| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory could only [only]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |
| 67.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1081 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "down her spine" | | 3 | "apprehension" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "cacophony" | | 11 | "symphony" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "beacon" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| 60.90% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "e with apprehension" | | 2 | "a sense of sorrow" | | 3 | "g with fear" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 15 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 71 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1088 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Keep moving, she told herself, hugging her arms around her torso as if she could hold in the warmth that seemed to leech…" |
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| 67.15% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1026 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 9 | | Eva | 8 | | Rory | 17 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.672 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "stillness that seemed to suffocate all sound, as if the very air had been rendered thick and heavy by some unseen force" | | 1 | "warmth that seemed to leech out of the air" | | 2 | "voices that seemed to rise up from the very earth itself" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.919 | | wordCount | 1088 | | matches | | 0 | "not physically, but spiritually, as if her very soul were being tugged from her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | |
| 65.75% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 43.52 | | std | 16.54 | | cv | 0.38 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 32 |
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| 78.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "been rendered" | | 1 | "was followed" | | 2 | "being pulled" | | 3 | "being tugged" | | 4 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0.164 | | matches | | 0 | "At first glance, the Grove appeared just as she remembered – the ancient oaks towering overhead, their branches interlocked to form a canopy of shadows and moonlight; the wildflowers blooming in impossible colors and numbers, as if time itself had stopped in this hidden corner of the world; the unnatural stillness that seemed to suffocate all sound, as if the very air had been rendered thick and heavy by some unseen force." | | 1 | "The shadows were not just shadows – they were darker, more substantial, moving with a purpose and intent that made Rory's blood run cold." | | 2 | "The trees no longer offered shelter; they now loomed over her like malevolent giants, their roots snaking across the ground, ready to trip her at any moment." | | 3 | "A sudden sound made Rory freeze mid-step – a low moan, almost inaudible, but undeniably real." | | 4 | "But it was no use – the voices seemed to seep directly into her mind, filling her with a sense of sorrow and loss that threatened to overwhelm her completely." | | 5 | "That was when she saw it – a flicker of light in the darkness, pulsing with a soft inner glow that drew her eye like a beacon." | | 6 | "And then, just as it seemed the light could grow no brighter, Rory felt herself being pulled from the Grove – not physically, but spiritually, as if her very soul were being tugged from her body by an invisible force." | | 7 | "She opened her eyes, finding herself standing in a familiar part of the Grove – the entrance, where the ancient oaks marked the boundary between this world and the world beyond." | | 8 | "But something told Rory that this was only the beginning – that the Grove had not yet finished with her, and that the darkness she had encountered tonight would return." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1019 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03925417075564279 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012757605495583905 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 19.78 | | std | 10.67 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 72 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 58.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.38181818181818183 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 64.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, just as suddenly as" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 96.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been months since" | | 1 | "She'd promised herself she would" | | 2 | "They hadn't spoken in years," | | 3 | "She tried to shake off" | | 4 | "She tried to call out" | | 5 | "You came here for Eva." | | 6 | "You can't leave without finding" | | 7 | "She could feel them watching" | | 8 | "It was followed by another," | | 9 | "She needed to find Eva," | | 10 | "It was the Heartstone Pendant," | | 11 | "She held it up to" | | 12 | "She thought of Eva, of" | | 13 | "She opened her eyes, finding" | | 14 | "They were safe, for now." | | 15 | "She shivered, holding Eva closer" |
| | ratio | 0.308 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped into the moonlit" | | 1 | "It had been months since" | | 2 | "She'd promised herself she would" | | 3 | "The voice belonged to her" | | 4 | "They hadn't spoken in years," | | 5 | "She tried to shake off" | | 6 | "The trees seemed to bend" | | 7 | "The air grew colder, the" | | 8 | "She tried to call out" | | 9 | "You came here for Eva." | | 10 | "You can't leave without finding" | | 11 | "The shadows were not just" | | 12 | "She could feel them watching" | | 13 | "The trees no longer offered" | | 14 | "A sudden sound made Rory" | | 15 | "It was followed by another," | | 16 | "Rory clamped her hands over" | | 17 | "She needed to find Eva," | | 18 | "The shadows retreated, and the" | | 19 | "Rory stood rooted to the" |
| | ratio | 0.654 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "As if in response, the" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "At first glance, the Grove appeared just as she remembered – the ancient oaks towering overhead, their branches interlocked to form a canopy of shadows and moon…" | | 1 | "There was something different about the Grove tonight, something that made her skin prickle with apprehension." | | 2 | "The trees seemed to bend and twist in unnatural ways, their branches reaching out like grasping fingers." | | 3 | "No answer came, save for a soft rustling of leaves that sounded too much like whispering for Rory's comfort." | | 4 | "She could feel them watching her, unseen eyes tracking her movements as she stumbled through the clearing, her breath coming in short gasps." | | 5 | "Ghostly whispers intertwined with mournful cries, the cacophony swelling into a symphony of despair that echoed through the Grove." | | 6 | "But it was no use – the voices seemed to seep directly into her mind, filling her with a sense of sorrow and loss that threatened to overwhelm her completely." | | 7 | "But the more she tried to move, the more the shadows seemed to close in around her, constricting her movements until she could barely take a step without feelin…" | | 8 | "The warmth spread up her arm, through her torso, and into her chest, filling her with a sense of calm that seemed to push back against the terror that threatene…" | | 9 | "And then, just as it seemed the light could grow no brighter, Rory felt herself being pulled from the Grove – not physically, but spiritually, as if her very so…" | | 10 | "She opened her eyes, finding herself standing in a familiar part of the Grove – the entrance, where the ancient oaks marked the boundary between this world and …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory whispered, her voice shaking with fear and desperation" | | 1 | "Rory could only, trying to keep her voice steady as she replied," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |