Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTREDEEN5EE2NY87Y3EA7NQ

Run Details

Duration:
28.7s
Cost:
$0.000674
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped into the moonlit clearing, her heart pounding in her chest. It had been months since she ventured into the Fae Grove, not since that summer night when everything changed. She'd promised herself she would never return, but the voice on the phone had been persuasive, almost desperate. "Please, Rory, I need your help. I'm in the Grove, and I can't leave. Come find me." The voice belonged to her childhood friend, Eva. They hadn't spoken in years, not since Rory fled Cardiff for London, leaving her past behind. But the fear in Eva's voice had been undeniable, and despite her better judgment, Rory found herself drawn back to the place she swore she'd never set foot in again. At first glance, the Grove appeared just as she remembered – the ancient oaks towering overhead, their branches interlocked to form a canopy of shadows and moonlight; the wildflowers blooming in impossible colors and numbers, as if time itself had stopped in this hidden corner of the world; the unnatural stillness that seemed to suffocate all sound, as if the very air had been rendered thick and heavy by some unseen force. But as Rory moved deeper into the clearing, a sense of unease began to trickle down her spine. There was something different about the Grove tonight, something that made her skin prickle with apprehension. She tried to shake off the feeling, telling herself it was just nerves from being back in a place with so many bad memories. But the deeper she walked into the Grove, the stronger the sense of wrongness became. In the flickering moonlight, shadows moved where no shadows should have been. The trees seemed to bend and twist in unnatural ways, their branches reaching out like grasping fingers. The air grew colder, the scent of wildflowers giving way to a smell of decay and rot that made Rory's stomach turn. She tried to call out to Eva, her voice trembling in the oppressive silence. "Eva? Are you there? It's me, Rory." No answer came, save for a soft rustling of leaves that sounded too much like whispering for Rory's comfort. Keep moving, she told herself, hugging her arms around her torso as if she could hold in the warmth that seemed to leech out of the air. You came here for Eva. You can't leave without finding her. But even as she walked, the realization was growing inside her that something was very wrong in the Grove tonight. The shadows were not just shadows – they were darker, more substantial, moving with a purpose and intent that made Rory's blood run cold. She could feel them watching her, unseen eyes tracking her movements as she stumbled through the clearing, her breath coming in short gasps. The trees no longer offered shelter; they now loomed over her like malevolent giants, their roots snaking across the ground, ready to trip her at any moment. A sudden sound made Rory freeze mid-step – a low moan, almost inaudible, but undeniably real. It was followed by another, and then a chorus of voices that seemed to rise up from the very earth itself. Ghostly whispers intertwined with mournful cries, the cacophony swelling into a symphony of despair that echoed through the Grove. Rory clamped her hands over her ears, trying to block out the horrendous noise. But it was no use – the voices seemed to seep directly into her mind, filling her with a sense of sorrow and loss that threatened to overwhelm her completely. She needed to find Eva, to get them both out of this nightmare before it was too late. But the more she tried to move, the more the shadows seemed to close in around her, constricting her movements until she could barely take a step without feeling as if she were wading through tar. Then, just as suddenly as they had begun, the voices fell silent. The shadows retreated, and the air grew still once more. Rory stood rooted to the spot, her heart hammering against her ribs as she tried to make sense of what had just happened. That was when she saw it – a flicker of light in the darkness, pulsing with a soft inner glow that drew her eye like a beacon. It was the Heartstone Pendant, given to her by that unknown benefactor all those months ago. And now, it seemed to be offering her the only hope of escape from this terrifying place. With trembling hands, Rory reached for the pendant, pulling it from beneath her shirt. She held it up to the moonlight, watching as the crimson gemstone began to pulse steadily, growing warmer in her grasp with each passing second. "Please," Rory whispered, her voice shaking with fear and desperation. "Please, get me out of here." As if in response, the pendant began to glow brighter, the light spilling from the gemstone to engulf her entire hand. The warmth spread up her arm, through her torso, and into her chest, filling her with a sense of calm that seemed to push back against the terror that threatened to consume her. Rory closed her eyes, focusing on the warmth of the pendant as it grew brighter and brighter. She thought of Eva, of the promise she had made to find her friend, no matter what. And then, just as it seemed the light could grow no brighter, Rory felt herself being pulled from the Grove – not physically, but spiritually, as if her very soul were being tugged from her body by an invisible force. She opened her eyes, finding herself standing in a familiar part of the Grove – the entrance, where the ancient oaks marked the boundary between this world and the world beyond. The shadows were gone, the air warmed once more by the sweet scent of wildflowers. Eva stood before her, her face pale and drawn but alive. Rory ran to her friend, embracing her tightly as the relief washed over her. They were safe, for now. But something told Rory that this was only the beginning – that the Grove had not yet finished with her, and that the darkness she had encountered tonight would return. She shivered, holding Eva closer as she whispered, "Thank you for coming back for me, Rory. I knew you would." Rory could only nod, trying to keep her voice steady as she replied, "I told you I'd never leave you, Eva. And now, we need to get the hell out of here."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory could only [only]"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
67.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1081
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"completely"
2"suddenly"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1081
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count5
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"apprehension"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count3
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"cacophony"
count1
11
word"symphony"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"beacon"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"sense of"
2"down her spine"
3"apprehension"
4"stomach"
5"oppressive"
6"silence"
7"warmth"
8"could feel"
9"loomed"
10"cacophony"
11"symphony"
12"echoed"
13"flicker"
14"beacon"
15"pulse"
16"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of unease"
60.90% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences52
matches
0"a sense of unease"
1"e with apprehension"
2"a sense of sorrow"
3"g with fear"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount15
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1088
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Keep moving, she told herself, hugging her arms around her torso as if she could hold in the warmth that seemed to leech…"
67.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1026
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove9
Eva8
Rory17
Cardiff1
London1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.672
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"stillness that seemed to suffocate all sound, as if the very air had been rendered thick and heavy by some unseen force"
1"warmth that seemed to leech out of the air"
2"voices that seemed to rise up from the very earth itself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.919
wordCount1088
matches
0"not physically, but spiritually, as if her very soul were being tugged from her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"beginning – that the"
65.75% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean43.52
std16.54
cv0.38
sampleLengths
066
154
272
373
451
521
619
738
844
950
1056
1144
1254
1345
1460
1539
1616
1754
1834
1940
2046
2111
2249
2320
2432
78.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences52
matches
0"been rendered"
1"was followed"
2"being pulled"
3"being tugged"
4"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"were wading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences55
ratio0.164
matches
0"At first glance, the Grove appeared just as she remembered – the ancient oaks towering overhead, their branches interlocked to form a canopy of shadows and moonlight; the wildflowers blooming in impossible colors and numbers, as if time itself had stopped in this hidden corner of the world; the unnatural stillness that seemed to suffocate all sound, as if the very air had been rendered thick and heavy by some unseen force."
