Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTREPP0JXJJ4QR8ANY97DRK

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41.1s
Cost:
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, drenching the streets of Soho. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her back against the cold brick wall of a narrow alley, her breath coming in sharp bursts. She peered around the corner, eyes narrowed, scanning the slick pavement for any sign of movement. The neon glow of The Raven's Nest flickered in the distance, casting an eerie light on the puddles that formed in the cracks of the cobblestones. A figure darted past, a blur of dark clothing, and Quinn's heart raced. She pushed off the wall, her worn leather watch creaking against her wrist as she sprinted after him. The suspect, a wiry man with a hood pulled low over his face, weaved through the throngs of late-night revelers, oblivious to the rain that soaked them. Quinn's sharp jaw tightened. She had to catch him. “Stop!” she shouted, her voice cutting through the din of laughter and music. The man glanced back, eyes wide, and then bolted down a side street. Quinn followed, her boots splashing through puddles, the cold water soaking her trousers. He turned sharply, disappearing into the mouth of an alley. Quinn skidded to a halt, her instincts screaming at her to be cautious. The alley was dark, shadows pooling in the corners, but she couldn’t let him slip away. She took a deep breath, steeling herself, and plunged into the darkness. The alley twisted and turned, the sound of her footsteps echoing off the damp walls. She caught a glimpse of him ahead, his silhouette darting toward a heavy door at the end of the passage. Quinn pushed herself harder, muscles burning, determination fueling her. “Don’t make this harder than it has to be!” she yelled, but he didn’t respond. He slammed the door behind him, the sound reverberating through the alley. Quinn reached the door, her hand resting on the cold metal handle. She hesitated, the weight of the unknown pressing down on her. The door creaked open, revealing a dimly lit staircase that descended into darkness. A faint glow flickered at the bottom, and the air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something sweet and rotten. Quinn’s instincts warred with her curiosity. She had no idea what lay below, but she couldn’t let him escape. “Quinn!” a voice called from behind her. She turned to see Tomás Herrera, his curly hair plastered to his forehead, rushing toward her. “Tomás, stay back!” she warned, but he was already at her side, his warm brown eyes scanning the darkness. “Where did he go?” he asked, breathless. “Down there.” She gestured toward the staircase. “I’m going after him.” Tomás frowned, his scarred forearm flexing as he crossed his arms. “You know this isn’t safe. The Veil Market is down there. It’s not just a bar.” Quinn’s jaw clenched. “I can’t let him get away. He knows something.” “Or he’s leading you into a trap,” Tomás countered, his voice low. “You don’t know what you’re walking into.” She met his gaze, the weight of her decision heavy in the air. The Veil Market was a hidden world, a place where the supernatural mingled with the mundane. She had heard whispers of it, tales of enchanted goods and dark dealings. But she had to know what the suspect knew. “Stay here, then,” she said, her voice firm. “I’ll be back.” Before he could protest, she stepped into the darkness, the door creaking shut behind her. The air grew cooler as she descended the stairs, the glow at the bottom growing brighter. She reached the last step and stepped into the underground market. The Veil Market sprawled before her, a labyrinth of stalls and shadowy figures. The air buzzed with hushed conversations, the clinking of glass, and the faint sound of music. Quinn’s eyes darted around, taking in the scene. Vendors hawked their wares—strange potions, shimmering crystals, and odd trinkets that pulsed with energy. She spotted the suspect near a stall draped in dark velvet, his back turned to her. Quinn moved quickly, weaving through the crowd, her heart pounding in her chest. “Hey!” she shouted, but the noise swallowed her words. He turned, eyes wide with panic, and bolted deeper into the market. Quinn chased after him, her senses heightened. The crowd thickened, bodies brushing against her as she pushed through. She caught glimpses of strange items—an ornate dagger, a vial of glowing liquid, a book bound in leather that seemed to whisper secrets. “Stop!” she yelled again, but he was already slipping through a narrow passageway at the far end of the market. Quinn followed, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The passage opened into a dimly lit room, the walls lined with shelves filled with oddities. The suspect stood at the far end, cornered, his eyes darting around for an escape. “Don’t move!” Quinn commanded, raising her hand. He froze, his chest heaving. “You don’t understand,” he said, his voice trembling. “They’ll kill me if you take me in.” “Who?” Quinn pressed, stepping closer. “Just let me go. I’ll tell you everything,” he pleaded, desperation lacing his words. Quinn hesitated, the weight of his fear palpable. She had seen too much in her years on the force to dismiss his words outright. “Why should I trust you?” she shot back, her eyes narrowing. “Because I know about the clique,” he said, glancing over his shoulder as if expecting someone to appear. “They’re involved in things you can’t even imagine. You have to believe me.” Quinn’s mind raced. The clique had been on her radar for months, a group rumored to be involved in criminal activities that blurred the lines between the natural and supernatural. “Tell me what you know,” she demanded, her voice steady. He took a step back, his eyes darting to the shadows. “Not here. We need to go somewhere safe.” “Safe?” Quinn scoffed. “You think I’m going to trust you?” “Please,” he begged, his voice dropping to a whisper. “If you don’t, you’ll never find out the truth.” Quinn weighed her options. The market pulsed with danger, and she could feel the eyes of the vendors on her, their interest piqued by the unfolding drama. “Fine,” she said, her resolve hardening. “But you lead the way. One wrong move, and I’ll take you in myself.” He nodded, relief washing over his features. “Follow me,” he said, glancing back toward the entrance. Quinn stayed close, her instincts on high alert. The chase had led her into a world she barely understood, and she had no idea what awaited her in the shadows. But she had to know.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she yelled again [again]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.656
