Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRE2TPABM1CR8NMKWFGPHV

Run Details

Duration:
24.8s
Cost:
$0.016497
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood behind the bar, drying glasses absent-mindedly while the dim neon glow of The Raven's Nest sign seeped through the windowpanes, casting ethereal shadows across the patrons. Her day at the Golden Empress had been long, filled with cramped London traffic and rain that refused to relent. It did nothing but deepen the fatigue beneath her eyes, which burned more brightly than ever against the orange glow of the room. Silas, perched on his usual stool near the end, tipped his hat as he noticed her gaze wander, a smirk playing on his lips. “Long day, Rory?” She rolled her eyes playfully, aligning the glasses neatly on the shelf. “Nothing I can’t handle, Si. Though your drinks inventory could use some major work.” “Noted,” Silas said, lifting his glass in mock salute, but his eyes trailed to the doorway where a lanky figure hesitated in the entrance. Silas’s voice lowered conspiratorially, “Looks like one of yours.” Aurora followed his gaze, heart stopping for a moment. The man stepped into the dim light, shaking his umbrella like a man trying to shed the weight of the world. He was taller than she remembered, a certain angular sharpness to his face that spoke of years stretched thin, yet his smile—the smile she had seen so many times—remained the same. “Alex? Alex Morris?” He turned, surprise flickering across his worn features before he broke into a grin. “Aurora Carter, as I live and breathe.” Aurora put down the towel and walked around the bar, every step echoing loudly on the hardwood floor. They stood awkwardly, the space between them overflowing with memories. “It’s been what, seven years?” Rory said, her voice catching on the words. “Something like that. God, Rory, you haven’t changed a bit,” Alex said, running a hand through damp curls. He paused, eyes tracing the small crescent scar on her wrist, a ghost from their shared youth. “Speak for yourself. You’re like a different person entirely—did you grow another three inches?” she teased, a teasing tone that barely masked the wonder in her voice. “Being in backcountry Thailand does things to you,” he replied, eyes holding secrets she couldn’t yet decipher. There was silence, weighted and dense with everything they had left unsaid over the years. “Is this your place?” “Technically, no. I just crash here. Silas let me barge in a few years back.” “Good old Silas,” Alex said, nodding. “I see he’s still the patron saint of Soho strays.” The warmth of his words obscured things unsaid—the letters she had never written, the calls he never made. “Come sit,” Aurora offered, gesturing towards a booth in the corner, quieter than the main bar. She fetched a bottle, a deep amber scotch they’d once stolen sips from as teenagers, and joined him. “Let’s drink our way back to the past." As they poured, the clinking of glass and the distant hum of conversation punctuated their silence. “So, tell me about Thailand. How’s life travelled halfway across the world?” Rory leaned back, studying him while he took a contemplative swig. “It was less about me travelling the world and more about the world travelling through me.” He caught her eye, the depth of his words sinking into her. “I’ve been doing relief work. Building, teaching. Trying not to be a stranger to my own self.” Surprised, Aurora paused, her glass halfway to her lips. “Never pegged you for the altruistic kind, Alex.” “Never seemed that way, huh?” His laughter was bitter but not without humor. “I spent a lot of time running away from the man I used to be. Figured if I kept moving, I’d outrun him.” She nodded, understanding nestled between them like a lost chapter only they had read. “And did you?” “Not entirely. But maybe enough to catch my breath.” The weight of his words drew her back to the pulse of Cardiff nights, to those dusky rooftops they’d shared with cigarettes and dreams far too big for teenagers. He had looked invincible then, full of reckless youth, with eyes wild with the promise of a world that would never break him. “What about you, Aurora? You ever find what you were searching for?” She hesitated, fingers tracing the edge of her glass. “I’ve put down some roots. They’re stubborn, those things,” she said, smiling sadly. “Life didn’t turn out as straightforward as Pre-Law might’ve suggested.” They spoke more as the night wound on—all the paths not taken. Aurora shared bits of her life too, avoiding the darker patches, skirting around Evan and how the bruises faded but the shadows stayed on, even in the sterile daylight. “You’ve always been good at landing on your feet,” Alex said with admiration tracing his words. “I never doubted you for a second.” In truth, she hadn’t always landed, sometimes she’d simply stumbled back up. But what was life, if not a series of graceful falls masquerading as certainty? Their glasses emptied, refilled, and the barrier time had built softened just a little, laughter bubbling up like old times. “What do you regret, Rory?” He asked suddenly, his tone neither accusatory nor innocent. The question hung suspended between them, heavier than silence yet lighter than relief. “Leaving Cardiff,” she admitted, surprises passing over her features. “I just wish I had the courage to turn around and say what I needed to say.” “And what was that?” Aurora met his gaze. “That I was scared—scared of Evan, life, everything. And scared that I’d lose you too.” The admission felt like a mutinous exhale, yet there it was, out in the open. Alex sat quietly, absorbing. “I regret that too,” he said, fingers running across his brow, down to his stretched chin. “But maybe we both needed to find who we were on our own before we could find each other again.” In that moment, the weight of their shared history transformed, no longer a barricade but a bridge inviting back what had left and what could still be. Their conversation continued, moments of quiet communion mingling with the murmured chatter around them. Silently, they sealed the promise that whatever lay ahead would be faced together, nuanced with the resilience sowed through their past. Aurora poured the last amber remnants into their glasses, lifting hers with a sparkling glint in her eyes. “To not being the same people we were yesterday.” Alex raised his glass in return, resolve shaping a content pair of lips. “To becoming the people we’re meant to be.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Silas’s voice lowered conspiratorially [conspiratorially]"