1"The shadows were not just shadows – they were darker, more substantial, moving with a purpose and intent that made Rory's blood run cold."
2"The trees no longer offered shelter; they now loomed over her like malevolent giants, their roots snaking across the ground, ready to trip her at any moment."
3"A sudden sound made Rory freeze mid-step – a low moan, almost inaudible, but undeniably real."
4"But it was no use – the voices seemed to seep directly into her mind, filling her with a sense of sorrow and loss that threatened to overwhelm her completely."
5"That was when she saw it – a flicker of light in the darkness, pulsing with a soft inner glow that drew her eye like a beacon."
6"And then, just as it seemed the light could grow no brighter, Rory felt herself being pulled from the Grove – not physically, but spiritually, as if her very soul were being tugged from her body by an invisible force."
7"She opened her eyes, finding herself standing in a familiar part of the Grove – the entrance, where the ancient oaks marked the boundary between this world and the world beyond."
8"But something told Rory that this was only the beginning – that the Grove had not yet finished with her, and that the darkness she had encountered tonight would return."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1019
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03925417075564279
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012757605495583905
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean19.78
std10.67
cv0.54
sampleLengths
012
119
218
317
48
516
630
772
818
916
1024
1115
1212
1317
1422
1514
167
1719
1827
195
206
2120
2224
2323
2427
2516
2621
2719
2814
2930
3018
3136
3212
3310
3423
3527
3616
3717
3814
3925
4010
416
4221
4333
4417
4517
4640
4731
4815
4911
58.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.38181818181818183
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners21
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Then, just as suddenly as"
ratio0.019
96.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences52
matches
0"It had been months since"
1"She'd promised herself she would"
2"They hadn't spoken in years,"
3"She tried to shake off"
4"She tried to call out"
5"You came here for Eva."
6"You can't leave without finding"
7"She could feel them watching"
8"It was followed by another,"
9"She needed to find Eva,"
10"It was the Heartstone Pendant,"
11"She held it up to"
12"She thought of Eva, of"
13"She opened her eyes, finding"
14"They were safe, for now."
15"She shivered, holding Eva closer"
ratio0.308
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences52
matches
0"Rory stepped into the moonlit"
1"It had been months since"
2"She'd promised herself she would"
3"The voice belonged to her"
4"They hadn't spoken in years,"
5"She tried to shake off"
6"The trees seemed to bend"
7"The air grew colder, the"
8"She tried to call out"
9"You came here for Eva."
10"You can't leave without finding"
11"The shadows were not just"
12"She could feel them watching"
13"The trees no longer offered"
14"A sudden sound made Rory"
15"It was followed by another,"
16"Rory clamped her hands over"
17"She needed to find Eva,"
18"The shadows retreated, and the"
19"Rory stood rooted to the"
ratio0.654
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"As if in response, the"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"At first glance, the Grove appeared just as she remembered – the ancient oaks towering overhead, their branches interlocked to form a canopy of shadows and moon…"
1"There was something different about the Grove tonight, something that made her skin prickle with apprehension."
2"The trees seemed to bend and twist in unnatural ways, their branches reaching out like grasping fingers."
3"No answer came, save for a soft rustling of leaves that sounded too much like whispering for Rory's comfort."
4"She could feel them watching her, unseen eyes tracking her movements as she stumbled through the clearing, her breath coming in short gasps."
5"Ghostly whispers intertwined with mournful cries, the cacophony swelling into a symphony of despair that echoed through the Grove."
6"But it was no use – the voices seemed to seep directly into her mind, filling her with a sense of sorrow and loss that threatened to overwhelm her completely."
7"But the more she tried to move, the more the shadows seemed to close in around her, constricting her movements until she could barely take a step without feelin…"
8"The warmth spread up her arm, through her torso, and into her chest, filling her with a sense of calm that seemed to push back against the terror that threatene…"
9"And then, just as it seemed the light could grow no brighter, Rory felt herself being pulled from the Grove – not physically, but spiritually, as if her very so…"
10"She opened her eyes, finding herself standing in a familiar part of the Grove – the entrance, where the ancient oaks marked the boundary between this world and …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory whispered, her voice shaking with fear and desperation"
1"Rory could only, trying to keep her voice steady as she replied,"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.333
64.8116%