Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRE78RFBTZVK0FZ7XG1N43

Run Details

Duration:
40.0s
Cost:
$0.013696

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt clicked. Rory’s fingers hovered over the last one, her breath shallow. Three locks—Eva’s paranoia, not hers. But tonight, the weight of them pressed against her ribs like a warning. She twisted the knob. The door swung open before she could push it all the way. Lucien stood there, one hand braced against the frame, the other gripping his cane. His amber eye caught the dim hallway light, sharp as a blade. The black one swallowed it whole. “You changed the locks,” he said. Rory’s pulse jumped. “Eva did.” “Still. You didn’t stop her.” She stepped back, letting the door creak wider. The scent of him—bergamot and something darker, like burnt sugar—slid into the flat before he did. Ptolemy arched his back on the armchair, tail flicking, but didn’t bolt. Traitor. Lucien ducked under the low frame, his shoulders nearly brushing the doorjamb. He straightened, the movement effortless, like he’d never had to squeeze himself into a space too small for him. His gaze flicked over the stacks of books, the half-empty mug of tea on the coffee table, the rumpled blanket on the couch where Rory had been sleeping. “You’re staying here now,” he said. “Temporarily.” “Since when?” “Since I needed a place to breathe.” His jaw tightened. The silence between them stretched, thick with the things they weren’t saying. The last time they’d seen each other, she’d walked out of his office without looking back. The time before that, she’d kissed him like she could drown in him. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the back of the couch, his green eyes fixed on Lucien. The cat’s tail twitched, and for a second, Rory envied him. No history. No regrets. Lucien’s fingers flexed around his cane. “I need your help.” She crossed her arms. “You have a whole network of people who owe you favors. Why me?” “Because you’re the only one who won’t ask questions.” “That’s not true.” “It is.” He stepped closer, the hem of his charcoal suit brushing against the edge of the coffee table. “You never do.” Rory’s throat went dry. The last time he’d stood this close, she’d pressed her palm against his chest and felt the heat of him through his shirt. The time before that, she’d traced the scar along his collarbone with her teeth. She turned away, busying herself with the kettle. “Tea?” “No.” “Then why are you here, Lucien?” He exhaled, sharp. “There’s a job. High risk. High reward.” “How high?” “Enough to get you out of London. Permanently.” The kettle whistled. Rory poured the water, her hands steady, but her mind raced. She’d dreamed of leaving—of boarding a train with nothing but a backpack and a new name. But not like this. Not with him. “What’s the catch?” she asked. “You’ll be working with me.” She set the mug down too hard. Tea sloshed over the rim. “That’s not a catch. That’s a red flag.” Lucien’s mouth quirked, just for a second. “You always did have a way with words.” “And you always did have a way of showing up when it’s most inconvenient.” He reached into his coat and pulled out a folded piece of paper. The edges were singed, like it had been pulled from a fire. He held it out. “This is why I’m here.” Rory didn’t take it. “What is it?” “A name. An address. A time.” “And?” “And someone wants it buried.” She finally looked at him. Really looked. The shadows under his eyes were deeper than she remembered. The lines around his mouth were new. “Who?” she asked. “Does it matter?” “Yes.” He hesitated. Then, quietly: “Evan.” The name hit her like a punch. Rory’s fingers curled into her palms, her nails biting into the crescent scar on her wrist. Evan. The man who’d left her with bruises and a restraining order. The man who’d shown up at her flat two weeks ago, drunk and demanding, before Eva’s boyfriend had thrown him out. Lucien’s gaze dropped to her wrist. His voice was low. “He’s not just looking for you anymore. He’s looking for something you have.” “I don’t have anything.” “You do.” He tapped the paper. “This.” Rory snatched it from his hand. The paper was warm, like it had been in his pocket for hours. She unfolded it. A single line of text, written in a hand she didn’t recognize: *Midnight. The old distillery. Bring the ledger.* She looked up. “What ledger?” “The one your father kept.” Her breath caught. “My father’s dead.” “Not all his secrets are.” Rory’s chest tightened. Her father’s study, the locked drawer, the key she’d found taped under his desk after the funeral. She’d never opened it. Never wanted to. “This is about my family,” she said. “Yes.” “And Evan?” “He’s working for someone. Someone who wants what’s in that ledger.” She crumpled the paper in her fist. “Why now? Why after all this time?” Lucien didn’t answer. He didn’t have to. She already knew. Because she’d run. Because she’d hidden. Because she’d thought she was safe. Ptolemy chose that moment to launch himself at Lucien’s leg, claws out. Lucien didn’t flinch. He just reached down and scratched the cat behind the ears, his expression unreadable. Rory’s voice was quiet. “You could’ve sent a message.” “I could’ve.” “But you didn’t.” “No.” “Why?” He looked at her then, really looked at her. His amber eye burned. The black one was a void. “Because I needed to see you.” The words hung between them, heavy and dangerous. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She wanted to step back. She wanted to step forward. She wanted to pretend she hadn’t spent the last six months trying to forget the way his mouth felt against hers. She settled for turning away. “The distillery. Where is it?” “Southwark. Abandoned. Guarded.” “By who?” “Men with guns. Men with worse.” She exhaled. “And you want me to walk in there with you.” “Yes.” “Why me?” “Because you’re the only one who can get close enough.” “To what?” He didn’t answer. Instead, he reached into his coat again and pulled out a small, leather-bound book. The cover was worn, the edges frayed. He held it out. Rory didn’t take it. “What is that?” “Your father’s ledger.” She stared at it. “You had it this whole time.” “Yes.” “And you didn’t think to give it to me before now?” “I didn’t think you’d want it.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “You don’t know what I want.” “Don’t I?” The air between them crackled. Rory’s fingers itched to slap him. To kiss him. To do something, anything, to break the tension coiling in her gut. Instead, she took the ledger. The leather was warm, like it had been pressed against his skin. She flipped it open. Numbers. Dates. Names she didn’t recognize. And then, halfway down a page, her own name. Scrawled in her father’s handwriting. *Rory—safe deposit box 12. Key in the blue tin.* She snapped the book shut. “What’s in the box?” “Something your father didn’t want anyone to find.” “Including me?” “Especially you.” She looked up. Lucien’s face was unreadable, but his knuckles were white around his cane. “You could’ve told me,” she said. “I could’ve.” “But you didn’t.” “No.” “Why?” He stepped closer. The scent of him wrapped around her, familiar and intoxicating. “Because I was afraid.” “Of what?” “Of this.” His hand brushed against hers, his fingers warm. “Of you walking away again.” Rory’s breath hitched. The ledger burned in her grip. She wanted to throw it across the room. She wanted to press it to her chest and never let go. Instead, she met his gaze. “I’m not walking away.” “No?” “No.” She swallowed. “But I’m not doing this for you.” Lucien’s mouth curved, just slightly. “I wouldn’t expect you to.” She turned away, her heart pounding. The ledger felt heavy in her hands. The past, pressing against her skin. The future, uncertain and dangerous. Ptolemy wound himself around her ankles, purring. She reached down and scratched his ears, her fingers trembling. Lucien’s voice was quiet behind her. “We leave at midnight.” She didn’t look back. “I know.”
total_cost0.013696

