| 42.11% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas’s voice lowered conspiratorially [conspiratorially]" | | 1 | "Rory leaned back [back]" | | 2 | "He asked suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.395 | | leniency | 0.789 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |
| 90.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1090 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1090 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "playfully" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "glint" | | 8 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The weight of his words" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 51 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1083 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 747 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | London | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | Aurora | 8 | | Alex | 5 | | Surprised | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Alex" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.965 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a mutinous exhale, yet there" |
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| 15.33% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.847 | | wordCount | 1083 | | matches | | 0 | "neither accusatory nor" | | 1 | "no longer a barricade but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 25.19 | | std | 14.41 | | cv | 0.572 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.44% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "He was taller than she remembered, a certain angular sharpness to his face that spoke of years stretched thin, yet his smile—the smile she had seen so many times—remained the same." | | 1 | "The warmth of his words obscured things unsaid—the letters she had never written, the calls he never made." | | 2 | "They spoke more as the night wound on—all the paths not taken." |
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| 97.77% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 752 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.0425531914893617 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018617021276595744 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 14.84 | | std | 7.01 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 84.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5205479452054794 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Silently, they sealed the promise" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 47.45% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Her day at the Golden" | | 1 | "It did nothing but deepen" | | 2 | "She rolled her eyes playfully," | | 3 | "He was taller than she" | | 4 | "He turned, surprise flickering across" | | 5 | "They stood awkwardly, the space" | | 6 | "He paused, eyes tracing the" | | 7 | "she teased, a teasing tone" | | 8 | "he replied, eyes holding secrets" | | 9 | "She fetched a bottle, a" | | 10 | "He caught her eye, the" | | 11 | "His laughter was bitter but" | | 12 | "She nodded, understanding nestled between" | | 13 | "He had looked invincible then," | | 14 | "She hesitated, fingers tracing the" | | 15 | "she said, smiling sadly" | | 16 | "They spoke more as the" | | 17 | "Their glasses emptied, refilled, and" | | 18 | "He asked suddenly, his tone" | | 19 | "she admitted, surprises passing over" |
| | ratio | 0.431 | |
| 28.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood behind the" | | 1 | "Her day at the Golden" | | 2 | "It did nothing but deepen" | | 3 | "Silas, perched on his usual" | | 4 | "She rolled her eyes playfully," | | 5 | "Silas said, lifting his glass" | | 6 | "Silas’s voice lowered conspiratorially," | | 7 | "Aurora followed his gaze, heart" | | 8 | "The man stepped into the" | | 9 | "He was taller than she" | | 10 | "He turned, surprise flickering across" | | 11 | "Aurora put down the towel" | | 12 | "They stood awkwardly, the space" | | 13 | "Rory said, her voice catching" | | 14 | "Alex said, running a hand" | | 15 | "He paused, eyes tracing the" | | 16 | "she teased, a teasing tone" | | 17 | "he replied, eyes holding secrets" | | 18 | "Alex said, nodding" | | 19 | "The warmth of his words" |
| | ratio | 0.863 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He was taller than she remembered, a certain angular sharpness to his face that spoke of years stretched thin, yet his smile—the smile she had seen so many time…" | | 1 | "He had looked invincible then, full of reckless youth, with eyes wild with the promise of a world that would never break him." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice catching on the words" | | 1 | "He caught, the depth of his words sinking into her" | | 2 | "He asked suddenly, his tone neither accusatory nor innocent" | | 3 | "she admitted, surprises passing over her features" | | 4 | "he said, fingers running across his brow, down to his stretched chin" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she teased (tease)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.289 | | leniency | 0.579 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |