Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTREE7QBXXGC2HFBF79651N

Run Details

Duration:
1.7s
Cost:
$0.000057

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like old blood and crushed petals. Aurora’s breath hitched as she stepped past the standing stones, their gnarled bark blackened with age. The moment her boots touched the moss, the world tilted. A whisper slithered through the darkness, low and wet, like leaves shifting in a wind she couldn’t feel. She froze, her pulse hammering in her throat. The trees loomed closer, their branches twisting in unnatural patterns, as if reaching for her. The pendant at her neck pulsed faintly, warm against her skin, but it wasn’t the warmth she expected. It was *wrong*—a slow, sickening throb, like something inside her was stirring. She turned slowly, her gaze sweeping the grove. Nothing moved. No one. Then the shadows *breathed*. A pair of eyes, bright and unblinking, appeared at the edge of her vision. Too close. Too still. They followed her every step, never quite catching her, never quite letting her go. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. The warmth spread up her arm, burning like acid. She stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. The world blurred for a second—then she was falling. Something grabbed her wrist, cold and rough, and yanked her forward. She landed hard, her breath stolen. The pendant slipped from her fingers, rolling away into the dark. The eyes were closer now, glistening in the dim light of the grove. They weren’t human. She reached for the pendant, but her fingers passed through the air as if she were made of mist. The thing holding her let go, and she tumbled forward, crashing into the earth. Silence. Then, the whispering began again, louder this time, closer. The trees groaned, their branches swaying violently, as if something vast and hungry was stirring beneath the roots. Aurora’s vision swam, her vision blurring as something *pushed* against her from below. She clawed at the dirt, but her hands were leaden, her body unresponsive. The pendant glowed brighter, pulsing like a dying heartbeat. It was calling her. And whatever was beneath the earth answered.
total_cost0.00005712

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount353
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount353
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulse"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"throb"
6"glistening"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences35
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences35
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences35
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords351
ratio0.009
matches
0"wrong"
1"breathed"
2"pushed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions3
wordCount351
uniqueNames1
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora3
persons
0"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences27
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like old blood and crushed petals"
1"as if reaching for her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount351
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean23.4
std13.41
cv0.573
sampleLengths
048
141
230
312
44
532
633
728
816
933
101
1127
1226
1313
147
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences35
matches
0"were made"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs66
matches
0"was falling"
1"was calling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences35
ratio0.086
matches
0"The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like old blood and crushed petals."
1"It was *wrong*—a slow, sickening throb, like something inside her was stirring."
2"The world blurred for a second—then she was falling."
95.34% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount353
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.0453257790368272
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0084985835694051
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences35
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences35
mean10.03
std5.53
cv0.552
sampleLengths
022
116
210
318
48
515
618
712
88
92
102
114
1214
132
142
1514
166
179
189
199
2011
216
2211
2313
243
2519
2614
271
289
2918
3013
3113
329
334
347
53.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37142857142857144
totalSentences35
uniqueOpeners13
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences30
matches
0"Then the shadows *breathed*."
1"Then, the whispering began again,"
ratio0.067
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences30
matches
0"She froze, her pulse hammering"
1"It was *wrong*—a slow, sickening"
2"She turned slowly, her gaze"
3"They followed her every step,"
4"She stumbled back, her heel"
5"She landed hard, her breath"
6"They weren’t human."
7"She reached for the pendant,"
8"She clawed at the dirt,"
9"It was calling her."
ratio0.333
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences30
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"Aurora’s breath hitched as she"
2"The moment her boots touched"
3"A whisper slithered through the"
4"She froze, her pulse hammering"
5"The trees loomed closer, their"
6"The pendant at her neck"
7"It was *wrong*—a slow, sickening"
8"She turned slowly, her gaze"
9"A pair of eyes, bright"
10"They followed her every step,"
11"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
12"The warmth spread up her"
13"She stumbled back, her heel"
14"The world blurred for a"
15"Something grabbed her wrist, cold"
16"She landed hard, her breath"
17"The pendant slipped from her"
18"The eyes were closer now,"
19"They weren’t human."
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The trees loomed closer, their branches twisting in unnatural patterns, as if reaching for her."
1"The trees groaned, their branches swaying violently, as if something vast and hungry was stirring beneath the roots."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.3302%