| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 446 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 446 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.82% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 440 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "You’re jumpy. It’s just the grove. Time’s weird here, that’s all." | | 1 | "Isolde’s grove, where the veil’s thin" | | 2 | "Not real. You’re imagining it." | | 3 | "Not real. Not real." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.82% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 440 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.818 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 440 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 20 | | std | 15.08 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 88 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with wind—there wasn’t any—but with something deeper, something that vibrated in her molars." | | 1 | "Eva had told her about this place—*Isolde’s grove, where the veil’s thin*—but Eva hadn’t mentioned the way the trees leaned in when you weren’t looking." | | 2 | "The rustling came again—closer—like fabric dragging over roots." | | 3 | "The pendant’s light flickered—once, twice—then died." |
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| 97.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 446 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.042600896860986545 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004484304932735426 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 6.57 | | std | 4.81 | | cv | 0.732 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 40.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.31343283582089554 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the air hummed." | | 1 | "Just the ancient oaks, their" | | 2 | "Just breath, wet and cold." | | 3 | "Just smooth skin stretched over" |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She crouched, brushed her fingers" | | 1 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 2 | "It’s just the grove." | | 3 | "She pulled the pendant out" | | 4 | "Her pulse thudded in her" | | 5 | "You’re imagining it.*" | | 6 | "She yanked it off, held" | | 7 | "She didn’t breathe." | | 8 | "She forced herself to look." | | 9 | "Its limbs bent at wrong" | | 10 | "She dropped it." | | 11 | "She skidded to a stop." | | 12 | "It stepped forward, limbs unfolding" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 7.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The grove should’ve been empty." | | 3 | "The wildflowers at her feet" | | 4 | "She crouched, brushed her fingers" | | 5 | "A twig snapped." | | 6 | "Rory’s head jerked up." | | 7 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 8 | "It’s just the grove." | | 9 | "Time’s weird here, that’s all.*" | | 10 | "She pulled the pendant out" | | 11 | "The crimson gem caught the" | | 12 | "Eva had told her about" | | 13 | "Rory turned in a slow" | | 14 | "The standing stones at the" | | 15 | "The grass between them was" | | 16 | "Her pulse thudded in her" | | 17 | "You’re imagining it.*" | | 18 | "A whisper slithered past her" | | 19 | "The grove stretched endlessly in" |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 16 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers at her feet glowed faintly blue, petals unfurling toward her boots as if she carried a light." | | 1 | "The grove twisted around her, paths doubling back, trees closing in." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |