| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 985 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 985 | | totalAiIsms | 44 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "down her spine" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "symphony" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "charged" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "wavered" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "tinged" | | 17 | "vibrated" | | 18 | "chill" | | 19 | "stomach" | | 20 | "churned" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "racing" | | 23 | "sinister" | | 24 | "cacophony" | | 25 | "tangible" | | 26 | "beacon" | | 27 | "oppressive" | | 28 | "wavering" | | 29 | "thundered" | | 30 | "tension" | | 31 | "familiar" | | 32 | "resolve" | | 33 | "depths" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a shiver ran down her spine" | | 1 | "stomach churned" |
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| 99.36% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "d with warmth" | | 1 | "d with fear" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 983 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 975 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.782 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "not quite human" | | 2 | "limbs that seemed to stretch and bend in unnatural ways" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 983 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.46% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 44.68 | | std | 13.81 | | cv | 0.309 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 38 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 165 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 977 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03582395087001024 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014329580348004094 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 59.06% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 15.12 | | std | 4.5 | | cv | 0.298 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 54.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3384615384615385 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Again, silence answered, deep and" | | 1 | "Then, with a suddenness that" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "She paused, listening, but heard" | | 2 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 3 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 4 | "Her heart quickened, a drumbeat" | | 5 | "It came from somewhere to" | | 6 | "Her voice wavered, betraying the" | | 7 | "She pressed on, each step" | | 8 | "She strained to see, but" | | 9 | "Her grip tightened on the" | | 10 | "She turned in a slow" | | 11 | "Her voice rang out, defiant" | | 12 | "She took a step back," | | 13 | "It was tall, impossibly so," | | 14 | "Her voice was a ragged" | | 15 | "Her heart thundered in her" | | 16 | "She glanced around, half-expecting the" | | 17 | "She turned, retracing her steps" |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 21.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung low, a" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "Rory clutched the Heartstone Pendant," | | 4 | "She had come here for" | | 5 | "The pendant had pulsed with" | | 6 | "The Grove was eerily quiet," | | 7 | "Rory's footsteps crunched softly on" | | 8 | "She paused, listening, but heard" | | 9 | "The silence pressed in on" | | 10 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 11 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "The air felt different here," | | 13 | "Rory's eyes darted to the" | | 14 | "Her heart quickened, a drumbeat" | | 15 | "A soft rustling reached her" | | 16 | "It came from somewhere to" | | 17 | "Rory turned sharply, her eyes" | | 18 | "Nothing moved, yet the sensation" | | 19 | "Her voice wavered, betraying the" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 76.92% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, as she stepped over" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 28.06% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent guardians, their gnarled forms casting long shadows that danced across the ground." | | 1 | "The pendant had pulsed with warmth earlier that evening, a sensation that tugged at her curiosity and led her to this secluded clearing." | | 2 | "The air felt different here, heavier, as if charged with an unseen energy." | | 3 | "She pressed on, each step a conscious effort against the growing dread that clawed at her insides." | | 4 | "The shadows coalesced again, forming a shape that lingered just beyond the reach of the moonlight." | | 5 | "It was tall, impossibly so, with limbs that seemed to stretch and bend in unnatural ways." | | 6 | "The hum crescendoed, a cacophony that filled her ears, drowning out rational thought." | | 7 | "Rory stumbled backward, her foot catching on a root, sending her sprawling to the ground." | | 8 | "Then, with a suddenness that left her reeling, the figure dissolved into the shadows, leaving only the echo of its presence behind." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |