Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRDSM0Q0NHWG10MZW2HZ8C

Run Details

Duration:
7.2s
Cost:
$0.000212

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before the first knock could land, the brass knocker clattering against the wood like a warning. Rory froze mid-step, her delivery bag slung over one shoulder, the weight of it suddenly feeling like a leaden anchor. The air in the hallway shifted—cooler, sharper—like someone had just exhaled a breath of winter. "Christ," she muttered, fingers tightening around the strap. The door swung wider, revealing the dim glow of the hallway lamp spilling into the stairwell. No one stood there. No one should have been there. Then the light flickered. A shadow moved. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat as the figure stepped into view, backlit by the glow of the streetlamp outside. Tall. Impeccably dressed. A cane tapped against the floor, the ivory handle catching the light like a blade in moonlight. "Lucien," she breathed, voice raw. The name tasted like ash. He didn’t turn. Didn’t speak. Just lifted his cane and used it to nudge the door shut behind him, sealing them in the narrow space between the stairwell and the flat’s entrance. The silence stretched, thick with the weight of everything unsaid. Then he finally looked at her. His amber eye caught the light first, sharp as a cut. The black one was hidden in shadow, unreadable. His lips quirked, just slightly, like he was amused by something. "You’re late," he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. "And you’re not delivering anything." Rory’s fingers twitched. She should have walked away. Should have turned and kept going, up the stairs, out the door, anywhere but here. But the scent of him—leather and something darker, something that made her skin prickle—was already seeping into her, wrapping around her like a second skin. "Lucien," she repeated, softer now. "What the hell are you doing here?" He finally turned, those eyes locking onto hers. The amber one burned, the black one watched. "I came to see you." Her breath hitched. "Why?" His cane tapped again, a rhythmic, insistent beat. "Because I’ve been looking for you for three years, Rory. And now I’ve found you." The name on his lips sent a jolt through her. *Rory.* Not *Aurora.* Not *Carter.* Just her. The way he’d called her once, long ago, when the world was simpler and the lines between them were clearer. She swallowed hard. "Three years?" she echoed. "You just now decide to show up?" His jaw tightened, just for a second. "Circumstances." She scoffed, stepping back instinctively. "Circumstances. Right." He didn’t rise to it. Just tilted his head, studying her. "You’ve changed." She looked down at herself—her delivery uniform, the smudged makeup, the way her hair was pulled back in a messy knot. "So have you." His lips twitched. "I’ve always been this way." Rory exhaled sharply, rubbing her temples. "What do you want, Lucien?" He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached into his coat, pulled out a folded piece of paper, and held it out. "This." She stared at it. A single address, scrawled in an elegant, precise hand. No note. No explanation. "Where’s that?" "Where I’m staying," he said. "For now." Rory’s fingers hovered over it, then curled around the paper. "You’re staying with me." His gaze flicked to hers, sharp. "I didn’t say that." "No," she agreed, voice low. "But you’re not leaving until you do." He didn’t argue. Just stepped closer, the cane tapping against the floorboards. The space between them shrank, the air between them thickening. Rory could feel the heat of him, the way his presence filled the room like a promise. "You always were stubborn," he murmured. She lifted her chin. "And you always were impossible." His lips curled, just slightly. "Impossible is right." Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She should have walked away. Should have told him to get lost. But the way he looked at her—like she was the only thing in the room—made her stomach twist. "Fine," she said, voice steadier than she felt. "But you’re sleeping on the couch." He raised an eyebrow. "And you’re sleeping in my bed?" Rory’s breath caught. "That’s not what I said." His smile was slow, dangerous. "No. It’s not." She should have walked away. But she didn’t. Instead, she stepped closer, the space between them disappearing. "What do you want, Lucien?" He reached up, his fingers brushing her cheek. The touch was light, almost hesitant. "I want to finish what we started." Rory’s breath hitched. She should have pulled away. Should have told him to stop. But she didn’t. She leaned into his touch, her eyes closing as his lips brushed hers. Soft. Demanding. *Lucien.* And just like that, the world narrowed to this moment, to this man, to the way his hands cupped her face, his body pressing hers against the door. The past melted away. The future didn’t exist. There was only this. Only him. And the way he kissed her like he’d been waiting for her all along.
total_cost0.0002125

