Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRDS7F909EAKE5MWREQFQR

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Duration:
30.2s
Cost:
$0.001001

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped into The Fae Grove, the air thick with an unsettling stillness. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled branches twisting against the night sky. She had come here seeking answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her. The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness. Each step felt heavy, as if the ground itself resisted her presence. She paused, scanning the clearing. Shadows danced at the edges of her vision, flickering like candle flames. “Just the wind,” she muttered, though the words felt hollow. A rustle came from the underbrush, sharp and sudden. Aurora’s heart raced. She turned, eyes darting toward the sound, but nothing emerged. Just the whisper of leaves, the distant croak of a frog. “Get a grip, Rory,” she whispered to herself, shaking her head. She had faced worse than this. The memories of Evan’s anger still haunted her, but she had escaped that life. This was different. This was supposed to be a sanctuary, a place to find clarity. She stepped deeper into the grove, the pendant’s warmth pulsing against her thigh. The air thickened, a weight pressing down on her chest. She could almost hear the heartbeat of the grove, a slow, rhythmic thrum that matched her own. “Hello?” Her voice broke the silence, echoing back to her. No response. Just the rustle of leaves and the distant hoot of an owl. Aurora took a breath, steadying herself. She had to focus. The grove was said to hold secrets, and she needed to uncover them. She reached for the pendant, its deep crimson surface gleaming in the moonlight. As she held it up, the glow intensified, casting eerie shadows around her. The warmth spread through her fingers, a pulse that felt alive. She glanced around, half-expecting something to emerge from the darkness. “Is anyone here?” she called again, her voice firmer this time. A chill swept through the grove, and the shadows seemed to shift. She squinted, trying to pierce the darkness. A figure flickered at the edge of her vision, just beyond the standing stones. Aurora’s breath caught. She turned, but the figure vanished, leaving only the rustling leaves behind. “Stop it,” she scolded herself. “You’re imagining things.” But the wrongness lingered, a gnawing sensation at the back of her mind. She moved closer to the standing stones, their ancient surfaces cool and rough beneath her fingertips. “Why am I here?” she whispered, the question hanging in the air. The pendant pulsed again, a steady rhythm that seemed to resonate with the grove itself. She closed her eyes, trying to center herself. A soft giggle echoed through the trees, light and airy, yet laced with something darker. Aurora’s eyes snapped open, heart racing. “Who’s there?” Silence answered her, thick and suffocating. She took a step back, her instincts screaming at her to leave. But she couldn’t. Not yet. The pendant’s glow flickered, and she felt a pull, a magnetic force drawing her toward the heart of the grove. She hesitated, glancing back at the path she had come from. “Just a little further,” she murmured, though doubt gnawed at her resolve. As she ventured deeper, the air grew colder, the shadows darker. The wildflowers seemed to wilt, their vibrant colors fading into muted tones. A low hum filled the air, a sound that vibrated in her bones. “Rory…” The voice was soft, almost a whisper, yet it echoed around her. She froze, scanning the darkness. “Who’s there?” The laughter returned, closer this time, a tinkling sound that sent shivers down her spine. “Come play with us.” Aurora’s pulse quickened. She turned, searching for the source, but the grove remained still, the trees standing like silent witnesses. “Enough games!” she shouted, her voice breaking the tension. The laughter stopped, replaced by an eerie silence. The pendant pulsed again, its warmth now a burning sensation against her skin. “Rory…” The voice was clearer now, a melodic tone that wrapped around her like a vine. She felt drawn to it, an inexplicable urge to follow. “Show yourself!” A figure emerged from the shadows, a girl with wild hair and bright eyes that glimmered like stars. She wore a dress made of leaves and petals, her skin glowing faintly in the moonlight. “Why do you seek the grove?” the girl asked, her voice lilting, almost musical. “I… I need to know,” Aurora stammered, her heart racing. “I need to understand what this place is.” The girl tilted her head, a smile playing on her lips. “Understanding comes at a price.” “What do you mean?” The girl stepped closer, her presence both enchanting and unsettling. “You must give something to gain knowledge.” Aurora’s mind raced. She thought of the Heartstone Pendant, the warmth it offered. “What do you want?” “Your fear.” The words hung in the air, heavy and suffocating. Aurora’s breath quickened. “My fear?” “Yes. Let it go. Embrace the darkness.” The grove shifted around her, shadows swirling like smoke. The girl’s eyes glinted with mischief, and Aurora felt the ground tremble beneath her feet. “No!” she shouted, stepping back. The girl laughed, a sound that echoed through the trees. “You cannot escape it, Rory. It is part of you.” Aurora’s heart raced as the shadows closed in, the grove alive with whispers and laughter. She clutched the pendant, its warmth now a burning reminder of the choice before her. “Face it,” the girl urged, her voice a haunting melody. “Or be consumed.” The grove pulsed with energy, the air thick with anticipation. Aurora stood at the edge of the abyss, the darkness beckoning her closer. “Face your fear,” the girl repeated, her smile widening. Aurora took a deep breath, the weight of the grove pressing down on her. She had come seeking answers, but now she stood on the precipice of something far more profound. “Show me,” she whispered, her voice steady despite the tremor in her heart. The girl’s laughter rang out, a sound that echoed through the grove, and Aurora felt the shadows swirl around her, pulling her into the depths of the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.903
