Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRE2T3VBPW8PG3XFF4FF10

Run Details

Duration:
22.9s
Cost:
$0.017427
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, her bright blue eyes scanning the ancient oak standing stones that marked its boundary. The air shimmered with a faint distortion, a telltale sign of the Veil's presence. She felt the Heartstone Pendant pulse gently against her chest, its warmth a comforting reminder of its mysterious origins. Beside her, Nyx, the Shade, hovered in their incorporeal form, a silhouette of living shadow that seemed to blend seamlessly with the dappled light filtering through the trees. "Are you ready, Rory?" Nyx's voice was a whisper on the wind, barely audible yet resonant with an otherworldly timbre. "As ready as I'll ever be," Rory replied, her voice steady despite the flutter of nerves in her stomach. She adjusted the strap of her satchel, feeling the reassuring weight of the Fae-Forged Blade within. "Let's see what secrets this place holds." Together, they stepped across the threshold, the world around them shifting subtly as they entered the Grove. The air was cooler here, carrying the scent of wildflowers that bloomed in vibrant hues, defying the season. Time behaved differently in this place, a fact that Rory was acutely aware of. An hour inside could be mere minutes or days outside, a disorienting thought that she pushed aside as she focused on the path ahead. The Grove was a tapestry of colors and sounds, each step revealing new wonders. The trees were ancient, their gnarled branches twisting skyward, leaves whispering secrets in a language Rory couldn't quite grasp. Sunlight filtered through the canopy, casting intricate patterns on the forest floor, where delicate flowers swayed gently in an unseen breeze. "Look at this," Rory murmured, crouching to examine a cluster of luminescent mushrooms that glowed softly in the shadows. "I've never seen anything like it." Nyx drifted closer, their form solidifying slightly as they peered at the fungi. "The Fae have a way of bending nature to their will. These are likely touched by their magic." Rory nodded, rising to her feet and brushing dirt from her jeans. "It's beautiful, but there's something... unsettling about it too." "That's the nature of the Fae," Nyx replied, their voice carrying a hint of amusement. "Beauty and danger, intertwined." They continued deeper into the Grove, the path winding through thickets of brambles and overgrown roots. The air was alive with the hum of insects and the distant call of unseen creatures. Rory's senses were heightened, every rustle and whisper drawing her attention. She felt a thrill of discovery, tempered by a sense of unease that lingered at the edges of her awareness. As they walked, the landscape shifted subtly, the trees growing taller and more twisted, their bark etched with intricate patterns that seemed to pulse with a faint inner light. Rory paused, tracing a finger over the markings, feeling a tingle of energy beneath her skin. "These symbols," she said, glancing at Nyx. "Do you recognize them?" Nyx studied the patterns, their violet eyes glowing faintly. "They are wards, woven into the very fabric of the Grove. Protection, perhaps, or a warning." Rory's gaze lingered on the symbols, a sense of foreboding settling over her. "Let's keep moving. I have a feeling we're not alone here." They pressed on, the path narrowing as the trees closed in around them. The air grew cooler, the light dimming as if the sun itself was reluctant to penetrate the Grove's depths. Rory's heart quickened, a mix of anticipation and trepidation propelling her forward. Suddenly, the path opened into a clearing, a circle of standing stones rising from the earth like sentinels. In the center stood Isolde Varga, the Seer, her silver hair cascading down her back like a waterfall of moonlight. Her pale lavender eyes met Rory's, a knowing smile playing on her lips. "Welcome, Aurora Carter," Isolde greeted, her voice melodic and laced with riddles. "You seek answers, yet the questions remain unasked." Rory approached cautiously, aware of the Fae's penchant for misdirection. "I seek understanding, Isolde. The Grove, the Veil, the Heartstone... they all seem connected." Isolde inclined her head, her gaze shifting to Nyx. "And you, Nightwhisper, what do you seek in this place between worlds?" Nyx's form flickered, their voice a soft murmur. "I seek the truth of my existence, Seer. The shadows hold many secrets, but not all are mine to claim." Isolde's laughter was like the tinkling of bells, echoing through the clearing. "Truth is a fickle thing, ever-changing and elusive. But perhaps you will find what you seek, if you are willing to look beyond the surface." Rory felt a shiver run down her spine, the weight of Isolde's words settling over her like a cloak. She glanced at Nyx, their expression inscrutable, and knew that their journey was far from over. "Thank you, Isolde," Rory said, her voice firm despite the uncertainty that lingered in her mind. "We'll find our way." Isolde nodded, her eyes gleaming with an ancient wisdom. "The path is yours to walk, Aurora Carter. May it lead you to the answers you seek." With a final glance at the Seer, Rory turned back to the path, Nyx at her side. The Grove seemed to shift around them, the trees whispering secrets that danced just out of reach. Rory felt a sense of purpose settle over her, the thrill of discovery tempered by the knowledge that the journey ahead would be fraught with challenges. As they made their way back through the Grove, Rory's thoughts turned to the Heartstone Pendant, its warmth a constant presence against her skin. She wondered about its origins, the unknown benefactor who had gifted it to her, and the role it would play in the unfolding tapestry of her life. The Grove's boundary loomed ahead, the ancient oak standing stones marking the threshold between worlds. Rory paused, taking a moment to absorb the beauty and mystery of the place, the sense of wonder that had accompanied her every step. "Ready to step back into the world?" Nyx's voice was a gentle nudge, a reminder of the reality that awaited beyond the Veil. Rory nodded, a smile tugging at her lips. "Ready as I'll ever be." Together, they crossed the threshold, the Grove's magic fading into the background as they returned to the familiar world of Richmond Park. The sun hung low in the sky, casting long shadows across the grass, and Rory felt a sense of peace settle over her. The journey had only just begun, but she knew that with Nyx by her side, she was ready to face whatever lay ahead.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"suddenly"