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount829
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount829
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flickered"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"unreadable"
5"rhythmic"
6"echoed"
7"flicked"
8"could feel"
9"stomach"
10"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords823
ratio0.005
matches
0"Rory."
1"Aurora."
2"Carter."
3"Lucien."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount689
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Should3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Should"
places(empty)
globalScore0.774
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount823
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"like that, the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean16.8
std13.24
cv0.788
sampleLengths
055
134
24
33
440
510
642
76
830
914
1048
1112
1221
134
1423
1540
1611
178
187
1913
2024
218
2211
2323
2417
252
267
2714
2810
2912
3039
316
329
338
3436
3514
3610
378
388
398
4014
4121
4214
433
4416
4536
464
472
4814
93.44% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"was hidden"
1"was amused"
2"was pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
43.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences115
ratio0.035
matches
0"The air in the hallway shifted—cooler, sharper—like someone had just exhaled a breath of winter."
1"But the scent of him—leather and something darker, something that made her skin prickle—was already seeping into her, wrapping around her like a second skin."
2"She looked down at herself—her delivery uniform, the smudged makeup, the way her hair was pulled back in a messy knot."
3"But the way he looked at her—like she was the only thing in the room—made her stomach twist."
84.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.05755395683453238
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015827338129496403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean7.16
std5.75
cv0.803
sampleLengths
020
120
215
38
416
54
66
74
83
920
101
112
1217
135
145
153
162
1727
1810
196
2011
218
2211
239
245
253
265
2715
2825
295
307
318
328
335
343
351
368
3715
3810
397
4020
413
424
437
447
451
465
472
485
496
50.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3217391304347826
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then the light flickered."
1"Just lifted his cane and"
2"Then he finally looked at"
3"Just tilted his head, studying"
4"Instead, he reached into his"
5"Just stepped closer, the cane"
6"Instead, she stepped closer, the"
ratio0.091
53.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences77
matches
0"she muttered, fingers tightening around"
1"she breathed, voice raw"
2"He didn’t turn."
3"His amber eye caught the"
4"His lips quirked, just slightly,"
5"he said, voice smooth as"
6"She should have walked away."
7"she repeated, softer now"
8"He finally turned, those eyes"
9"Her breath hitched."
10"His cane tapped again, a"
11"She swallowed hard."
12"His jaw tightened, just for"
13"She scoffed, stepping back instinctively."
14"He didn’t rise to it."
15"She looked down at herself—her"
16"His lips twitched."
17"He didn’t answer right away."
18"She stared at it."
19"His gaze flicked to hers,"
ratio0.416
83.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences77
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"Rory froze mid-step, her delivery"
2"The air in the hallway"
3"she muttered, fingers tightening around"
4"The door swung wider, revealing"
5"A shadow moved."
6"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
7"A cane tapped against the"
8"she breathed, voice raw"
9"The name tasted like ash."
10"He didn’t turn."
11"The silence stretched, thick with"
12"His amber eye caught the"
13"The black one was hidden"
14"His lips quirked, just slightly,"
15"he said, voice smooth as"
16"Rory’s fingers twitched."
17"She should have walked away."
18"she repeated, softer now"
19"He finally turned, those eyes"
ratio0.753
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But the scent of him—leather and something darker, something that made her skin prickle—was already seeping into her, wrapping around her like a second skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she muttered, fingers tightening around the strap"
1"she breathed, voice raw"
2"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey"
3"she agreed, voice low"
4"she said, voice steadier than she felt"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"she agreed (agree)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.286
79.6961%