Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRE0MFTCWTFZRBRPBSPN79

Run Details

Duration:
13.9s
Cost:
$0.005712

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth like a held breath. Rory adjusted the strap of her backpack and stepped past the standing stones. The grove should’ve been empty. Instead, the air hummed. Not with wind—there wasn’t any—but with something deeper, something that vibrated in her molars. The wildflowers at her feet glowed faintly blue, petals unfurling toward her boots as if she carried a light. She crouched, brushed her fingers over them. They recoiled. A twig snapped. Rory’s head jerked up. Nothing. Just the ancient oaks, their gnarled branches twisting into the dark like arthritic fingers. She exhaled through her nose, slow. *You’re jumpy. It’s just the grove. Time’s weird here, that’s all.* She pulled the pendant out from under her shirt. The crimson gem caught the dim light, swirling with shadows that didn’t belong. Eva had told her about this place—*Isolde’s grove, where the veil’s thin*—but Eva hadn’t mentioned the way the trees leaned in when you weren’t looking. Rory turned in a slow circle. The standing stones at the grove’s edge were still there, but the path back had narrowed. The grass between them was taller now, swallowing the trail. Her pulse thudded in her throat. *Not real. You’re imagining it.* A whisper slithered past her ear. Not words. Just breath, wet and cold. She spun. The grove stretched endlessly in every direction, the trees multiplying in the dark. The pendant flared hot against her skin. She yanked it off, held it in her palm. The gem pulsed faster, matching her heartbeat. Something rustled behind her. Rory didn’t turn. She didn’t breathe. The rustling came again—closer—like fabric dragging over roots. Then silence. She forced herself to look. A figure stood between the trees. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs bent at wrong angles, joints popping as it shifted. No face. Just smooth skin stretched over a skull that wasn’t quite human. The pendant burned her hand. She dropped it. The gem hit the dirt and rolled, coming to rest against a root. The figure’s head tilted. A mouth split open where its face should’ve been, too wide, too many teeth. Rory ran. Branches lashed her arms. The grove twisted around her, paths doubling back, trees closing in. She skidded to a stop. The standing stones were gone. The figure wasn’t. It stepped forward, limbs unfolding like a spider’s. The pendant lay at its feet, pulsing. The gem’s glow reflected in its empty eye sockets. Rory’s breath came in ragged gasps. *Not real. Not real.* The figure lunged. She screamed. The grove swallowed the sound. The trees leaned in. The pendant’s light flickered—once, twice—then died.
total_cost0.005712

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount446
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount446
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"vibrated"
3"pulse"
4"whisper"
5"silence"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
81.82% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords26
totalWords440
ratio0.059
matches
0"You’re jumpy. It’s just the grove. Time’s weird here, that’s all."
1"Isolde’s grove, where the veil’s thin"
2"Not real. You’re imagining it."
3"Not real. Not real."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount440
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Eva2
Rory6
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.818
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite human"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount440
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean20
std15.08
cv0.754
sampleLengths
028
15
246
33
436
547
632
711
813
938
104
1116
125
1333
1439
152
1628
1724
1810
193
202
2115
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs88
matches
0"weren’t looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences67
ratio0.06
matches
0"Not with wind—there wasn’t any—but with something deeper, something that vibrated in her molars."
1"Eva had told her about this place—*Isolde’s grove, where the veil’s thin*—but Eva hadn’t mentioned the way the trees leaned in when you weren’t looking."
2"The rustling came again—closer—like fabric dragging over roots."
3"The pendant’s light flickered—once, twice—then died."
97.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount446
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.042600896860986545
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004484304932735426
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean6.57
std4.81
cv0.732
sampleLengths
015
113
25
34
414
519
67
72
83
94
101
1114
126
132
144
155
169
1713
1825
196
2016
2110
226
232
243
256
262
275
282
2913
307
319
327
334
343
353
368
372
385
396
401
412
4211
432
4411
455
463
4713
484
4914
40.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.31343283582089554
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners21
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences53
matches
0"Instead, the air hummed."
1"Just the ancient oaks, their"
2"Just breath, wet and cold."
3"Just smooth skin stretched over"
ratio0.075
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences53
matches
0"She crouched, brushed her fingers"
1"She exhaled through her nose,"
2"It’s just the grove."
3"She pulled the pendant out"
4"Her pulse thudded in her"
5"You’re imagining it.*"
6"She yanked it off, held"
7"She didn’t breathe."
8"She forced herself to look."
9"Its limbs bent at wrong"
10"She dropped it."
11"She skidded to a stop."
12"It stepped forward, limbs unfolding"
ratio0.245
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences53
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"The grove should’ve been empty."
3"The wildflowers at her feet"
4"She crouched, brushed her fingers"
5"A twig snapped."
6"Rory’s head jerked up."
7"She exhaled through her nose,"
8"It’s just the grove."
9"Time’s weird here, that’s all.*"
10"She pulled the pendant out"
11"The crimson gem caught the"
12"Eva had told her about"
13"Rory turned in a slow"
14"The standing stones at the"
15"The grass between them was"
16"Her pulse thudded in her"
17"You’re imagining it.*"
18"A whisper slithered past her"
19"The grove stretched endlessly in"
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The wildflowers at her feet glowed faintly blue, petals unfurling toward her boots as if she carried a light."
1"The grove twisted around her, paths doubling back, trees closing in."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.4023%