’s there?” she called, her voice stronger this time, though it wavered at the edges. Silence. Then, a soft giggle, high and tinkling, like the chime of distant bells. It sent a chill racing down her spine. She turned, her pulse quickening, but the figure was gone, leaving only the rustling leaves in its wake. “Just a trick of the light,” she whispered, though the words felt hollow. The Grove had always been a place of wonder, but now it twisted into something darker, something that gnawed at her sanity. The hum grew louder, vibrating through the ground beneath her feet. Aurora stumbled, her foot catching on a root that snaked across the path. She fell to her knees, the earth cool and damp against her skin. As she pushed herself up, she caught sight of something glimmering in the underbrush—a shard of glass, jagged and sharp, reflecting the moonlight like a warning. She picked it up, the weight of it heavy in her palm. It felt wrong, as if it had absorbed the essence of the Grove’s unease. A shiver coursed through her, and she dropped it, the sound of shattering glass echoing in the stillness. “Stop it!” she shouted, frustration boiling over. “Show yourself!” The laughter returned, closer this time, a chorus of voices that seemed to swirl around her. Aurora’s heart raced as she spun, searching for the source. The shadows thickened, coalescing into shapes that danced just beyond her sight. “Enough!” she cried, her voice cracking. “I’m not afraid of you!” But the truth was, she was terrified. The Grove had changed, and she was no longer the fearless child who had roamed its paths. The air crackled with energy, a tension that made her skin prickle. A figure emerged from the shadows, a girl with wild hair and eyes that glowed like embers. She stood just beyond the reach of the moonlight, a smirk playing on her lips. “You shouldn’t have come back, Rory.” “Eva?” Aurora’s voice trembled, disbelief flooding her. “Is that you?” The girl stepped forward, the shadows clinging to her like a second skin. “You left me. You forgot.” “No, I—” Aurora’s words faltered as the memories flooded back, a rush of laughter and secrets shared beneath the ancient oaks. But those memories twisted, darkened, as if the Grove itself had tainted them. “Forgotten,” Eva repeated, her voice a haunting melody. “You think you can just walk away? This place remembers.” The ground trembled beneath Aurora’s feet, the hum intensifying into a cacophony of whispers. She stumbled back, her heart racing as the shadows writhed, coiling around her like serpents. “Get away from me!” she shouted, but the words felt weak, swallowed by the darkness. “Why did you come here?” Eva’s voice was a whisper now, laced with something sinister. “You wanted answers, didn’t you? But the Grove doesn’t give them freely.” Aurora’s breath quickened, panic clawing at her throat. “I just wanted to understand!” “Understand what?” Eva stepped closer, her eyes glinting with malice. “That you’re not alone? That the darkness has always been a part of you?” The shadows surged, a wave of darkness crashing over Aurora. She gasped, the air thickening, choking her. The pendant around her neck pulsed violently, a desperate heartbeat against her skin. “Leave me alone!” she screamed, but the words were lost in the chaos. The Grove erupted into a frenzy, the trees bending and twisting as if in agony. Aurora stumbled, her vision blurring as the shadows closed in. She could feel them, cold and clammy, brushing against her skin, whispering secrets she didn’t want to hear. “Rory!” Eva’s voice cut through the noise, sharp and clear. “You can’t escape what you are!” With a surge of adrenaline, Aurora turned and ran, the path twisting and turning beneath her feet. The shadows chased her, a relentless tide of darkness that threatened to swallow her whole. “Help!” she cried, but the Grove swallowed her voice, the laughter echoing in her ears. The trees closed in, their branches clawing at her, and Aurora felt the weight of the Grove pressing down, suffocating her. She had to escape, had to find the way out before the darkness consumed her. But the shadows were everywhere, a living entity that pulsed with malevolence. She could feel their breath on her neck, the cold fingers of fear wrapping around her heart. “Rory!” Eva’s voice echoed, a haunting melody that sent shivers down her spine. “You can’t run from your past!” Aurora stumbled, her foot catching on a root once more. She fell, the ground rushing up to meet her. The pendant slipped from her grasp, clattering to the ground, its glow flickering like a dying star. “No!” she gasped, scrambling to retrieve it, but the shadows surged forward, enveloping her in darkness. The Grove roared to life, a cacophony of sound and fury, and Aurora felt herself being pulled into the abyss. The last thing she saw was the glimmer of the Heartstone Pendant, its light fading as the darkness closed in around her. And then, silence.