1"Rory leaned back [back]"
2"He asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.158
90.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sadly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"sadly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1090
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"playfully"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count3
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"playfully"
1"weight"
2"echoing"
3"tracing"
4"silence"
5"warmth"
6"pulse"
7"glint"
8"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences51
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount747
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Silas3
Aurora8
Alex5
Surprised1
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Empress"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Alex"
6"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.965
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a mutinous exhale, yet there"
15.33% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.847
wordCount1083
matches
0"neither accusatory nor"
1"no longer a barricade but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean25.19
std14.41
cv0.572
sampleLengths
072
127
226
333
461
53
621
728
813
935
1027
1136
1215
1316
1418
1542
1616
1723
1845
1917
2036
2117
229
2352
2412
2532
2641
2723
2826
2920
3014
3113
3226
334
3419
3519
3636
3727
3835
3918
409
4113
428
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
25.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences73
ratio0.041
matches
0"He was taller than she remembered, a certain angular sharpness to his face that spoke of years stretched thin, yet his smile—the smile she had seen so many times—remained the same."
1"The warmth of his words obscured things unsaid—the letters she had never written, the calls he never made."
2"They spoke more as the night wound on—all the paths not taken."
97.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount752
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.0425531914893617
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.018617021276595744
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean14.84
std7.01
cv0.473
sampleLengths
029
120
223
324
43
512
614
724
89
99
1021
1131
123
1314
147
1518
1610
1713
1818
1917
2027
2117
2215
234
2415
256
2610
2718
2816
2918
308
3116
3223
3328
3417
359
368
3713
3823
3914
403
419
4229
4323
4412
459
4613
4710
4812
4929
84.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5205479452054794
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners38
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Silently, they sealed the promise"
ratio0.02
47.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences51
matches
0"Her day at the Golden"
1"It did nothing but deepen"
2"She rolled her eyes playfully,"
3"He was taller than she"
4"He turned, surprise flickering across"
5"They stood awkwardly, the space"
6"He paused, eyes tracing the"
7"she teased, a teasing tone"
8"he replied, eyes holding secrets"
9"She fetched a bottle, a"
10"He caught her eye, the"
11"His laughter was bitter but"
12"She nodded, understanding nestled between"
13"He had looked invincible then,"
14"She hesitated, fingers tracing the"
15"she said, smiling sadly"
16"They spoke more as the"
17"Their glasses emptied, refilled, and"
18"He asked suddenly, his tone"
19"she admitted, surprises passing over"
ratio0.431
28.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences51
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood behind the"
1"Her day at the Golden"
2"It did nothing but deepen"
3"Silas, perched on his usual"
4"She rolled her eyes playfully,"
5"Silas said, lifting his glass"
6"Silas’s voice lowered conspiratorially,"
7"Aurora followed his gaze, heart"
8"The man stepped into the"
9"He was taller than she"
10"He turned, surprise flickering across"
11"Aurora put down the towel"
12"They stood awkwardly, the space"
13"Rory said, her voice catching"
14"Alex said, running a hand"
15"He paused, eyes tracing the"
16"she teased, a teasing tone"
17"he replied, eyes holding secrets"
18"Alex said, nodding"
19"The warmth of his words"
ratio0.863
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He was taller than she remembered, a certain angular sharpness to his face that spoke of years stretched thin, yet his smile—the smile she had seen so many time…"
1"He had looked invincible then, full of reckless youth, with eyes wild with the promise of a world that would never break him."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory said, her voice catching on the words"
1"He caught, the depth of his words sinking into her"
2"He asked suddenly, his tone neither accusatory nor innocent"
3"she admitted, surprises passing over her features"
4"he said, fingers running across his brow, down to his stretched chin"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she teased (tease)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.579
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.105
77.0942%