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.065
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsms50
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count6
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"raced"
count3
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"gleaming"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count2
16
word"pulsed"
count3
17
word"echoed"
count4
18
word"racing"
count2
19
word"magnetic"
count1
20
word"resolve"
count1
21
word"vibrated"
count1
22
word"sent shivers down"
count1
23
word"quickened"
count2
24
word"tension"
count1
25
word"anticipation"
count1
26
word"profound"
count1
27
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"reminder"
4"scanning"
5"raced"
6"whisper"
7"sanctuary"
8"weight"
9"rhythmic"
10"silence"
11"echoing"
12"gleaming"
13"pulse"
14"chill"
15"flickered"
16"pulsed"
17"echoed"
18"racing"
19"magnetic"
20"resolve"
21"vibrated"
22"sent shivers down"
23"quickened"
24"tension"
25"anticipation"
26"profound"
27"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"k with anticipation"
94.16% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1038
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount929
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Evan1
Aurora14
persons
0"Evan"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.747
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"rhythm that seemed to resonate with the grove itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1038
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"escaped that life"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean19.22
std12.84
cv0.668
sampleLengths
057
146
210
333
446
540
610
714
836
934
1011
1133
1215
138
1429
1512
1623
1721
182
1923
2031
2112
2236
231
2417
252
2615
274
2820
299
3021
311
3225
332
3434
3514
3618
3716
384
3917
4017
412
4214
437
4424
455
4620
4730
4813
4923
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs165
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences105
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02903225806451613
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0032258064516129032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean9.89
std5.28
cv0.534
sampleLengths
013
116
228
317
412
55
612
710
89
93
1010
1111
1211
136
1414
153
1612
1713
1810
1917
2010
212
2212
236
244
2513
2613
2713
2811
2910
3011
3112
327
3314
343
3512
365
373
3813
3916
4012
4115
428
4315
446
452
466
4712
483
492
46.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3047619047619048
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners32
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Just the whisper of leaves,"
1"Just the rustle of leaves"
ratio0.023
71.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences86
matches
0"She had come here seeking"
1"She paused, scanning the clearing."
2"she muttered, though the words"
3"She turned, eyes darting toward"
4"she whispered to herself, shaking"
5"She had faced worse than"
6"She stepped deeper into the"
7"She could almost hear the"
8"Her voice broke the silence,"
9"She had to focus."
10"She reached for the pendant,"
11"She glanced around, half-expecting something"
12"she called again, her voice"
13"She squinted, trying to pierce"
14"She turned, but the figure"
15"she scolded herself"
16"She moved closer to the"
17"she whispered, the question hanging"
18"She closed her eyes, trying"
19"She took a step back,"
ratio0.372
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora stepped into The Fae"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She had come here seeking"
3"The moon hung low, casting"
4"Each step felt heavy, as"
5"She paused, scanning the clearing."
6"Shadows danced at the edges"
7"she muttered, though the words"
8"A rustle came from the"
9"Aurora’s heart raced."
10"She turned, eyes darting toward"
11"she whispered to herself, shaking"
12"She had faced worse than"
13"The memories of Evan’s anger"
14"This was different."
15"This was supposed to be"
16"She stepped deeper into the"
17"The air thickened, a weight"
18"She could almost hear the"
19"Her voice broke the silence,"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She had come here seeking answers, clutching the Heartstone Pendant in her pocket, its faint warmth a reminder of the unknown benefactor who had given it to her…"
1"The moon hung low, casting a silvery glow over the wildflowers that bloomed defiantly in the darkness."
2"She could almost hear the heartbeat of the grove, a slow, rhythmic thrum that matched her own."
3"The warmth spread through her fingers, a pulse that felt alive."
4"The girl’s laughter rang out, a sound that echoed through the grove, and Aurora felt the shadows swirl around her, pulling her into the depths of the unknown."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she muttered, though the words felt hollow"
1"she called again, her voice firmer this time"
2"she whispered, the question hanging in the air"
3"she shouted, her voice breaking the tension"
4"the girl asked, her voice lilting, almost musical"
5"Aurora stammered, her heart racing"
6"the girl urged, her voice a haunting melody"
7"the girl repeated, her smile widening"
8"she whispered, her voice steady despite the tremor in her heart"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she scolded (scold)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"she shouted (shout)"
6"Aurora stammered (stammer)"
7"she shouted (shout)"
8"the girl urged (urge)"
9"the girl repeated (repeat)"
10"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.839
rawRatio0.846
effectiveRatio0.71
77.0429%