total_cost0.0013123899999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1209
totalAiIsms50
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"comforting"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"sinister"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"raced"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"palpable"
count1
13
word"weight"
count3
14
word"resonated"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count3
16
word"echo"
count1
17
word"beacon"
count1
18
word"quickened"
count2
19
word"thundered"
count1
20
word"wavered"
count1
21
word"chill"
count1
22
word"racing"
count2
23
word"down her spine"
count1
24
word"pulse"
count1
25
word"echoing"
count2
26
word"tension"
count1
27
word"cacophony"
count2
28
word"whisper"
count1
29
word"glinting"
count1
30
word"could feel"
count2
31
word"sent shivers down"
count1
32
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"sentinels"
2"stark"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"comforting"
6"familiar"
7"sinister"
8"echoed"
9"silence"
10"raced"
11"scanning"
12"palpable"
13"weight"
14"resonated"
15"trembled"
16"echo"
17"beacon"
18"quickened"
19"thundered"
20"wavered"
21"chill"
22"racing"
23"down her spine"
24"pulse"
25"echoing"
26"tension"
27"cacophony"
28"whisper"
29"glinting"
30"could feel"
31"sent shivers down"
32"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1094
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora16
Carter1
Fae1
Grove12
Heartstone2
Pendant2
London1
Eva6
Silence1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Grove"
3"Pendant"
4"Eva"
places
0"Fae"
1"London"
2"Silence"
globalScore0.769
windowScore0.667
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like home"
1"voices that seemed to swirl around her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1206
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
98.93% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean30.92
std15.35
cv0.496
sampleLengths
063
154
241
357
454
523
646
736
840
935
1063
1144
129
1338
1411
1536
1638
1710
1818
1934
2018
2129
2215
2327
2413
2524
2630
2713
2843
2916
3032
3115
3236
3329
3419
3536
3616
3742
383
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences84
matches
0"was gone"
1"was terrified"
2"were lost"
3"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
52.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences95
ratio0.032
matches
0"She could hear it now—a low hum, a vibration that resonated deep within her bones."
1"A flash of movement caught her eye—a figure, pale and ethereal, slipping between the trees."
2"As she pushed herself up, she caught sight of something glimmering in the underbrush—a shard of glass, jagged and sharp, reflecting the moonlight like a warning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1097
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02917046490428441
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0036463081130355514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.69
std5.31
cv0.418
sampleLengths
024
122
217
319
420
515
612
73
814
91
1011
1117
1217
1323
1410
1515
1616
1713
188
1915
2012
2111
2213
2310
2415
256
2615
271
2813
298
3018
3113
3222
3311
3413
3513
3626
3712
3814
3918
407
412
4216
4310
4412
456
465
477
4817
4912
52.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3368421052631579
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners32
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just the trees, their gnarled"
1"Then, a soft giggle, high"
ratio0.024
73.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences82
matches
0"She paused, the air thick"
1"She had come here for"
2"She turned, scanning the shadows"
3"she muttered to herself, forcing"
4"She had to find the"
5"She could hear it now—a"
6"It was a sound that"
7"Her voice trembled, swallowed by"
8"She pressed on, the pendant’s"
9"She quickened her pace, her"
10"she called, her voice stronger"
11"It sent a chill racing"
12"She turned, her pulse quickening,"
13"she whispered, though the words"
14"She fell to her knees,"
15"She picked it up, the"
16"It felt wrong, as if"
17"she shouted, frustration boiling over"
18"she cried, her voice cracking"
19"She stood just beyond the"
ratio0.366
14.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences82
matches
0"The rustle of leaves whispered"
1"She paused, the air thick"
2"The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against"
3"She had come here for"
4"The Grove had been a"
5"A snap of a twig"
6"Aurora's heart raced."
7"She turned, scanning the shadows"
8"she muttered to herself, forcing"
9"The path wound like a"
10"She had to find the"
11"The air thickened, a palpable"
12"She could hear it now—a"
13"It was a sound that"
14"Aurora shivered, the hairs on"
15"Her voice trembled, swallowed by"
16"The only response was the"
17"She pressed on, the pendant’s"
18"The Grove felt alive, but"
19"Shadows flitted at the edges"
ratio0.89
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.54% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"She paused, the air thick with an unsettling stillness, a stark contrast to the vibrant wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the moonlight."
1"The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against her chest, pulsed with a warmth that felt both comforting and ominous."
2"She could hear it now—a low hum, a vibration that resonated deep within her bones."
3"She pressed on, the pendant’s warmth intensifying, guiding her like a beacon."
4"She turned, her pulse quickening, but the figure was gone, leaving only the rustling leaves in its wake."
5"The air crackled with energy, a tension that made her skin prickle."
6"She stumbled back, her heart racing as the shadows writhed, coiling around her like serpents."
7"The shadows chased her, a relentless tide of darkness that threatened to swallow her whole."
8"The trees closed in, their branches clawing at her, and Aurora felt the weight of the Grove pressing down, suffocating her."
9"The pendant slipped from her grasp, clattering to the ground, its glow flickering like a dying star."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she whispered, though the words felt hollow"
1"she cried, her voice cracking"
2"Aurora’s voice trembled, disbelief flooding her"
3"Eva repeated, her voice a haunting melody"
4"she shouted, but the words felt weak, swallowed by the darkness"
5"Eva stepped, her eyes glinting with malice"
6"she screamed, but the words were lost in the chaos"
7"she cried, but the Grove swallowed her voice, the laughter echoing in her ears"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she shouted (shout)"
3"she cried (cry)"
4"Aurora’s words faltered (falter)"
5"Eva repeated (repeat)"
6"she shouted (shout)"
7"she screamed (scream)"
8"she cried (cry)"
9"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.909
effectiveRatio0.714
74.4350%