5"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"tapestry"
count2
11
word"intricate"
count2
12
word"sense of"
count5
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"foreboding"
count1
16
word"depths"
count1
17
word"quickened"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
19
word"trepidation"
count1
20
word"sentinels"
count1
21
word"cascading"
count1
22
word"flickered"
count1
23
word"echoing"
count1
24
word"down her spine"
count1
25
word"gleaming"
count1
26
word"loomed"
count1
27
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"shimmered"
2"pulse"
3"warmth"
4"comforting"
5"reminder"
6"whisper"
7"otherworldly"
8"stomach"
9"weight"
10"tapestry"
11"intricate"
12"sense of"
13"etched"
14"tracing"
15"foreboding"
16"depths"
17"quickened"
18"anticipation"
19"trepidation"
20"sentinels"
21"cascading"
22"flickered"
23"echoing"
24"down her spine"
25"gleaming"
26"loomed"
27"familiar"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count2
highlights
0"a sense of unease"
1"a sense of foreboding"
47.84% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences54
matches
0"a sense of unease"
1"felt a thrill"
2"a sense of foreboding"
3"felt a shiver"
4"the sense of wonder"
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
37.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount890
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory20
Fae3
Grove9
Veil2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Nyx12
Shade1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde6
Varga1
Seer2
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Veil"
3"Nyx"
4"Shade"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
3"Seer"
4"Richmond"
5"Park"
globalScore0.376
windowScore0.5
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"shadow that seemed to blend seamlessly with the dappled light filtering through the trees"
1"quite grasp"
2"patterns that seemed to pulse with a faint inner light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1104
matches(empty)
71.43% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"thought that she"
1"knew that their"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean35.61
std18.37
cv0.516
sampleLengths
091
120
242
373
454
525
631
721
819
963
1045
1111
1225
1324
1444
1551
1620
1724
1821
1928
2037
2135
2220
2326
2460
2551
2639
2723
2813
2945
3023
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"were heightened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount891
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.026936026936026935
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.016835016835016835
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
99.38% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean15.77
std6.28
cv0.398
sampleLengths
030
114
219
328
420
519
616
77
817
918
1014
1124
1214
1319
1421
1519
166
1713
1818
1912
209
2115
224
2316
2416
2511
2620
2729
2816
297
304
319
3216
3313
3411
3513
3619
3712
3818
3920
4013
4112
428
4310
4414
459
4612
478
4820
4912
75.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4714285714285714
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners33
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Suddenly, the path opened into"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences54
matches
0"She felt the Heartstone Pendant"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"They continued deeper into the"
3"She felt a thrill of"
4"she said, glancing at Nyx"
5"They pressed on, the path"
6"Her pale lavender eyes met"
7"She glanced at Nyx, their"
8"She wondered about its origins,"
ratio0.167
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences54
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1"The air shimmered with a"
2"She felt the Heartstone Pendant"
3"Nyx's voice was a whisper"
4"Rory replied, her voice steady"
5"She adjusted the strap of"
6"The air was cooler here,"
7"Time behaved differently in this"
8"An hour inside could be"
9"The Grove was a tapestry"
10"The trees were ancient, their"
11"Sunlight filtered through the canopy,"
12"Rory murmured, crouching to examine"
13"Nyx drifted closer, their form"
14"Rory nodded, rising to her"
15"Nyx replied, their voice carrying"
16"They continued deeper into the"
17"The air was alive with"
18"Rory's senses were heightened, every"
19"She felt a thrill of"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Beside her, Nyx, the Shade, hovered in their incorporeal form, a silhouette of living shadow that seemed to blend seamlessly with the dappled light filtering th…"
1"The air was cooler here, carrying the scent of wildflowers that bloomed in vibrant hues, defying the season."
2"She felt a thrill of discovery, tempered by a sense of unease that lingered at the edges of her awareness."
3"As they walked, the landscape shifted subtly, the trees growing taller and more twisted, their bark etched with intricate patterns that seemed to pulse with a f…"
4"The air grew cooler, the light dimming as if the sun itself was reluctant to penetrate the Grove's depths."
5"She wondered about its origins, the unknown benefactor who had gifted it to her, and the role it would play in the unfolding tapestry of her life."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx replied, their voice carrying a hint of amusement"
1"Isolde greeted, her voice melodic and laced with riddles"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.083
72.3968%