leniency1
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.048
90.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"scanning"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"raced"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"jaw clenched"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"flickered"
2"raced"
3"footsteps"
4"echoing"
5"weight"
6"jaw clenched"
7"pulsed"
8"velvet"
9"pounding"
10"whisper"
11"palpable"
12"could feel"
13"resolve"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"e with panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1101
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
43.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount936
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.14
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn20
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás3
Herrera1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.432
windowScore0.5
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"leather that seemed to whisper secrets"
1"as if expecting someone to appear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1101
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean27.53
std17.27
cv0.628
sampleLengths
073
167
239
351
444
550
656
723
819
97
1011
1127
1212
1319
1451
1511
1642
1751
1829
1921
2041
2128
2231
237
2421
255
2614
2724
2811
2931
3030
3110
3219
3310
3418
3527
3620
377
389
3935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences92
ratio0.033
matches
0"A faint glow flickered at the bottom, and the air grew thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something sweet and rotten."
1"Vendors hawked their wares—strange potions, shimmering crystals, and odd trinkets that pulsed with energy."
2"She caught glimpses of strange items—an ornate dagger, a vial of glowing liquid, a book bound in leather that seemed to whisper secrets."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount940
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.019148936170212766
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006382978723404255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.97
std5.59
cv0.467
sampleLengths
010
121
216
326
413
518
627
74
85
913
1013
1113
1210
1313
1416
1512
1615
1720
189
1915
2012
2112
2211
2313
2424
256
2613
277
2816
2919
307
317
324
3311
3416
353
369
3712
387
3913
4016
4113
429
438
443
4515
4616
4711
4813
4916
53.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.33695652173913043
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences80
matches
0"She peered around the corner,"
1"She pushed off the wall,"
2"She had to catch him."
3"she shouted, her voice cutting"
4"He turned sharply, disappearing into"
5"She took a deep breath,"
6"She caught a glimpse of"
7"she yelled, but he didn’t"
8"He slammed the door behind"
9"She hesitated, the weight of"
10"She had no idea what"
11"She turned to see Tomás"
12"she warned, but he was"
13"he asked, breathless"
14"She gestured toward the staircase"
15"She met his gaze, the"
16"She had heard whispers of"
17"she said, her voice firm"
18"She reached the last step"
19"She spotted the suspect near"
ratio0.45
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences80
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her"
2"She peered around the corner,"
3"The neon glow of The"
4"A figure darted past, a"
5"She pushed off the wall,"
6"The suspect, a wiry man"
7"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened."
8"She had to catch him."
9"she shouted, her voice cutting"
10"The man glanced back, eyes"
11"Quinn followed, her boots splashing"
12"He turned sharply, disappearing into"
13"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
14"The alley was dark, shadows"
15"She took a deep breath,"
16"The alley twisted and turned,"
17"She caught a glimpse of"
18"Quinn pushed herself harder, muscles"
19"she yelled, but he didn’t"
ratio0.963
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Before he could protest, she"
ratio0.013
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The neon glow of The Raven's Nest flickered in the distance, casting an eerie light on the puddles that formed in the cracks of the cobblestones."
1"The suspect, a wiry man with a hood pulled low over his face, weaved through the throngs of late-night revelers, oblivious to the rain that soaked them."
2"Quinn followed, her boots splashing through puddles, the cold water soaking her trousers."
3"The door creaked open, revealing a dimly lit staircase that descended into darkness."
4"Quinn moved quickly, weaving through the crowd, her heart pounding in her chest."
5"The clique had been on her radar for months, a group rumored to be involved in criminal activities that blurred the lines between the natural and supernatural."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"she shouted, her voice cutting through the din of laughter and music"
1"he asked, breathless"
2"Tomás countered, his voice low"
3"she said, her voice firm"
4"she shouted, but the noise swallowed her words"
5"he said, his voice trembling"
6"he pleaded, desperation lacing his words"
7"she shot back, her eyes narrowing"
8"she demanded, her voice steady"
9"he begged, his voice dropping to a whisper"
10"she said, her resolve hardening"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"she yelled (yell)"
2"she warned (warn)"
3"she shouted (shout)"
4"she yelled again (yell)"
5"Quinn pressed (press)"
6"he pleaded (plead)"
7"she demanded (demand)"
8"he begged (beg)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.563
effectiveRatio0.563
70.9754%