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences89
tagDensity0.112
leniency0.225
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"effortless"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"effortless"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"traced"
6"raced"
7"unreadable"
8"tension"
9"familiar"
10"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences219
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords16
totalWords1360
ratio0.012
matches
0"Midnight. The old distillery. Bring the ledger."
1"Rory—safe deposit box 12. Key in the blue tin."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount990
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Rory16
Lucien12
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore0.692
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1360
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences219
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs110
mean12.36
std12.99
cv1.051
sampleLengths
031
14
244
36
45
55
637
759
86
91
102
117
1244
1333
1410
1517
169
173
1822
1941
209
211
226
2310
242
258
2637
275
285
2920
3015
3114
3234
337
346
351
365
3724
383
393
401
415
4256
4323
444
457
4634
477
485
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"were singed"
1"been pulled"
2"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs195
matches
0"weren’t saying"
90.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences219
ratio0.018
matches
0"Three locks—Eva’s paranoia, not hers."
1"The scent of him—bergamot and something darker, like burnt sugar—slid into the flat before he did."
2"She’d dreamed of leaving—of boarding a train with nothing but a backpack and a new name."
3"*Rory—safe deposit box 12." 12/1/2001, 12:00:00 AM
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount996
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028112449799196786
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006024096385542169
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences219
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences219
mean6.21
std4.69
cv0.755
sampleLengths
03
110
25
313
44
512
614
712
86
96
103
112
125
138
1416
1512
161
1712
1819
1928
206
211
222
237
243
2512
2616
2713
2818
2911
302
312
326
334
344
3513
369
373
3819
393
404
4123
4214
438
441
451
466
473
487
492
40.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.2648401826484018
totalSentences219
uniqueOpeners58
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences123
matches
0"Instead, he reached into his"
1"Instead, she took the ledger."
2"Instead, she met his gaze."
ratio0.024
70.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences123
matches
0"She twisted the knob."
1"His amber eye caught the"
2"She stepped back, letting the"
3"He straightened, the movement effortless,"
4"His gaze flicked over the"
5"His jaw tightened."
6"She crossed her arms."
7"He stepped closer, the hem"
8"She turned away, busying herself"
9"He exhaled, sharp."
10"She’d dreamed of leaving—of boarding"
11"She set the mug down"
12"He reached into his coat"
13"He held it out."
14"She finally looked at him."
15"His voice was low."
16"He tapped the paper"
17"She unfolded it."
18"She looked up."
19"Her breath caught."
ratio0.374
29.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences123
matches
0"The deadbolt clicked."
1"Rory’s fingers hovered over the"
2"She twisted the knob."
3"The door swung open before"
4"Lucien stood there, one hand"
5"His amber eye caught the"
6"The black one swallowed it"
7"Rory’s pulse jumped."
8"She stepped back, letting the"
9"The scent of him—bergamot and"
10"Ptolemy arched his back on"
11"Lucien ducked under the low"
12"He straightened, the movement effortless,"
13"His gaze flicked over the"
14"His jaw tightened."
15"The silence between them stretched,"
16"The last time they’d seen"
17"The time before that, she’d"
18"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
19"The cat’s tail twitched, and"
ratio0.862
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences123
matches
0"Because she’d run."
1"Because she’d hidden."
2"Because she’d thought she was"
3"To kiss him."
4"To do something, anything, to"
ratio0.041
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The man who’d shown up at her flat two weeks ago, drunk and demanding, before Eva’s boyfriend had thrown him out."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences89
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.135
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.5660%